"Ding Ling-",the bell rang for the morning reading class, but the teacher was late. As The monitor on duty, I looked anxiously in the direction where the teacher came.

Suddenly, there was a "giggle" of footsteps in the corridor, followed by a "report!" When I looked back, it turned out to be Zhang Qing, the neighbor of the Chinese teacher. I saw her face flushed and she said breathlessly, "Oh, no, the Chinese teacher-she is ill-can't come to class." I listened to it, and my heart was like a mess. what can I do? Students also talk to each other, and the class is "boiling".

My brain is running fast: "What should I do now that the teacher is away?" ? Today I am The monitor on duty, and I should be in charge of this class. Now ... yes, that's it! "So, I cleared my throat, quickly stepped onto the platform and said loudly," Please be quiet now! " "Everyone stopped talking at once, and 55 pairs of eyes in the class looked at me uniformly. I stood on the platform like a little teacher and directed everyone. "Pink, read it!" "What is the lesson?" "17 lesson." As a result, the students began to read loudly in the morning. Suddenly, the sound of reading in the classroom was loud and clear.

Although the class has settled down temporarily, I am still extremely anxious. Because after the morning class, it is the morning exercise class. Without a teacher to lead the team, I'm afraid the students will be confused. It's almost time, and I'm so anxious that I stamp my feet. Why hasn't the teacher come yet? When the bell rang, I had to bite the bullet and say to everyone, "classmates, the teacher didn't come today." I will lead the morning exercise class. I hope everyone can do this class in an orderly way. " "Yes!" The students answered in unison. In spite of this, I still can't rest assured that something will happen. But my worry is unnecessary-the students are disciplined, the team is neat, and their actions are consistent, even better than when the teacher is around! A stone in my heart finally fell to the ground.

When I brought the team back to the classroom, I found that the teacher was already waiting for us. There was a gratified smile on the teacher's face, and I was happy from the heart.

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The deduction is accurate, and the time range is "when the teacher is away".

(2) Clearly and clearly described that "I" boldly and properly handled two things-morning reading and morning exercises when the teacher was away.

(3) narrative properly, the psychological activities and events of the characters are true and natural.

Determine the quantitative range

Some composition topics specify the number of materials to be selected. When reviewing, you must pay attention to the topic, and you can't choose the topic beyond the scope. Too many materials, not only failed, but made mistakes.

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One thing that happened after the exam

After the mid-term exam, Mr Meng asked me and Li Haixia, the mid-team leader, to correct the math papers in the office. Dig out the paper yourself, the standard answer continues, and the final total score is 98 points. My heart is full of sweetness. But when I think about it, I will revise my own paper, and others will definitely say this and that when they know it. So I asked Li Haixia to take a look at it for me. Li Haixia looked it over and said, "Yes, it's 98 points. It seems that you are the first in your class. It's really not easy! " I said, "I haven't finished approving it yet. Maybe there is a better answer than me! " "But my heart was secretly happy. Well, if it weren't for the first place, how could I be the representative of this math class?

While humming a song, I continued to correct it. Suddenly found a paper with a score of 99. Look at the name, it's Li Shihua, the representative of Chinese class! I really can't believe my eyes-Li Shihua is better at Chinese than me, but not as good as me in math every time. How did you climb on my head this time? I stare big eyes, face the standard answer, check the questions one by one, even a decimal point. But I really can't find a deduction point. I thought to myself: a math class representative, usually the first in the class, failed this Chinese class representative, which is too shameful. What will teachers and classmates think of me in the future? With this in mind, my heart sank. I deducted 2 points from an answer and changed Li Shihua's total score to 97. I thought to myself, just don't let you surpass me!

After doing this, somehow, my heart is always uneasy, my face is feverish, my head is sweating, and my hand holding the pen is shaking. Li Haixia is still absorbed in correcting homework. I leaned down and saw her typing a bright red "X" on a scribbled number. I said, "You are too strict. This number is correct, but it is not clearly written. " I said, opening the paper. It was originally from Li Haixia.

At this time, I felt that my face was burning worse. I didn't dare to look Li Haixia in the eye, for fear that she would find me embarrassed. I quickly turned out Li Shihua's paper and changed my score from 97 to 99. Then I breathed a sigh of relief, and the stone in my heart finally fell to the ground ...

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The title of this composition stipulates to write "one thing" after the exam, so the author only chooses one thing to write.

The story is vivid enough to reflect the author's psychological process from "vanity" to "vanity", and the language expression is true and vivid.

Determine the scope of personnel

Some writing themes are defined for the author. When reviewing the questions, we should determine the personal scope according to the requirements, and make it clear whether to write for ourselves or others. If we use the first person, we must never use the second person or the third person.

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My Deskmate

"Bad luck, bad luck!" At the beginning of the new semester, the class teacher transferred a boy who was not learning well to my side and sat at my desk. I was really angry at that time, because he knew nothing, so I hated him and wanted to stay away from him all the time.

His name is Mao Hongwei, with a round head and a round brain and a silly face. Come to school every morning, and this "pain in the ass" is already in my seat. When he saw me coming, he smiled and said, "Wu Yao, you're here!" However, I am ungrateful and always give him a dirty look. Many times, I threw the waste paper after wiping the ink into his desk. He didn't say anything, but smiled at me and threw the waste paper into the dustbin. So, I pretended that I couldn't see the words written by the teacher on the blackboard, so I stood up and deliberately squeezed into his side. I often push him to the ground and break his ass. But he still smiled casually and got up from the ground.

Last Wednesday, at the end of the third class, a classmate asked me to explain a problem to him. When I finished the topic and walked to my seat, the teacher was already handing out the exercise books. There are two books on our desk, one is good and the other is bad. Mao Hongwei is sitting on the seat. I want to run to grab that good book, but I'm afraid my classmates will laugh at me, so I have to admit that I'm unlucky and think that a pain in the ass like him will definitely grab that good book. But the situation is just the opposite. Mao Hongwei's action surprised me. Without hesitation, he took the "rotten" book with his name written on it and put the intact book on my desk. What an amazing move! His behavior made me feel ashamed and my heart was pounding. You know, this is not a simple action, it contains sincere feelings and embodies a noble quality.

My deskmate, he really impressed me! Compared with him, I look so small. Although he can't achieve ideal results in the examination paper or publish excellent articles in the composition selection, I can see from his behavior that he has a shining heart.

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(1) In the article, "I am me and he is him", the usage of person is accurate and meets the requirements of the text.

② Contrast "I" and "He" to highlight the selfishness of "I" and the preciousness of "He". Very infectious and persuasive.

Determine the scope of the house

Some topics specify the range of service addresses. This requires us to grasp the place where things happen according to the requirements of the topic, and not to take what should happen on the playground out into the wild.

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A song and dance party in the kitchen

One night, I was sleeping in bed. Suddenly, the sound of "Ding Dong Ding Dong" in the kitchen woke me up. I got dressed, quietly came to the kitchen door and opened the door a little. Through the crack of the door, I saw a grand song and dance party, with pots, chopsticks, spoons and bowls. I didn't expect the director to be Mr. Guo, and I didn't expect the table to become the stage of this grand party.

"Now, the party officially begins," said Miss Spoon, the host. "First of all, Miss Chopsticks and Mr. Waner will perform the tango." The couple really danced very well. They held their heads high and danced really well, winning applause from the audience.

Miss Spoon came on stage, made a beautiful appearance and said, "Next, please tell a story to Mr. Cup." Mr. Cup speaks vividly and deserves to be called "the king of stories".

"Next, it is the cooking performance of Mr. Guo and Xiao shovel!" The host said. Pots and shovels are the best cooking brothers and sisters. They cooked braised pork and vegetables for the audience to taste. After tasting the perfect dish, the host said, "Let's break up in the song!" " "

It's already deep at this time, so I should go back to bed. I didn't expect the elves in the kitchen to be so versatile.

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This is an anthropomorphic fairy tale, which is very interesting. It can be seen that "dream" can also be a composition!

(2) The author inspires imagination and delights the soul through fairy tales. Very good!

③ "location" is centralized and reasonable. "Kitchen" is a theater, and "pots and pans" are actors; It is most suitable for these "actors" to act in the kitchen.

Determine the "problem eye"

"Inscription" is the key word in the composition topic, the core of the meaning of the composition topic and the focus of the specific content to be reflected in the composition.

We should grasp the key points in learning and doing things. When applying this principle in composition, we should grasp the key of "solving problems".

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Interesting event

Every Spring Festival, my father gritted his teeth and went to the barber shop to be generous. This year's Spring Festival is coming, and my mother bought a full set of hairdressing appliances in a fit of pique, ready to "stand on her own feet".

Dad came back, and my mother and I echoed each other from afar. I gave him "both hard and soft": from the high price of a haircut outside, we talked about the importance of saving every penny for the family's economic take-off. With a golden tongue, we finally defeated dad. My mom and I pushed him into the chair, and my dad looked up and sighed, "All right, throw caution to the wind!" " "There is quite a heroic spirit of going through fire and water.

In the "click" sound of mom's scissors, dad's hair was cut round and round. At this time, my mother said, "You are behind me. It's out of date. Change your prejudice! " ""all right! " Dad agreed. After a while, my mother said to herself, "Why not change it to' inch board'?" Dad looked helpless and said with a wry smile, "It doesn't matter, it's just a bald gourd ladle! " "

"it's over!" Cried the mother. When I look at dad's head shape, poof! The water I just drank in my mouth sprayed out, and I squatted on the ground and laughed out of breath. Dad's head is a watermelon skin, which is crooked. Dad looked in the mirror and stroked his poor hair like a treasure. He jokingly said, "Now, let me lead the new hairstyle." Mom muttered, "It's just that scissors don't work well. Besides, it's not the same as shearing wool." I stifled my laughter and quickly replied, "Well, business is good, and the first customer is free ..."

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The practice is about a very common thing-mom gives dad a haircut, but it shows the happy atmosphere of a harmonious family.

2 "Fun" is manifested in: Dad's heroic spirit of "going forward", helplessness to bald modeling, and simple and humorous language. These all come from the little author's careful observation of daily life.

From this article, we can understand that as long as we carefully observe and understand, we can extract interesting things from many ordinary things in daily life.

Determine figurative meaning

Metaphor, that is, analogy, is a common rhetorical method. This rhetorical method is helpful to illustrate the problem vividly. Many essay questions we usually see use this rhetorical method. Therefore, it is very important to understand the metaphorical meaning of titles. For example, the title "Unforgettable Scene", in which "scene" should refer to the performance on the stage. But it is metaphorical and can be used to explain a glimpse, a shot, a scene and so on in life. Therefore, before writing a composition, we must first determine its figurative meaning to increase the connotation of the article.

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An unforgettable scene

That was last year. One Sunday noon, my grandmother took me to play in the street. When I came home, we waited at the bus stop on Renmin South Road.

1 of "pa", an uncle spat. There are thick sputum silk hanging on the flower beds on the roadside, which makes everyone feel very uncomfortable. At this moment, an old lady on duty came along. She said, "Young man, you have violated the regulations on the administration of city appearance and environmental sanitation. Please clean up your spit and fine 5 yuan. " Uncle cocked his neck and said, "Who threw up? Did you see me throw up? " Grandma patiently said, "Everyone saw it!" The uncle denied it and quarreled with his grandmother. Suddenly, the noise stopped. I followed everyone's eyes and saw a little boy carefully wiping his sputum with a piece of paper. He is about four or five years old, with a red face, wearing a grass-green military uniform and a toy pistol pinned to his waist. It makes people stunned. After cleaning, the little boy crossed the slow lane and threw the paper into the dustbin. Then he walked up to her and said slowly, "Grandma, I have no money. Can I give you this gun? " Grandma stroked his head and said, "Good boy, you didn't throw up. Why do you want your toy gun? " The little boy said, "My father threw up and I paid for him."

The uncle blushed, quickly took out five yuan from his suit pocket, stuffed it into the grandmother's hand, turned around and pulled the little boy away in a hurry and disappeared into the crowd. ...

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The "scene" reflected by the young author in his composition is a real shot in real life, an irritating and thought-provoking thing that happened on a specific occasion, and he has a very good grasp of the metaphor of the topic.

(2) In this "scene", it reflects a "father-son confrontation" scene-the vulgar father is ashamed, compact and vivid in front of the childlike children, revealing the problems and making this "scene" rich and valuable.

2. Material composition

The above is the examination of the proposition composition, I hope the children can grasp it well. Here is a brief talk about the examination of material composition. There are two main aspects in the examination of material composition. I summarize them in two ways.

1) "inseparable" method

This method requires that the center of practice and the ideological content of the material are inseparable. For example, to rewrite, expand, abbreviate, supplement, continue and imitate a narrative, it is necessary to understand the six elements of time, place, people, events, causes and effects, and the central idea of the material. Only in this way can we write a satisfactory article.

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Expand "swallowing dates"

Original text:

A young man bought a bunch of fruits, including pears and dates, and sat by the roadside to eat them. An old man saw it and said, "Young man, you can't eat more pears. Although this thing is good for teeth, eating too much will hurt the spleen. "

The young man asked, "Where are the dates?"

The old man said, "Jujube is good for the spleen, but unfortunately it hurts your teeth and you can't eat more."

The young man thought for a moment and said, "It's easy. I only chew pears with my teeth, not swallow them. " That jujube? I'll swallow it whole without chewing it with my teeth. "

Zoom in:

This is the season of fruit harvest. In the bustling market, there are red apples, pears in Huang Chengcheng, dark purple grapes, persimmons like lanterns ... The vendors shout loudly. Selling, very lively.

A young man came in from the market. He is wearing a blue robe, with a bun on his head, a oval face, a pair of bright eyes, a high nose and a small mouth under his nose. The young man is walking with a cloth bag in his hand. He picked from left to right and bought two Jin of pears at a pear stall. Looking at the dates in another booth is not bad, I bought a few pounds of dates. After buying it, he sat under the tree by the roadside and ate it with relish.

After a while, he ate a catty of pears and half a jujube. At this time, an old man in his sixties came from a distance, his bronzed face was covered with wrinkles and his eyes were deep in his eyes. He stroked his white beard and asked the young man, "Young man, what do you want to eat?" The young man looked up at him and said with a smile, "Grandpa, I am eating pears and dates." It is delicious. Would you like to have a try? ""Oh, young man, I won't eat. But I want to remind you that you can't eat more pears. Although this thing is good for teeth, eating too much will hurt the spleen! " The old man sincerely advised.

The young man was puzzled and asked, "Pears hurt the spleen. What about dates?"

The old man pondered for a while and said to him, "Jujube doesn't hurt the spleen, but you can't eat more. It hurts your teeth! " "

The young man thought for a moment and said, "It's easy, old man. I can chew pears with my teeth without swallowing or hurting my spleen; Jujube? I can swallow it whole without chewing with my teeth. In this way, the spleen and teeth will not be hurt. "

The old man waved his hand again and again and said, "No, no, that's not how fruit is eaten." There is always a rule in everything. Do as you say, and you will eat something wrong. "

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The original text is less than 200 words, and the expanded text has more than 500 words, which is about three times that of the original text.

According to the original content, the author imagined the environment at that time and their appearance, language and manners, and gave a vivid and concrete description.

The exercises are consistent while highlighting the center of the original text, which can be described as "inseparable".

2) "Line-in" method

This method requires exercises to reflect the requirements of the topic for the composition form everywhere, so that the material composition is "line by line", some require changing the style of raw materials, some require changing the person, some require changing the narrative order, and so on. When reviewing the questions, we should pay attention to every detail of the composition requirements, and we must "follow the trail" and match them all, otherwise it is easy to make digressions.

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Rewrite To Wang Lun

Original poem:

Li Bai was just about to leave when he heard a farewell song from the shore.

Even if the Peach Blossom Pond is deep, it is not as deep as Wang Lun's sending away my love.

Rewrite:

Today, the weather is particularly sunny, white clouds are floating in the blue sky, the sun is high in the sky, and everything looks so beautiful.

Last night, my good friend Wang Lun and I drank and sang and talked late into the night. You know, we have been best friends for many years! But Jingxian county is not the place where I stay for a long time. I am scheduled to say goodbye today. To this end, I have booked a boat the day before, and repeatedly told Wang Lun not to come to see me off, so as not to be sad.

I got on the boat and was about to sail when I suddenly heard rhythmic singing from the shore. Looking back, I saw Wang Lun standing by the Peach Blossom Pond, singing to see me off. Ah, didn't we agree not to let him drive me last night? Wang Lun's friendship for me is really deeper than the water in Taohuatan!

I waved goodbye to Wang Lun in tears. Alas, we are leaving today, and I don't know when we can meet again.

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(1) Practice rewriting the original poem into a complete first-person narrative.

The theme of the rewritten article is consistent with the original poem, which can be described as "exquisite".

③ Enrich the content of the original poem through reasonable imagination and enhance the readability of the article.

One of my favorite photos.

There are many photos at home, but I only like one in particular. That's graduation photo that I took with my classmates and teachers when I attended the summer art training class in kindergarten. I have always kept it well.

There are more than twenty children in our training class, all of whom are very clever, but the teacher likes me very much because I study hard.

The two in the last row of the photo are our teachers. Male surname Luo. At that time, he was still studying in the Fine Arts Department of Southwest Normal University. He taught us to sketch. The woman's surname is Mi, who teaches us crayon drawing.

When I first arrived at the training class, I was poor at drawing, but Miss Mi kept teaching me by hand. Under her patient guidance, my painting has made great progress, and I like painting more. I usually paint whenever I have time. When I was in the big class, my paintings Song of Autumn and Story of Spring were also published in Quxian Daily.

Now whenever I don't want to draw, I always think of this photo and my teacher. I will try my best.

Memories of a photo

Every time I open the photo album and see the photos, I will think of the blue sky like blue pigments, the rolling snow-capped mountains like white carpets, and the scene of me riding a big horse on the grassland.

I remember it was May Day holiday, and my parents took me to the plateau to play. As soon as I got to the plateau, I rushed out of the car and lay on the endless grassland. I looked at the blue sky as if it had been washed by rain, and the white clouds were like boats ready to go, dotted with small flowers. At this time, my mother found me a big white horse, and my father carried me on horseback. My horse took me for a slow walk on the grassland like a gentleman. I smell the flowers from time to time, and touch the mane on my horse from time to time. My heart is intoxicated with nature. It was then that my father took this photo of me.

Although I live in the city now and go out with tall buildings, my heart still likes blue sky, white clouds, green grass and running horses. My heart is with nature.

a photo

The annual school sports meeting is over. Although I didn't participate in it, I got an unexpected harvest-a photo.

This is a photo I took for Chen. The photo is a touching scene: Chen runs desperately in front; The teacher is in hot pursuit; Students are screaming at the side, come on!

I can't help thinking of the scene at that time. Before the competition, the results of our class were not very satisfactory, but the teacher was very worried. If we don't get good grades on the last day, our total score will drop to fourth place. Today is the women's 800-meter final, which is the strength of our class, because our class has "double insurance" (Chen and Hu Xiaoxiao), but Hu Xiaoxiao just ran 100 meters, and the insurance coefficient of 800 meters is not high. The most important thing now is that Chen can't make any mistakes.

The athletes are doing warm-up exercises, and the tactics are arranged nervously next to Mr. Li: first run with them and finally sprint 200 meters. The students next to them also secretly cheered for them.

The starting gun rang and the game began. The athletes chased each other and fought fiercely. It may be that Chen Xiaozhong's own strength is not bad, and he grabbed the first place with them from the beginning. This is what teacher Li desperately shouted: follow them first, follow them first. Chen slowed down at this. Suddenly, an athlete in another class quickened his pace and slowly pulled away from Chen. The situation is very serious. That athlete is already 30 meters ahead. And it is only 200 meters from the finish line.

Just as the students were in a hurry, they heard Miss Li shout: Come on, everyone. Suddenly, there was a loud refueling sound of our class on the playground. Hearing this sound, Chen suddenly shook his feet, quickened his pace and shortened the distance. The students cheered even harder, 20 meters, 10 meters. When he turned the last corner, it was only 5 meters away, and it seemed that he could not catch up. At this time, the students could not help waving their hands. The teacher followed Chen and shouted desperately, "Hold on, chase, hold on, chase". Only Chen gritted his teeth and quickened his pace. Near, near, seeing this scene, I quickly picked up the camera and pressed the shutter, leaving this moment.

In the end, Chen won the championship as he wished, and our class also achieved the third good result in the group. Every time I see this photo, I think: unity is strength.

One of my favorite photos.

There are many photos at home, and my favorite one is the one I took in China Dinosaur Park.

Look! There are several white clouds floating in the blue sky, and there are many small stones with different shapes on the beach. There is also a boat on the beach, and there is a coconut tree behind me, with lush foliage, like a big green umbrella. I'm standing at the stern. I wear a yellow cotton-padded jacket on my upper body, blue jeans with a little pattern on my lower body, and a pair of red sports shoes at my feet. I put my hands behind my back and my feet apart. My eyes narrowed into a line because of the strong sunshine.

Looking at this photo, I can't help but think of the scene when I took the photo. I remember my father and several aunts and I went to the China Dinosaur Park. At that time, when we were playing on the beach, I saw a boat ahead, so I jumped on it. My father took the opportunity to take this photo.

I like this photo very much.

Open my thick photo album and see my favorite photos. This is a photo of me going to Shaoguan to play with water. I was deeply impressed by the beautiful scenery there.

I remember that on New Year's Day this year, my parents took me to travel to the Grand Canyon. Walking into the Grand Canyon Scenic Area, I saw a sparkling water bridge. People waded across the bridge, and I walked barefoot on the water bridge with excitement. At first, I walked carefully and felt the water flowing through my little feet, as if kissing my little feet. I can't help but pick up those little guys. Just then, I heard my mother's voice. In the photo, I am wearing a white hat and skirt, sticking out of small tongue and playing with water happily!

Every time I see this photo, I think of the scenic Grand Canyon, the interesting water bridge and the happy trip.

One of my favorite photos.

I kept a photo of Zhang Zhengui in the photo album. This is a photo I took at the top of Duxiu Mountain. As soon as I saw me in the photo, I clearly saw the scene of climbing Duxiufeng at that time.

It was the winter vacation last year. My father and I took a bus to Guangxi Normal University to climb Duxiufeng. We came to the foot of Duxiu Peak. I looked up and said, "Ah, Du Xiufeng is really tall!" I can't help shouting. Then, my father and I climbed Du Xiufeng. At first, I thought it was easy to climb Duxiufeng. Along the way, we also saw many trees growing in cracks in the stones in Kobanawa. We walked more than one meter.

The children continued to climb the stone mountain road more than one meter wide. Halfway up the hill, I was sweating and my clothes were wet. I saw a gazebo in front of me and said to my father, "Dad, let's have a rest in the gazebo and stop climbing." Dad shook his head and said, "No, you have to finish what you started. You can't give up halfway. You have to finish what you started." After listening to my father's words, I thought: Yes, persistence is victory. So, I took a deep breath, mustered up my strength and continued to climb. The flowers and trees on the roadside make the sound of "sand, sand" under the breeze, as if to encourage me to say, "Come on! Come on! " Finally, my father and I finally climbed to the top of the mountain. I looked out with my eyes up, and the distant peaks were as hazy as ink, like landscape paintings outlined by painters, while the nearby mountains were as green as jade. "Oh, what a beautiful scenery!" I can't help admiring. When I was intoxicated with this beautiful scenery, I only heard a click, and my father photographed my unforgettable moment.

I love this photo, because it makes me understand that it takes hard work to enjoy beauty, and you can't give up halfway.