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My brother and sister with good English help me to see if my self-introduction grammar is correct! Urgent! ...
1, I am good at drawing, and many of my paintings have won prizes.

Grammatical error is changed to:

I am good at drawing, and many of my paintings have won prizes.

I hope you like me.

I can be your friend soon.

Can be removed, like replaced by other words, such as:

I hope you will be happy to meet me, and we will become friends soon.

My favorite color is sapphire blue. Before I like singing and painting.

I hope you have a good time in your new school! Come on!