Pomegranate, also known as an pomegranate, is said to have been introduced from Anshi country in Han Dynasty. Deciduous trees or shrubs, not tall, mostly clustered, with straight and thin branches and hard thorns. Bark is rough and hairy, so it can be called slender and rough, even for young trees, it seems a little dragon bell. But the wood is hard, the whole tree is intertwined, and the trunk is like the arm of a muscular person. The leaves are lanceolate, and the color of the leaves changes with the seasons, from dark green to yellow-green, and even falls off.

In May, pomegranate bloom, which has been bred for a long time, is full of vitality. First, the branches grow peanut-like safflower bones, and the top expands constantly. Finally, it splits into five petals, just like a vase cut by red agate, and then spits out the stone from the crack. Pomegranate has three colors: red, yellow and white, and red is more common. These flowers are red and lovely, like clouds of flames and as bright as red azaleas. A tree is full of laughter and flowers are red and green. Pomegranate flower is different from monocotyledonous flower and chiba flower. Single leaf is strong, Chiba is not strong. When the flower withers, the ovary expands constantly, just like a big tumor, which is the origin of pomegranate's name.

Pomegranate is about the size of a fist. When it is immature, its skin is blue and its receptacle is still at the top. It gradually turned red in July, and small black spots appeared faintly on the skin. Don't mention how cute the pomegranate is at this time. The ancient poet Fu Xuan's poem "Burning like a hibiscus" is well described; Guo Moruo, a great contemporary writer, once called it "the heart of summer", which really deserves it. In autumn, pomegranate is full of golden eyes after frost. When it feels that it is really extraordinary, it can't help laughing, its mouth is open, and there are agate-like seeds hidden inside. The seeds are next to each other, filling the whole exocarp, that is, the pericarp, crystal clear, like beads hidden in a golden kiln. That seed is edible, both sweet and sour. Sweet and refreshing, even Lao Guo can't help spitting Tenshindon. Sour people can be used as medicine to treat abdominal pain, chronic diarrhea, urinary incontinence and other diseases. Its skin is often used to repel mites in rural areas.

There are many varieties of pomegranate, both edible and ornamental. There is a kind called Shan Shiliu, which is a short plant, carefully cultivated and moved into a flowerpot, which is an excellent appreciation category; There are four seasons durian, which blooms in April and bears fruit in autumn, and the fruit is square; Fire pomegranate is as red as fire; Pomegranate, growing to 1~2 feet, can bear fruit, which is rare and heterogeneous.

Pomegranate was born in the northwest of China, and now it has its footprints everywhere, which shows its strong adaptability. People often reproduce their offspring by cutting or grafting. Pomegranate is a sentimental thing in writers' works because it has the characteristics of being warm and drought-tolerant, and has strong adaptability, and requires little from people, but gives a lot to people. At the same time, it is also loved and respected by the broad masses of the people-no wonder it is a "famous fruit"

3. The ancient people chanted pomegranate famous sentences.

When An Shiguo and Wanli paid tribute to Liu Hua all the way to Heyuan, it was because they were ordered by the Han Dynasty. (Yuan Zhen)

The sun's blood beads will fall to the ground, and the wind will turn the flame into the sky. (Bai Juyi)

Seeing Zhu's thoughts dispersed in succession, his gaunt friends left him to remember you. You not only shed tears, but also opened the box and took the pomegranate skirt. (Wu Zetian)

The second part: the overall feeling.

First, the idea of the article

The author expresses his ambition with things and his feelings with pomegranates. Through the concrete and vivid description of pomegranates, he praises the truth, goodness and beauty, the character and spirit of being fearless of coercion, firm and brave, and striving for progress, and also implicitly expresses his persistent and firm beliefs and eager pursuit.

Second, the context of the article

The first paragraph of the article first points out the object of description-pomegranate tree, and leads to the full text by comparing the sentence "pomegranate tree is the cutest of these trees", pointing out the extraordinary character of pomegranate tree, and the word "cutest" expresses the author's feelings for it.

Then, the article vividly describes the loveliness of pomegranate from different angles.

This part closely follows the word "cutest" and describes the branches, leaves, flowers, bones, fruits and seeds of pomegranate in turn, which are orderly and distinct, highlighting the beautiful and elegant bearing of pomegranate.

The last three paragraphs explain why I like pomegranate and my yearning for pomegranate. "I" like pomegranate, not only because it is beautiful, but also because it is different-it flourishes in the summer sunshine and gets rid of many shackles. Writing "I" at the end is full of fun and reverie.

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Third, the writing method

1, imaginative, strange and magical.

This is reflected in the author's description of pomegranate flowers. Really speaking, pomegranate flowers are very general in shape and color, unlike plum blossom, peony, chrysanthemum, orchid, lotus and so on, which can be written more. Faced with this situation, the average author may only write a few words truthfully. However, it is difficult to be a beautiful article that surprises readers. Mr. Guo Moruo deserves to be generous. He firmly grasped the flower-shaped characteristics of pomegranate flowers and spread the wings of imagination. Thus, in his works, the originally unremarkable pomegranate flowers suddenly become extraordinary and beautiful: some seem to be inserted in vases cut with red agate, and those petals can't be cut so symmetrically no matter how sharp scissors are used; Others have become ancient bronzes-China's Yin and Zhou wine glasses. Even better, in autumn, they become beautiful women who can't help showing their white teeth ... The author's keen observation and rich and strange imagination are amazing.

2. Grasp the features and describe them carefully.

This paper not only grasps the external characteristics of pomegranate, such as shape, size, color, texture and so on. Let readers have a vivid impression of what they have written, and at the same time give pomegranate "inner" characteristics, such as simple and elegant behavior, fearless personality, full of vitality and vigorous spirit.

3, clear-cut, focused.

The beginning is an outline, and the full text is always a lead. The middle part revolves around the center, spreading layer by layer and writing beautifully. The ending part is concise and vivid, taking care of the beginning and making clear the meaning.

4, care for things, borrow things to express their feelings.

The author loves pomegranate because its "internal" characteristics coincide with the author's personality characteristics. In essence, the author's praise for pomegranate is to praise its brave and fearless character and the spirit of the times that dares to struggle and flourish.

Fourth, the analysis of important and difficult points

Pay attention to the understanding of the following sentences:

(1) Look at it, it gradually becomes four petals from the top. No sharp kitchen knife can be so symmetrical. But who cut so many vases with red agate and arranged flowers skillfully?

This sentence describes the symmetry of petals, bright red color and delicate flower shape. The author does not make a static and objective description, but turns the static into the dynamic, and gives the dynamic and elegant beauty to Flower with concise and concise language.

Autumn has come, and it seems to burst into laughter for its own tricks, showing its white teeth. Have you ever seen such transparent and white teeth anywhere else?

This sentence uses anthropomorphic techniques to write the fullness of fruit. In this paper, "can't help laughing" is used to express the natural growth process of pomegranate with emotion, and it also shows its beautiful and lovely image; Show it with a cry of "smile through tears", as warm and generous as a warm summer heart. The whole sentence is vivid and dynamic.

⑶ Summer is an upward stage of the whole universe, and people's body and mind are freed from heavy bondage at this stage. So I prefer this summer's heart.

Here, for example, pomegranate is "moist" and "full of vitality". "Heart" makes people energetic, and pomegranate can bring infinite vitality and vigor to the hot summer. Through this metaphor, the "inner" spiritual characteristics of pomegranate have been accurately and vividly expressed.