-thoughts on reading "the secret of the treasure gourd"

This story is about the dream of a sixth-grade pupil, Wang Bao.

The story is probably like this: Wang Bao's grandmother often tells him some stories about Bao Hulu. Whoever has a treasure gourd can help him realize it, as long as it is in his heart. So he really wanted the gourd. One night, he dreamed that he really got the gourd, so he helped him with his homework and carried his schoolbag every night. Gradually, he made progress in his study in the class, was often praised by teachers, and became famous in school, but all these made his friends farther and farther away from him. Although the gourd can help him, it sometimes misinterprets his meaning and brings trouble. Finally, Wang Bao bid farewell to Bao Hulu and won the first place in the swimming competition through hard work. Then I woke up and realized that it was just a dream.

Do everything by yourself, and don't let others do it. If you have any difficulties, you should overcome them yourself. Wang Bao is a big example. He can't cut his nails or tidy his schoolbag. He has a gourd, and he makes it do anything. Once in a math class, Bao Hulu stood on the big tree outside with an abacus to calculate for Wang Bao. There are many such examples. His academic performance suddenly rose to the top, making his classmates farther and farther away from him and making him very lonely. Even his best friend Yang Shuan stayed away from him. Later, although I left Baohulu, I won the first prize through hard work. This book tells us: "There will be no pie in the sky". Such a good thing depends on our own efforts to achieve one success after another that truly belongs to us. Therefore, our study is the same. Only through our unremitting efforts can we achieve good results. Everything needs the help of others, and it is impossible to really get something for nothing. Maybe everyone wants a gourd very much, but you should know that the real achievement is achieved by your own efforts.

Einstein once said: "success = hard work+correct method+less empty talk." This famous saying tells us that success depends on our continuous efforts, correct methods and less empty talk. Success is made up of these small factors, and those who succeed with the help of others will never be smooth sailing. As Guo Moruo said: "The decisive factor in the formation of genius should be diligence."

We can't just get help packages from others, but we don't know that we can succeed through hard work. Let's cheer together and become a person who depends on himself.

The cold wind, like thousands of steel needles, pierced my bones and made me tremble with cold.

The cold north wind blew harder, and snow and sand rushed to my face, which hurt like pine needles.

He was so cold that his blood seemed to freeze and stopped flowing.

His fingers are frozen like carrots, stiff and out of control.

In Harbin in winter, the cold wind can freeze your nose and tears into ice. People stomp their feet and rub their hands, and their mouths hiss.

My eyes are too cold to open, and my feet are like two pieces of ice.

The cold current ran straight from the soles of the feet to the whole body, and I felt the pain of the whole body skin like a crack.

Breathe in, my eyes are covered with white fog, and my ears and nose seem to have been pricked by many fine needles.

When I stretch my hand, it hurts like a cat biting a dog.

The biting cold wind blew on my face, and my nose was so sour as Chili water that my nose and tears flowed out.

3. Writing practice rain

I like the four seasons. Love birds and flowers in spring, hot summer, fruitful autumn and snowy winter. But I prefer soft rain.

I like the rain in Mao Mao. As soon as I opened the window, the drizzle hit my face, some of which hurt and some itched. They are as thin as a needle tip, as light as goose feathers, as smoke and fog, and fall silently. Drop in the clear river, drop in the green grass, drop in our hearts. I can't help but sing a poem: "Good rain knows the season, when spring comes. Sneak into the night with the wind, moisten things silently ... "Suddenly the drizzle drifted by, and a fragrance floated into my nose. The fragrance has a faint scent of winter jasmine, a strong and peculiar smell of begonia, and a pure and sparse smell of azaleas. This is Mao Mao rain!

I love Xiaoyu. It is both my nickname and a symbol of rain. Pure, docile, quiet and easy to talk, these are the reasons I like. I couldn't restrain my excitement and rushed out with an umbrella. I reached out and caught a drop of rain. Like a naughty child, raindrops paddle back and forth in my hands and finally fall into the embrace of the earth. Rain hit the ground, hit the tree, hit the roof, and made a "beep" sound, as if it were beating.

Light rain and Mao Mao rain are not as vigorous as heavy rain. It is not as orderly as moderate rain, but it radiates brilliance in the world. I like the rain!

Do you know who my deskmate is? She is a quiet girl who likes reading very much, so I like her very much.

Come and listen to some of her stories! She is neither fat nor thin, just right. She wears a pair of glasses and has small eyes.

Her little hands are flexible and she writes quickly and well. The most interesting thing is that small mouth, which is very eloquent.

Every time after class, she always tells interesting stories that she met or heard vividly, which fascinates us all. Besides talking, she has a good voice. When I was reading aloud, I thought to myself: If only I had her good voice! She is still a very quiet girl. Every time after class, we run and play outside, and she reads quietly in the classroom, watching her read carefully, remembering that "books are the ladder of human progress", I will come back to read quietly like her. Driven by her, I also like reading. With good books, we usually exchange them.

Once I was reading a book during recess and went to class unconsciously, but we were both fascinated. We can still hear the sound of class! My deskmate has many advantages, but she also has some shortcomings. She can't get rid of her careless habit. Once in an art class, she forgot to bring her art tools. Seeing that she was worried, I had to lend them to her. Everyone has his own advantages and disadvantages. We should learn from each other so that we can make progress together.

I love eating, eating meat, eating snacks, eating fruits and eating ... that's why I'm so fat that you can see it, so the word "pig" has been my mother's nickname since childhood. After school, my classmates also like to call me "Little Pig". Although it sounds kind, I hate this nickname more and more. In order to make people stop calling me "pig", I must lose weight!

My first thought is to eat less snacks. Snacks are one of children's favorite foods. Look, I just said not to eat snacks in my room, but when I got to the living room and saw delicious snacks on the coffee table, I was tempted again. I picked up a handful of snacks and stuffed them into my mouth, thinking, "I promise it won't happen again." But next time I see snacks, I can't help it. Once, I really taped a big fork to my mouth, but when I saw snacks, the "seal" was removed.

I have to find another way. This time, I thought of eating less meat, so I vowed: "Eat meat after losing weight!" " ! "But just at dinner time, the smell of' braised pork' floating in the kitchen has made my mouth water, and the principle of not eating meat suddenly vanished. I sneaked into the kitchen like a kitten.

It seems that the only way to lose weight is exercise. I spent one night making a detailed "devil slimming" plan. Option 1-get up at 6 o'clock every morning and keep running for half an hour. The next morning, I was awakened by a hurried alarm clock. I can't beat a carp (of course). Get out of bed. Today is the first day of my plan. I can't break my word. I bravely opened the door, and a cold wind blew on my face, so I quickly shrank back. Look carefully again, it's still raining in Mao Mao. I can't help but sigh: "It's a pity that the sky is not beautiful." So, I went back to bed. The "devil slimming" plan is suspended.

This station has stopped today. The lovely "little pig" is still on the lips of the students. What bothers me most now is not being fat, but that I always say I can't do it! It seems that I really have to change. I hope I can really say goodbye to "Little Pig" this time and make "Little Pig" a childhood memory.

Write quickly. . Hey, give points.

6. A writing composition (300 words) should be wonderful. In my mind, there are many people worthy of my admiration, but there is one person whose character has benefited me all my life-the cleaner. I remember that cold morning, on my way to school, I vaguely saw a man sweeping the floor with a broom. I walked in and turned out to be a cleaner. Just then, I thought, it's so cold. I saw her wearing a uniform and a mask, with a broom in her left hand and a dustpan in her right. The wind that stung her face turned her ears red. She held a dustpan in her left hand and a broom in her right hand, sweeping carefully and patiently. I saw her sweep this stolen goods and that stolen goods. I don't know how many times this action has to be repeated. Look, how well her hands cooperate! When the dustpan is full, pour it into the garbage truck carefully, for fear that the ground just swept will be dirty again. Sweep it again when you're done. I can see from her eyes how much she wants everyone to stop throwing stolen goods and keep the road clean. Just then, a strong wind came and blew the road dirty again. The cleaner said helplessly, "Well, I can't help it. I have to sweep it again." Say that finish, she began to sweep. This time, she swept the garbage together first, and then swept it into the dustpan with a dustpan. When it is full, she blocks her mouth with a broom to prevent the garbage from falling, and then enters the garbage truck. I think it will save more time and sweep the garbage. On second thought, the cleaner swept all the rubbish. I walked into him without hesitation and said with a smile, "How kind of you! I want to learn from you the spirit of silent dedication! " Hearing this, the cleaner's eyes smiled. This is the person I admire most. A person who gets up early every day and is greedy for the dark and silently dedicated. Isn't this man's character worth learning? I hope my answer can help you.

7. How to write a composition? I hope it will help you: First, careful observation is the golden key to improve your writing level. The article is the product of objective things reflected in the author's mind. To reflect the guests, it is not necessary to observe the objective things carefully. Only by careful observation can you find broken gold and jade from the mineral deposits of life phenomena and grab the shining treasure from the mixed sand. If you don't master it, you can "observe" this golden key to open the door. The "iron gate limit" of composition can never be crossed. Second, reading more books and reading widely is the premise of improving the level of composition. To write a good article, you must read more books. "Reading thousands of books, writing like a god." "I am familiar with three Tang poems, I can't write poems and I can't sing." Mr. Lu Xun also advocates reading more books. "You must pick many flowers like a bee, so as to make honey. If you read it selectively, you should also read it, understand the structural skills and language characteristics of the articles you read, and master the composition from it, so that it can be deeper and more diverse. Third, clever selection of materials is an accelerator to improve the level of composition. The requirement of material selection is novel, that is to say, you should choose something that ordinary people have never touched or ignored. Once the author writes it into the book, it will be thought-provoking and touching. See the big picture from the small, and write the materials that are in everyone's eyes but not in the pen. To this end, we must compare, analyze and synthesize various materials in our minds, remove the rough and extract the fine, and transform and process them. Only in this way can the materials be novel. And this kind of active thinking and repeated scrutiny and analysis work is very helpful to improve the writing level. Fourth, practicing writing often is the key to improve your writing level. If you want to enter the door of writing, it is more important to practice more. As the saying goes, "it is better to write one than to read ten articles." "This tells a truth, writing practice makes true knowledge. After learning an article, we understand the structural methods and writing characteristics of the article, so we must learn to use these knowledge and methods to practice and practice, so as to make it our writing ability. In fact, you can practice writing after learning the first text. The essay practice time is not long, achieving the purpose of practicing writing. Keeping a diary is also an effective way to practice writing. After keeping a diary every day, the Russian foundation will be solid. Fifth, frequent revision and repeated revision are the catalysts to improve the writing level. Revision is a necessary step and effective measure to improve the quality of composition. As the predecessors said, "the article is never tired of changing." "The article changed. "Cao Xueqin wrote it. Mr. Lu Xun advocated that "it is not a pity to read it at least twice after finalizing it, and try to delete unnecessary words, sentences and paragraphs." "Obviously, the revision of the provisions generally refers to the process from the first draft to the final draft. There are five points to be done when revising: whether the text is fluent, whether the theme is clear, whether the structure is compact and whether the language is beautiful. In short, the article is always changing. "

8. Imagine how to write a composition. A writer once said: "A person who can recall, associate and imagine is a person who can get pregnant."

Therefore, writing a good imaginary composition will improve students' imagination ability, lay a foundation for students to engage in creative work in the future, and is also of great benefit to improving their writing ability. To write an imaginary article well, we should do the following: 1. Observe life and express life.

Imagination is not fantasy, it should conform to the reality of life. Only by being familiar with life and observing it carefully can we have imaginative materials.

Second, define the center and expand the imagination. Before writing a fairy tale fictional article, we must first make clear the center, that is, the purpose of writing.

For example, explaining the dangers of complacency is precisely explaining the benefits of mutual assistance. Then we should observe various phenomena about the performance center, observe the habits, living environment and inherent characteristics of animals and plants, and develop rich imagination to write stories on this basis.

If you can draw these characters so vividly, you must have made great efforts in this respect. Third, imagine beautiful and profound ideas.

Imaginative writing must have a "beautiful" central idea. If you just make up a vivid and bizarre story, you lose the meaning of imagination.

Writing imaginary articles can stimulate pupils' imagination and use their brains. Third, the types of imaginative composition that middle and senior students will come into contact with in primary school.

1) Use imagination and childlike interest to write fairy tales. For example, take advantage of primary school students' love for animals and express their emotions as animals.

Or praise a certain sentiment or virtue, such as praise for excellent qualities such as diligence, honesty and helping others; On the contrary, we can also criticize lazy, greedy, lying and other bad qualities. With the material, you can write a good fairy tale with clever plot and wonderful sentences.

Of course, you can also arrange characters into other things and give them thoughts, words and behaviors at the same time. For example, the article "Little Mole's Leather Shoes Car" has the following fragments: Little Mole squeaked at home, felt bored, and there was no wonderful TV program, so Little Mole went to play in the mountains.

It saw a broken leather shoe thrown on the mountain. It thought, "I want to turn it into an old car. It must be great!" " "... (omitted) A beautiful old car was replaced! The car started, beeping ... the little frog was crying sadly by the pond. When he saw the leather shoes cart, he said to Jiale, "Jiale, my leg is broken, but I'm going to participate in the forest music singing competition today. Can you take me? Jiale said, "Yes, Mr. Frog, please get on the bus!" " Jiale helped the little frog get on the bus.

The above short fragment vividly shows us the spirit of the little mole to help others, and also vividly shows the anxiety and pain of the little frog when he is injured. 2) Write a science fiction composition with sufficient scientific knowledge and rich scientific interest.

This kind of composition is more difficult to write, because it requires young authors to have enough scientific knowledge, be interested in a scientific phenomenon at the same time, and write with their own imagination, which will make the article better reflect the high-tech level of the future world. For example, you can choose topics such as new inhabitants on the moon, Mars exploration, space roaming, UFO exploration and so on.

But such an article should not be imagined out of thin air, only ideas, no material, so it is not only poorly written, but also deviates from the theme. 3) Write an imaginary composition about future real life by combining real life with your own imagination.

This kind of imaginary composition is often encountered in the fifth and sixth grades at present, and it is also a kind of imaginary composition that is relatively easy to write. This kind of composition is mainly based on realistic materials for reference, so it is easier to write. For example, when we meet after 20 years, we can imagine the future campus with reference to the present study and living environment, and we can also imagine what they will look like after 20 years by observing the classmates and teachers around us, and even imagine what we will look like now after 20 years. Then design an ideal storyline to bring different people together on the appointed day.

How have students and teachers changed on this day? It should also be reflected in the text. The requirements of this kind of composition are bold imagination, rationality, truthfulness and conception.

For example, the following topics are all based on reality: League A on the moon, me in 20 years, class reunion in 2030, future musicians, cloned fathers, teachers getting younger, grandchildren of the same age, dream hotels and so on. Excerpt composition: Twenty years later, I-Zhejiang Yinjinqiu 2021March 10, the "Kuaibule" restaurant I planned, invested and operated officially opened.

Speaking of my "fast" restaurant, there is still a lot to learn! My restaurant pays attention to all aspects. The food sold in restaurants has high nutritional value and delicious taste. In the past, all the dishes we ate contained hormones, pesticides and other substances harmful to the human body, but my restaurant was full of pollution-free food, so people could safely eat it.

I will not only keep these dishes fresh, but also keep their "appearance" unchanged. The "Kuaibu" restaurant also has a major feature-robot service.

These robots are carefully made by me. They have different shapes and different functions. They are no less than those real waiters.

They will entertain guests, clean up, sing and dance to entertain customers. My restaurant is divided into three areas, which are fully equipped: there are all kinds of toys that children like in the children's area; There are many fitness equipment in the youth area; There are reading rooms and chess rooms in the elderly area.

Oh, I forgot to tell you: "Kuaibule" restaurant provides fast food, which can be eaten immediately; High efficiency, can receive thousands of people a day, and is favored by customers. In addition, I plan to open chain stores in various countries and regions.

You are welcome to visit my restaurant in 20 years. We will warmly welcome you and make sure you eat comfortably and have a good time. The above imaginary components are just a few that are often encountered at present.

However, no matter what kind of imaginary composition you write, you should proceed from reality and accumulate materials. For primary school students, you should carefully observe life, observe the people and things around you, and often practice writing imaginary compositions to develop your rich inner world with the help of imaginary compositions. The teacher believes.