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Diary is generally divided into life diary, observation diary and essay diary.

1, life diary.

A life diary is a selective record of your daily life, study and work. To write a good diary of life, we must pay attention to the following questions:

(1) The content should be true. A life diary is a true record of one's own experience, and only when the content is true can it have reference value.

Life is colorful, and it is presented to each of us in colorful ways. Schools, families and society will all have waves of the times. As long as we can consciously observe life and people and things around us, you will find a "treasure" and there will be inexhaustible real materials.

(2) Things should be meaningful. Some students say that a diary is to write down what you have experienced in one day or what you have seen, heard and felt. The more you remember, the better. For example, if a student keeps a diary on the first day of the first month of the first month, he will write down everything on this day: get up in the morning to eat jiaozi, then pay a New Year call to Mr. Chen, go to school for garden activities, eat at grandma's house at noon, go shopping with his cousin in the afternoon, and go home to watch TV at night. Keep a diary before going to bed. It is a typical running account. After all, the length of the diary is limited, and it is impossible for students to write down all the events of the day. Generally, there are one or two impressive and meaningful things to write down, and others are not written or skimmed.

(3) The language should be concise and fluent. Write a diary of life, the content can be long or short, but the language must be smooth and clear.

(4) You can add a topic to the diary. Diary, generally do not write topics. Some students add a topic to each diary in order to improve their generalization ability. What is a good topic? First, the topic should be accurate, which can accurately express the ideological content of the diary, neither too big nor too small. Second, the topic should be novel. Third, the topic should be concise. The topic should not be too long, and a few words can cover the full text.

2, observation diary, that is, observation records. It is to write down a certain aspect of daily life through purposeful and meticulous observation. You can write fragmentary fragments without paying attention to the structure of the article; It can also be written completely, similar to a narrative. Keeping an observation diary often can improve observation ability, form observation habits, accumulate writing materials and improve language expression ability. This kind of diary is most suitable for us primary school students to keep.

To write a good observation diary, we must pay attention to the following points:

(1) The purpose of observation should be clear. Observation has various purposes, or accumulates writing materials; Or used in scientific experiments; Or to find some "mystery". Only when the purpose is clear can the observation have direction and focus. That is to observe the same object, because the purpose is different, the method and angle are different, and the results are different.

(2) observation should be comprehensive and meticulous. Comprehensive refers to observing the whole process of things, all parts of things and the relationship between things; Meticulousness means observing thoroughly and grasping the characteristics, laws and essence of proverbs.

(3) Keep observing. It is difficult to observe things at once, and it needs to be observed repeatedly. This requires students to persevere.

(4) Observe the language of the diary accurately. Observing diaries is highly scientific. Therefore, accurate language is required, and specious words such as "probably, almost" cannot be used.

3. Keep a diary at will.

This kind of diary mainly expresses one's feelings about an article, a book, a movie or something in life. Diary is mainly about discussion, and narration is for discussion. Sometimes the whole diary is a person's feeling.

Write an essay diary, pay attention to the following points:

(1) Focus on "feeling". Casual feeling refers to the feeling after reading a book or an article, watching a movie and experiencing something. So the focus should be on the word "feeling". As for the content of the book, the plot of the film and the events, no one can describe them as key points.

(2) Writing "feelings" should be linked to one's own ideological reality. Writing an essay diary cannot be divorced from one's own reality. Only by connecting with one's own reality can one write true feelings.

(3) Writing "feeling" should be realistic. Some students like to replace "feeling" with expressions of determination or empty slogans, but they are divorced from reality and arbitrarily set high demands. People look awkward and appear unreal. In fact, the "feeling" is not high, but it is true. If you have any ideas, just write out your feelings, even if you can't understand them for the time being.