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Write a 400-word composition from point to area.
1. The composition should use the method of combining points and faces, not less than 400 words. The composition should be combined with points and faces, not less than 400 words.

An unforgettable tug-of-war time, like a raging torrent, constantly washed away my memory. Many things have been blurred, but in my heart, there is one thing that has always made me unforgettable. I remember it was last autumn. In the composition class, the teacher organized a tug-of-war competition in order to let us exercise, cultivate sentiment and cultivate observation.

The teacher divided us into two teams, one is the tiger team and the other is the eagle team. I was assigned to the eagles.

The two teams are equal in strength. Students E69DA5E887AAE799BE5BAA6E97AE7AD943133431366362 are full of energy, holding their heads high, and a tit-for-tat competition is about to begin. With the teacher's whistle, the game began.

The players on both sides clutched the rope tightly, landed one by one, leaned back and pulled the rope desperately in their own direction. The red ribbon in the middle of the rope was moved to the tiger and the eagle for a while, to outdo each other.

Cheerleaders from both sides also shouted in unison and kept beating drums for their teams. My hands were red, but the rope still didn't move, and the two sides entered a stalemate.

At this time, our players were all red-eyed, some were flushed, some were grinning, and some were clutching the rope and struggling to pull in their own direction. Finally, our team did its best. With the shouts of cheerleaders, HongLing suddenly moved towards us, and our eagles won.

Later, our team took advantage of two victories and won in a row. Finally, we won. This tug-of-war made me understand that unity is strength, and it also helped me build up confidence in overcoming difficulties in the future. I will never forget this tug of war.

2. Write a scene of Zhangjiagang by combining points and surfaces. My hometown is a tourist attraction in my hometown of Zhangjiagang. It was once rated as one of the top ten health cities. There are many scenic spots here, such as Shuangshan Island, Xiangshan and Liangfeng Ecological Park. Let me introduce you to the cool breeze ecological park. The cool breeze ecological park is covered with trees and flowers. When you walk into the cave in front of the park, you can't see your fingers. However, it is faintly visible that the shape of the stone is different. After a while, I came out of the cave and saw a lush uncle and a green lawn. Birds are chirping in the tree. Going forward, you will see an artificial lake, the lake is crystal clear, and small fish are playing freely in it. You can take a cruise ship and put your hand in the water, which will make you feel extremely cool. Naughty ducklings will appear on the lake from time to time, and then they will surface and stick their heads out. After a while, I dive into the water. When I came to the beach, there was a pirate ship. There are many things to play on, and there are several kinds of smooth slides. Zhangjiagang has not only a charming cool ecological park, but also a shopping park called "the eighth largest commercial street in China". The goods inside are dazzling and dazzling. Everyone must be moved by my introduction, right? Come to my hometown Zhangjiagang, I will welcome you with open arms.

3. Try your best to retain the 400-word composition, whether in your dreams or when you are awake.

Keep the distant green. Until one day, we can't find the green in our hearts through smoke and cement sand. What is left in the world? This is what all the environmental protection books mentioned want to remind us, and it is also the biggest worry in my heart.

We were born in this world where green and blue are intertwined. The sky, oceans, forests and mountains are all witnesses of our growth. They watched us grow sturdily, watched us develop from slash-and-burn and homelessness to modern satellite cities, and shuttled freely between Mercedes-Benz and BMW. They guard us, hehe, our most basic living environment; We destroyed them just to be infatuated with the cold and high-grade "cement forest".

We once ended the life of the big tree with a straight face, but also ruthlessly disturbed the lives of various animals, and even "unconsciously" deprived the lake of its green will and the blue right of the sky. When the old man at home died of illness, we were heartbroken. When the gazelle ran to its mother in a pool of blood, someone would always make up for the evil shot. We were unhappy when our new clothes were torn, but the overgrazing sheep plundered the grass and accumulated new clothes for a winter.

In this way, we use pollution and destruction, so that green is surrounded by gray, so that vitality is replaced by death, and finally one day we will wait for the bitter fruit we planted. First of all, the disappearance of forests and grasslands has contributed to the arrogance of sandstorms. They broke free from the shackles of green power and flaunted their bodies in the blue sky.

As a result, the beautiful light blue in the "Tianshan * * * color" turned yellow. This yellow color is far from the beauty of the sunset. Breathing the air of this color, many people's lungs have been violated one after another, and even reluctantly bid farewell to this world; After being polluted by the waste water discharged from the factory pipeline, Xiaohei gradually lost his simple temperament and roared down with revenge. When it becomes domestic water, the diseases it brings are self-evident. And when birds don't want to sing in the gray sky of the city, we will never lose a smell, and then we will take a step forward to the fast-paced urban ants ... losing the deterioration of the green natural environment, constantly retaliating against those who try to conquer their mothers in its chest, and finally we feel panic. * * * on behalf of most people sincerely apologize to nature and make up for our mistakes with actions.

Thanks to people's efforts, gratifying changes are increasingly appearing in every corner of the world: the greening of cities is increasing bit by bit; Sapphire sky comes back to our sight; When the displaced animals moved into the nature reserve, we laughed, and a voice in our hearts said, you have a home again, and our hearts have a home.

4. How to write a composition combining point with surface? In our campus, whenever you turn around or change your perspective, different scenery will appear in front of you: quiet and lively teaching building, lush fir forest, colorful and patchwork flower beds, pleasing plastic track playground ... and I like her corner best-the one surrounded by the teaching building and affectionately called "quadrangle" by our teachers and students.

In the middle of the yard, there is a tall and straight pine tree, like a green pagoda. As high as our classroom on the fourth floor! The bark feels rough and full of vicissitudes. It is covered with a dark green furry "carpet" under its feet, and the grass surrounds it, looking up at it, as if snuggling in dad's arms.

On the left of the pine tree is the most exciting drip pool. The drip pond is built next to the East Teaching Building. The wall next to it is a stone wall made of special decorative materials, with green and gray colors, concave and convex, and several bright flowers diagonally make it vivid at once! There is a hole under the stone wall, and on the other side of the hole is the corridor of the East Teaching Building. Many first-grade children put their heads in and out curiously from time to time. Below the hole is a swimming pool. The pool is surrounded by pebbles and cement of various colors. There are aquatic plants in the pool! There are all kinds of goldfish: red hydrangea, pink pearls, colorful dzi beads ... Look, the fastest and most naughty one is my beloved "Little Butterfly", and she is playing hide-and-seek with her friends again!

There are some stone tables and chairs on the right side of the pine tree. They are always clean! Why? Because we all like sitting there reading and playing games!

Class is over, it's boiling here. After class, Xiaoyu must be listening to the sound of reading ... a corner of the campus, how can your beauty not make me love my campus more? !

5. "Ding ... Ding ..." in writing is a combination of point and face.

After class, the classroom suddenly boiled, the corridor was full of laughter, and the playground became crowded and lively!

Students' activities are also colorful: some jump rubber bands, usually six people, three people form a triangle, put the rubber bands on their bodies, and the other three jump. The forms of jumping are also various: the right foot is forward for a while and backward for a while; Step over the rubber band for a while and then jump back. Not enough to dazzle people. They are still mumbling: "Click, click, a red flower is red …" It's so interesting that you can't help joining them. 207

Some play football on the playground: kick forward with your feet up and the ball flies far away. They are busy and crowded, chasing it in droves. As long as someone grabs the ball, his face will show great joy, as if to say, "I finally got the ball, I must pass it to my players, and we must win the game!" "

Others are playing basketball on the basketball court: some of them are dribbling and looking around as if looking for their players. Suddenly, he threw the ball up, crossed a perfect arc in the air and successfully passed it to his players. The person who received the ball did not show weakness, dribbled close to the basket and scored a three-pointer, "OK! Entered! " Everyone present was surprised.

"Ding ... Ding ..." Class began and the lively recess was over.

6. Composition Write a scene of Zhangjiagang 400 my hometown by combining points and surfaces.

My hometown, Zhangjiagang, is a tourist attraction and was once rated as one of the top ten sanitary cities. There are many scenic spots here, such as Shuangshan Island, Xiangshan and Liangfeng Ecological Park. Let me introduce the cool breeze ecological park to you.

There are trees and flowers in the cool breeze ecological park. Walking into the cave in front of the park, you can't see your fingers, but you can vaguely see the different shapes of stones. After a while, out of the cave, you can see lush uncles and green lawns, and birds twittering in the trees. Go further, you will see an artificial lake, the lake is crystal clear, and small fish play freely in it. You can take a cruise and hold hands. Naughty ducklings will appear on the lake from time to time, then surface and stick their heads out, and then dive into the water. When they came to the beach, there was a pirate ship. There were many things to play on board, and there were several kinds of slides.

Zhangjiagang has not only a charming cool ecological park, but also a shopping park called "the eighth largest commercial street in China". The goods in it are dazzling.

Everyone must be very excited after listening to my introduction, right? Come to my hometown Zhangjiagang, I will welcome you with open arms!

7. A 450-word composition writing activity combining dots and faces Today is the annual Children's Day, and every student has a happy smile on his face.

We came to the school auditorium, ready to participate in the Children's Day singing competition and have a PK competition with other classes! It is said that children's songs are the sound of nature. Sure enough, every class sings so well.

My favorite is insects and flies. The students stood on the stage, and the lyrical music began slowly. Everyone sang softly: "The dark sky is low, and the bright stars are close behind …" It seems that we have really come to a fairyland, and fireflies with faint light are everywhere, lingering around us.

The stars are shining in the night sky, and the breeze blows us, as if telling a beautiful story. Fireflies fly, dance beautifully, and dance around us ... At the end of this song, we wake up and want to listen to it again.

It's finally our turn to play! We walked onto the stage and smiled at the audience. When the music is playing, the crisp songs are also playing, flowing among the students.

The first song is Let's Row. Singing, singing, as if everyone were really sitting in the same boat, rowing and singing at the same time.

The boat floated and sang with the students until the music was over. Before everyone came to their senses, the lively music began to ring again.

Oh! Snails and orioles have already started. We immediately put on a happy smile and sang this song.

Everyone seems to be infected by us, and a playful smile spreads on his face. The activity ended with the singing and laughter of the students.

Although we only got the third place in the competition, the ranking is not important, as long as we are happy, isn't it? Look at these three answers. I have a thin stomach and do 1 thing before going to bed. Thin belly, who is over 25 years old, does one thing before going to bed every night, to lose weight healthily, this girl. Yu Sheng Computer Information Consulting Company .. Advertising an action before going to bed, thin belly _ a very before going to bed.

A violent act before bed, thin belly? A violent action before going to bed, thin belly has been trying hard but still can't lose weight? First of all, we must .. 450 words (point-to-face combination) about all electronic technology advertisements in Guangxi Weijin Tug-of-War Competition. In the second quarter of Tug-of-War Competition, we had a special tug-of-war competition this morning. Just after class, Mr. Sun asked the students to line up in front of the classroom to prepare.

How time flies! This exciting moment has finally arrived. The warriors who are ready to compete are all ready to give it a try.

A big, thick rope is pressed on the two white lines of the stadium, and a bright red scarf is tied between the ropes. Whoever can pull the red cloth in the rope over the white line at his end will win.

"Du-"whistle sounded, and the players on both sides picked up the rope like crabs. "Du-"whistle sounded again, and the stadium became a battlefield. We didn't give in to each other, and we all tried our best to retreat.

Look, Yang Shuai, a tall man, leans back. His face is like a ripe red apple. Look at those cheerleaders, jumping and shouting: "Come on, 5 1 class! 5 1 shift come on! " The red cloth moved to our side for a while, moved to our side for a while, moved to the other side for a while, and finally moved to our side, yeah! We won! Change venues and fight again.

This time, somehow, the red cloth kept moving towards each other, and we could do nothing. We lost. But we don't lose heart, because we only tied.

Who knows, the third game is the same as the second. We walked out of the stadium like frustrated balls.

Our class, one big and one small, is not bad. We can win once. Teacher Sun said that we have created a miracle. Although we didn't win the championship this time, we have no regrets at all.

Because we all tried our best. I think no matter what I do, as long as I try my best, I will have no regrets! In 2006, I browsed 96872017-05-1grade five composition (450 words), 2 browsed 1 14 composition, 100 meter run, 450 words. I participated in the annual sports culture festival, and I was with my classmates.

I took part in the 300-meter race. During the competition, my classmates have been cheering for me and helping me replenish water. The game is about to start. I stood at the starting line, uneasy, like a naughty rabbit jumping up and down. Bang, the game started, and my opponents all flew out like arrows, not to be outdone, and ran forward with all their strength.

50 Browse 546 20 17-02- 19 On the combination of points and surfaces in 400-word composition, when writing a composition, whether it is remembering people or narrating, it is inseparable from the description of the scene. Writing a scene well can render an atmosphere, contrast the spiritual quality of the characters and dig the deep meaning of things.

The article "Farewell to the Prime Minister in Shili Long Street" (see lesson 13 of Volume 7 of the People's Education Press textbook) describes that the people of the capital spontaneously gathered in Chang 'an Avenue to bid farewell to the Prime Minister, and the scene was very touching. Its scene description adopts the way of combining point and surface.

The weather is gray, cloudy and cold. The sidewalks on both sides of Chang 'an Avenue are crowded with men, women and children.

The road is so long and there are so many people that you can't see the east end and the west end. People are all wrapped in black gauze on their arms and white flowers on their chests, and their eyes are all looking at the direction where Premier Zhou's hearse will come.

An old woman with silver hair, with crutches and a locust tree on her back, waited anxiously and patiently. A young couple, husband holding his little daughter, wife holding their six or seven-year-old son, squeezed off the sidewalk and looked around.

A group of red scarves have tears on their faces, holding each other's shoulders and standing on tiptoe ... Here, the scenes on the sidewalks on both sides of Chang 'an Avenue are described very touching. Firstly, the whole scene is described and a gloomy and depressing atmosphere is rendered. Followed by a specific description: "an old woman with a cane in her hand"; A young couple "looked around"; A group of "tears-stained" red scarves ... This combination of dots and faces depicts a touching farewell picture and expresses people's infinite nostalgia for the Prime Minister.

When students write compositions, especially those about sports competitions and practical activities, they usually use the combination of point and surface to describe the scene. Please read Cao Li's "Planting Radish".

8. Autumn composition, the method of combining dots and faces, 350 words: Beautiful autumn [400 words] Zhang Yiwen quietly came to the world with a golden autumn and light steps.

Walking into the park, a burst of flowers came at me, looking for it. It turns out that sweet-scented osmanthus blooms, and white sweet-scented osmanthus is like a little star in the sky, beautifully dotted on the branches. Walking into the orchard, apples are like red lanterns; A banana Huang Chengcheng; Pomegranate grinned with laughter; Oranges push each other on the branches ... into the fields, like sea sorghum raising torches, endless soybeans ringing bronze bells; In the rice fields, a piece of rice in Huang Chengcheng turned up with the autumn wind. In the green vegetable field, the full leaves are shining with crystal dew ... Walking into the forest, the forest is like wearing a camouflage suit, and the ginkgo trees are floating with yellow leaves, just like handfuls of small fans; Maple leaves drop a few red leaves, just like stamps; And evergreen pine and cypress ... look, how charming the autumn scenery is! Autumn is the harvest season, because in autumn, many fruits and vegetables are ripe; Autumn is a cool season, because it is not as hot as summer, nor as cold as winter, and an autumn wind blows, which makes people feel relaxed and happy; Autumn is a beautiful season, because in autumn, some bloom has fallen, leaves fall like butterflies, some turn yellow, others turn red … everything becomes colorful.

There was once a poet who described autumn like this: "When it is orange, yellow and green, you must remember it." I like autumn because it symbolizes maturity and beauty.

Chapter 2: Akita [400 words] I saw this photo of the autumn harvest, and I couldn't help but blend in with Akita. I remember that autumn, my father and I went to a field together, and we talked and laughed along the way. Soon, a field appeared before me.

In the distance, a string of fragrant and delicious grapes hung crystal clear on a vine. What a string of pearls! Suddenly, I saw another tree, but it was vague. I asked my father, "What kind of tree is this?" Dad smiled and answered me, "It's a pomegranate tree." When I saw it, the seeds in it looked like a little doll, and the pomegranate was broken in one place.

It feels like a doll pushed the door open. There are some colorful flowers under the tree, red like fire and red like chardonnay ... Wild flowers also fragrant the narrow path in the field, and all the cattle and sheep are strong and strong, and several children play carefree and freely under the tree.

In the field, a large area of rice is ripe, golden, like gold, and like a golden carpet, giving the field a lot of vitality. The corn held the red tassel and forgot the troubles of a summer. Sorghum turns red, like a smile, and like a wine song brewing in my heart.

Autumn wind is like a barber, keeping the fields in order; Qiu Guang, like shining sweat, is full of vigor and vitality, shining in the fields. Autumn is the continuous command of autumn wind, which blows away summer.

Autumn wind may not blow away Grandpa Xia, but you can also use a fan or an electric fan. When we enter autumn, the autumn wind from relaxation and freedom comes, and the bright sunshine shines overhead. Pick up a yellow leaf and treasure it quietly. Autumn will always smile at us.

We reluctantly left the autumn fields, but our hearts are still in the fields. Article 3: Golden Autumn [400 words] Some people like vibrant spring, some people like passionate summer, some people like snowy winter, but I like fruitful autumn.

Miss Qiu first walked into the orchard. Look! The apple doll is shy and blushes like a little red lantern. Persimmon brothers hung high on the branches, all vying to see the beautiful scenery in the distance. You push me, I push, it's all sweat. The farmer's uncle held the red jujube doll in his hand, flushed and smiling, thinking: my efforts have not been in vain, and I will definitely sell it at a good price this year! Then, Miss Qiu came to the vegetable garden again. With a wave of her sleeve, the vegetable garden became lively! Look! Mr. eggplant is wearing a purple skirt and a small purple hat, hanging on the leaves and sleeping leisurely! Over there, the pepper sisters are fighting for this beautiful woman! Some of them are wearing red skirts, dancing beautifully, and some are wearing green skirts, turning and turning, very proud! Miss cucumber is wearing a long green dress and a yellow flower on her head! Like dancing.

Then Miss Ran Qiu came to the stadium again. She took a breath and the field changed. Rice bowed their heads to each other as if whispering to each other. Maybe it would be nice to say autumn again! Looking around, the cotton girl is dancing here in a white gauze skirt! Corn dragged down its green coat and was hung under the eaves by farmers' uncles, basking in the sun like firecrackers! Chapter IV: Leaves in Autumn [400 words] The blue sky in late autumn is spotless and crystal clear.

Along the winding stone road, into the autumn Woods, the leaves show gorgeous colors. Look! Most of the ginkgo orchards next to the pavilion are dressed in yellow, like handfuls of small fans, fanning with hot air; It is like a stamp, telling everyone that autumn is coming.

I picked up a plane tree leaf from the ground. The wide leaf curled around because of water loss and turned golden yellow, not as green and flat as spring. The fallen leaves under the tree are like a yellow carpet on the ground.

The buttonwood leaves on the tree shine on the branches like golden crowns. I like maple leaves like fire best. From a distance, they are like flaming fireworks. It looks like a little red palm at close range.

Maple leaves sway gently in the wind as if waving goodbye to people. If swallows are messengers of spring, then fallen leaves are messengers of autumn.

As soon as autumn comes, the leaves have completed their mission, falling silently and returning to the embrace of the earth. The ground is covered with dead leaves, thick and soft, and it creaks when you step on it.

Ye Er didn't want to be trampled underfoot. Under teacher Qiu's "command", they playfully circled around me, climbed onto my shoulder, kissed my cheek and flew over my head.

Under the sunshine in autumn, I spin and dance lightly, flying like a butterfly, flying like a bird, spreading flowers like a goddess … I love autumn, and I love autumn leaves more.

9. Write a composition of 400 words and 500 words from point to area. "The ocean is the widest in the world, the sky is wider than the ocean, and the human mind is wider than the sky." This sentence was said by Hugo, a great French writer. Indeed, human beings are extremely broad-minded, although not everyone is. Only those who learn to be tolerant and know how to be tolerant will have such a mind. Learning to be tolerant of others is learning to be kind to yourself. Resentment can only be achieved. Tolerance can free and liberate our hearts and make our lives happier. The person you should forget most is the person you helped, and the person you should forgive most is the person who hurt you. The most important thing to give up is the merits and demerits, fame and fortune, and the most important thing to learn is to tolerate others. Learning to tolerate others is learning to be kind to life. It can make you win new friends and friendships, and at the same time, it will make you lose an enemy and become the coagulant for integrating interpersonal relationships. We should be a kind, generous, steadfast person with a tolerant heart. Forgive and understand everyone around you who has done something wrong. But tolerance is by no means connivance and unprincipled indulgence. Retreating in the face of evil and ugliness is not tolerance. Pity for the wicked is not tolerance, but the loss of good people and tolerance for bullies are oppression of civilians. Tolerance does not mean incompetence, let alone weakness. It is by no means timid to tolerate others everywhere, nor is it helplessness and helplessness in the face of reality. Tolerance is just a decent indifference. Tolerance is superfluous in summer. It dispels hot air; Tolerance is a touch of gold in autumn; Tolerance is the sunshine in winter, which warms every inch of land. We need a tolerant heart in life. Let's learn to be tolerant and experience the journey of life.