Things happen in my family every day, some are funny, some are happy and some are sad ... Next, I will tell you some of them.

Grandma keeps healthy.

My grandmother is very fat. She is a community cleaner. This morning, grandma said to me happily, "Xinyue, I have lost a lot of pounds since I started this business!" " My leg no longer hurts! Yesterday, neighbor Xiao Wang also said that I lost weight! It is true that life lies in exercise. "

Once, grandma and I went to the supermarket. On the way, grandma saw a drink bottle and said to me, "Xinyue, go and get that drink bottle." I said, "Grandma, I don't want to take it. I feel a little ashamed. " "What's embarrassing? Picking up beverage bottles can not only protect the environment, but also make money. How nice! " I can't help it I couldn't beat grandma, so I had to pick up the drink bottle.

Grandpa exercises.

My grandfather is so lazy that he doesn't even want to eat. On this day, I went home, turned on the TV and watched cartoons happily. Suddenly, grandpa came back. He quickly grabbed the remote control from me and changed the cartoon into news. I yelled at my grandfather like the Monkey King: "Grandpa, how did you change my comics into news!" Grandpa Tang Yan controlled himself and said, "Haven't you finished your homework yet?" It's already 5: 40! If you can't finish your homework at 7: 30, you don't want to watch TV for a week. And ... "I said quickly," well, stop it. I am going to do my homework. "

In this way, day after day, grandpa's shoulder hurts. He doesn't know that it can't go on like this. So, he gets up early every day to exercise, and now his body is much better.

I like my family, and I like my grandparents better.

Composition evaluation:

1. The composition topic "My family" is incomplete, so the topic should be written completely: "My family's affairs". 2. The composition is divided into two parts, which are about grandparents and have subheadings. Judging from the content, the content in the article is not consistent with the subtitle. For example, the paragraph "Grandma lost weight" is not entirely about grandma losing weight, but also about grandma picking up beverage bottles on the road, and there are many words. In the second paragraph, "Grandpa's Sports", there is not much space to write about Grandpa's sports. Most of the time, grandpa took the remote control from the author to watch TV. These "digressions" weaken the content expressed by the subtitle.

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There are many wonderful and interesting things in my family. Sometimes happy, sometimes sad. Today I'm going to tell you something that happened in my home.

It was Sunday afternoon, and my father saw that the ground was particularly dirty, so he picked up a broom to clean it. At this time, the boring sister saw it and said to her father, "Dad, why don't I help you sweep it?" Dad readily agreed. At first, my sister swept the broom, and the dust on the ground danced happily like an elf. I can't help teaching my sister to sweep the floor. I said to my sister, "Sweep slowly on the ground with a broom, then sweep all the dust together, and then gently sweep it into the dustpan." My sister nodded puzzled. At first, she swept in a mess, but after careful teaching by her sister, she finally swept better and better. Many things happen. My father came to see my sister sweeping the floor so cleanly and praised her, which made my heart sweet.

Another time, my sister and I had an argument. It was to grab a picture book, and my sister and I took it. Sister said first: "Sister should let her go, not quarrel with her." I said, "I'm my sister. I should draw first." Then we fought. My sister and I fought for a while, and I was exhausted. I sat there thinking, "I'm my sister. I should let my sister draw first! " "So I said to my sister," I'm sorry. I should have let you draw first, because I am my sister. "Sister also said," Sister, you'd better draw first. " "Then let's draw together. "I said." All right. "My sister replied.

You see, this is a lot of wonderful and interesting things in our family.

General comments:

This composition tells two things that happened to the little author and his sister. The first thing to write is that the author teaches her sister to sweep the floor and cultivate her working ability. The second thing is to write that the little author and little sister have deepened their love from fighting for a picture book to reconciliation. These two things have their own meanings, but both the beginning and the end of the composition say that these things are "wonderful and fun", but they are not accurate enough. The composition sentences are fluent, but there are many typos in the text: "readily agree" should be "readily agree" "Sweep at sixes and sevens" should mean "sweep at sixes and sevens". "Sweep slowly" means "sweep slowly".

Article

During this summer vacation, many things happened at home, such as my father giving up drinking and my sister secretly eating popsicles. Let me talk about it.

My father is a driver. He has always had a wish to be a good driver. So, he set himself a goal. He thinks that to be a good driver, he should give up drinking first. Two days ago, he could hold back, and in the next few days, his eyes went straight at the sight of wine. One day, he couldn't help taking a sip of white wine. When my mother came home and found that there was a little less liquor, she called her father and asked him, "Did you steal it at home in the morning?" One day, dad played dumb and said he didn't steal drinks. As a result, as soon as mom smelled his mouth, he admitted it. After that, my mother came up with a way to hide wine. She put the wine under my bed first, and then put my toys on the floor outside, thinking that everything would be fine. Unexpectedly, I asked my dad to help me find toys. My father found a bottle of wine that my mother forgot to hide, and he was overjoyed. After drinking these drinks, my father never found the rest. After a long time, he forgot and stopped drinking. My mother and I are very happy.

During the summer vacation, many things happened at home, and one by one became more and more enjoyable.