Close? Keys? Words: 550 words in the sixth grade of Xiaotadou Primary School
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This article applies to: the sixth grade of primary school.
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This composition is about 550 words in grade six of primary school. The title is Little Tadpole. Welcome to contribute enthusiastically. My mother caught some tadpoles for me from the river. I'm so happy!
When I got home, I put them in the fish tank. They swim in different places and seem to like this spacious place!
Their bodies are brown, with small spots, very cute!
I always have a look at them after breakfast every day. They're still sleeping!
One day, I found that a little tadpole's front legs and hind legs have grown out and its tail has become shorter, like a real frog!
But in the afternoon, I found it dead. I found it lying on its back, motionless. I'm sad, but I don't know why it died. At night, I found a tadpole with its mouth open. The next morning, I found that it had only bones left, and the rest were eaten by them. Is this their way of funeral? I put a leaf on the water. It is possible that frogs sometimes jump on lotus leaves, but unfortunately the little frog has not grown up yet. If there is any new news, I will definitely share it with you!
I am also looking forward to the frog sonata in the fish tank!
Teacher's comment: From the article, we can see that the little author is full of affection for tadpoles. This paper truly shows the characteristics of tadpoles, and the introduction of the death of tadpoles further shows that the author's observation of tadpoles is meticulous and comprehensive. The article has clear thinking, fluent language expression and appropriate paragraph arrangement. "I'm also looking forward to the frog sonata in the fish tank!
"This sentence expresses a vivid image. I hope the little author will continue to write and practice more and write better articles!
But I found it dead in the afternoon, and I found it hanging upside down. In this case, the expression is more accurate. "It is possible that frogs sometimes jump on lotus leaves", and delete "You". (Xue Le China: Teacher Chen Ting) 2009-6- 14 20:26:00