The Modern Chinese Dictionary explains "watch" simply: watch, watch, but the connotation of this word is very rich, far beyond the scope of the above explanation. The object of viewing can be concrete things, concrete objects, abstract emotions and their deduction and sublimation. Therefore, when writing, you can write about a sky, a ray of sunshine, old friends or your original self, or you can write about ordinary, mature, simple and even love, focus on your emotions and inner feelings, reflect complex thoughts and concerns, and reproduce the joys and sorrows of life.

Clear the specific content of the watch, what kind of watch will be decided, and the conception and conception will have the basic direction. Not every watch can be complete, not every watch can be realized, but with a watch, life can be profound and the soul can be enriched. Grasping the key point of "seeing" in writing will naturally lead to a wonderful article.

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The catcher in the haystack

Zhu Wei, Senior 3, Funing Middle School, Jiangsu Province

Moonlight hangs over the village camp in this ravine, and rolling mountains crouch around the village camp like wild animals. The haystack looks like a mountain cub. The dog doll sat in a daze on the haystack.

There is a smell of boiled lard in the air, and the baby dog licks his mouth and sucks saliva. It's Spring Festival now, and I'm making this thing on my own tiger's head stove. At night, as soon as he picked up a piece of hot oil residue and put it in his mouth, he asked his mother to chase it: "greedy ghosts can't be killed!" " He ran in front and his mother scolded him at the back.

The winter vacation lasted more than a month. The dilapidated classroom is not sheltered from the wind and rain, and it is freezing in winter. The county brought a cart of bricks and tiles to repair the classroom, but it was used to repair the Bodhisattva Temple. The village head wiped his nose with shiny sleeves and said to the angry teacher Li, "What's the hurry?" ! Take a vacation first! "So. Baby dog has gone home. Teacher Li said that we should wait until the weather is warm.

Miss Li is the first teacher to teach here, although the dog father curled his mouth and said, "He is really an able person. How can he suffer in this ravine?" But Gouwa still likes this teacher very much. Gowa learned a lot from him. For example, the place under your feet is called the earth, which floats there like the stars in the sky, just like an egg yolk floating in the protein. For example, if you join a club in the city and build something called an airplane, people can fly to the sky by sitting on it. Doug Wei thinks this is incredible. How can something made of iron fly? If you throw an iron pot into the sky, you won't kill anyone!

Dogway looked at the vast sky and countless twinkling stars, and the yolk floated before her eyes. In the dog baby's mind, he holds an egg yolk in his hand and puts it in his mouth, sucking, sucking and chewing. "Knowledge is power", he repeated what the teacher often said. He thought that after learning the teacher's knowledge, he would go to the city, because he knew there was endless curiosity: beautiful electric lights like rainbows and moving iron houses. ...

The baby dog suddenly thought of all this, but he didn't understand anything and his head became very high. These many things, he felt, were like messy seedlings that suddenly appeared on bare land, which made him a little confused. He opened his mouth and shook his hands, hugged his knees and looked up at the stars. After the new year, the teacher will come back soon. He hopes it will be soon.

"Dog wretched! Come back to sleep! If you die outside and freeze your ears, you won't get a wife! " Dad stood at the door and shouted, and his hoarse voice floated around the small village. Daowei wiped off the haystack, shook his swollen head and went home.

The starry sky is still vast, and there seems to be a dog doll holding her knees and watching the sky on the haystack.

short review

After reading this article, I laughed at the author's wisdom and humor for the first time. "The smell of boiled lard", "Sleeves that are glossy and slippery" and "Electric lights as beautiful as rainbows, moving iron houses" really make people laugh.

Read the hardships and bitterness of life for the second time. "He ran in front, niang scold behind. How can a child who chews hamburgers feel the taste and temptation of mc oil residue? How can a girl who is clamoring for losing weight all day know?

The third time, I read the depth and coldness of the author's eyes. This lonely and thin figure sitting on the haystack is just looking at his teacher? Look at the vast starry sky? No, he is still looking at knowledge, the future and his happy life. Far-reaching thoughts add dignity and responsibility to the article.

Fourth, what else can you read?