Example 1 Affection is a kind of motivation, which can make you walk into the realm of "standing alone on a tall building and looking at the horizon"; Can let you have the persistence of "the belt is getting wider and wider, never regret it, haggard for Iraq"; Can let you taste the happiness of "reporting three spring scenery" (At the end of the article, "Strength comes from family", an excellent composition for the 2007 Beijing senior high school entrance examination)
The author interprets the connotation of kinship with poetic language, reveals the power of kinship, and shows the charm of kinship with emotion. Zhang Xianzhi had a clear purpose.
No matter what difficulties you will encounter in life, don't give up and be a strong man in life! -That's my promise. (At the end of the senior high school entrance examination composition "This is my promise")
At the end of the article, the author clearly expressed the content of "my promise", which not only closely followed the title of the article, but also revealed the main idea of the article. It can be said that the song is elegant and smart. Moreover, this passionate and hit the floor writing shows the young author's strong determination, heroism, loveliness and respect.
Tip 2: hide without revealing
1 Mother sat at the table and began to eat the bowl of noodles I cooked for her. I sat watching her, too. Suddenly, I saw two crystal tears fall in the bowl. I asked, "Mom, what's wrong with you?" Mother looked up and cried. (At the end of the senior high school entrance examination composition "Mom's Birthday")
At the end of the article, the description is obscure, revealing the mother's comfort between the lines. Because the child is sensible and "grown up", she cried happily.
In the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Nantong City, Jiangsu Province, the author described the difficult-to-capture frog sound from the perspectives of "solo singing", "scattered singing" and "chorus singing", which made it poetic and personalized. And in the "singing together", discussion, lyricism and perception of life are coordinated with each other, and the text aims to "sing a hymn of life".
The most enjoyable thing is the end of the article: "Listen, listen. Appreciate and enjoy. " It uses homophonic puns to express the characteristics of "listening" in the article-the dialogue and communication between man and nature. This concise and thought-provoking ending introduces readers into an infinite space for them to feel and daydream!
Tip 3: Make the finishing touch.
Spring is like a newborn doll. It's new from head to toe and still growing.
Spring is like a little girl, dressed up and walking with a smile.
Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms and legs, leading us forward. (At the end of "Spring")
The author highlights the three characteristics of spring through metaphor: novelty, beauty and strength, summarizes the full text from a brand-new angle, and reveals the theme of the article with incisive language.
Example 2 Marx's life is a glorious life and a life of hard study. His spirit of diligent study is always worth learning. (At the end of the article "Marx's studious spirit")
Finally, it makes a general and high-level summary of Marx's life and points out the theme.
My friend, don't forget that being a man should start with learning to say "no" and bravely say "no" to failure, frustration, insult and power. (The composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Qingdao, Shandong Province in 2007, "Being a man starts with learning to say" No ")
The conclusion part not only summarizes the full text, but also points out the main idea of the article.
Tip 4: Lyric argument
I looked at this group of energetic Hani girls and the white pear blossoms, and I couldn't help thinking of a poem: "Pear blossoms everywhere on the post road". (At the end of the article, "Pear Blossom in Post Road")
The ending expresses the author's feelings, and the spirit of Lei Feng has become everyone's conscious action.
Dear friends, when you get on the first tram in the morning and run to the factory, when you … they are really our loveliest people! ("Who is the cutest person" at the end of the article)
It not only fully expresses the author's love and praise for volunteer soldiers, but also has a strong infectious effect on readers.
Example 3 Yes! A man should start by learning to give up. Giving up is an eternal poem in my heart; Giving up is a colorful song in my life; Give up and let the natural barrier in your heart become a thoroughfare. (In 2007, the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Qingdao, Shandong Province, "Being a man begins with learning to give up")
The author expressed his profound understanding and feelings about "giving up" in poetic language.
Tip 5: Warning and eye-catching method
Animals are our friends, but many people regard them as food. Although they had a good time, they ate China's harmonious natural environment and ecological balance! Thought of here, I am at a loss: Are we eating China? We are eating China! (In 2007, Yangzhou City, Jiangsu Province, took the senior high school entrance examination composition "Eat in China? Eat China! 》)
The young author is far-sighted and tells the world: You are eating China! What a warning language this is.
However, it's too late, too late ... (when there is the last monkey left on the earth)
Through the self-report of the last monkey on the earth, the author boldly and truly fantasized about how human beings stepped onto the road of extinction step by step. The shocking consequences of every word are fatalistic, and they all have shocking and shocking power.
Tip 6: Question and question method
Example 1 A man's ambition is not as good as a humble monk in Shu. ("For learning" at the end of the article)
Ending with a question mark, simple words contain strong feelings, which are thought-provoking and impressive.
Example 2 "Can't a wise man see the truth from such a beginning and such an end?" (At the end of the financier)
The use of rhetorical questions makes the ending not only profound and powerful, but also intriguing.
There is an excellent composition "Simple but Not Simple" in the senior high school entrance examination in Example 3. After enumerating various phenomena of "simplicity and non-simplicity" and analyzing the dialectical relationship between "simplicity and non-simplicity", at the end of the article, the author wrote:
Each of us has both simplicity and non-simplicity. The question is what kind of simplicity and non-simplicity we should pursue. What do you say, my friend?
The author skillfully put forward the serious proposition of "what kind of simplicity and non-simplicity to pursue", which aroused readers' thinking and inspired people to make correct choices and pursue meaningful life. Although the author didn't say it clearly, it was thought-provoking and alarming.
Tip 7: add Postscript methods
Example 1 Postscript: Only when you walk on the road with introspection can you find another window left by God after closing the door. (In 2007, the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Hebei Province was "On the Road of Reflection")
The little author uses this postscript to make the article novel, eye-catching and thought-provoking.
Example 2 is the postscript of the senior high school entrance examination composition "Mr. Lu Xun, There is Only One": Teacher Lu is waiting for us to walk out of the flashy sea, slowly step into his heart and communicate with him in the depths of his soul!
In the main part of the article, the author shows the extraordinary value of Lu Xun and his works, shows his indignation at the social neglect of Lu Xun, and then calls on us to get close to and read Lu Xun and his works. In the postscript, we are called upon to communicate with Mr. Lu Xun from another angle, so that the article can further tap the readers' hearts and approach Lu Xun. It can be said that this postscript is the finishing touch, which complements the main part of the article and complements each other.
Tip 8: unexpected methods
This ending is not to deal with the ending of the characters according to the usual logic of the story, but to arrange the ultimate fate of the characters with unexpected endings, and it comes to an abrupt end at this time, which makes people stunned and can't help but sigh the author's whimsy and absurdity of life. As we all know, the ending of The Gift of the Maggie is very unexpected, which greatly enhances the artistic appeal of the novel, and is called the O'Henry ending.
Tip 9: Head-to-tail echo method
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[First] It is said that the ship of life is inseparable from the ideal sail. It is said that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
[End] In the flower season, I hope to always remember the good motto of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail, and the ideal of life is for the ideal life.
Skill 10: scene contrast method
For example, at the end of the composition "Reading in the Rain", the wind stopped, the rainstorm ended and the sun smiled again. The glass separated by two generations has also been melted by the setting sun after the rain. The sun fades away in the distance and disappears into a sunset glow. The two are integrated and there is no distance.
Skill 1 1: quote a poem.
For example, at the end of the composition "Life makes me know how to give up", the perfect score in the senior high school entrance examination is: "The wild fragrance is rich, the beautiful wood is shady, the wind and frost are noble and clean, and the truth comes out". Since 15, life has taught me to give up! For my ideal, for more people to learn, I must give up!
Technology 12: a way to look into the future
That is, after describing the present situation, the end looks forward to the future, inspiring people to forge ahead. Such an ending should stick to the theme, take care of the beginning, and connect the focus and main body of the article, which can not only arouse readers' aftertaste of the full text, deepen their impression of the central idea of the article, but also inspire and inspire readers.
When writing, it should be noted that if the article points out the center at the beginning, it will generally adopt the method of looking forward to the future at the end. At the same time, the content of the outlook must be related to the central idea of the article, and it is forbidden to copy it mechanically.
Technology 13: Dislocation of Truth and Missing
Whenever I am tired at night and want to be lazy, I catch a glimpse of his black and thin face lying on my back under the light, as if to say something cadence, which suddenly makes my conscience discover and increases my courage, so I light a cigarette and continue to write something that deeply hurts Mr. and others. ("Mr. Fujino" at the end of the article)
In this paper, illusion is used to dislocate the reality and abstract the real feelings, so as to improve the style of the work, which is the purpose of using the dislocation method of reality and reality.
You can also use dreams to misplace reality, for example, at the end of litchi honey, "I had a strange dream that I became a little bee." By writing dreams, the moral of the article is pushed to a higher level, the theme is deepened and the artistic conception is sublimated.
Skill 14: space expansion method
Passing by happiness makes me feel the value of life; Passing by happiness makes me feel that my life is full; Passing by happiness makes me feel happy. My friend, please slow down your pace, open your eyes and open your mind. ...
This is the end of the essay "Passing Happiness", the perfect score of the senior high school entrance examination. It uses lyric blank to expand the meaning of the text, which makes people memorable. Blank expansion method is to deliberately leave a certain blank at the end of the composition, so that readers can play their imagination and open their minds in the atmosphere of unfinished business. In addition to lyrical blank space, you can also set blank space for doubtful points, such as "I in the Haha Mirror", the perfect score in the senior high school entrance examination:
Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold?
At the end of a question, the lingering sound inspires readers to think and deepen the connotation of the article.
Skill 15: the reappearance of situational method.
In the gloom, I spread out a green beach by the sea, and a golden full moon hung in the dark blue sky. I thought: Hope is nothing, nothing. It's like a road on the ground; In fact, there is no road on the ground. If there are more people walking, it will become a road. ("Hometown" at the end of the article)
The reappearance of the beautiful scene at the end is not only a concern for the previous article, but also an emphasis on the theme of the work, expressing Lu Xun's confidence in walking out of the road of hope.
Can also be used to reproduce typical images, such as the end of "The Back":
I read here, and in the crystal tears, I saw the back of that fat, blue cotton robe and black mandarin jacket. Alas! I don't know when I can see him again.
It is really touching to reproduce the back of my father buying oranges, which causes readers to scream strongly.