Example: The child is not naked. Parents can format and install whatever they want. Children not only have their own operating system, but also can create and derive their own applications. What parents should do is to give their children complete acceptance and support, respect their nature and personality, and believe that every life has the internal motivation, ability and order of self-growth. Good education is awakening, influencing and edifying, not controlling, inculcating and shaping.
Second, the difference between figurative argument and figurative rhetoric: 1. The purpose of figurative rhetoric is to make the description vivid, vivid and realistic. 2. The purpose of metaphor argument is to make abstract truth easy to understand, avoid empty, blunt and boring preaching, and make it easier for readers to accept.
Third, the difference between metaphor argument and example argument: 1. Examples are true and objective. 2. The examples in metaphorical argument are fictitious and imaginary.
Four, two common structural forms of metaphorical argument.
1, parallelism metaphor, a metaphor, three sentences in a row, and then lead to opinions and discussions. Even if I am a beautiful peony, I have to understand that a flower is not spring, and spring should be a colorful world. Even if I am a solitary pine standing proudly, I have to understand that it is not a hero to stand out from the crowd, but the rows of trees are the solid Great Wall to keep out the wind and sand. Even if you are a sailboat ready to go, you should understand that a boat alone is not a landscape, and Qian Fan can only show the magnificence of the sea. In 2005, the perfect composition "The Voice of the Night" in Jiangsu College Entrance Examination demonstrated that "there is a win-win talent * * * brilliance" with parallelism.
2. Paragraph metaphor: put forward opinions, establish metaphors, analyze metaphors, summarize metaphors and reiterate opinions. (see "takenism") (1), so use your head, put your eyes out and take it yourself! (Put forward an opinion) (2) For example, there is a poor young man among us who got a big house because of the yin work of his ancestors (let me put it this way), whether it was cheated, robbed, legally inherited or obtained as a son-in-law. (Establish a metaphor) (3) So, what should we do? I think, first of all, regardless of the willy-nilly, "bring it"! However, it would be a shame to oppose the old owner of this house and hesitate to enter the door for fear that his things will be dirty; When you fly into a rage and set it on fire, you can save your innocence, but you are stupid. But because I envy the old owner of this house, this time I accepted everything, jumped into the bedroom happily, smoked the remaining opium, and of course it was even more wasteful. "Usualism" is completely different. He has and chooses. When you see shark fin, you don't just throw it on the road to show its "popularity". As long as it is nutritious, you can eat it with your friends like radish and cabbage, but don't use it to entertain big guests; When you see opium, you won't throw it into the toilet in public to see its complete revolution. You just send it to the drugstore for treatment, but you don't create the mystery of "while stocks last" There are only pipes and lanterns, although the forms are different from those of India, Persia and Arabia. They can really be regarded as national quintessence. If you travel around the world with it on your back, someone will surely see them, but I think everything can be destroyed except sending some to museums. There are still a group of concubines who want to ask them to separate, otherwise "takenism" may be a bit dangerous. In short, bring it. We want to use it, store it, or destroy it. Then, if the owner is a new owner, the house becomes a new one. However, first of all, this person should be calm, brave, discerning and not selfish. (Summarize the metaphor) (5) People can't become newcomers without bringing them, and literature and art can't become new literature and art without bringing them. (reiterate the point of view)
Examples of metaphorical argument of verbs (abbreviation of verb);
1, when a person starts to spend money lavishly, he always has a boundary, which is limited to his own labor income. However, from thrift to luxury, from luxury to thrift, from luxury to luxury, the defense line earned by labor is not necessarily maginot line, even maginot line can be breached by its own greed. (The article compares the greedy border of human beings to maginot line in World War II, which is vivid. )
2. What is the most bitter thing in life? Poor? Not depressed? No. Old? Dead? Neither. I said that the most bitter thing in life is to bear an unfinished responsibility. If people can be satisfied, they are poor and not bitter; If you can behave yourself, you will be depressed. Old age is an inevitable thing in life, and suffering is nothing to a philosophical person. It's just that a person should do something as long as he is alive. If you don't finish what you should do, it's like having a few thousand pounds of burden on your shoulders, and there is no more pain. Why? Because of conscience, there is nowhere to escape! (In this paper, the metaphor is used, "If you don't finish what you should do, it's like you have a few thousand pounds of burden on your shoulders", which vividly shows the most bitter thing in life, and Mo Ruo bears an unfinished responsibility. )
3. I am one of countless stars, but I am proud of my light today; I am a bud on the earth. Although it is not fragrant or dazzling, I am proud of the upcoming opening. I am ordinary, but ordinary and valuable; I am ordinary, but I have dignity in ordinary! (2004 Liaoning college entrance examination perfect score composition "That wisp of eternal pride")
4. Qu Yuan committed suicide by throwing himself into the river, and he was a writer of more than 10,000. Only by using metaphors can it be memorable. Example: I can't imagine what kind of face Qu Yuan, a talented person who can cut the liver and drain the gallbladder, is, standing on the bank of the Miluo River in despair and singing proudly. Li Sao has a long history. Some people say that beautiful poetry is a struggle and transcendence of bitterness. I think Qu Yuan is wandering in despair with the sadness of the broken wings of a bluebird. His robe fluttered in the north wind, and he transcended extremes and heroism and jumped off the Miluo River with an atmosphere that he didn't like around him! (A bluebird with broken wings)
I compare myself to a fish, and I will try to find the exit out of water. I compare myself to an eagle, and I will try my best to fly out of the blue sky. I am myself, I want to run, run out of my parents' sight, and run on my own track. (Excellent composition of Hunan College Entrance Examination in 2005 "That Fish That Eagle That Man")
6. A person who doesn't study is like a frog in the well. He can only see the sky in front of him. Only by jumping into the ocean of knowledge can he know the vastness of the world. A man who doesn't study is like a lonely goose. He can only fly low. Only by keeping company with the wild goose of knowledge can it know the vastness of the sky. Knowledge is like a bright lamp. In the darkness of life, only with it can we move towards the final light. Knowledge is like a huge ship. In the stormy waves of life, only having it can be smooth sailing.
7. Selfishness is the opinion of fools; Creating a win-win situation is a wise move. Win-win is the foundation of confidence, the source of strength, the searchlight to open the road of life and the golden key to success. Win-win will make you and me brilliant.
8. There is always a lamp in our hearts, which always shines with a warm spark and illuminates the goodness in our hearts. There are always a group of people in this world, always guarding the lamp, carefully caring for it and letting it illuminate the cold corner. ("the lamp that watches the soul")
9. A dim oil lamp lit up Sima Qian's locked forehead, and his long-lasting passionate emotions oozed from the ups and downs of his blood, turning into colorful words under his fingertips, firmly filling his simple ideals. An ant doesn't know that there is spring and autumn, and the coat on the stone doesn't know that there is day and night. And he, Sima Qian, who endured humiliation, walked the whole mountain forest. In spring and autumn, bloom is clear, and summer insects sing in the winter sunshine. However, the sparkling Historical Records, like a feast, penetrated the flowing years and gave birth to one literary master after another. (2005 Liaoning college entrance examination perfect score composition "That eternal pride")
10 When we stop staring at history with short-sighted eyes, we will be surprised to see that at that moment, the blood gushing from the honest and frank unyielding neck seems to have turned into a luxurious and beautiful leopard tail, beating on the back of a decadent dynasty, leaving a shocking sound in the dark night sky. Yes, Ji Kang didn't have a shining beginning like a phoenix's head or a thick process like a pig's belly, but he wrote down the cowardice of the authorities and the self-esteem of the literati with music, bones and supplies, and wrote down the last journey of his glorious life. As a result, history left the proudest and most distinctive chapter for China intellectuals. (The Voice of the Night)
1 1, Mr. Lu Xun's metaphor in "Takeism" is very classic. He compared "big house" to "cultural heritage"; Criticize three wrong views and attitudes towards cultural heritage with "loser", "asshole" and "waste"; Use "shark's fin", "opium", "bong, smoke lamp" and "concubine" to describe several components of cultural heritage; Use "possession", "choice" and "innovation" to explain the three steps of critical inheritance of cultural heritage. Very apt, comprehensive and convincing.
12 "I am a country" Liang said: "I am a country and I am loyal to my country. If Hanoi is fierce, the people will move to Hedong and the millet will move to Hanoi: Hedong is also fierce. People who observe the politics of neighboring countries have no intention like me. There are not many people in neighboring countries, and there are not many people in my country. Why? " Mencius said to him, "What's the point of not adding more people? ? Br> Mencius said to him, "The king is belligerent. Please use the metaphor of war. Replenish drums, weapons company, abandon armor. Or stop after a hundred steps, or stop after fifty steps. What if the pot is too black? " Said, "no! If you don't walk a hundred steps straight, you will walk. "He said," If Wang knows this, there is no hope that there will be more people than neighboring countries. ".
13, "stimulating learning" is green, take it from blue and use it for green; Ice and water are cooler than water. Wood is straight in the rope, not a wheel, and its curve is in the gauge. Although there is a crisis, those who stop coming forward will make it happen. Therefore, the wood is straight by the rope, the gold is sharp, the gentleman is knowledgeable, and he saves himself every day, so he knows clearly without fault. Those who cheat horses are not good enough, but cause thousands of miles; A man who pretends to be a boat can't swim, but he can't swim. The life of a gentleman is the same, and the goodness lies in personal leave.
14. A crow is so thirsty that his throat will smoke. Suddenly he was overjoyed. He found a pitcher. He flew to him in desperation and was disappointed. The neck of the bottle is very thin, and the water is only half full. His head can't reach the water what can I do? Unlike other crows who fly away when they are in trouble, they try their luck elsewhere. It thinks around the pitcher; Try while thinking. Finally, it came up with a clever idea: it took a stone and put it in a jar. With more stones, the water surface naturally rises until it reaches the top of the jar, and it is enough to drink. Guess what this fable is trying to prove?
15, Kalinin is an outstanding propagandist of Russian Bolsheviks. Once, he explained the importance of trade unions to a farmer representative in a certain place. Although he made a detailed and rigorous argument, the audience was always at a loss and had no purpose. Someone asked: "which is more precious to the Soviet regime, workers or farmers?" ..... "Kalinin took the opportunity to ask:" So which is more precious to a person, his right foot or his left foot? " The audience was silent for a moment, and suddenly thunderous applause broke out. The farmers' representatives all laughed.
16, resentment is not big, but people are very awesome; You should be careful when transporting a boat and capsizing it.
17, life is bound to be like this, drifting away. There is a saying: teenagers see mountains as mountains and water as water; Looking at mountains in middle age is not mountains, and looking at water is not water; The old man sees mountains or mountains, water or water. This statement is correct. Life is a cycle from simple to complex, and then to calm and simple. What we have to do is to enjoy every taste and feel every realm, and in this process, purify the meaning of life. (2008 Fujian College Entrance Examination Excellent Composition "Three Realms of Life")
18, life is like a trip, a reed to sail. Taking criticism as the wave, the journey will be thrilling; Take criticism as the wind blowing on canvas, and life is full of power. When Bai Gang entered CCTV, he was criticized coldly because his Mandarin was not standard and fluent. However, he took those accusations intentionally or unintentionally as drums to spur his progress, constantly encouraged himself and trained repeatedly, and finally gained a firm foothold in CCTV, which is full of talents.
19 is like seashells on the beach by the sea. After a heart-wrenching tempering, it has become a dazzling pearl. Life is the same, you will experience several hardships and stormy waves, and that rumor is the harsh sand that makes you hold in your mouth. Although painful, it is enough to help you raise your sails, eliminate fallacies and go forward bravely. ("The most casual suggestion helps action")
20. If communication between people is a bridge, then honesty is a solid pier; If money, power and talent are the wealth of life, then honesty is the most dazzling diamond; If success in life is a tower, then honesty is a solid cornerstone under it.
2 1, the moment Zhao Jun walked up to the temple with his head held high, it was doomed that a mandolin flower would bloom brilliantly. It is just an ordinary flower, not a golden eagle or a silver eagle, but its light is enough to eclipse all the gold and silver. (Zhao Jun-think of Roman's flowers. What else can Zhao Jun look like? )
What can a person be like? People-mouse (click on your conscience like a mouse)-blackboard eraser (wipe away the stain of life like a blackboard eraser)-grass (glow with the determination of life in the ordinary)-plum blossom (show off your cool and heroic spirit in the cold)-pine tree (be firm and unyielding under heavy snow)-torch (light up the darkness like a torch)
22. Spring silkworms cocoon themselves, and candles shed tears and set themselves on fire. Although they left value to others, the end point of their dedication was to destroy themselves. On the other hand, roots should support the life of trees. They should constantly absorb nutrients and strengthen themselves while giving. When the saplings grow up, the roots will always become bigger and stronger, and they will always dig deeper and deeper in the ground. This is because they have strengthened their own strength in order to better contribute themselves. I think this form of dedication is more valuable.
People praise the silkworm because it eats leaves and spits out silk. People praised the old cow because it ate grass, milked, took less, gave more, worked hard all its life and died. People love the sun because it selflessly dedicates infinite light and heat to all things in the world. People praise their mothers and teachers, Miss Lei Feng and Jiao, and call the People's Liberation Army the cutest people for only one reason: they are all selfless. Only a dedicated life is a great, happy and happy life.
24. Society is like a person's body, and each of us is like a cell. Only when every cell plays a role can the whole body be healthy and life exist. A person is smaller than society, but his role cannot be ignored. Just like countless nameless little stars gathered into a vast and splendid starry sky, how dim the night sky would be without them. Each of us is an unknown little star in society. If everyone has the idea that their personal strength is too small to contribute light and heat, can our great motherland still stand in the east of the world?
25. "The eagle strikes the sky, the fish jumps shallowly, and ten thousand kinds of frost fight for freedom", which vividly explains the relativity of freedom. Eagles soar in the sky and fish swim in the water. How free they are. On the other hand, if you put eagles in water and fish in the sky, they will not only be free, but also impossible to survive. Their freedom is limited by the space environment. Kites can only fly freely in the air under the constraint of long lines. If it complains about the limitation of the long line and tears it blindly, then the broken kite will not be free, but will fall into a quagmire and never fly again. As big as a planet, once out of their orbit, it will soon become a meteor, annihilated in the collision with other stars and the friction of the atmosphere. The freedom of everything must follow certain laws, which are the laws of nature. The same is true of human beings. The more developed the society, the higher the production level. The more advanced the technology, the freer people will be. But at the same time, the more scientific the management, the stricter the discipline and regulations. When there is no road, people can walk everywhere, but it is difficult to walk. Building roads and bridges, driving and riding horses, walking is much more free, but at this time, laws to maintain traffic safety appeared. "Stop at the red light and go at the green light" and "All pedestrians and horses should keep to the right", otherwise they will be punished. With sailboats, people are much freer at sea. But sailing must follow a certain route, otherwise it will hit the rocks and sink into the sea. Similarly, only when the train runs along the track in a measured way can it roar and run freely. Therefore, absolute freedom does not exist. Only by strengthening the concept of discipline, forming a conscious habit of obeying the law, and respecting the interests of the state, society and collective, as well as the freedom and rights of others, can you have the greatest freedom.
26. Adversity can overwhelm the weak and make the strong. Fighting against difficulties in adversity can temper the will, strengthen perseverance, improve intelligence and cultivate lofty moral character. The reason why pine stands proudly under the attack of storm is because it grows in the struggle with storm and lightning; The reason why the flowers in the greenhouse fall when they encounter wind and frost is because they have not been tested by wind, frost, rain and snow. The front is sharpened, and adversity makes the strong. No grinding is unfavorable, no refining is impure, and no hammer is not strong. This road was not formed naturally, but was opened by pioneers. Steel is not directly dug out of the ground, but smelted in a raging fire; Experienced helmsman broke out in the struggle with strong winds and waves and rapids and reefs; The steel bars and iron bones of heroic soldiers are all tempered in a difficult environment.
Adversity is like an alchemist, and difficulty is like a grindstone. Adversity can make strong people, because it forces people to struggle and exercise; Seek and improve. If we want to overcome difficulties, dangers and disasters, improve our situation and survive, we must become strong, or we will be swallowed up by adversity. The strong, only the strong, can always be invincible in adversity, and can rush out of adversity and transform it.
28. The valley is surrounded by peaks, but its embrace is extremely deep and open, which accommodates the running water of high mountains and streams, deposits thick sediment, and breeds dense trees, boundless wheat fields, birds and flowers, and various weather of nature. This is the beauty of virtual valley. "full of losses, modest benefits." People should also be open-minded. Only when people have modest qualities can they find their own shortcomings; Seeing the strengths of others, inspiring strong self-motivation, learning from each other's strengths, endless pursuit of progress, endless pursuit of knowledge, among many outstanding figures in ancient and modern China and abroad, which one does not have the virtue of modesty?
29. Stress is the whetstone of will, the driving force of progress and the catalyst of success. It is better to have more stress in life. As the saying goes, "a well without pressure is not filled with oil, and a person without pressure floats leisurely." As long as you carry the heavy burden on your shoulders, you will walk faster and more steadily, step by step, and so will personnel.
30. A river can only surge if it constantly absorbs the running water from nearby streams. Isn't that what people do? As the saying goes, no one is perfect. Then if people want to fill their vacancies, develop themselves and improve themselves, they must be good at adopting other people's opinions. In good times, listening well can keep you calm; In adversity, listening can give you the courage to go forward. Good listening is a Hongqiao, which will shorten the distance between heart and heart; Good listening is a window, which will let you discover new horizons.
3 1, a tree, only the roots are deeply rooted in the soil, the tree can stand, the wind can't blow down, the snow can't collapse, and the drought can't die; Roots, only developed and widely distributed, can trees have enough water and nutrients, and can develop into leafy and colorful. So deeply rooted and widely spread, it is the foundation of towering trees and the source of life. Therefore, I thought of the importance of consolidating my career foundation.
32. "Manager Pei, in fact, if Tang Jun is allowed to occupy Lingwu County, they will migrate from Longyou and Guannan. Wouldn't it be more rewarding to occupy Lingwu County again? " The questioner is Qin Huaiyu sitting behind Pei Renji. Pei smiled: "Lingwu county has enough irrigation water and enough heat, and the land is fertile and vast." It has always been our granary. If it is taken away by Tang Jun, it will have a great impact on our grain. More importantly, we must cooperate with His Royal Highness the King of Chu's comprehensive counterattack strategy to combat the arrogance of the Tang Dynasty. " Seeing Qin Huaiyu's thoughtful look, Pei Renji knew that he was not satisfied with his answer and smiled: "It's like fighting with someone. There are many people watching. Including many people who depend on your protection, at first you were knocked down, but you immediately had the ability to fight back. Do you say wait a few days for revenge, or hit each other right away? "
Consolidation training
1. Write a wonderful passage with the theme of "true feelings" and using metaphors. [Reference]: What sews into a thousand layers of wanderers is affection, what the Yellow Crane Tower can't reach is friendship, and what the solitary grave can't bury is love. Dare to ask what is love in the world? Love is the soul of life and the most important chapter of life. Without affection, it is like a cold winter without an end date; Without friendship, it is like a drifting boat without shelter; Without love, it is like Leng Yue without warmth and light in the dark.
2. Write a wonderful passage with the theme of "life" and using metaphors. [Reference]: Life is picturesque, with heavy ink splashing and light brushwork; Life is like a song, which includes singing softly and singing loudly. You can't see the life of Li Taibai and Du Gongbu, and the great life is created with thick ink; Petofi and Shelley's life, light pen and light pen describe the true meaning of life. Have you noticed that Tao Yuanming whispered, "Picking chrysanthemums under the east fence, leisurely seeing Nanshan", and Tan Sitong strode, "I laughed at the sky from the horizontal knife, leaving me with courage to two Kunlun mountains". Life is a mountain. We can't predict its length, but we can pursue its height. Life is a road, which is made of small pieces of sand and stones, not covered with gold, silver and silk, and shows the perfection of life unremarkably. Life is a flat boat, sailing in the vast sea, only after experiencing the baptism of wind and rain, will we usher in the rising sun on the sea tomorrow.
3. Write a wonderful passage with the theme of "faith" and metaphor. [Reference]: Faith is Kuafu's ceaseless step day after day, faith is an immortal lighthouse on the other side when sailing in the rain, and faith is the ceaseless gesture of an eagle ravaged by strong winds. With faith, a small match can light up the sky in my heart; With faith, a small green leaf can decorate the whole spring; With faith, a boat can disturb an ocean.
4. Write a wonderful passage with the image "Moon" as the topic. [Reference]: Split the red dust and waves, and a curtain is beautiful. A clear and fair summary of everything. She is a peerless woman in the cold fragrance, a blow to secular filth. She is like a chaste virgin, sending the dew of life to a desperate soul. She is the sword in Li Bai's poems, and the purple light shines in the Tang Dynasty. It's the peach blossom in Chang 'an, enchanting. She is also the chrysanthemum of Tao Qian, burning half the sky at midnight in the Eastern Jin Dynasty. It is a touch of new green in desolation, a plum blossom with a hundred flowers, a flying horse, a guzheng of the frustrated, a clear stream of the uninhibited, a spirit of the incorruptible, a clear spring and a sad song. ...
5. Choose a historical (literary) figure as a topic and write a wonderful fragment by metaphor. [Reference]: Is it a solitary bamboo in the rustling cool wind? Is that the pot of sake on the cliff? Or the white clouds wandering in the horizon under the bleak sunset? Ji Kang, why did he live a chic and indifferent life but leave a pot of heavy turbid wine and a glass of unruly loneliness to future generations? -Zhu's "Why Fear the World of mortals"
6. Take "personality" as the topic, demonstrate with metaphor, and write a fragment [reference]: I like a person with personality. In the world of mortals, they Li Zhuo smiled at the sadness, took their own life as a picture scroll, took their own persistence as their creativity, and then outlined an immortal life landscape with their independent personality.