⑤ List the topics in the order of thinking. ? In addition to the above conventional writing patterns and training ideas, I focused on the following three aspects of guidance:? First, should we focus on one word "love"? Many students began to write their own reflections, often writing the content of "concept" very long. They always like to introduce the story from beginning to end, for fear that readers don't know its content, but there are few words to express "feelings". For example, when a classmate wrote "The Story of an Only Daughter", he told the whole story from beginning to end. First, he wrote how Zhang Mingming excelled in his studies, and then he wrote that Zhang Mingming's father died suddenly and his mother was miserable. Then, I wrote that Zhang Mingming learned to comb her hair by herself, how to undertake heavy housework and accept severe tests, and then I wrote that she grew up day by day with the help of society.
At the end, I wrote: I want to learn from Zhang Mingming, not give in to difficulties, and learn to do what I can from an early age. In view of such a structural review, I'm sure he has carefully watched it and remembered the plot of the film, but judging from the stylistic requirements of the review, it is unqualified.
Because there is only the last sentence of "feeling" in the full text, although the content of this "feeling" is appropriate, the article fails to grasp the key point of "feeling" and is biased, like a simple introduction to the content of a movie. I emphasize that students should focus on "feeling". From the text, the content of "feeling" accounts for about four or five times of the main content of the film.
In this paper, the content of the film is quoted appropriately to serve the senses. Therefore, you only need to quote the content of this film in a few words, not to describe it in detail, let alone describe it in detail.
After watching The Great Edison, I asked the students: Who can sum up the story in the simplest language? A classmate said: this film mainly tells the story of Edison's growth from a penniless basement cleaner to a world-famous great scientist; Another student added: What he mainly said was that he invented the electric light and brought light to the whole world. I compare the speeches of two students: the former is more accurate, while the latter is only the most outstanding one among countless inventions. I'm sure they can sum up the story in short words, and then let the students talk about their feelings.
For example, Edison studied hard, was not afraid of failure, and dared to innovate. In this way, the article written can overcome the shortcomings of storytelling, not only highlighting the word "love", but also feeling people after reading it. ? Second, "feeling" is the key. It doesn't mean that some students leave "watching" to write it. They just mentioned something like "I was inspired by watching a movie (book)" at the beginning, and then left the original film to talk about their feelings, which was irrelevant and had no practical significance.
Let "view" and "feeling" match. For example, after watching Burning Yuanmingyuan, I will instruct students to make a draft first, and then collect some exercises. I found that some students' "sense" and "view" are not closely related, and some are not related at all. After they finished the film, they wrote about how Japanese imperialism invaded China and how it burned, killed and looted China.
Can't grasp the theme of the movie. In order to solve this problem, I found several well-written articles to comment and guide.
A classmate named Wang wrote at the end of the article entitled "Falling behind will be beaten": The stone pillars in the film still stand on the ruins of Yuanmingyuan, as if warning people that "falling behind will be beaten". As the successors of the new China, we must learn our skills and build our motherland stronger so as not to let the historical tragedy repeat itself. At the end of this paragraph, the learner once again grasped the "several stone pillars" he observed and published "If you feel backward, you will be beaten", so that the whole article can be integrated, so that "feeling" comes from "view" and "view" serves "feeling".
? Third, to "feel" the reality? To write "love" well, we should combine the reality, give full play to it and write our own "love" deeply and thoroughly. ? Reality here refers not only to self-reality, but also to other people's reality and social reality.
? If you watch Four Little Partners, I ask students to talk about four little partners, such as Ding Xiaodong. Where did they start to go wrong? Have you ever thought about them? The students had a heated discussion and thought that the mistake of four friends was to succeed by doing only one good thing. A classmate said that he had a similar idea himself. Every year on March 5th, he does a good deed. He thinks he is a good boy like Lei Feng.
Another student said that he took the initiative to clean the class twice, and some didn't do it once, and he was also named "Red Flower Boy". Think that teachers and classmates are biased.
After reading Four Little Friends, like the four little friends, he realized that only by doing it step by step can he realize his ideal.
2. How to write Little Soldier Zhang Ga in a composition of 15000 words?
After watching the movie Private Zhang Ga, I was moved by the patriotic feelings of the hero Xiao Gazi, whose indomitable spirit is admirable.
When it comes to it, everyone must be familiar with Private Zhang Ga! In this film, there is a little self-willed, witty, brave and legendary hero. Everyone in the village called him "Gazi".
Gazi lived with her grandmother since childhood. In a Japanese raid, Gazi's grandmother was unfortunately killed by Japanese devils. Gazi wanted to be an Eighth Route Army and an investigator in order to avenge his grandmother. But captain Qian of the Eighth Route Army thought he was too young to agree. Gazi didn't lose heart. Under his repeated insistence, Captain Qian finally could not bear his own hard work and became the Eighth Route Army as he wished. After joining the Eighth Route Army, Uncle Zhong gave him a gun made of wood. He used his wit and courage in the army to help his uncle and the district captain accomplish many important tasks.
Looking at Gazi reminds me of myself. What you do is always careless, and you have to give up when you encounter some difficulties and problems. However, Xiao Gazi is different from us. In order to complete the task, he always tries his best, never gives up and insists on completing it. He will never give up until he reaches his goal. Gazi shines with valuable spirit worthy of our study.
Remember the bitter yesterday, cherish the beautiful today and build a better and more prosperous tomorrow! Cherish what we have now, don't wait until we don't cherish it.
We are the masters of 2 1 century, and the new China of the future belongs to us and will be created by us! We should study hard, do our best and contribute everything to our motherland like Gazi.
3. How to write the feeling of returning to the sea?
Today is New Year's Day, and the weather is fine. My mother and I went to the Yueqing Times International Cinema to watch movies. We went to the cinema and bought two tickets to the sea.
Three little fish are swimming in the blue new york Bay. A flying fish named Kevin swam into the fishing area and was caught. He tried to throw the seaweed into a ball, but it was too late. His father took out the family heirloom and asked Kevin to throw it, but he was caught before throwing it on the button. Sold to the first Chinese restaurant in new york. They were put into big fish ponds in Bao Xiao. A thief got pearls, and the police were chasing him, so he hid in a fish pond. He tried to steal the blue pearl every day, but failed. Kevin, the flying fish, says every day that we fish should swim around in the sea instead of waiting for death here. Bao Xiao knew the little fish's heart and wanted to put it back into the sea. Suddenly one day, a thief came to steal pearls, but Bao Xiao found him and fell into a fish pond. The octopus tied the thief with a beard and the thief fell in. Xiaoyu wanted Bao Xiao's father to know, so he broke the glass of the swimming pool. Bao Xiao's father heard a loud noise and immediately sent Bao Xiao to the hospital. Bao Xiao's father knew that the little fish had saved his son, so he turned the restaurant into an aquarium and put the little fish back into the sea.
This movie tells us that not all human beings are bad, people are bad and good, and we can also make friends with animals, just like this little treasure and Kevin the flying fish.
4. Write a comment of 150 words. [After reading about 150 words] On the day of reviewing about 150 words, I read the article Zhan Tianyou with relish and reviewed about 150 words. This article tells how the Beijing-Zhangjiakou Railway hosted by Zhan Tianyou was built, which shows that Zhan Tianyou is a city. "When encountering difficulties, he always thought: This is the first railway built by China people themselves, and it must be repaired; Otherwise, it will not only make foreigners laugh, but also make engineers in China lose confidence. " I can't help but admire how patriotic Zhan Tianyou is! His strong patriotism cannot be expressed in words. When he is in trouble, he still thinks about his country and wants to win glory for his motherland. He is extremely responsible for his work. Otherwise, how could he have completed the entire Beijing-Zhangjiakou Railway two years ahead of schedule? Zhan Tianyou is not only meticulous in his work attitude, but also innovative. It can be seen from a herringbone circuit designed by him that Zhan Tianyou's innovative spirit comes from practice and diligence. Yes, isn't that what we need? Take Zhan Tianyou as an example in real life! For example, some people always think they are smart and great, playing all day and not focusing on their studies or work. Those diligent people are not as smart as smart people, but as long as they have a strong will and keep working hard, they will certainly catch up with smart people. Isn't there a saying that "cleverness lies in diligence" We should practice more, pay more attention to the things around us, and be conscientious in life. Then we will be as innovative as Zhan Tianyou! Zhan Tianyou, I want to follow your example. I want to be patriotic like you, make contributions to the motherland, have the spirit of being brave in practice and innovation, and be meticulous in doing things. I'm proud to have an engineer like Zhan Tianyou in China! I read a book called Grimm's Fairy Tales the other day, and its collection Cinderella. Source: Please keep it. The girl she mentioned. She found a fierce stepmother, but her stepmother brought her daughter. This is very vicious and intense. The poor little girl is abused by her mother and bullied by her hateful sister every day, and she has to do dirty and tired work and wear rags every day. But she was robbed by her sisters and slept on the ashes. Her family called her Cinderella. Yes, the prince in the palace invited girls from all over the country to dance and chose a wife for the prince. Cinderella went. She can even wear it out, and the hazelnut tree makes Cinderella the most beautiful girl in the world. Once she entered the palace, the prince refused to dance with other people, only danced with Cinderella for three days, but unfortunately danced every night. He spilled asphalt on the road and stuck Cinderella's glass shoes on the stairs. One day, girls from all over the country came to try on this shoe. As long as they can put it on, they can marry him. This shoe has magic power. Cinderella can wear it. When she married the prince, she lived a happy life. Here, I am most moved by Cinderella's strength. As long as she is kind and honest, she will always be happy and overcome it. The stepmother scolded her and her sister bullied her, but Cinderella was a little. Her heart is pure. After reading the story, I think everyone should love their parents and come without regrets. Also, be honest and kind, be happy every day, learn from Cinderella, and be broad-minded. Don't let her stepmother and sister bully others viciously, be happy forever like Cinderella! The so-called "sentiment" in the extended reading article can be the truth or subtle thoughts learned from the book, the thinking and association inspired by the contents of the book, the determination and ideal inspired by reading, and the attack and satire on some ugly phenomena in society caused by reading. The expression of post-reading feeling is flexible and diverse, which basically belongs to discussion, but writing is different from general argumentative writing. Because it must be based on reading. In order to write an experienced, insightful, emotional and innovative post-reading, we must pay attention to the following points: First, the feeling of reading the original "post-reading [1]" is caused by "reading". "Reading" is the basis of "feeling". Reading is shallow, of course not deep. Only by reading carefully can we feel something and feel deeply. If you want to read an argumentative essay, you must find out its arguments (opinions and propositions), or criticize any wrong opinions, think about what you are inspired by, and find out what the arguments and conclusions are. If it is a narrative, you should make clear its main plot, how many characters there are, what is their relationship and what is the story. It is also necessary to find out what kind of spiritual quality the work reveals, what kind of social phenomenon it reflects, what thoughts and feelings the author expresses, which chapters of the work are touching, why it is so touching, and so on. Secondly, as long as you read the original text carefully, an article can be written as a review in many ways. If you are deeply touched by the central content of the original text, you can also write a review of other contents of the original text. In short, as long as it is the content of the original, as long as it is what you feel, it is possible to write a comment. You need to express what you know in order to write a good comment. Third, choosing the right point of view of an article can discharge a lot of feelings, but a comment can only talk about one center, so it follows these many. Find a feeling point that you feel the deepest, the latest angle, the most realistic pertinence, and feel smooth when you write, and then demonstrate it in words. Fourth, the narrative should be simple. Since the feelings after reading are caused by reading, in the article, you should describe the facts that cause "feelings" and sometimes describe some examples that you think of. In a word, after reading it, there is no shortage of "narrative", but it is different from the requirements of "narrative" in the narrative. The "narrative" in the narrative pays attention to concrete, vivid and vivid, while the "narrative" in the post-reading feeling is simple and to the point, and does not need to be "touching", but only needs to arouse reason. The common problem for beginners to quote the original text after reading is that the narrative is not short, but actually becomes a retelling.
5. How to write a retrospective feeling includes two processes: first look at the retrospective feeling, the viewer and the reader. But why not say the feeling of looking back, because there is a considerable difference between seeing and not seeing. Viewers with normal eyesight can do it. The viewer should carefully screen the content of the viewer through the brain to gain some experience, so the first step must be taken to write a good sense of retrospect.
If you want to write a story about visiting Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum, you should visit Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum first. Before the visit, we should know who Dr. Sun Yat-sen is, what he did, why he did it, what his historical position is, why he built such a mausoleum for him, and what happened before and after the restoration. Then we should have a good visit to the mausoleum, pay attention to the observation from the big aspect to the small aspect, and record our own feelings and the performances and feelings of various tourists. In short, you should consciously look at it. It is a feeling after reading it. After returning home, calm down and think, and write down what you see and remember. This is a feeling after reading it.
I have to write it myself. Accumulate more good words and sentences.
6. Thoughts on the composition of "Changjiang No.7"
Not long ago, I watched the movie "Changjiang No.7", which was about a single-parent child named Zhou Xiaodi, whose father was down and out. But in order to make Xiao Di grow into a useful person to society, his father borrowed money to send Xiao Di to an aristocratic school. One day, Xiao Di's father died in a car accident at the construction site. Xiao Di was very sad after hearing the news and regretted not listening to his father. But a miracle happened. The toy "Changjiang No.7" given to Xiao Di by Xiao Di's father played its special role and traded his life for Xiao Di's father's life.
Although the story described in the whole film is simple, it is thought-provoking. What impressed me most was what Xiao Di's father often said to Xiao Di: "We don't steal or rob, we should study hard and be useful to society when we grow up." This reminds me of a story I heard before. Once upon a time, there were two families. One is rich, the other is poor. Each of them has a little girl. Little girls from rich families think that their family environment is good, they don't like reading since childhood, and they look down on girls from poor families. However, girls from poor families are very competitive and study hard, and their academic performance is often among the best. Later, the little girl, who was rich and rich, didn't study hard since she was a child, and finally achieved nothing. And that little girl from a poor family, because she studied hard since she was a child, finally achieved a great cause and became a useful person to society.
I thought a lot that night and couldn't sleep for a long time. How happy we are compared with Dee. We have food, clothes and games. Everyone is the "little emperor" at home and the "apple of the eye" of grandparents and parents. How much they love us. But how do we do it? Many of our classmates don't know if they are lucky or not, and they don't cherish the good times now. Some watch TV and play games all day without doing their homework seriously; Some people don't listen carefully in class, they are always thinking about things in their minds, and the teacher answers irrelevant questions when asking questions; Some people are often lazy when they are engaged in sanitation. At home, they also have to make a living. Some people only care about themselves, completely ignore others, act willfully, and even do bad things outside. If so, can you become a useful person to society when you grow up?
We are all the future of the motherland, and the hope of the motherland is pinned on us. Here, I appeal to my classmates that from now on, we should study hard and cultivate good moral cultivation before we can become useful people to society when we grow up. At the same time, I also hope that parents can attach importance to educating their children like Xiao Di's father, so that their children can become a person who contributes to society in the future.