2. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style. what do you reckon ?
4. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and attractive. Work hard and create more glory!
Your article is like a slow flowing stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
6. It is wise for a teenager who is not deeply involved in the world to enter a complex society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is very casual, as if leading readers to stroll on the Yuan Ye of the mind. The disadvantage is that the discussion is slightly angular. You know, incisive arguments can make the finishing point and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will be better!
7. The writing of this article is beautiful and fresh, full of certain philosophy. The article writes that I walked by the sea, and the sea not only gave me beautiful enjoyment, but also caused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea has given me a swimming space, and I have injected life into the sea, making it a person with noble personality. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of beauty and is thought-provoking.
8. School life seems dull except after class, but this paper is good at finding the extraordinary from the ordinary, and it is written with relish: in the tense morning, the noon of the battle, and the tired night, every paragraph chooses a lens with great life interest. The fresh and lively language vividly shows the students' positive mental outlook.
9. This article is highly ideological and artistic, which makes people linger after reading it. Ingenious conception, using comparative techniques to deepen the theme; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
10, the introduction of father in the article is comprehensive: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!
1 1, which can link snow with the pursuit of life. Starting from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who says boiled water is not the best drink?
12, the quotation of several common sayings in the full text is just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
13, your article is very creative, and your ideas are completed in the form of mathematical proof questions. The full text is very literary!
14, as a casual feeling, your article is smart and full of wishes. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
15, you are an independent student, and you don't lack real knowledge. I quite agree with you, but it would be even more icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact.
16, this article has chosen a brand-new angle, and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world through various things, there are always some laws that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of dripping water to see the world.
17, beautiful handwriting, clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling. This teacher should really learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
18, writing is like a person, and your article is as simple and open-minded as your person. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
19, Wenneng Yansheng, I think the article is a reflection of your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
20. Wen Neng Yi Qing. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.
2 1, it can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.
22. It's really like writing. It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.
23. After reading your article, it seems that a stream flows in front of my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
24. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are a good young man who makes progress. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.
25. Reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh conception of your article. The so-called mountaineering has feelings, and watching the sea has feelings. You are a conscientious person in life, and you have touched others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.
26. Exquisite and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom. Steady and down-to-earth, is the direction of your writing efforts in the future.
27. Careful conception and profound thinking show that you grew up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to write in the future. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.
28. Although you don't like writing very much, you keep writing like a snail at every step, and never stop writing. Your spirit is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break into your own world.
Although you can live happily in your own world, the development of society has been globalized, so you should devote yourself to collective life with a brand-new attitude to adapt to the development of society.
30. There are always many bizarre stories in the life of teenagers; There are always many magical dreams in the hearts of teenagers. This essay, like a boat full of dreams, is full of the author's innocence, dreams, yearning and just beginning to mature, and sails far away.
3 1, caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. From the article Accident, we can see that in your heart, there are not only childlike innocence, books and schools, but also endless concern for social worries. The psychological description of this article is outstanding, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.
32. The language is decent and romantic, and the context is smooth, showing the image of a bookworm and the affection between me and my bosom friend, which is smart and elegant.
We seem to have heard a lot about the fragility of life in peacetime, and it can disappear in an instant. If you walk in the fields and forests, step on fallen leaves and look up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life, and life needs mutual care.
34. This article is short and pithy. The language is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and makes people feel kind to read. Son, this semester, the teacher saw that your homework was fast and your composition was much richer. All this is the result of your efforts, and the teacher is happy for you from the bottom of his heart. Because I see passion in you, how comforting it is! Come on, kid!
35. The article melts into the scenery, painting the scenery while expressing feelings, and the full text of the sentence adds literary interest to the article. However, the length of your article needs to be strengthened, and being too concise is also a small shortcoming. I hope you will continue to work hard and walk up a flight of stairs. Come on!
Through hard work, your composition has improved and your narrative has become clearer this semester. Your composition shows your love for life. Keep this enthusiasm and you will be able to read more excellent compositions in the future. The teacher will make greater progress if he misses your writing.
37. Now, children, people have a sense of environmental protection. What you said won't happen again. Let's look forward to this wonderful thing together! The teacher also wants to praise you. You write more carefully now. Teacher is happy for you! I just want you to stick to it. Besides, you have too many typos. I hope you will be patient and make greater progress!
38. The article is well-founded and convincing, highlighting the personality of the characters, natural context, clear organization, coordination from beginning to end, and finally pointing to the theme and highlighting the central idea.
39. Your writing is as simple and sincere as your personality. The words are accurate, the language is plain and natural, and the text level is clear. It can also be seen from the article that you are a child who knows love and has filial piety. You touched others with your true feelings, which is the greatest success of your composition! I hope you can feel and appreciate life with your heart and make continuous progress in your future study!
40. This article is beautifully written, refreshing and full of philosophy. It says I'm walking by the sea. The sea not only gave me beautiful enjoyment, but also aroused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea gave me a space to roam, and I devoted myself to the sea, making it a noble person. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of pleasure and makes people think deeply.
4 1. According to the sequence of events, the article describes the events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it looks very happy from beginning to end.
42. The article is full of respect and gratitude from beginning to end, which is touching. This is the shocking power of this article.
43. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.
44. The author is clever in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
45. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and well written.
46. The full text is fluent in language and free and easy in writing, which is a relatively successful work.
47. The full text is hearty, full of joy and expectation, sincere and touching.
48. The article is realistic, three-dimensional, readable and interesting. Fairy tales reflect the dark side of reality with keen social insight, and with vivid language, they can be said to be profound.
49. This paper holds that the correct use of clues and articles is coherent, smooth and natural, and at the same time, through the comparison of specific cases. Attacked the vivid and rich language of the article and its readability.
50. Be able to have a reasonable imagination, embody a meaningful philosophy, be fluent and concise, and give full play to your imagination. It is a good article, elegant and beautiful, fluent and coherent, especially with humorous character language. The use of some subtle words invisibly adds a lot of interest to the article.
Composition evaluation 2 1. The description of behavior is accurate and accurate. These verbs vividly highlight the psychological state of the characters and point out their personality characteristics.
2. The language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent.
3, the language is not fluent enough, the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling. This statement is wordy, but it doesn't convey the meaning. Just verbose.
4, the language is too brief, like an outline narrative, but failed to get an outline, the meaning is incomplete, and the narrative is boring, dry and lifeless. At the beginning of the composition:
5. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and it is very artistic to set off the emotions of the characters through environmental description. The beginning is concise and to the point
6. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning. The impression that readers can leave on the characters as soon as they meet.
7. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
8. The language of the article is vivid and readable. The beginning is extraordinary, attracting readers from the beginning, touching people's hearts and feeling the truth.
9. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text. The novel selection of materials in this article aroused readers' desire to read.
10, full of passion, description of key points, appropriate details and specific content. The metaphor is apt and the words are vivid.
1 1, the language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read. Tell us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is unforgettable.
12, the narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent.
13, for the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene and the scene blends naturally.
14. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the characters' ideological quality is set off.
15, the article is lyrical while narrating.
16, make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor and personification.
17, the little author observes carefully and narrates orderly.
18, the use of some subtle words adds a lot of interest to the article.
19, the article is elegant and fluent, especially the characters' language is humorous.