Improper word order of multi-layer attributives

Improper word order of multi-layer adverbial

The word order of attributive and head language is wrong.

The position of attributive and adverbial is confusing.

The associated coordinate words or phrases are in the wrong order.

The word order of subject and related words is incorrect.

1, outstanding professor of Chinese Department in Peking University, with more than 30 years' teaching experience. (The word order of multiple attributes is incorrect)

Changed to: Excellent Professor of Chinese Department of Peking University, with more than 30 years' teaching experience.

In order to write the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been reading eagerly in the reading room in recent days. In order to write the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been reading eagerly in the reading room in recent days.

He jumped out of the pond and came to the edge of the pool, where he swam soon. (Clauses are out of order)

4. We have carefully studied and listened to your's opinions. Words can reflect the meanings of inheritance and priority. Word order must meet this objective requirement. In this case, "learning and listening" reverses the order of commitment. It should be changed to "listening to research")

Students, leaders and teachers all attended the opening ceremony. (It should be changed to "leaders, teachers and students")

6. Let's see all the flowers in vilen. (It should be changed from "Yan Shan Hua" to "Yan Shan Hua" to match the following "opening")

7. The Palace Museum recently exhibited the newly unearthed cultural relics more than 2,000 years ago. When was this "cultural relic" unearthed? According to the original sentence, it was "more than two thousand years ago", but it was not. This is because the word order is not current, which leads to ideographic errors. We should move the "newly unearthed" to the "exhibition" )

8. This village has well implemented the Party's policy of enriching the people. Now, we have not only sold 60,000 Jin of agricultural grain to the country, but also stopped eating state relief. (Improper progressive relationship should be changed to "Not only did you not eat state relief grain, but you also sold 60,000 Jin of public grain to the state")

9. In your own way. They are exploring, they are judging, they are searching, and they are thinking.

Second, several types of improper collocation

Improper collocation of related words

Improper collocation of attributive and head words (subject and object)

Improper collocation of verbs and objects

Improper collocation of subject and predicate

Improper collocation of subject and object

Improper collocation of verbs and complements

Improper collocation of adverbial and head word (predicate)

One side and two sides are not properly matched.

[Example 2]

1, people's living standards are constantly improving. (Improper collocation of subject and predicate)

His revolutionary spirit always comes before my eyes. ("Spirit" and "Emergence" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship. You can change "spirit" to "image")

What a beautiful picture the rustling waves and the silver sea make up. Both "wave" and "sea surface" are subjects, in which "wave" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship with the predicate "component", so "rustling wave" should be removed or another subject-predicate relationship should be formed.

Due to reasonable close planting and strengthening management, the rice production in this county is generally growing well. ("Yield" and "growing well" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship, so "yield" should be deleted and "rice" should be used as the subject)

Every time I recall a period of life with him, his amiable voice, appearance and persuasive teaching reappear in front of my eyes. "Teaching" and "appearance" constitute an improper subject-predicate relationship, so "persuasion teaching" can be removed. "It's better to add" ringing in my ear again "to form a subject-predicate relationship with it)

6. The novel Song of Youth vividly depicts the heroic deeds of Lu Jiachuan, Jiang Hua and Lin Hong in party member. ("Shaping" and "deeds" cannot form the relationship between object and predicate, so "deeds" can be changed to "image")

7. The soldiers braved heavy rain and muddy roads to make rapid progress. ("Crossing the Kanto" and "Small Road" can't form a predicate-object relationship, so "in" and "on" can be added before and after "Muddy Road" respectively)

The students watched and listened to the report of Laoshan hero with admiration. (The "gaze" in the joint predicate cannot match the object "report" and can be deleted)

9, farmers in accordance with the provisions of the policy of farming plots is legal labor. (Improper collocation of subject and object)

10, two short parallel lines are always two unreachable endpoints. The meaning of subject and object in the judgment sentence does not belong to the same category, which leads to improper collocation of subject and object. In this case, "two parallel lines are endpoints" is obviously not properly matched, so "endpoints" can be changed to "straight lines" and so on. )

1 1, we firmly believe that one day, China's industry and agriculture will become a developed country. The object of this sentence is a subject-predicate phrase, but the main part of the subject-predicate phrase is "industry and agriculture become a country", and the meaning of the subject and object is obviously inappropriate. You can change "country" to "industry" and so on. )

12. Autumn in Beijing is a beautiful season. This is because the word order is improper, which leads to the improper meaning of the subject and object, so "Autumn in Beijing" should be changed to "Autumn in Beijing".

13, whether you have lofty aspirations and tenacious will is the key to a person's success. (One side is not properly matched with both sides)

14, whether the electronic industry can develop rapidly and penetrate into all walks of life, the key lies in accelerating the training of a group of specialized talents. (The use of "whether" in front is two aspects. There is only a positive side behind, which is inconsistent. You can change "want" to "can")

15. Young men and women no longer choose their partners based on wealth and family status, but on being able to work and having scientific and cultural knowledge. (In the front, "quantity" and "height" are related to both sides, and in the back, they are only related to one side, which is inconsistent. You can change "can" to "can" and "have" to "have")

16, academic performance is an important condition for three good students. The front is "good or bad", and the back is only positive, which is inconsistent. You can add "Can you be a good student" before "Three Good Students")

17, the car is driving on the vast expressway. (Modifier does not match the headword)

After introducing the heroic deeds, the students applauded warmly.

At five or six o'clock in the morning, tens of thousands of people stood on both sides of the street leading to the airport. ("Crowd" is a whole noun, which can no longer be limited by "tens of thousands", but "crowd" can be changed to "people")

19, we carefully studied the suggestions of employees and humbly sought the opinions of experts. As an adverbial, "earnest" can not modify or restrict "research", but can be changed to "seriousness" and "prudence". )

20. The students cleaned the classroom neatly. ("Clean" can supplement the degree of sweeping the floor. However, "neatness" and "cleanliness" cannot be matched. You can add "table stool" in front or delete it. )

Third, it is illogical.

The concept scope is not clear.

contradictory

Repeated denial caused confusion.

The weight of things is reversed.

Misuse of related words

[Example 3]

1, at night, from a distance, the whole building is dark, and only one room is still brightly lit. (self-contradictory)

Now that he's here, he's still worried. (Misuse of related words)

I'm not interested in math. In this sentence, the subject is "I" and the object is "Mathematics", which should be changed to "I am interested in mathematics".

Ostrovsky's How Steel was Tempered is no stranger to young people in China. (It can be changed to "China youth are no strangers to ostrovsky's How Steel was Tempered")

5, more than 800 people, a few shriveled arms, struggled with the storm and flood for a day and a night. (How can "more than 800 people" have thousands of arms? Should be changed from "thousand" to "thousand")

He studied hard and spent three years studying all the courses in the university. ("All the courses in the university" are vast, and it is not objective to finish them in only three years, so "all" can be removed. )

7. When you stand on the shore and look at the boundless sea, a magnificent picture of our ancestors will emerge before your eyes, which is made at sunrise and returned at sunset. (since it is "looking at the sea", the picture presented later should be the scene at sea. This expression sees the scene on land, which is inconsistent. The word "sea" can be changed to "vast land" and so on. )

This year, 90% of the students in our school participated in the "Volunteer Commando". The word "all" means all, and the previous definition was "90%", which is inconsistent and should be removed. )

No one will deny that the Yangtze River does not flow eastward. ("No denial" means "recognition", and "recognition" means "the Yangtze River does not flow eastward", which obviously does not conform to the objective facts. You can change "deny" to "admit", or remove the second "no")

10, can you deny that you should not study hard? The answer to the rhetorical question is on the opposite side of the sentence. If you don't use rhetorical questions, negation is appropriate, but if you use rhetorical questions, the meaning is just the opposite. "No" can be removed)

1 1. Over the past few years, he has been collecting and sorting out folk songs and accumulated a lot of information. "Always" means "always", and the sentence expression is just the opposite, so "forget" can be changed to "yes".

12. Young workers, old workers and women attended the railway workers' congress. (improper classification and enumeration. "Young workers" and "old workers" are divided by the same standard, while "women" are different standards, so they cannot be juxtaposed with the first two, and "women" can be removed)

13, all league members, especially middle school students, should study hard on scientific and cultural knowledge. (The object to be emphasized by the word "special" should be the part of the above-mentioned concept that forms a range relationship with the front, while "middle school students" and "league members" can only be cross-related, so "middle school students" should be changed to "middle school students' league members". )

14, bought toothpaste, toothbrush and daily necessities on the street. ("Toothpaste", "toothbrush" and "daily necessities" are not juxtaposed, but subordinate, so "harmony" should be changed to "equality")

Fourth, the structure is chaotic.

A mixture of two different sentence patterns

From a guest to a host

Change course halfway.

[Example 4]

1. What I can't tell you is that the school gave this task to our class, and everyone felt honored. (Miscellaneous)

Since China people accepted Marxism–Leninism, under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong, great changes have taken place in China's revolution. (changing hands halfway)

As far as the students' schoolwork burden is concerned, it is too hard for teachers to be buried in the homework pile all the year round. (anti-customer first. Before the first sentence was finished, it was interrupted by the second sentence and replaced by another topic)

4, as a * * * production of party member, the party's leading cadres, work, thinking, from the fundamental interests of the party and the people as the starting point. (The second half is a mixture of "starting from ..." and "starting from ...", and "from" can be removed. )

Throughout the ages, no one denies that talented people with outstanding achievements have the spirit of struggle. (The predicate part is a mixture of a judgment sentence and a statement sentence. You can add "de" at the end of the sentence to form the emphasis structure of "yes", or you can remove "yes")

6. Survival published by Shanghai Literature and Art Publishing House was written by a Chinese Canadian writer who has lived overseas for more than 20 years. (It is a mixture of subject-predicate sentences and verb-predicate sentences, and the "author" at the end of the sentence can be removed)

7. If you don't study hard, you can imagine how to get good grades. (It is a mixture of rhetorical questions and declarative sentences, so we should remove "imaginable" and add "what is it" after "achievement")

Verb (abbreviation of verb) is ambiguous.

Difficult to understand

Different meaning

Unrecognized reference

[Example 5]

1. I have made great progress in my three years of high school life. Because teachers are strict with themselves. It is not clear whether "ego" refers to the teacher or "me", and "ego" can be changed to "me" according to the context.

On the day of the reunion of old classmates, Zhang Qing and Wang Jie said as soon as they met, "Do you still know him?" ("He" means Zhang Qing or Jesson Wang? Can be changed to "Zhang Qing")

Six (1) components are redundant.

Part of the subject and predicate overlap.

Predicate is duplicate with object.

Predicate and its modifiers appear repeatedly.

Attributive and head language repeat.

The adverbial and the head are repeated.

[Example 6- 1]

1. The official salary of foreign experts should generally be higher or maintained during the probation period, but not lower than the probation period. (It has been defined as "above or maintained", and "below" is explicitly excluded, and then "below probation salary" is repeated and should be deleted)

2. Five-star winery decided to punish Chen Xinyao and others for staying in the factory for two years. During the period of punishment, living expenses will be paid every month, and no bonus will be paid. (In front of the second sentence, it has been stated that "only living expenses are paid" and bonuses are excluded. Let's talk about "free bonuses" again. Duplicates should be deleted. )

3. Xuelian brand shirts, regardless of style or quality. Still packaging, it can be called first-class in the country. ("Kan" originally means "can", so "can" should be used in front of it, which is repetitive and should be removed. )

Judging from his weak breathing, he is not dead, and he still has a breath. It has been said that "weak" and "not dead" are already included.

The reason why I didn't do well in this exam is because I didn't carefully examine the questions according to the teacher's requirements. (The redundant subject "reason" is repeated with the following "because", and the "reason" or "because" is removed)

6. Lao She's writing style has always shared weal and woe with the people. ("Style" should be removed)

7. The lecture notes borrowed from your college last time are being printed and can be distributed to students before class. (The predicate "continue" is redundant and should be deleted)

Ten players on the basketball court are having a fierce game. ("Dozen" is redundant and should be deleted)

9. Balzac, a famous French novelist, devoted his life to the compilation of Human Tragedy. (The object "redundancy" is redundant and should be deleted)

10. Today, I came to the Slender West Lake in Yangzhou and visited the Baita, Diaoyutai and Wu Ting Bridge. ("place" is redundant and should be deleted)

1 1. There are fertile land, rich mineral deposits and mountain villages full of countless treasures. (The word "various" with redundant additional parts is redundant and should be deleted.)

12, before the start of school, we had a military training, and the coach in charge of military training was the company's beard and small eyes. ("Responsible for military training" is redundant and should be deleted)

13, judgment is a form of thinking that affirms or denies whether something has a certain nature. ("Whether" is redundant and should be deleted)

14. The mountains are full of fruits: pears, apples, persimmons ... ("Everywhere" and "everywhere" are repetitive, so it is better to delete "everywhere" because "everywhere" has more emphasis)

15, in order to simplify the number of words, we have to delete some slightly. ("Some" is the same as the previous "slightly added", but it can be deleted)

Six (two) components are incomplete.

Unfinished topic

Incomplete predicate

Incomplete object

Incomplete modifier

Incomplete head language

[Example 6-2]

With the help of teachers and classmates, I have made rapid progress. Due to the frequent use of prepositions or object-object structures, the original subject becomes adverbial, and the lack of subject in the whole sentence is the main manifestation of incomplete subject. This sentence should delete "in" and "under", or "make")

2. zhou wenbin, a talented scholar in the south of the Yangtze River, dressed as a woman in "The Tiger King Snatches Parents", was snatched home by the Tiger King and sent to his sister Wang Xiuying's room. (Because the sentence is long, changing the subject secretly is also an important aspect of subject missing. The subject of the first half of this sentence is "zhou wenbin" and the second half is "Wang Tiger", so the subject "Wang Tiger" should be added to the last sentence. )

3. The school has made remarkable achievements in education and teaching, and has been commended by provincial and municipal education committees for many times. The radical part of the radical phrase is misunderstood as the head, and the lack of subject in the latter sentence is also worthy of great attention. The subject of the first clause of this sentence is "achievement", and the second clause is misunderstood as "school", so it is omitted by mistake, and the subject "school" should be added before the second clause.

After a winter's hard struggle, a four-meter-high, 700-meter-volt river dam stands proudly at the edge of Tianmuying. Because the sentence is long, I forget the previous structure after writing, so the incomplete predicate is the main reason. In this case, the subject is "Nanpu people" and there is no corresponding predicate, so "yes" should be added before "one".

The business department actively responded to the government's call, publicized and educated the masses with great fanfare, and publicized the importance of selling products. (The word "clarification" should be added before "sale")

6. After an in-depth discussion on the meaning of life lies in dedication, the students in our school have undergone great changes after a semester of study. (The word "manufacturing" should be added before the second word "school")

In the old society, the working people did not have enough to eat and wear. (Either delete "life" and take "not enough to eat and not warm to wear" as the predicate, or add "life" before "eat")

8. The school party committee discussed and mobilized all teachers and students to carry out patriotic health campaign. (The sentence is a bit long, and the echo with the previous components is ignored when you say or write it later, which is an important reason for the incomplete object. There is no object head word corresponding to the predicate "discussion" at the end of this example, so "problem" should be added at the end.

9. The History of Entrepreneurship is a novel describing the socialist revolution in rural areas of China. The text describes the plan that Liang Shengbao went to Guo County to buy new rice seeds and realize the double cropping of rice and wheat when the mutual aid group was just established. (The story of "should be added at the end to echo the predicate of" writing ")

10, they look at the world with their motherland in mind, vigorously carry forward the courage to fight and finally win the championship. (We should add "the spirit of" after "dare to blog" to echo the predicate "carry forward")

1 1. If you want to get excellent grades, you must work hard. (Lack of necessary additional components will lead to imprecise ideographic expression, etc. In this case, it is impossible to "achieve excellent results" only by "paying labor". "Hard work and effectiveness" should be added before "labor")

12. In the first spring, wheat grew well and got a gratifying harvest. (The word "autumn queen" should be added to "acquisition" to limit the time)

First of all, the words are inappropriate.

Misuse of nouns: 1. Dr. Li always patiently guides her to write medical records completely, clearly and orderly. (The word "organized" is a noun used as an adjective and can be changed to "organized" together with "complete and clear")

2. Your behavior is not China's. ("China" is a noun and used as a verb. Can be changed to "not the behavior of China people")

Verb misuse: 1. What a touching scene this is! ("touching" is a verb used as an adjective, which can be changed to "Touching")

2. The word thinking has broad sense and narrow sense. ("Yong" is a verb, which is complicated to use here and can be removed)

Misuse of adjectives: l, his simple two sentences. Suddenly, there is an indescribable heaviness in my heart. ("heavy" is an adjective, which can be misused as a noun and changed to "heavy feeling").

The price difference between the hardcover edition and the popular edition of this book is more than half. ("Disparity" is an adjective. When used as a verb, it can be changed to "difference". )

Misuse of quantifier: 1. In the morning, he ate two steamed buns and a bowl of porridge. ("two" should be changed to "two").

At the congress of advanced workers, the two of them personally exchanged experiences together. ("Two" should be changed to "Two")

The price of radios has been dropping again and again, and some even doubled. (Change "double" to 50%, etc. )

4. Zhaojiapo, a small mountain villa, built a reservoir with nearly100000 cubic meters of water. (Delete the contradiction between "near" and "many" as appropriate)

After hard work, his average score in all six subjects in the final exam was above 90. (Delete the contradiction between "general" and "above" as appropriate)

6. The cure rate of our operation increased from 80% to 93%. ("Le" should be changed to "To")

7. His sweaty work cloth hat and semi-new homemade yellow cloth coat are already soaked. The quantifier "Ti" can modify "yellow cloth coat", but not "single hat". We should change the word "body" to "top" and add "that one" before "semi-new"

Adverb misuse: 1. Like the old political commissar, the new political commissar is more considerate of soldiers. ("Geng" is inconsistent with the context and should be deleted)

It is no accident that he made such a big mistake in his work. ("Occasionally" is an adverb and cannot be used as a predicate, so it is misused as an adjective and should be changed to "accidentally")

Improper preposition: 1. Why has this phenomenon of wasting talents not attracted the attention of relevant departments so far? (Misuse of "for" should be deleted)

I am very interested in aesthetics. (Misuse of "about" should be changed to "right" or "right")

Some people look at the problem in the wrong way. ("zai" and "shang" are redundant, resulting in grammatical errors. Should be deleted)

Misuse of auxiliary words: L. A new upsurge of scientific farming is being set off in rural areas of Guangdong. (The contradiction between "positive" and "negative" should be deleted as appropriate)

Don't repeat the words used together before and after the content, otherwise you will make the mistake of gilding the lily. The contradiction between "Jiang" and "Le". "Le" should be deleted)

3. The first launch vehicle launched by China into the Pacific Ocean was a complete success. (Because the word "de" is often used, the subject-predicate phrase is changed to a noun phrase as the subject, which cannot match the predicate part, so the word "de" should be deleted.)

Misuse of conjunctions: l, his words are clear and powerful. ("and" should be changed to "and")

2. Everyone actively criticizes individualism, liberalism and various non-proletarian thoughts. (The word "he" has changed the word that is not in a parallel relationship into a parallel relationship and should be changed to "equal")

On this great day, on behalf of my government, people and myself, I would like to extend my warm congratulations to you and your government and people through you. (The first word "and" is misused and should be changed to "and")

4. What? He hasn't decided whether to study history or geography. ("or" should be changed to "or")

(B) improper meaning

Misunderstanding of meaning: This view that money is everything is simply an unpublished theory. (The theory of "non-publication" is an unchangeable and indelible statement, which can be changed to "extreme error" and so on. )

Inadvertently 1, Xiao Wang has worked hard for three years. Outstanding results in the college entrance examination. (The word "Cheng" is too heavy. It should be changed to "achievement")

We must criticize this criminal who seriously disturbs social order. The meaning of "criticism" is too light, so it should be changed to "struggle". )

Improper scope of meaning L, when building socialism, we need a large number of outstanding scientists. (The range of "Time" is too small, so it should be changed to "Period")

2. We should control the scene of reform and opening up. (The scope of "scenario" should be changed to "situation")

Some bad things happened in our class today. (The word "event" is too broad and should be changed to "event" or "thing")

(3) Improper color

1, after many charges, our army finally beat back the tenacious attack of the enemy. ("tenacious" is a commendatory term, and this usage is a derogatory term, which should be changed to "stubborn")

2. If you want to make everyone's morale high, you should be careful to incite. ("Inciting" is a derogatory term, which should be changed to "instigating" if it is mistaken for a commendatory term)

Although the old lady didn't know a word, as soon as she entered the room, she keenly felt the smell of carbon monoxide in the room. ("carbon monoxide" is a technical term, which is not suitable for an illiterate old lady and should be changed to "gas")

4. We solemnly declare to the world once again that Taiwan Province Province is an inalienable part of the territory of China. (The use of "explanation" in this context is not solemn and should be changed to "statement")

Misuse of related words

Misuse of related words: l, I will finish the task despite all the difficulties. ("although" is a turning conjunction, this clause is conditional, so it is inappropriate to use it, and it should be changed to "regardless")

2. A day without prevention is better than a day without disaster. ("I'd rather ...

Abuse of related words: L, I have always liked this painting, but I only realized it not long ago ("que" and "ke" are repeated, so "que" or "ke" should be deleted)

Some students are not interested in Chinese. So I like math very much. ("Because ...

Lack of related words: 1, the stick insect in Singapore is not only almost the same color as bamboo, but also completely like a branch when it is quiet. There is a progressive relationship between clauses, and the word "not only" has been used in front, but the corresponding word "and" is missing in the next clause, so "and" should be added before "body shape")

This academic conference has gained a lot and the time is not long. (The two clauses of this sentence obviously have a turning point, and the related word "although"

Incorrect position of related words L. No matter how perfect a bird's wings are, a bird will never fly high without air. ("No matter" should be moved to the beginning of the sentence)

Not only Xiaoyu can sing, but also Li Can can sing. Because the subjects of the two clauses are different. "Not only" should be moved to the beginning of the sentence)

3. On the one hand, farmers put forward reasonable requirements and suggestions for fertilizer plants, on the other hand, fertilizer plants actively improve technology and quality to ensure the supply of fertilizer. (The first "on the one hand" should be moved to the beginning of the sentence)

Before everyone was here, he began to work (the two clauses have the same subject, but the first clause was omitted, so "JIU" should be moved between "he" and "Yi")

Improper use of related words, only by listening to lectures and finishing homework can the academic performance be greatly improved. ("Only" and "Jiu" are not the same set of related words and cannot be used together, so "Jiu" should be changed to "Cai" and "Only" cannot be changed to "As long as" because the clause is necessary but not sufficient)

Now that you are here, I should go, too. (Since "and" Ye "do not belong to the same set of related words and cannot be used together, the word" Ye "should be changed to" Jiu ")