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Chapter 65438 +0 Pine tree praises 800 words

People praise the gorgeous peach blossoms, the fragrant gardenias and the graceful lotus flowers, but I praise the pine trees.

Although it is not beautiful, its vitality is so tenacious. Aunt chun is here. When the peach blossoms are in full bloom, they are so tall and straight.

Brother Xia came, gardenias blossomed, butterflies and dragonflies came, and pine trees were still so tall and straight.

When autumn comes, trees begin to shed leaves, flowers wither and grass wither. Only pine trees still stand. After many storms, they seem to say: "We are not afraid of the wind, we are not afraid of the harsh environment, so let the storm come more violently!" "

The cold and bleak winter is coming, the north wind is whistling, the goose feather and snow are flying all over the sky, and the snowflakes are ruthlessly pressed on the pine trees. However, the pine tree still stands tall and straight with tenacious perseverance and lofty sentiments to resist the cold wind. Wait for the arrival of spring with firm faith and overcome the snowstorm again and again. ...

The spirit of the pine tree and its firm belief remind me of the border guards stationed all the year round.

The environment at the border checkpoint is cruel. Soldiers either live on snow-capped mountains all the year round, or live in desert areas full of sandstorms. Some checkpoints are closed by heavy snow for seven or eight months in a year, so people under the mountain can't get on, people on the mountain can't get off, let alone people, and even birds can't be seen. However, soldiers are lonely but not lonely. They are in adversity, but open-minded, like pine trees. They are not afraid of the cold, not afraid of difficulties and dangers, strong-willed and firm in belief.

The life of border guards is very hard. They gave up their small homes for everyone, stuck to the border checkpoints of the motherland for years, enthusiastically guarded the border crossings, defended the territory of the motherland with their own clank and iron bones, and defended the safety of the people. They didn't complain. Although they miss their warm homes and their loved ones, the soldiers are willing to stay in the snowy frontier of the motherland for the sake of the motherland and the people. On the thousands of miles of defense, what is left is their sonorous footsteps and tall and straight posture. Like a pine tree, quietly dedicated to others. We went to a place we didn't want to go again, but the soldiers stayed there for decades. They always defend the country in the frontier and always resist the enemy's invasion. They feel that only in this way can they explain to the motherland; Only in this way can we be worthy of the people; Only in this way can the enemy be frightened and the border be peaceful. Soldiers deserve our loveliest and most powerful people. They are real pine-style people!

We should learn the spirit and belief of pine trees and be useful to our motherland.

The second chapter 3,000-word reverie under pine trees

Someone told me that pine trees will bloom, which is the flower bone when pine branches take out new buds in spring. That's when I began to understand Songhua. Pine flower is also called yellow pine, which looks like a pen inserted in the branches and leaves of pine trees from a distance, so it is also called pine pen. If you don't identify it carefully, you will often mix the cones of pine trees with pine flowers and make a joke. I have had such a time.

I remember that summer when I was playing in Huangshan Lover Valley, I suddenly saw several pine trees standing proudly in the sunset at the corner of the mountain, shining from the green leaves of a small group in Huang Chengcheng, so I took them as pine flowers and asked the little girl who sold bamboo flutes next to me for verification when I took photos. The little girl selling bamboo flutes smiled and said to me, "You were right half a month ago, but not now. This pine tree has just blossomed, and this is their fresh fruit. " My face turned red when I heard this, and I regretted my lack of practical experience in life and mistook pine cones for pine flowers.

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In life, although the five-needle pine is precious, most people still know what the pine and pine cones of the five-needle pine are. Potted pine needles will also blossom, produce flowers like little fingers, and bear furry fruits. Especially when pine cones naturally break open, we will see pine nuts that we like to eat every day. These pine nuts are as big as corn kernels and are called pinecones. I have seen the biggest pine cone in the botanical garden, which is bigger than my fist.

In fact, the flowering of pine trees is magical and looks different. The length and size are different from those of five-needle pine. Ten years ago, in early summer, I went to visit Moon Bay in Kanas Lake. The mountains and hills there are mostly pine trees, and the trees are full of flowers. The buds are green, mostly as big as the middle finger, and there is a pinch of pine needles on the flower stem, as if there is an arrow shooting the beauty of the flower. These pine flowers are a little different from other places. They look very independent and arrogant. They are weather-beaten, green hides the breath of youth, and the protruding pine branches are loose but strong. They grow at the foot of the mountain, and almost all their branches are on the cliff slope of the mountain road. They can be touched by standing on a high place and bending down.

According to the tour guide, most of the pine trees near Kanas Lake are Siberian larch, also known as Xinjiang Korean pine. They are only suitable for growing in such pure places as Altai Mountain and Kanas. They are a kind of pine trees that like to live in seclusion and are not afraid of cold. Their leaves are overgrown, giving people a thick and rough feeling.

When we carefully observe the pine flowers, we can see that the flowers are spherical and corn-shaped. There are two kinds of flowers, light green and purple. As for why, it is difficult to explain. Maybe it has something to do with the hot and cold weather. This flower looks elegant, but in fact it is beautiful. According to the tour guide, these pine flowers are slowly formed when leaves grow in spring and formally bloom in early summer. The bract scales didn't seed until August. 9. 10, when the weather turns cold, the bract scales will burst naturally. At this time, sesame-sized seeds will jump out from the inside, just like little wings, much like the fruit seeds of Impatiens in the south of the Yangtze River naturally crack, and like dandelion flowers, they will dance in the wind and fly to the nearby mountains with the mountain wind. These seeds are moistened by rain and dew, and new buds grow in ravines and valleys. Pine trees grow very hard, and they are bullied and trampled by wild birds and beasts, but they live perfectly. Unfortunately, we are just wasting water. I didn't see this series of perfect scenery, but what the tour guide said was true.

Looking at the pine trees at the top and bottom of the mountain, I believe it. So I thought, those pine trees are rooted in the gap of the cliff. If there is no catalytic effect of wind and rain baptism, perhaps they will not germinate and grow, nor will they have the arrogance of cold. The reason why they are so strong and unyielding is that they have been naked, which is closely related to the tempering of suffering. I wonder, how long will it take for the small trees we see in our lives to grow into towering trees?

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There are many kinds of pine trees. According to incomplete statistics, there are nearly 100 species in the world, and there are Korean pine, Chinese pine, white bark pine and five-needle pine in China. There are Huangshan pine, Lushan pine, Huashan pine, Taishan pine, Songshan pine, Changbai mountain pine and so on, standing on the cliffs, not afraid of wind and rain, snow and ice, telling people all their tenacity and unyielding. Facing them, we will know what greatness and eternity mean. I have seen more pine trees, and my understanding of pine trees has gradually begun to deepen. Nature has its own views on the shape, connotation and implication of pine trees, and it is increasingly difficult to give up feelings for pine trees.

If you like pine trees, you should experience them more. Under the pine tree, the rich fragrance of pine oil will have a long and intoxicating feeling. You have to experience the scenery under the pine tree and get drunk under it, so that you can achieve an unforgettable fairyland-like fairy tale.

If you travel in the mountains in summer, you can't stand it in the hot sun. When you are tired, you can find a pine forest, spread a plastic blanket under the trees shaded by pine trees, or sit or stand, drink some mineral water or beer, and open a few cans, and you will feel that you are in a faint landscape. Listen to birds singing, watch squirrels jumping on trees, and watch parachute-like tails. That kind of impetuousness in full swing will naturally dissipate, even if you still have troubles, it will disappear.

Look at the green of pine trees and your thoughts will fly with them. Stand up and raise your head, and the enviable green will surge together in the sound of the waves in the forest; If you experience the rain scene in the forest under the pine trees, it is really a surprise. The rustling rain, such as the tide swimming and rolling in front of the leaves, and the pine leaves standing proudly, seem to filter Tianshui and then drop to the ground. These are picturesque and melodious scenery in summer.

In winter, when all the green plants wither, if you approach the pine trees all over the mountain and face the cold wind, you will see green dotted with desolate hills and gullies. Against the backdrop of green, you will remember how smart the green of life is, and you can't help but feel awe and love for pine trees.

If it snows, you will see the beautiful scenery of endless snowflakes flying through the forest. At this time, all the yellow plants and trees nearby are covered with heavy snow, but the leaves of pine branches are still showing a little green, embracing each other with the snow of heaven and earth. It is the unique scenery here, like entering a fairyland.

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Pine is a vigorous plant full of wind and frost. Therefore, people have regarded pine trees as evergreen trees since ancient times. The ancients compared the longevity theory to pine trees, praised the immortality of pine trees, and endowed them with auspicious meanings of longevity and immortality. People love pine, praise pine, write pine, draw pine and praise pine, which has become the elegance of literati in past dynasties. Pine trees are also considered as a symbol of longing for eternal youth and longevity. The picture of the old birthday star on Chinese New Year pictures; Map of Song He; Pine, bamboo and plum all highlight the essence of pine. It really lasts forever, rejuvenating every year.

In the eyes of the ancients, pine trees are always evergreen plants and treasures in life. For example, wine made from pine trees can taste the essence of pine trees. It is said that drinking this wine can make you as young as a pine tree. Therefore, using pine to make wine and drinking pine wine frequently have become people's health care measures since the Tang Dynasty. In history, all wines brewed with pine raw materials are often called pine mash wine.

Pine flowers on pine trees are jade among the treasures of pine trees and natural beauty products. According to legend, there is a story in ancient times, saying that in the Tang Dynasty, a family lived by a mountain, and the mountains near the village were all pine trees. At the foot of the mountain, a well was drilled for residents to take water. Every year, when it blooms in warm spring, pine trees will regain their vitality and be covered with pine flowers. These pine flowers were lifted by the mountain wind, floated into the well and merged into the water. The girls and daughters-in-law in the village became handsome and beautiful after drinking this water, and finally found the reason. It turns out that pine pollen falls by the well all the year round, and people drink well water with pine pollen, which enhances their immunity. In beauty beauty, there are many beautiful women in the village. Although this is a legend, it is enough to prove the true role of pine flowers.

Therefore, Songhua has been particularly favored since ancient times, and there are many stories about brewing wine with pine. All parts of pine trees can make wine, such as pine flowers, leaves, knots, resin, bark and roots. Pine trees are full of treasures, including pine wine, pine leaf wine, pine festival wine and so on. In the long history of thousands of years, literati used wine as a song to express their feelings, leaving immortal poems praising Gu Song, which were also reflected in the Tang poetry.

Bai Juyi, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, said: "The empty stomach pine wine is advanced, and Lotte know life has no worries." ; Su Dongpo of the Song Dynasty said, "One catty of pine flowers is indispensable, and eight or two catties of pollen can't be fried. Sophora japonica and apricot flowers cost five dollars each, and two catties of white honey are mashed together. After eating or taking a bath, the red and white faces are old." All of them explain the strange and wonderful use of pine pollen from different aspects. Li Shangyin is a poet who loves to drink wine from the Song Dynasty. In his poem "Back to Pei Mingfu's Residence", he said: "Take Song wine on credit, please accompany me." Luo Yin's poem "Autumn Night in Guanchi" said: "The Song Dynasty is always full of wine, and the smoke can't stand ten years." From this point of view, drinking Song wine has long been an important part of the life of poets in the Tang Dynasty.

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Pine pollen is a medicinal and edible pollen variety in China medical treasure house. As a traditional medicine in China, its history of homology of medicine and food has exceeded thousands of years. Records of Medicinal Diet in Past Dynasties: As early as the pre-Qin period, Zhou Li recorded "Eating as Learning", which made a philosophical exposition on the relationship between diet and diseases and laid a foundation for the medical theory of traditional Chinese medicine.

Pine flower also has the effects of expelling wind, benefiting qi, removing dampness, reducing swelling, stopping bleeding, and clearing away heat and toxic materials. Can be used for treating headache, dizziness, diarrhea, eczema, wet sore, traumatic hemorrhage, animal bite and night blindness. But when taking it, you need a prescription from Chinese medicine, so that the medicine can get rid of the disease and be targeted.

In the Han Dynasty, Shennong's Classic of Materia Medica is sweet and nontoxic, which mainly treats cold and heat evil in the heart, facilitates urination, eliminates blood stasis, and prolongs life after taking it for a long time. Don? "Newly revised Materia Medica" says that "pine blossoms are yellow and look like cattail pollen. Taking it for a long time will make you fit and healthy, and it is better to treat diseases than skin, leaves and fat "; Compendium of Materia Medica points out that "pine flowers are sweet, warm and nontoxic. Moistening the heart and lungs, benefiting qi, expelling wind and stopping bleeding can also be brewed. " Therefore, pine flower is a precious raw material for advanced nutritious food. Li Shizhen believes: "Long-term service makes the body heal better than skin, leaves and fat."

In February and March every year, the stamens in the south are long, and pine pollen is yellowish fine powder, which is easy to fly and smooth to touch. When you look closely, there is also a faint fragrance, as if a drop of perfume seeped into the water and then surfaced. Among pine flowers, Pinus massoniana in Qing Xiang is sweet and contains more than ten kinds of minerals needed by human body, among which potassium, magnesium, sulfur, manganese, zinc and iron are the most abundant. It contains selenium, enzymes and other physiologically active substances that inhibit tumor cells and hormones, enzymes and alkaloids that regulate physiological functions, which has become the need of people's health care and the treasure of traditional Chinese medicine.

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When I was a child, I always thought that pine trees were evergreen trees without flowers. I only know that they grow on top of mountains and cliffs. They are heroes who can't be blown down by a storm of eight thousand miles. They are old trees and longevity trees among trees. This kind of admiration was once praised perfectly in my childhood composition, but I didn't know they were still so precious; I admire them. As three outstanding figures in the cold, Zhu Mei stands proudly all the year round, but I don't know that the pen-shaped thing is the flower of its life and its essence. This is really an ignorance and regret.

The flowers of pine trees are silent, modest and unassuming. They love the earth, mountains and cliffs. They are willing to carve their love on the rocks of the four seasons at the top of the mountain at any time and write it on every floating cloud around them. They never tell the eagle the story of sleeping in the wind for four seasons just because someone praises them, so their character is noble.

Ah! I want to pay tribute to the pine tree, and invite all the birds to sing for it, invite the clouds to dance for it, invite the brook to write poems for it, and invite the waterfall to paint for it, because all the beauty of Shan Ye is due to the blooming figure of the pine tree!

Chapter 3 Pine tree hanging salt water 450 words

This morning, my dream was shattered at dawn. I got out of bed slowly, rubbed my eyes and said lazily, "Mom, I haven't slept enough. Why did you wake me up so early? " Mother said, "Because today we are going to climb the same mountain." "What, climb the same mountain?" I immediately jumped out of bed with my eyes wide open.

We got on the bus and set off excitedly. At the foot of the same mountain, I took the lead in walking in front of my mother. Walking, I saw two small bottles on a pine tree. Its lid is red and its bottom is white, like a baby's bottle. I am curious. What is this? Who plugged it in? But I immediately dismissed it. I walked a few more steps and found two small bottles stuck in almost every pine tree. Huh? What the hell is this? Why did you plug it in? My second monk is at a loss.

Suddenly, my eyes lit up and I saw a small bottle being pulled out and thrown on the ground. I thought it was something funny at first, so I picked it up. I don't know. There is a small piece of red paper that says: Bursaphelenchus xylophilus injection. Isn't this used to kill pests on pine trees? Forestry workers really have a way! Mother said with a smile: "people should hang salt water when they are sick, and trees should also hang salt water when they are sick!" " "Originally, this is the salt water of the tree! I suddenly realized. I quickly inserted it into the pine tree.

In this way, my mother and I picked up many such small bottles along the way and helped them find their homes.

Chapter 4 750 words of pine trees on the foothills

There is a pine tree on the foothills. It stands quietly, enjoying the reality in front of it comfortably.

It likes blue sky and doesn't hate gloomy weather. I like flowers and green leaves, and I don't hate dead branches and leaves; The beauty of the rainbow will not surprise me, and the irony of the dark clouds will not make me depressed. Deeply rooted in barren soil, persistent, determined, free and easy, calm.

I have never been moved by the smug display of flattering butterflies, the bullying of arrogant grandchildren, and the seduction of coquettish and coquettish. It always protects its dullness; Even if the lake in my heart sometimes has tiny ripples, it is only a kind response. It has never shaken its faith, nor destroyed its calm and stable mind.

Every dry morning, it gently pushes open the small window, hugs the first warm morning light with a smile, says hello to the happy birds, goes out of the house, comes to its bright and clean studio, and begins to write a brand-new song. At this time, you will feel its indestructible firmness and unique chic. Its warm hands and heroic forehead are full of freshness, exquisiteness and infinite vitality. In the evening, it slowly closed the canopy and walked into its quiet world, happily chanting "I am a humble room, but I am virtuous ...".

Sometimes, the sound of rolling copper coins will ripple on the lake, but it has never been impulsive. It clearly knows that unrealistic fantasies are just bubbles in the bright sunshine; The distant pursuit of nothingness will only consume your own energy; If you are in cahoots with treacherous beasts, you can only make yourself clean and smell fishy. Quiet and far-reaching, preserving our sanity and enjoying ourselves, isn't it also a pleasure?

Wind comes and rain goes, flowers fall in bloom, spring goes to Qiu Lai, and pine trees never try to get rid of the fetters in their hearts. It stands high and can see everything. It sees through the false and colorful illusion. Therefore, it is gratified by the treasure in its heart and the distance in its heart.

The Milky Way grows in Wan Li, but how wide is the universe? Five thousand years have passed, and there are billions more years to come. Life is a hundred years old, isn't it a blink of an eye? Its heart is very clear: since it is a "trip" to the world, it is necessary to go its own way, step by step! Looking at other people's aura greedily will only ask for it. Why bother?

Chapter V Style of Pine Tree 750 words

Last winter, I went from Yingde to Lianxian County, and I saw the pine trees standing proudly along the way. Although sitting in the car, pine trees flashed by, but their fearless attitude made people have a long-term respect for it. I really wanted to write down this feeling at that time, but I couldn't. Two days ago, when I had a discussion with teachers and students of the Chinese Department of Sun Yat-sen University in Humen, I talked about this again. I hope young comrades can grow into people with pine style, that is, people with * * * style. Now write down your feelings at that time and encourage you.

From today on, I am in awe of pine trees. Since ancient times, many people have praised it, praising it as a symbol of lofty quality.

You see, no matter in the crevice of the cliff or in the barren land, as long as there is a seed-this seed was planted intentionally, dropped casually, blown by the wind, or dropped from the bird's mouth. In short, as long as there is a seed, it will thrive anywhere, no matter the terrain is high or low, no matter whether it is cold or hot. It needs neither fertilization nor irrigation. The wind can't blow it, the flood can't drown it, the cold can't freeze it, and the drought can't destroy it. It becomes carefree. Pine trees have strong vitality! Pine trees require less people! This is one of the reasons why I feel respect every time I see a pine tree.

The more important reason why I respect pine trees is their spirit of self-sacrifice. You see, pine is a widely used wood and a good raw material for papermaking: the leaves of pine can extract volatile oil; The fat liquid of pine trees can be used to make rosin and turpentine, which is a very important industrial raw material. The roots and branches of pine trees are also good fuel.

Not to mention, in summer, it blocks the scorching sun with its branches and leaves, so that people can rest in the shade under the green trees; In the dark, it can be chopped into pieces and made into torches to illuminate people's way forward. In short, for the sake of mankind, it has indeed achieved the point of "burning the boat."

It is the style of pine trees to ask little of people and give a lot.

Mr. Lu Xun said, "What I eat is grass, but what I squeeze out is milk and blood", which is also a portrayal of Songfeng.

Naturally, the style of pine trees also contains optimistic spirit. You see, it is always in high spirits. No matter in the cold, frost and snow, or in the hot summer, it never knows what melancholy and fear are.

Chapter VI The Spirit of Pine Trees 500 words

It doesn't have the beauty of peach trees in spring, the huge leaves of buttonwood trees in summer, and the golden coat of ginkgo trees in autumn. Just a pine tree in a simple green coat in winter.

The leaves of pine trees spread out in clusters like needles, and each piece is sharp and powerful, as if supported by gods. The fruit of pine trees is also very distinctive: it is oval and divided into layers of petals. The fruit is hidden in a house made of "straw", just like a soldier protecting the house, a canopy sheltering from the wind and rain. Or the kind of belief that relies on force to support and protect the fruits.

Peach trees show their full strength through peach blossoms in spring, while phoenix tree leaves all hope with its full green leaves in summer: Ginkgo tree shows its beauty with golden butterflies in autumn. And pine trees just stand guard for us in obscurity in winter. In winter, when we see all the bare trees, we feel sad and sad. If we see a pine tree among many bare trees, we will be full of hope.

Pine trees are straight, and no matter how bad the environment is, they still grow towering. The branches of other trees are beautiful, but their integrity, simplicity and firmness are beautiful. This inner beauty is much more noble than the superficial beauty and the precious tree species pampered in the greenhouse.

People, like trees, are much greater than flowers growing in a "greenhouse" in order to become strong people with inner qualities like pine trees. Therefore, we should learn many inherent qualities of pine trees, such as integrity, simplicity and firmness, and be a noble person.

Chapter VII The suicide note of the pine tree is 700 words

An old pine tree died, and animals and plants came to mourn it. Sister rabbit found the suicide note on the branch and read it out loud.

"Dear friends, hello everyone! I am a tree that has lived for 900 years. Everyone must think I'm dying of old age. In fact, my death was caused by human destruction of the environment.

"First of all, the soil is polluted. 1000 years ago, it used to be a lush grassland. However, in recent 1200 years, the land has been desertified due to excessive reclamation and grazing. In some places, pesticides were applied, the soil became harmful, and a large area of grassland disappeared on the earth. Trees and flowers cannot survive. Although I have strong vitality, I can't stand soil pollution. Plant friends, be sure to stay away from harmful soil, or you will die.

"Secondly, the air in the sky is polluted. Humans emit waste gas and smoke into the sky. The sky is not as blue as before, and there are fewer birds and geese in the sky. Now people still use electrical appliances called refrigerators. Freon in them destroyed the ozone layer in the sky, and the' ozone hole' is expanding day by day. When strong ultraviolet rays shine on us, we will get sick, and your birds are no exception. Bird friends, you must emigrate to a place where birds are singing and flowers are fragrant.

"Finally, the water quality is polluted. Industrial wastewater made by human beings is poured into the river without treatment, and the river becomes turbid and smelly, so fish can't survive. Brother Fish can't survive. Brother Fish, you should tell your companions as soon as possible and tell them to go to an empty place.

"You go! The speed of human destruction of the environment is accelerating. If you don't escape, you will die. "

Animals and plants packed their things and were about to leave when they suddenly stopped. They are thinking, "Where should this family move?"

Comments: The material selection of the article is novel and unique, with the title of "The suicide note of the pine tree", which is enlightening and shocking. After reading it, readers have to think deeply. "Friends of plants", "Friends of birds" and "Brother Fish, you should tell your partner as soon as possible" all show the kind childlike innocence of the little author. When writing a composition, you must write your own childlike innocence and common heart, so that you can have a true feeling.

Chapter 16 Pine 550 words

Some people praise the graceful willows, others praise the beautiful fragrance of plum blossoms, but I like pine trees and their strong and brave character, because it gives me courage and strength.

Commander-in-Chief Chen Yi wrote about the character of pine trees in his poems for a long time. His famous phrase "pine trees are crushed by heavy snow, and pine trees are tall and straight" can show the strong and brave character of pine trees. So I fell in love with pine trees.

The shape of pine trees is not as beautiful as that of willow trees. It's just a thick trunk, slender branches and needle-like leaves. However, it is not boring. In the yard of a community, it seems to be the patron saint of the community. In the mountains, in the wild, it gently shakes with the wind, as if it were a messenger to welcome new guests.

There are countless functions of pine trees, which have played a great role in human beings, animals and plants.

First of all, talk about the effect on animals. Birds nest in big trees. Even if it rains heavily, they won't get wet. When the geese move south, they rest on the branches; Squirrels in the forest, find pine cones, climb to big trees and bury them in tree holes; When owls are tired of looking for voles, they can also rest in pine trees. ...

It also has many effects on plants. On the thick trunk, after the heavy rain, many fungi grew on the trunk. Pine trees provide their own nutrition for fungi and promote their growth and development. Roots also provide water and nutrition for mushrooms growing on the ground, making them grow more and bigger. ...

The purpose of mankind is to bring us green, vitality, beautify the environment and let us live in a brand-new pollution-free living environment.