2. A detailed description of the characters' language, manners and movements. This is a major feature of this article. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.
3. The article is written in detail, revealing the warmth like sunshine between the lines, which naturally sublimates the theme of the article to a higher level.
The music is beautiful, so is the language of this article. Poetic language, fantastic imagination, so beautiful!
5. "Reading" and "feeling" of the article are closely related. Examples of actions are touching at the beginning and have real feelings.
6. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, and hit the floor's reading is exciting and exciting.
7. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, and the emotion is rich and true. Read with relish, it uses a lot of spoken English in life, making the article more natural. The end of the article is clear, implicit and meaningful. This composition is novel in material, brilliant in conception and vivid in language, and reveals a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
8. This article narrates the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent and the level is clear, which seems to be enjoyable from beginning to end.
9. The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of the times and showing the flavor of the times.
10, with clear context, strong sense of hierarchy and orderly narration.
1 1, with appropriate details, clear focus and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailor-made for the theme.
12, the narrative is detailed and concrete, the details are vivid and vivid, the characters are vivid and prominent, and the images are full and vivid.
13, setting off the characters' emotions with the environment, blending scenes, feeling in the scene, and scenery in the scene.
14, rich in imagination, strange in conception and not divorced from the truth of life, binds the association of life, broadens the reader's thinking and makes people feel lively and interesting.
15, the scenery description is vivid, the words and sentences are appropriate, and the scenes are in harmony with each other, just like a vivid sketch painting presented to the readers.
The teacher commented on the composition of 600 words 2 1. The context is clear, the sense of hierarchy is strong, and the narrative is orderly and not messy.
2. Proper details, clear priorities and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailor-made for the theme.
3. The narrative is detailed and concrete, the details are vivid and vivid, the characters are vivid and prominent, and the images are full and vivid.
4. The environment sets off the emotions of the characters, and the scenes blend, and the feelings are in the scene, and the scene follows the scene.
5. Rich imagination, strange ideas, not divorced from the truth of life, tied together with the association of life, broaden the reader's thinking and make people feel lively and interesting.
6. Scenery description is vivid and lifelike, words and sentences are appropriate, scenes are born together, and scenes blend together, just like a vivid sketch painting presented to readers.
7. Imagination is wonderful. It not only comes from life, but also transcends life, broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm.
8. The description of the event process is detailed and specific. Although there are many contents, it seems to be orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and planning ability for the layout of the article.
9. The appearance is vivid, the characters are vivid, and the clothes are decent, just like a mirror reflecting the character. It's really called "life depends on each other"
10. The description of the environment is objective and true, and the environment serves the characters, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the characters' personalities.
1 1. The expression is vivid and vivid, and there are not many words, which outline the personality characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the words and manners of the characters have distinct and unique personalities.
12. The content before and after is not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.
13. The narrative is short and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
14. The details are not properly arranged and the priorities are not clear enough.
15. The content is mostly outlined by lines, lacking detailed description based on points. Not in line with the atmosphere of the times, the content is too old and aging.
16. Focus is prominent, the center is clear, and the thinking is clear.
17. The views are clear, and the likes and dislikes are clear, which makes people clear at a glance.
18. Directly highlight the theme in content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.
19. The subject matter is serious, the thought is noble, and the enterprise is strong.
20. The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.
Teacher's Comments Composition 600 words 3 From the beginning of reading, you have left various comments of the teacher in your thick exercise book, which are composed of different handwriting. Have you read it carefully?
As the carrier of private inner words, comments are full of teachers' true feelings in every stroke and word. Seeing these words will buckle your memories, and some teachers will carefully interpret your hopes, connect the fragments of memories, appreciate them for you and look back for you. ...
Every teacher pays attention to the growth of students, and they will pin all their feelings on those short comments.
Summer is the season when gardenias bloom. Pure petals turned into bright smiling faces. The fragrance of flowers in the air is just laughter in memory. Those thoughts hidden in the depths of memory will spread with this fragrant gardenia.
My leaves, lonely tung trees, are doomed to be lonely forever. I have lived in dormitories and canteens since junior high school. When I was sick, no one sent hot water, no one found medicine, and no one sent greetings. Get used to it and it will become natural.
That semester, the class teacher was very strange, and actually wrote comments to the students seriously. When I received my report card, I didn't care about many paragraphs in the comments and threw them into the box. Adults don't ask about grades anyway. It's no use watching. But a few days after that day, I couldn't help but rummage through the comments. I found it unique.
Every word in it is powerful, touching and serious. He told my family that it is right to exercise my independence and I want to be strong. Suddenly I feel that this is not an ordinary report card, and suddenly I find that this is a unique comment. The teacher's painstaking efforts are so remarkable.
Later, I came to understand that my family is good for me, they also have their difficulties, and it is not their fault. A simple comment proved to be meaningful.
Teacher's comment composition 600 words 4 In the primary school life that is coming to an end, there are joys and sorrows, laughter and tears, flowers and fruits, and fragrance and color. And the most unforgettable teacher.
Among many teachers, Mr. Lu is the most unforgettable one for me. Although she has been teaching us since the fifth grade, it seems that she and her classmates have been together for more than ten years.
Teacher Lu is very beautiful I liked her from the moment she walked into the classroom. She has blond curly hair with hooks, bright eyes with red glasses and a smooth mouth under her nose.
Primary school 1-4 grade I feel I have no writing ability. It was not until the fifth grade that I was discovered by Teacher Lu that I was good at writing. Teacher Lu also found the advantages of most students in the class.
Teacher Lu is very gentle and kind to every student. No matter whether students study well or not, they tell him questions patiently and never laugh at them. Treat every student as your own child. In order to do a good job in the class, she spent money to buy certificates to encourage students to study hard. She praised and encouraged students to do good deeds. If a student makes a mistake, she should know the mistake, and don't make this mistake and similar mistakes next time. Everyone did well in the last midterm. Teacher Lu not only praised everyone, but also specially took out a Chinese class to take everyone to play on the playground.
Teacher Lu, I am one of the peaches and plums you planted yourself. My germination and growth are bathed in your sunshine and rain, and flowers repay nature with rich fragrance. I will thank you for making progress in my study! Spring rain, which dyed the world green, disappeared silently in the soil. Teacher Lu, you are the spring rain in our hearts, and we will always thank you.
I love you, Mr. Lu!
Comment: In this article, the author introduced one of his teachers to us and thanked him. The disadvantage of the article is that the details are inappropriate and the center is not prominent. For example, Teacher Lu found that "I" was well written and too brief. I hope the author will pay more attention to this problem.
Teacher's comment on the composition 600 words 5 In many people's exercise books, or headers or footers, there are always lines of bright red characters, which seem inconspicuous, but they are the style of writing life.
Plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold. -English teacher
The English exercise book was sent out after it was revised, and these bright red characters caught my eye. I can't help feeling smug about my average English, thinking: The English teacher finally praised me! A few words infiltrated the affirmation and expectation of my English teacher and helped me regain my confidence in foreign language learning.
I hope you will stick to it and become the pride of teachers as soon as possible. -Chinese teacher
Big Ben has been handed over to me several times. Open on see, at the end of the text, two lines of red words are flowing, while flying while flying, very eye-catching! After studying the comments carefully, my tears rolled in my eyes. After entering the third year of senior high school, there is a deviation in learning attitude, and the mood often fluctuates up and down, and the academic performance can be imagined, which also causes a lot of trouble to teachers. During the period, I rarely received praise, and I often heard criticism. But I didn't expect the teacher to encourage me so pertinently. Believe me, you won't be disappointed!
Step back. Math teacher
"The unit exam is finally over, and I'm sure I can get full marks this time!" My heart is full of confidence. However, when the test results came out, I couldn't wait to throw that test paper 108 thousand miles away on the spot. A famous saying "Forget the pain and make room for the sunshine" reminds me. So I tried to adjust my mood and calm myself down. When I was about to start revising, I caught a glimpse of the two extra-large words "retrogression" at the beginning of the volume, which stood out like torches in the night. It seems that the teacher has devoted all his dissatisfaction with my study habits to these two words. Yes, I'm confused in math study recently, and I often make some low-level mistakes. Hey! Through these two words, I seem to see your melancholy face and anxious expression eager to correct it as soon as possible. Teacher, I know what you mean, and I will correct it!
The teacher commented on the 600-word composition 6 1 and quoted classic famous sentences, which was more convincing and could express the author's point of view more powerfully.
2. Strong arguments, thorough and reasonable analysis and strong philosophy.
3. Rich examples, appropriate materials and detailed descriptions are more convincing.
4, strong feelings, such as volcanic eruption, gurgling out, can deeply impress readers.
5, sincere feelings, strong feelings, like mellow wine, do not drink it also makes people drunk.
6. Emotions are true and natural, and there is no suspicion of affectation. Express your true feelings with a plain heart.
7. The mental journey is true and delicate, and the thoughts and attitudes of the characters are clear to the readers at a glance.
8. The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching. It really comes from the author's heart.
9. Seek the gains and losses of life from self-reflection, reveal the true feelings in confession, and the words are powerful and shocking.
10, sentences are fluent, sentences are fluent, words are beautiful, narrative images are vivid and expressive, and language expression ability is strong.
1 1, the language is concise, concise, concise and forceful, and a few words can convey the spirit of the characters.
12, the language is fluent, detailed and vivid; The meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, with profound implications. After reading it, it is like a lingering fragrance after drinking.
13, the language is lively and humorous, which makes people laugh.
14, the behavior description is delicate and accurate. These verbs vividly highlight the psychological state of the characters and point out their personality characteristics.
15, the language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent.
16, the language is not fluent enough, and the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling. This statement is wordy, but it doesn't convey the meaning. Just verbose.
17, the language is too brief, and it seems to be an outline narrative, but it fails to get an outline. The meaning is incomplete, and the narrative is boring, dry and lifeless.
18, the beginning of the article is concise and appropriate, and the environmental description sets off the emotions of the characters, which is very artistic. The beginning is concise and to the point
19, the beginning of the article is novel, which can serve as a warning. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
20. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
Life is colorful, full of seven colors of sunshine, and also full of wind, frost, rain and snow. The long river of life is destined to flow through the broad plains, and it is bound to pass through the steep canyons. Our growth process is not only a broad road, but also full of thorns and dangerous beaches. It is their earnest teaching that lights the lamp for us and holds up the sun of tomorrow. If we are the flowers of the motherland, they are hardworking gardeners; If we are brave sailors, they are clever navigators.
People often say that teachers are like candles, burning themselves and illuminating others. Indeed, for our growth, teachers are a course on our way to growth, with a touch of new green. They teach us how to be a man, how to do things, how to get along with others and how to grow up healthily. The teacher's work is arduous, and he has paid painstaking efforts and sweat for us. Teachers' work also makes us smarter and smarter.
Teacher, you have sown the seeds of hope on us, carved virtues in our hearts, and injected a sense of social responsibility into our souls, thus making the development of society flourish.
Grass is grateful for the rain and dew, so it is beautiful; Because the eagle is grateful to the sky, it gets wings to fly, and our hearts get diamond-like light because of gratitude to love ... I want to thank my teacher.
Ah, thanks to you, the garden is so gorgeous and the earth is spring. Teacher, please open the window quickly. All this love and this fragrant peach and plum are saluting you.
Teacher's Day is coming, I will personally make a beautiful card for you, representing my love for you-happy holidays, teacher!
Teacher's comment: This article is mainly about teachers' selfless dedication to children, burning themselves, illuminating others and expressing my love and gratitude to teachers. The language of the article is beautiful, and the rhetorical devices of metaphor are used, which adds a lot of color to the article.