Look carefully, she has ear-length short hair, and always wears two hair clips on her head, one on the left and the other on the right. Her hair is tightly tied behind her ears, revealing a smooth and fair face. Her eyes are small, thin and long, but they are very energetic. When she laughed, she became two cracks.
The nose is slightly upturned, giving people a playful feeling and looking cute. What she likes best at ordinary times is a dress with blue background and white flowers. This skirt is wide and big.
As soon as she ran away, the skirt flew like a flower. Action: He bent down, the basketball kept flapping back and forth and left and right under his hand, and his eyes turned around, looking for a chance to "break through".
Suddenly, he quickened his pace, then turned left and right, rushed through two layers of defense lines and came to the basket. After a tiger jump, he turned to shoot, and the basketball drew a beautiful arc in the air and landed in the basket impartially.
2. Describe human fragments, language, movements, demeanor and appearance. The 200-word action description is very specific.
Jumping height
Li He is the only person who jumped off the viaduct. At this time, the crossbar has risen to 1.47 meters, which is one centimeter higher than last year's group B high jump record. The whistle of the game sounded, and I saw Li He galloping forward. Less than half a meter away from the crossbar, he jumped over the crossbar and broke the record of the school sports meeting.
There are only 100 words in this passage. It is not specific to really write the scene where Li and his classmates break the high jump record. Only most sentences have only 23 crosses.
How to write "high jump" in detail?
Method 1: decomposition method
[Explanation] The so-called "decomposition method" is to divide the whole thing into several small parts from different angles such as place, time, events and people, and then write them out one by one. As far as "high jump" is concerned, the record-breaking scene of high jump can be divided into four aspects from the action, namely, run-up, take-off, leap and landing, and then described one by one in order.
[Demonstration] When the whistle sounded, Li He jumped a few times in the same place, habitually pressed his left leg, then pressed his right leg, straightened up and took a deep breath. This just took a brisk and powerful step, rushed up and jumped off the viaduct. (Run-up) When approaching the high jump, a sharp turn and one foot on the ground are almost completed at the same time. Before the audience could blink, her head and shoulders had crossed the crossbar, and then she held out her chest, abdomen and waist. This was a "back-crossing". (End) ... "Success!" Breaking the school record, the applause thundered around, and the crossbar on the elevated platform seemed to jump. (Landing)
Method 2: Recall and association method.
[Explanation] The so-called "recall association method" is to recall the scenes related to things at that time by means of supplementary narration or interpolation. For example, what is the difference between this school sports meeting breaking the high jump record and the previous school sports meeting breaking the high jump record? What is the difference between the high jump performance of the same athlete and the past? It can also be linked in many ways: How did Li He look before he started? Have confidence? How did she spread her feet at first? How fast? How did she cross the crossbar before reaching it? What did she look like when she climbed over the crossbar and landed?
[Demonstration] The crossbar has risen to 1.47 meters, and the whistle is going to sound again. At this time, a ray of sunshine shines on Li and her classmates' faces, and she looks more energetic. (Write down the expression before jumping) She thought of physical education class practicing with her classmates on weekdays, and the teacher encouraged her more than once. She is generally the best dancer. It seems that she is full of confidence in breaking the record of the school sports meeting this time. (Write about Li He's confidence in winning) As the whistle sounded, Li He jumped a few times in the same place, habitually pressing his left leg against his right leg, straightening up and taking a deep breath. She dashed forward, strode from the starting point to the crossbar, carefully measured the distance, and then returned to the starting line. I saw her suddenly clench her fist and run forward, six meters, five meters, four meters, ... one meter. Less than half a meter from the beam, she is as light as a swallow and lifts her feet. What a "back crossing" that broke the school record. The movements are so light and graceful. "It worked!" In the cheers of her classmates, she ran to the PE teacher to thank her for her careful guidance in the past: she ran to the class again, thanking her classmates for their enthusiasm and encouragement ... (Li He wrote the expression after success)
Method 3: Add details
[Explanation] The so-called "adding details" is to add some details around the center and write down some subtle performance details when Li He broke the school sports meeting record, such as her eyes, her tiny movements, the performance of her classmates after her success, and so on. If these details can be properly added to the article, the article will be more delicate and touching.
[Demonstration] Li He stood at the starting line, as cool as a cucumber. She habitually presses her left and right legs. After these preparatory activities, she smiled at us and gave her good classmates a look. (Details 1) I seem to be telling the whole class that I must live up to everyone's expectations of her. When the whistle sounded, she measured the distance from the starting line to before striding onto the viaduct. Be careful at every step, lest there be any mistakes. Then, she ran back to the starting line and spat on her palm. (Detail 2) She rubbed her hands, clenched her fists and began to rush to the beam. The audience held their breath and watched the wonderful performance at this moment. The squeaks of Li and her classmates gradually disappeared, and she was getting closer and closer to the crossbar. Take off! She gnashed her teeth (detail 3) I saw her turn around and kick her leg, both of which were done almost at the same time. Before the audience could blink, her head and shoulders had crossed the crossbar, and then she held out her chest, tilted her waist, closed her abdomen and closed her feet. How "back-to-back" ... "It worked! After breaking the school record, the applause around shook the railing on the elevated platform ... The students ran into the field and hugged her, and another student punched her several times (detail 4) and then lifted her high.
Paragraph 1 describes the movements, language, demeanor and appearance of the characters. The door opened and a young postman came in.
I saw that his clothes were soaked, his trouser legs were rolled up high, and he was covered with mud from his knees to his toes, as if he had just got up from the mud. Holding a bag of mail wrapped in tarpaulin in his hand, he forgot to wipe the rain on his face and said to the people inside, "Childhood is coming!" " My sister is slim and strong, and she is a head taller than me.
Her neck is longer. When I am angry, I will call her "Changjin Deer". She is very energetic. When she looks at you, her eyes twinkle as if she could speak.
The young man looks less than twenty years old, with a pair of smart eyes under two curved eyebrows. You can tell at a glance that he is a capable man. Under a beautiful nose, there is a big mouth and two thick lips.
People often say, "People with thick lips are all thumbs." But he has a glib tongue and is a talkative person.
4, my brother's eyes are highly myopic, and he can't live without glasses everywhere, just like a "blind man". Just take off his glasses and he will look like a sheep in front of me. One afternoon, my brother wanted to wash his hair.
He asked me to bring him some soap to drink. I proudly thought: Hum! I'll run errands for you first, and then my treat.
After a while, my brother craned his neck and beat soap bubbles all over his face. As soon as I saw the time was up, I quietly took my brother's basin away.
After rubbing his hair, my brother went to wash his hair and took a handful of water and an empty one. He hurried to look for it, but as soon as he opened his eyes, the soap bubbles made him burst into tears.
He groped his way like a blind man, groping around, and finally picked up a towel and wiped his eyes, but his eyes were still blurred, so he went to find his glasses. I didn't have a chance to look at her carefully until she came near: I saw her ear-length short hair, big eyes and a smile on her mouth.
Wear a red dress on the bed, and don't miss the school of Suzhou No.10 Middle School. She said to me gently, "Little sister, take my car!" " "Say that finish, she pushed the bike in the past.
6. The second brother sells seafood. It rains in the monsoon all year round, and it is very hard to get up early and get greedy. He is not tall and not very good-looking. Sometimes he looks like a good man, but he sells goods quickly and the vendors around him admire him.
7. In the carriage, a tall girl looked out of the window. She is strong and healthy.
Slightly curly black hair in the back of the head, tied into two locks, hanging lightly. Crimson sweater collar, quietly revealing a dark blue coat.
You can feel that this girl is full of youthful vitality and vigorous vitality. 8. My uncle is a docker in his twenties. He has a rectangular face, a black face and a red face. He is quite tall and strong, which makes people know that he is a strong young man at a glance.
9. On the left of the old mother, there is a beautiful and dignified girl, reclining in a chair. She has beautiful blonde hair and a big braid on her back.
A black dress sets off her white and soft face. She looked at something with her head down, and her eyes showed sadness and concern.
The bandage in my hand has been rolled up, but I forgot to throw it into the basket. 10, this is a girl in her early twenties, with a round face, red eyebrows and straight and warm eyes flashing in her slender eyes; Always laugh before you speak, and language is also smiling, just like singing.
When walking, she puts her weight on her toes, always like jumping and flying. You can see at first sight that she is a pure and happy girl. Strangely, her simple dress is not commensurate with her personality, and it is also very different from those diaosi girls who love beauty: blue cotton-padded jacket, black tweed coat, grass-green trousers, white scarf around her neck and black wool with braids.
1 1. My younger brother has just turned 20 years old and is five big and three thick. The hair is black and hard, one by one, and there are a pair of big eyes under two heavy eyebrows, staring at people like little tigers.
Especially those big feet, put on size 42 sneakers and start pedaling. 12. When my cousin first arrived, she wore a plaid shirt with several patches and a pair of white sandals stained with dirt. She dare not speak loudly when she walks. We all call her rustic.
But now, we dare not say cousin. Look at her wearing a beautiful coat, a pair of tight jeans, a pair of shiny high heels, a shiny gold necklace around her neck and long black hair over her shoulders. She looks dashing.
Talking and laughing at home is like living in honey. 13, she is not so much an aunt as an elder sister. She is only twenty years old at most, wearing a faded plaid coat and short braids to her shoulders.
She always smiles, clearly announces the name of the station, quickly deposits money and sells tickets, and patiently answers various questions raised by foreign passengers. Her warm and friendly language filled the carriage with the breath of spring and warmed the hearts of every passenger.
14, Sunday, I went to the queue to buy rice. In front of me is a young man. He is not fat, but he is strong enough.
Round face, two thin eyebrows, a pair of big eyes and a slightly smaller nose are fairly symmetrical. Just a little thick lips, like Africans.
15, my younger brother is only in his twenties, with black hair, medium build and well-proportioned. He is not very beautiful, but he has good features. You can see from his eyes that he is a smart and energetic young man.
He gives people a quiet and kind feeling, and his face is childish. 16, my brother drives a tractor in our village agricultural machinery team.
He is very tall! My body is very big, and I have scars on my black and red face. Every time I look up and see these scars, a touching story described by a tractor driver will come to my mind ... 17, my sister is eighteen or nineteen. Because of running and anxiety, sweat oozed from the round face, like a ripe apple stained with dew.
Her eyes are as bright as black gems, shining with intelligence, cleverness, liveliness and perseverance; Exposing long eyelashes, like the dense forest next to Bihu Lake, gives people a deep and mysterious feeling. Long black hair, that is, soft and slender, floats behind the head with the river wind.
18, at this moment, a tall young man hurriedly ran towards the steel mouth. He wears a hat on his head and a pair of blue glasses on his tongue. He was flushed and sweaty, and his feet were covered with canvas.
4. A paragraph describing appearance, language and gestures. One day Xiao Ming came home, and his mother scolded him. He roared, "Why did you scold me? What did I do wrong? "
Mom saw Xiaoming talk back and hit him several times. Xiaoming ran out of the door angrily. 2. At first, Ding Chunqiu made a subtotal and robbed A Zi of the opportunity to challenge the Shaolin abbot to swim.
After the Shaolin abbot was defeated, he wanted to freestyle and let the beggars' sect drop out of school. Ding Chunqiu's disciples actually said that beggars' unique skills were not as good as those of stars.
At this moment, our Xia Daxia appeared. First, I didn't see him. First, I heard his voice: "Who said that the martial arts of the Stars Sect are better than the eighteen beggars?" Then, he took the lead. In the two strokes and eighteen palms, he used "Kang Long has regrets" for the first time to defeat Johnson Ding and raised his hand to save A Zi! As soon as it comes out, it gives people a super-superior state, and then three moves will beat the three great masters out of the water.
It's really an old magic clown! So Xiao Feng, Duan Yu and Xu Zhu became sworn brothers! Xiaoli sipped her mouth, bowed her waist and approached it step by step. Approaching, approaching, I saw her quietly reaching out her right hand to the butterfly, and her open fingers closed and caught the butterfly's wings.
Xiaoli jumped and jumped with joy. He bent down, the basketball kept flapping back and forth, left and right under his hand, and his eyes turned around, looking for a chance to "break through".
Suddenly, he quickened his pace, then turned left and right, rushed through two layers of defense lines and came to the basket. After a tiger jump, he turned to shoot, and the basketball drew a beautiful arc in the air and landed in the basket impartially. It's too late now, but it's too soon.
The athlete who fell to the ground stood up suddenly with his hands propped up and tiptoed. The left foot points to the starting line, and the knee bends and squats firmly.
Hands are like two wooden pillars stuck in the ground, and the whole body leans forward slightly, like an eagle spreading its wings. She washed the dirty clothes with soap and then polished them. Small soap bubbles emerged from the clothes and soon turned into many white bubbles.
6. She took a breath at the window glass and wiped it with her nails. A series of actions were clean and neat. 7. I first poured a small amount of oil into the pan. When the oil smoked, I quickly poured the egg into the pan, only to hear a "click". The egg quickly appeared in the oil pan, and its edge was like the lace on the little girl's skirt.
I rinsed the mop in the pool again and again, then wrung it dry, then bent down, arched my front legs, pulled back and pulled it up. 8. I just opened the textbook and suddenly saw a picture under the glass plate.
"Deer, my favorite sika deer, draw it." I thought to myself, open the painting, pick up the brush, divide three times five by two and tick off a deer.
However, because I didn't observe it carefully, I painted the deer head as a child's head. How ugly this is! Erase the repaint, but draw it to the right.
I had to draw another duck swimming in the river on the left side of the paper and "twist" the deer's head to make it look at the duck. I've finished painting. It's really good.
9. In the fifth grade, I joined a calligraphy interest group. Under the guidance of my tutor, I picked up a brush dipped in black juice for the first time. According to the instructor's instructions: the index finger and middle finger are stuck outside the pen container, and the ring finger and little finger are stuck inside the pen container.
I write carefully one by one. A point, a horizontal, a vertical, a si.
But it's outrageous. It was clearly painted by a three-year-old child. A little, it is a thick ink group; A horizontal, winding like a small snake; A vertical one, but as thick as an elephant's legs and feet in art; A slap is even more outrageous, like a bald broom that has long been scrapped.
I looked at my masterpiece and smiled. These strokes are uneven and asymmetrical, not to mention the shelf structure.
But the tutor said, "well written!" It seems that you have a bright future. If you practice hard, you will succeed in the future. " 10. He found a red dragonfly parked on the green grass by the pond.
I saw my brother staring, the cat hunched over, leaned forward and moved forward very slowly. Suddenly, he reached out and caught the dragonfly with two fingers. Dragonflies struggled desperately, and my brother jumped and jumped for joy.
He tied the dragonfly's long tail with a thin thread, grabbed the other end of the thin thread with one hand, let go of the dragonfly and it flew. He flew with the dragonfly and shouted, "I flew, I flew."
Just ask about appearance, language, movements and manners, otherwise it will be too messy. Agree with 0| comment 2012-5-1819: 55 enthusiastic netizen, he bent down, basketball kept patting back and forth under his hand, turning left and right, looking for a chance to "break through" Suddenly, he quickened his pace, then turned left and right, rushed through two layers of defense lines and came to the basket. After a tiger jump, he turned to shoot, and the basketball drew a beautiful arc in the air and landed in the basket impartially.