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Comic story writing composition
1. I have written a model essay for reading comics, and the teacher praised me for writing well! The inspiration from a cartoon.

I slowly opened the Chinese book and was immediately attracted by a cartoon in the book. The main content of this cartoon is: a lumberjack dressed in dark black, waving a sharp axe and holding a cigarette in his mouth, cut at the tree without hesitation, and the tall and straight tree fell down. But instead of feeling sorry, the lumberjack smiled, as if he was facing piles of money instead of trees. Then, his speed accelerated again, and one big tree after another fell down. His heart is as black as his clothes. At this time, a woodpecker bravely flew to the woodcutter's shoulder and pecked the woodcutter's head. "There must be insects in this wood." The woodpecker's voice echoed in the Woods.

Yes, there are bugs in people's brains. These worms lurk in people's minds. These bugs make human beings more selfish. They cut down all the trees that provide oxygen for our survival. If this continues, the consequences will be unimaginable. According to the survey, the global forest has been reduced by half, which is mainly caused by human activities. Now, the global forest area has dropped from 3.96 billion hectares in 1990 to 3.8 billion hectares in 2000. Nearly10 million hectares of forests disappear every year in the world. Due to the rapid population growth and people's unrestricted farming and grazing, forests, grasslands and even green vegetation have been destroyed. If there were no forests in the world, life on land would be reduced by 90% and 2.5 million species would be extinct. When all the forests disappear, it will be too late for human beings to regret.

Therefore, we must take action to protect trees. For ourselves and future generations, we should cherish natural resources and make life green.

2. Comic composition 400 words civilization-only one step away. I read a thought-provoking cartoon and liked it very much, because it let me know how far civilization is from us.

This cartoon has only four squares, which are roughly as follows; After school, Xiao Ming and Xiao Dou, freshmen, are on their way home. When passing by the trash can, the careful adzuki bean found that the trash can was surrounded by peel debris, which was very unsanitary. Adzuki bean couldn't help but hold his nose and say to Xiaoming, "This is really dirty! I don't know who is so wicked, just one step away, and I'm too lazy to leave. " After that, he asked Xiao Ming to help collect garbage.

Xiao Ming shook his head mysteriously and said, "I have a good idea, too." Please clean it up first! " "After the division of labor was completed, Abortion soon began to work. I saw that she put the garbage together first, and then shoveled it into the trash can bit by bit with cardboard. Soon, adzuki bean put all the rubbish into the trash can, but at this time, Yao Ming was not idle. When he finished speaking, he posted it on the trash can, only to see that it read; Civilization-only one step away.

After reading this little cartoon, I not only have problems; Is Wen Mingzhen only one step away from us? Indeed, in graffiti, garbage is only one step away from being thrown into the trash can. Is it civilized to throw garbage into the trash can? I think so, too. Not only that, it is also civilized to cross the road and obey the traffic laws.

Civilization is actually close to us. Civilization is just a simple question of right and wrong.

Everyone knows that civilization is very important, but it is difficult to practice. There is a saying in the cartoon-civilization is only one step away.

But this step is difficult to take, because laziness, lying and so on often make it impossible for us to cross that step, but these are human nature, if you can engrave these bad habits. This is civilization. Comics are a good example. Some people don't take that step in order to save trouble, and throw the garbage outside the trash can.

Usually Wen Mingzhen is only one step away from us. Why don't we take that step seriously and reach the other side of civilization? This is a thought-provoking question. I think we should really think about it and take the last step ... Sun Wenwen, Class 6 (2) of zhang wan Primary School in Lianyungang, Jiangsu Province, "Only a mother is good in the world ..." This song that everyone can sing appeared on TV. At this time, Zhang San, the father who sat at the desk for an hour, excitedly pointed to the TV screen and said, "Look, I'm celebrating my mother's 70th birthday. Dizziness. Why did Zhang San order a song for his mother? There is also a reason for this. Speaking of it, that Zhang San is an unfilial son, and he eats well and dresses well at home. Only the 70-year-old old mother ate inferior tea and wore an old cotton-padded jacket from the 1960s, which didn't keep out the wind at all. Zhang San is unwilling to make new clothes for his mother. And their family wears leopard coats and high-grade leather shoes. Zhang San was called "dirty" by others 3. Clothes, shoes, socks, etc. Then their home has changed and grandma has to wash it alone, even without patting her hands. After all, old people are old, and sometimes big clothes can't be washed clean. When he was a child, his mother scolded his grandmother for her eighteen ancestors, and her grandmother didn't talk back. When he meets his parents, he often expresses his dissatisfaction with his grandmother a long time ago, but when others are young, her grandmother will continue to work hard. When I got home, I vented my dissatisfaction on my grandmother. I roared, "It's all your fault, old woman. I lost money. Go and get a drink, I'm dying of thirst. " Grandma moved the three-inch golden lotus from her shelter-a small warehouse, went to the closet with trepidation to get a glass of juice and walked to the living room. Because of overwork, I got sick and coughed when I walked. "Ahem. The mother in the back room shouted. She's a minor illness. She's not faking it. She asked her grandmother to wash clothes. Grandma went to the back room. In this family, grandma seems to have lost her respect and replaced it with "old deathless". Because they abused the elderly for a long time, they quickly aroused the dissatisfaction of their neighbors. They all accused him of being "dirty" and said that he had gone too far. Do you have a conscience? It's time for the old man to enjoy his retirement. Grandma's birthday was so dirty that she went to the TV station and ordered a song "Only a mother is good in the world". The "dirty" third wife also took care of it. Don't waste too much. The old woman will be buried soon, so it's okay to wear * * without buying clothes. Let's go back to the scene. Have a cake. This cake is delicious. "But when I was young, my father said," You are so old and greedy. "At this moment, I couldn't bear it any longer, and interjected:" Dad, don't forget that grandma worked hard to raise you, and now it's your turn to raise grandma. This is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. If you are still stubborn, you will treat your grandmother like this and I will treat you like this. " They blushed, ashamed and ashamed. Suddenly, Zhang San seemed to wake up. He went to the kitchen to help grandma to the table and said, "Mom, I'm really sorry. Thanks to the child's reminder, I am not even as good as a child. "My mother also wants to say" yes "kindly, and her grandmother says," Don't blame yourself. I will forgive you. " The family sat around the dining table happily. It is also the most comfortable meal. Since then, my mother has never let my grandmother do this or that, and she has been bossed around. Grandma spent her old age happily. Of course, the "dirty" Sam has become the original Zhang San. [Comment] This is a cartoon composition, and the practice content comes from life. The author uses the method of pushing the past and thinking about the future to combine the content on the TV screen in comics with the things in life. It reflects social problems worth pondering. From the very beginning, the author used a comparative method to describe the clothes, appearance and psychological activities of Grandma Zhang San and Mrs Zhang San, which reflected the characteristics of the characters. The image of such an unfilial son, Zhang San, is vividly on the paper. Then the little author changed his pen. Because Zhang San's words and deeds were excessive, he was condemned by the society. In particular, Zhang San's son taught his parents by analogy, which made them realize their mistakes and changed their attitude towards the elderly.

3. Write an anime story composition in 400 words. My favorite cartoon. I used to like a cartoon called Tom and Jerry.

Tom and Jerry tells the story of a cat and a mouse. They are both friends and enemies. The cat tried to catch the mouse, but the mouse was very clever. Almost every time, it escaped the cat's attack, and it defeated the cat with its own cleverness.

Once, the cat put a piece of cheese on a rope connected to a pine tree to catch a mouse. Who knows that the mouse fished cheese into the hole with a hook and got a bottle of milk.

Because the rope will be tightened as soon as you step on it, and it will bounce back from the pine tree. Moreover, cats like drinking milk very much, so the mouse used this trick to send the cat into its own trap. Another time, the mouse and its son used the hose in the refrigerator to turn a room full of water into an indoor skating rink, but they "brought" the cat back from their dreams.

The cat was plucked by the mouse's son, so it became very angry and chased them on the ice. The ice was so slippery that the nail used by the cat to fix its body was secretly cut by the mouse and fell on all fours.

After watching these clips, I burst into laughter and even laughed until my stomach ached. Through this cartoon, I learned the rare courage of the mouse, but also learned its cleverness.

This cartoon brings me endless happiness and makes me happy every day.

4. Read comics and write 400 words. I read a cartoon in a cartoon: in a big forest, a man was chopping down a tree with a cigarette in his mouth and a sharp axe, and the tree was crying. A woodpecker stopped on the man's shoulder. The woodpecker looked at the man's head and said, "There must be insects in this piece of wood." I wonder if you can understand the meaning of this cartoon. That man does have a "bug" in his mind, but this bug is not another bug. This "worm" refers to the heartworm of the person who destroys the ecological balance. Woodpeckers say that they "have worms in their heads", which is hard to blame. However, in our daily life and in the world, there are countless people with such "worms in their heads", but woodpeckers are few and far between.

Usually, many students' draft papers are thrown into the trash can after only a few strokes. You know, these documents

A tree; The water is quite boiling when you wash your hands. Needless to say, I washed my hands and left without turning off the water. You should know how precious water is in arid areas. Usually throwing garbage on the ground affects both the environment and the appearance. . You know, our planet has been greatly damaged now, but those who "have worms in their heads" never realize that they are destroying the environment for their own interests: deforestation and destruction of vegetation; In order to facilitate the discharge of sewage into rivers, I don't know how many rivers can't be drunk, and our mother river, the Yellow River, has become turbid; Chengdu, once the land of abundance, is no longer beautiful, and the land is marching towards desertification; Air pollution is getting worse and worse, and acid rain is almost everywhere. . Before such a shocking thing happened, human beings didn't seem to wake up, the greedy bugs in people's minds were getting bigger and bigger, and people were already fascinated by desire. Animals have never lived a peaceful life since human footprints were involved. They used to be docile and comfortable Tibetan antelopes. I am exhausted to avoid human pursuit; Whales that once dominated the ocean are on the verge of extinction. . I don't know how many creatures died out under the greedy worms in the human brain, and have since died out in the long river of history. Now we must protect our beautiful earth, because saving the earth means saving the future. The first thing we should do is to kill the greedy bugs in our minds. Students, please light up your inner mirror and say, "Is there any bug in your mind?"

There are 400 words in the composition about cartoons. Thanks to a little girl walking home. She is wearing a purple dress with two croissants, and her skirt is dotted with small yellow flowers. Inadvertently, she found the rubbish discarded by people everywhere in front of the garbage bin on the roadside. The little girl thought, alas, what if a person with bad eyes stepped on it and slipped on the ground? Besides, teachers often teach us to do more good for the society, so I might as well spend some time cleaning up the garbage myself. Thinking about it, I picked up the garbage with my hands and threw it into the trash can. Just then, a man patted her on the shoulder and said, "What are you doing?" The little girl turned her head and saw that it was her classmate Xiao Qiang. The little girl told him what happened. Xiao Qiang thought about it and whispered a few words to the little girl. The little girl nodded knowingly and continued to pick up garbage. After a while, the little girl finally threw the last bit of garbage into the trash can, and Xiao Qiang also posted a piece of paper on the trash can, which read "Civilization-only one step away".

Although this story only comes from a group of seemingly simple cartoons, it has caused me to think.

This group of cartoons condemns those who litter through a very ordinary little thing in life. At the same time, it also reminds people to pay attention to civilization and not to throw garbage on the ground just because they want to take one step less. Remember, the earth we live in is yours, mine and everyone's, and each of us has the obligation to protect and cherish it.

I remember when I was in the fourth grade, I finished lunch and walked out of the school cafeteria. Suddenly, I saw a third-grade student coming to the teaching building with a garbage basket. He looked around, and when the teacher was not looking, he dumped the garbage next to the trash can, only half a step away from it. When I saw this, I went over and said, "You can't take out the garbage!" " The little classmate was taken aback. He turned around quickly and found that I was just a student. He said confidently, "Well, I'm not the only one who litters. What do you care? Mind your own business! " Say that finish, strode away.

I really want to find that classmate to argue with me. He said that he was not the only one who littered, and thought that he was correct and reasonable. But as long as you think about it a little, you will understand that if everyone, like him, thinks that he is not the only one who can throw garbage everywhere, then even the diligent students on duty will not help.

If everyone can have a sense of public morality like the two primary school students in the cartoon, our living environment will be better. When you want to take one step less in order to relax, please remember that you are about to become a "villain" that people often condemn.

6. Reading cartoons and writing compositions Since ancient times, Mother Earth has nurtured countless generations of children with sweet milk. It turned out that she was beautifully decorated by her ancestors. However, now human beings have tortured her black and blue for their own interests. There is only one earth, and the earth is facing a severe environmental crisis. "Save the Earth" has become the strongest voice of people all over the world.

"Beep-beep!" A big truck climbed a misty hill along a winding mountain road and slowly drove to a small village in the mountain nest.

As soon as the bus arrived at the village entrance, it met an unexpected visitor-Bald Li, who was "a minor celebrity" in the whole small mountain village. He begs for a living and is always spurned. At this time, he is preparing to beg from the people in the car! Hearing the sound, the car creaked. The driver looked at the bald Li and said, "Young man, please do me a favor. The reward will not be less." "good!" Hearing that there was money to be made, the bald Li was refreshed and quickly climbed to the position of the co-pilot.

After arriving at the destination, bald Li went straight to the grove. He wore brand-new overalls and a cap and stared at the trees with small eyes like copper coins. 50 yuan, the truck driver promised to cut down trees, which made him very excited and really attractive. As he thought about it, he took out a sharp axe from the toolkit behind him, tried the blade with dignity, and "brushed" it down. The movements are so skillful and powerful. The axe left a mark on the tree. Suddenly, a "sloped" flapping sound broke the silence in the morning, and a woodpecker stopped on the bald Li. The woodpecker stared at the "barren land" above Li's head and made a low cry: "There must be bugs in this forest ..."

This is a story in a cartoon. In life, we often see people who are similar to the bald Li in comics. On the surface, they are beautifully dressed, but their minds are full of "bugs", followed by the most common non-"environmental-damaging" bugs.

Is this just a funny cartoon? No, it is warning us that while human beings are destroying the environment, they are also unconsciously Shanghai themselves. Let's love the earth and care for nature together! Let's join hands and cast a green levee for the earth!

7. I am a woodpecker and live in a lush forest. I am very happy because I have many good partners with me. But one day. .

The sun shone on me through the hole in the tree. It is very warm. I jumped out of bed and stretched myself. Suddenly, I feel so hungry. Yes, my uncles are not sick these days, and I can't find anything to eat. What should I do? I'll try my luck and go out and look for it. I combed my feathers and prepared to take off.

I walked in the Woods for a long time, and none of my uncles on the tree was sick. Looks like I'm hungry. I was about to fly back when I suddenly heard a few "Benedict" voices coming from the front. What's going on here? Is it the same kind of pecking? But why doesn't it sound like it? So I flew over to have a look.

I landed on a tree and looked at it. It turned out that a wood thief was cutting down trees. He waved a sharpened axe and cut it on the waist of the tree. At this time, I vaguely heard uncle in * * *. The past scenes are projected in my mind. A few years ago, a group of wood thieves cut down trees here, which made our birds have no habitat and many young trees lost their parents. . What are we going to do? I'm going to save my uncle. I quickly flew forward and pecked at the elm head of the wood thief with fierce power, saying, "There must be bugs in this wood." It is true that the wood thief has a elm head, because he doesn't want to think about it either. To destroy tree resources is to destroy his own humanity. Without natural resources, which one of them can't survive?

I pecked the wood thief in great pain and tried to escape. Suddenly a group of people came from Lin Nakakoji, with tea on their arms. I know these people are from the Forest Environmental Protection Bureau. At the sight of them, the thief who stole wood turned pale with fear. After a while, I saw them take the hateful wood thief away.

The forest is quiet again.

8. Throughout the ages, reading cartoons and writing essays, Mother Earth has raised countless generations of children and grandchildren with sweet milk. It turned out that she was beautifully decorated by junior students. However, now human beings have tortured her to death for their own interests. There is only one earth for mankind; The earth is facing a serious environmental crisis. "Save the Earth" has become the strongest voice of people all over the world. "DuDu!" A big truck climbed a misty hill along the winding mountain road and slowly drove to a small village in the mountain nest. As soon as I arrived at the village entrance, I met an unexpected guest-Bald Li. Li, a bald man, is "famous" in the whole small mountain village, begging for a living and has been spurned for a long time. At this point, he is preparing to beg from the people in the car! Hearing the sound, the car stopped with a creak. The driver leaned out to look at the bald Li and asked, "Young man, please do me a favor. The reward will not be less ..." "Good!" On hearing the word "money", the bald Li softened and quickly climbed to the position of the co-pilot. After arriving at the destination, bald Li went straight to the grove. He wore brand-new overalls and a cap and stared at the trees with big eyes like copper coins. Touched his pocket, pulled out a cigarette and smoked leisurely. 50 yuan, the truck driver's tree, is very excited about his logging task, which is really attractive. As he thought about it, he took out a sharp axe from the tool kit behind him, tried the blade with dignity, and cut it down. This action is so skillful, powerful and natural and unrestrained. The axe left a dent in the tree and made a low "bang" sound. Listening to this "sweet" voice, bald Li's smile is getting brighter and brighter. Suddenly, a "sloped" flapping sound broke the silence in the morning, and a woodpecker stopped on the bald Li. The woodpecker stared at the barren land above Li Guang's head and uttered a deep call: "There must be bugs in this forest …" This is a cartoon story. After reading this cartoon, I can't calm down for a long time. "There must be bugs in this piece of wood …" caused me to think deeply. Are there really bugs in people's heads? No, this bug is just an ideological bug, a greedy bug, an ignorant bug, a selfish bug ... Money creates greed and obliterates people's conscience of cherishing resources and protecting the environment. The excessive infatuation with wealth has also sprouted the seeds of selfishness. This cartoon reveals the indifference of human beings to protecting the environment on which they live from the perspective of woodpeckers. It also warns people that if we don't pay attention to protecting the natural environment, every harm we do to nature will eventually come to us in another way. In fact, it is not difficult for us to find someone similar to the bald Li in comics. On the surface, they are beautifully dressed, but their minds are full of "bugs", the most common of which is a bug that destroys the environment. In school corridors, playgrounds, paths and gardens, we can often see crumpled paper balls. Some papers didn't even write a word, but they were discarded and trampled by countless feet. An intact notebook, after being torn off, is full of drainage grooves. These are the masterpieces of some students who don't know how to save. After they write a typo, they don't have to erase it, just rewrite it with a pen and just tear up the whole page. After several repetitions, there are naturally several complete books left. Passing through the back garden of the campus, I also found a classmate throwing food bags into the clear lake. There are rubber bands, nets and food bags everywhere on the water. This situation reminds me of the description in the book "Death of the Sea". I seem to see the blood-stained sky, and the bodies of all kinds of fish cover the water in groups ... When I think of all this, a feeling of heartache suddenly comes to my mind. I decided to give them a lesson on environmental protection in the past. Before I could speak, the little students who knew they were wrong dispersed in a hubbub.

Is this just a funny cartoon? No, it is warning us that human beings are unconsciously hurting themselves while destroying the environment. Let's love the earth and care for nature together. Let's join hands to build the earth's green levee.

9. What are the main points of writing a comic composition? 1. Holism: When we get a cartoon, we must first have a general view of the whole cartoon. If there are several cartoons, we must analyze and judge them in order, what is the author's intention to draw this cartoon, and what kind of thoughts and opinions he wants to express. After reading the general style, you must be aware of it, such as praise and criticism. Or express a social phenomenon, or the ugliness of real entertainment characters and so on. These are some problems that need to be clarified when we look at comics in general. 2. Analysis: Next, we will begin to analyze the details of each cartoon picture. When analyzing cartoons, although we look at them one by one (except one cartoon), we should carefully analyze what is the connection before and after cartoons. Are they telling the same story or are they related to different stories? If they are the same story, then they want to tell the comic readers what this means. If they are different stories, what is the connection between them? 3. Find contact: After analyzing the comics, you should start to find some corresponding related stories. For example, things like cartoons that you have experienced, or historical events, then effectively integrate these events into the description of these cartoons. The relevance of cartoons is very important, because when people read articles, they hope to find a place that causes them to sing. Therefore, it is of no practical significance to simply describe the process of animation. Therefore, the best way to find relevance is to find relevance within the range you are familiar with, such as what you have lived and heard. 4. Determine the style: Pay attention to be consistent with the style involved in comics, such as satire, humor, ridicule or praise. And your composition should have a unified style. Generally speaking, most of our cartoon compositions satirize or directly attack a social phenomenon. So generally speaking, students just need to make them sarcastic or humorous. 5. Writing: When writing, we will actually, when quoting, we'd better quote with words that have appeared in a good cartoon. If the cartoon has no beginning, you'd better think of a word that can be heard by the public. If it is the kind of cartoon that is similar to real life, you can start with your own life experience. Next is the description of the cartoon as a whole. In other words, the cartoon you see is a process of writing words with pictures. Introduce the cartoons and let everyone know what the cartoons you see show. Then, it is your feelings and feelings after watching cartoons. At this time, you should add some stories that you have experienced and heard to explain comics more fully and prove that comics are correct in adjusting or praising styles. Have a certain level. 6. Note: Of course, after seeing a cartoon, you can also write down words that are contrary to the contents of the cartoon. After all, different people have different views on the same thing, some are in favor and some are against it. Therefore, it is most important to truly express your thoughts in words. PS: After the style is established, you can write the same style or the opposite style, such as humorous style. You can write very seriously. Satire can also be written as praise. Because sometimes, people use humor to remind a social reality. If you write with a serious attitude, you will be more sincere. Similarly, when satirizing a social phenomenon, it will also have the opposite commendable side. The most taboo of comic composition is to describe comics without any other process infiltration. If it's just a description,