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After a period of rectification, the appearance of our city has indeed changed. How to write sick sentences?
After a period of rectification, the appearance of our city has indeed changed.

After a period of rectification, the face of our city has indeed taken on a new look.

Analysis: Ill sentences belong to improper collocation. Just replace "makeover" with "brand-new". The revised sentence is: After a period of rectification, the face of our city has really taken on a brand-new look.

Improper collocation when modifying sick sentences;

1, improper collocation of related words.

2. The attributive and the head word (subject and object) are not collocated properly.

3. Improper collocation of verbs and objects.

4. Improper collocation of subject and predicate.

5, the host and guest are not properly matched.

6. Improper collocation of verbs and complements.

7. The adverbial and the head word (predicate) are not collocated properly.

8. One side and two sides are not properly matched.