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An example of writing "influence" in propositional composition
An example of writing "influence" in propositional composition

Lv Yuan

The subject of discussion

Read the following materials and write as required.

A friend who came back from the coast is going to invest in the mainland, focusing on City A and City B. In City A, he is sitting on the street shining shoes. Aunt's action killed the city: Aunt untied the shoelace of one of his shoes first and tied it after he paid for it. In B city, he took a taxi five times. Before getting off the bus, all five drivers suggested, please take your belongings with you, sir. In the end, he set up his business in city B, where 5,000 people were employed, and the tax department of city B collected hundreds of millions of yuan every year. This is the influence of a shoeshine aunt and several taxi drivers.

Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Influence".

Requirements: ① Independent decision; 2 angle selection; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.

Writing instruction

Fortune magazine defines influence as the ability to influence the behavior of others. Everyone is eager to have influence, because influence is a unique charm, which affects people around him all the time and gives each other a magical power. Influence is an acceptable control, which is different from power. Influence is not mandatory. It is a subtle process to change others' behaviors, beliefs and attitudes in a subconscious way. Influence is also an excellent personal ability and comprehensive quality, and it is a concentrated expression of a person's value in the group. If you are a salesperson and want to sell more products, you should be able to influence your customers; If you are a manager, your success depends on your influence on subordinates; If you are a coach, you can only rely on influence to build a winning team ... in this series of processes, you are changing others' thoughts and behaviors in a way that others can accept. In interpersonal communication, people are not only communicating, but also confronting willpower. Either you influence others, or others influence you. People who have no influence will only live in the shadow of others.

In the specific writing process, it is necessary to describe or speculate from the sender and the receiver of the influence, because whether it can have an influence and how much influence it will have depends on both the sender and the receiver. Logically speaking, influence originates from the sender and is embodied in the receiver. Only when you write the sender thoroughly can people feel that the influence is rooted in vines; You write the receiver thoroughly, making people feel that the influence is tangible. Only by two-way excavation can the narrative be written with emotion and reason, and the argumentative can be written with depth and thoroughness.

Exhibition and evaluation of excellent works

Influence Deng Lanting, No.1 Middle School of Funing County, Jiangsu Province

The street is brightly lit and every household is busy buying new year's goods. ...

"Cough, cough, cough ..." Walking in the street, I was attracted by several rapid coughs. Who is this? This voice seems to come from far away and seems to be very close to me. Who is this?

With the cough, I found him, a beggar curled up in a dark corner. His unkempt hair is covered with dust, his dim eyes are not lifeless, his face is wrinkled and his lips are chapped. He only wears a thin shirt and patches, his trousers are too dirty to see the color, and there are several worn holes. His chapped hands are red with cold ... His haggard and loneliness are incompatible with this neon.

People came and went in the street, but few people noticed him. The fashionable girl walked by with her newly bought bag and shiny high heels, but she didn't see him. The family went to the streets to buy new year's goods, the daughter-in-law helped her mother-in-law, the child cleared the way in front, and the family walked happily without seeing him; "Hey, sorry, sorry!" The young man struggled for three rounds, shouting while pedaling, and didn't see him ... Well, since no one saw him, why should I stay here and struggle? I also pretended not to see him.

Instinctively throwing down a coin, I walked away and continued to enjoy the prosperity.

"Dad, look, how poor this uncle is!" A string of children's voices broke this prosperity, and I stopped to look for that string of children's voices. A little girl holding her father's hand stood in front of the beggar and stared at him. The beggar raised his drooping eyelids and looked at the little girl, with a glimmer of light in his dim eyes. Suddenly, the little girl broke free from her father's hand and ran to the crowd, leaving her father behind to call her. Where is she going? What does she want? I stood there with a series of doubts. A few minutes later, the little girl came back with a bag of bread and a cup of hot milk tea in her hand. She walked quickly to the beggar and handed him bread and milk tea. "Uncle, eat quickly, it's cold!" (Writing Skills) She panted, and her face turned red. "Thank you ... thank you ..." The beggar took the milk tea with trembling hands, and a tear fell on the little girl's hand.

My eyes are moist in the distance. I was a little surprised and embarrassed by the little girl's behavior, but more ashamed and moved.

In this world, many people are in a hurry and are indifferent to everything around them. However, on this cold night, the kindness of the little girl dispelled the beggar's cold and melted my indifferent heart.

The streets are still bustling, but my heart is no longer barren. ...

The most witty part of this article lies in the sudden turn of the plot-a cold heart of "I" has finally melted. It "fits the purpose", and everyone's blindness makes "I" indifferent, but the kindness of the little girl melts this indifference. Around the same purpose, the advantages and disadvantages are connected, which greatly enriches the connotation of the theme. So, turn the plot. It's "reasonable". A little girl is inexperienced and can treat people with her nature, so she can make completely different moves towards beggars. Therefore, the "turning point" of the plot has external forces. It is "reasonable", and "I" didn't forget to "drop a coin" before I left, which shows that "I" still has a "good" factor that can be activated. Therefore, the "turning point" of the plot is internal. Narrative writing, the plot suddenly changes, but it is difficult to convince the public, and this article is reasonable, reasonable and reasonable in plot design, so it can make people "believe"; It is necessary, external and internal, so it can make people "take".

affect

Guan Xin 'an, the first high school in Funing County, Jiangsu Province

Mo Yan was on fire, and so was his hometown: five adobe houses became famous overnight, and even the originally lush carrots in the small courtyard gradually became famous, often becoming "guests" under the media lens. It's a pity that it was pulled out by tourists in a few days. It's ironic!

What do you think this carrot can do besides eating? Unlike the signature of a star, it can be collected. At most, it can be made into "dried carrots". But the visitors pulled them all out. Is it a temporary thirst?

But if you think about it carefully, you will realize that this is actually the "celebrity effect". China people have always said that they are "immortals", so it is not difficult to understand this strange behavior of tourists: they are so eager for success that they want to be immortal with Mo Yan and copy his success, and carrots are just the "color" they want from Mo Yan.

Whether the celebrity effect is good or bad is beyond our control. However, there is an old saying: extremes meet. Take the recent popular book burning guide on the Internet as an example. Ma Boyong asked himself: If you were forced to hide in the library because of a once-in-a-lifetime extreme cold, what book would you burn first? Successful studies, inspirational books, books on life and health, and autobiographies of stars are the first choices. Investigate its essence is not difficult to find:

In this society where success or failure is the hero, people are eager for success, and they can do whatever it takes to achieve it. How can the success secrets of those professors not be popular?

In this society with declining ideals and beliefs, people are facing a lost life and are eager for their passion to be ignited and incited. How can self-help books not be popular?

In this society where it is difficult and expensive to see a doctor, and the whole family may return to poverty if they are not careful, how can books that teach people how to preserve health and treat diseases not be popular with less money or no money?

In this society where celebrity advertisements are overwhelming and celebrity scandals are endless, how can celebrity autobiography not be popular?

In the past, people paid attention to collective interests and realized personal values in the process of pursuing social values. But what about now? For those who pursue fame and fortune, only personal value and even personal price remain. They think that getting rich is success and promotion is success. As for how wealth comes from and how officials are promoted, who cares? Even making money in a dirty way will cause jealousy among people around you ... its ugly face can be seen!

As a China native, I would like to take Mr. Lu Xun as an example, stand at the forefront of the times, wave flags and shout loudly, and give the world a heavy blow ideologically, so as to enlighten the deaf. I only hope that everyone can look at the "celebrity effect" with a cool head and a critical eye. We should not be in a hurry or sell ourselves short, but take the road that we should and can take. This is the road we should strive for.

There are three highlights in this paper: the first is the introduction, which leads to the topic of "influence" with Mo Yan's social hotspot of obtaining Nobel Prize in Literature; This part takes Ma Boyong's Book Burning Guide as the object, and makes an analysis of peeling bamboo shoots and spinning silk. Examples can be described as "novel" by using hot spots that everyone on earth is concerned about. Secondly, for the four kinds of books that should be burned, first reveal the reasons for their "heat" and then reveal the essence of "heat". The argument can see through the hot material with a cold eye, which can be described as "profound". Third, step on Lu Xun's shoulder to show the way for all beings, and arouse the spirit of scholars' "reprimanding Fang Qiu" and the heroism of students' reincarnation. On the basis of breaking the "impossible", writing can also establish "should", which can be described as "atmosphere"