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How to write a composition with time to review materials
1, theme exploration

(1) What is a comment?

Tip: Comment is a special argumentative essay to comment on society and current politics (facing the real situation, calling for real judgment). Generally speaking, current affairs reviews include international reviews and domestic reviews. Regardless of the international situation, domestic comments are mainly about the current trend. The so-called fashion can not only refer to the ethos of an era, but also refer to the ethos of a period and an instant. Morality refers to national style, party style, political style, official style, folk style, professional style, study style and so on.

He Ping, editor-in-chief of Xinhua News Agency, made a position for Xinhua Times Review for reference: "As the name implies, it is positioned in the' times'." "Time" refers to current events, current situation, current situation, current politics, current situation and current disadvantages, and current commentary refers to writing articles around the word "time". From this standpoint, we understand that "current affairs review" means "current affairs review", "current affairs review" and "current affairs review". In short, it can also be called "current affairs review".

(2) What are the main features of the commentary?

Tip: the main feature of time is "comment", that is, to comment on things and reason about them. Time comments usually focus on current events and comment on a specific matter.

(3) What is "starting from scratch"?

Tip: Because when writing a comment, you should comment on the facts, so the comment needs to explain the "things" it evaluates. This "thing" is the reason for the comment, so it is called "from the beginning".

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(1) Method of Writing Time Comments

First, learn to speak. It is to express one's views on something or a phenomenon in a clear-cut manner, or praise or belittle, or play or praise, and tell the truth. When writing a review, the most important thing is to concentrate on analyzing and thinking about the success of the review and form your own views. There are many ideas to judge things, such as judging the right or wrong of things, judging the reasons of things, and reflecting on the lessons of this matter. The evaluation of "things" is not limited to one point or one angle, but it can be multi-point or multi-angle, but it should be remembered that the evaluated things must be closely related to the evaluated "things" and cannot be separated from them.

Second, write analysis and reasons for your own judgment. When commenting on the current situation, you should not only write your own opinions, but also write the basis and reasons for these opinions. Only by making well-founded comments can we judge civilization, convince people and get a clear distinction between right and wrong and reasonable results. A good comment is one that can make one's point of view clear, and at the same time write a thorough comment on the basis and reasons of the point of view. A critic can comment, argue, protest, satirize and complain, ridicule and curse, and even write a Chu Ci. Its comments should not only be an extension of news, but its main attitude can be more generous.

(1) narrative argument is not loose. The example is novel. The last sentence analyzes the rebate center. Determine a central sentence and clearly determine the basis of the central sentence.

(2) argument. There are generally two ways to make an argument clear: a, go straight to the point and make it clear from the beginning. Zhang Xianzhi, the second pawn, made the finishing point. Only by making the argument clear can we be targeted.

(3) arguments. If we don't pay attention to the latest news and hot science and technology trends around us, the argument will not be novel, and it will be impossible to combine individuality with individuality, epochal (epochal spirit) with historicity (historical materials and new factors), point (detailed cases) with surface (sketched cases) and narrative discussion, and the argument will not serve the argument.

(4) In the aspect of argumentation, we should combine narration with discussion, that is, analyze with examples. Generally, there are the following analytical methods: causal analysis, hypothesis analysis, conditional analysis, meaning analysis, comparative analysis and dialectical analysis. The argument that combines narrative and discussion is a powerful argument.

⑤ Language. Middle school students' discussion language is in a state of "aphasia" and there is no real language of their own. Real language should make people feel the existence of a "living" life. As a special age group, middle school students should have a youthful momentum, praise truth, goodness and beauty, and criticize falsehood, ugliness and ugliness.

⑥ Writing should be standardized. The standard of writing means that the first part of an article should be a quotation, that is, the part that asks questions. It's better to highlight your point in the quotation part, and don't wait until the end. In this part, we should grasp several points. First of all, use positive examples to support the point of view. Second, prove your point of view from another angle with negative examples. Third, in addition to the positive and negative examples, we should also contact the actual life now. The fourth is deep. When we use positive examples and counterexamples to connect with real life, we should pay attention to the fact that the current comments are all reasoning and writing, and we should explain clearly why. This is a deep requirement, and constantly link positive examples and counterexamples with the central arguments in real life.

(2) Basic ideas:

Step 1: Cite materials and present phenomena.

Step 2: Refine the argument from the phenomenon.

Step 3: Analyze and demonstrate opinions. Reminder: It is necessary to connect with reality, stick to arguments and use various argumentation methods.

The fourth step: summarize the full text and put forward the initiative.

(3) Case study

Phenomenon: The taste of moon cakes has changed a little in recent years. (keywords "taste" and "change")

Reference: The central argument is the topic-moon cake consumption should be civilized.

Focus on the analysis of "taste changed":

At the end of the article: in response to the beginning of the article, according to the previous phenomena and arguments, two necessities are put forward: (1) thrift; (2) Call for efforts.

(4) Several requirements

The first thing to understand in critical writing is: be passionate and rational. Writing reviews without passion is not enough. Passion means that the writing of current commentary should be like a blowout of natural gas and oil, not gentle, courteous and hesitant, and cannot be squeezed out of a hose like toothpaste and glue. You can't write such bad comments. Generally speaking, when we write articles, especially when commenting on articles, we will always encounter people, events, conflicts, problems, phenomena and so on in our study, life and work.

In addition to passion, it is necessary to have rational, rational analysis, rational judgment and theoretical explanation, which is very necessary. In the final analysis, time evaluation is still a reasonable style, which belongs to the category of argumentative writing, that is, putting facts and reasoning. It is to move with emotion and understand with reason. Otherwise, just expressing feelings without meaning will inevitably lead to promiscuity and even become an abusive article, just like cursing the street. Here, analysis and reasoning are the soul of comments. If "taking facts as the basis and law as the criterion" is a judicial criterion, then the writing of current commentary can also be said to be "taking facts as the basis and taking reason as the criterion".

② timeliness. The restrictions are aimed at the whole news dissemination. Judging from the spread of news commentary, the timeliness requirements of current commentary should be higher and stricter, not so much demanding. Many of Xinhua News Agency's "Xinhua Commentary" are also broadcast with news events or news reports at any time, and some even broadcast earlier than news reports to seize the commanding heights of public opinion guidance. In short, comments are required in a timely, ready and immediate manner.

3 targeted. That's what it means. Where did it come from? What is this for? Targeted or not. Xinhua News Agency's requirements for Xinhua Times Review are "adapting to circumstances", "grasping news events, keeping abreast of the times" and "strong pertinence". The People's Daily's pursuit of "People's Commentary" is to "pay attention to the facts" and "let the commentary and the news go hand in hand", which means that the commentary should see everything, and it should not be aimless, moaning, shooting empty guns and disorderly shooting.