Material accumulation composition 1 Looking at the excellent compositions of the senior high school entrance examination over the years, it is not difficult to see that the candidates have made great efforts in selecting materials, and everyone has shown originality in vividness, novelty, truthfulness and touching. However, in daily writing training, many students will feel embarrassed when choosing materials: "How can there be so many fresh and vivid materials in the ever-changing composition topics?" In fact, the composition materials for the senior high school entrance examination can't meet the "cramming" problem. You must accumulate over time in training, and you can "carefully select" the most suitable materials when facing the questions in the examination room. For example, from elementary school to junior high school, we have taken countless exams. In the future, when we step into life and society, we will face many challenges and tests. In a word, life is full of exams. Please write a composition on the topic of "Examination". Faced with this composition topic in the examination room, if students have written "Beyond Self" in their daily training, they will inevitably accumulate a series of materials about accepting challenges and tests; If you write to cheer for yourself, you will inevitably accumulate some materials to overcome yourself and experience the joy of success. When you have these materials to pave the way, you can call them in your own material library and choose freely when reviewing the exam.
Carefully select composition materials and pay attention to daily accumulation. We can work hard in the following three aspects:
(1) Accumulate materials that you are familiar with and can impress yourself.
Having "true feelings" is the traditional requirement of Tianjin senior high school entrance examination composition. If you want to meet this requirement, you must choose materials you are familiar with to write. Because only "familiarity" can produce personal experience and empathy. The writing materials in life are full of flowers, but students who are not familiar with the materials must not easily master them. Only by choosing people, feelings, events, scenes and things that you are familiar with can you write delicate and touching inner feelings, and only by choosing materials that can touch the soul and touch the heartstrings can you make readers excited. It is particularly important to note that for the accumulated materials, it is best to take "I" as the protagonist, which will help to evoke your inner voice and achieve the sincere writing effect of "writing my article with your heart".
(B) the accumulation of materials should be "less" rather than "more"
Because the time and length of composition in the examination room are strictly limited, the accumulation of daily composition materials should start from "small", because "small" is easier to write concrete, vivid, delicate and touching; And "big" materials can easily be written as "introductory" articles in general, with empty content and lack of focus. It is particularly important to note that "small" does not mean "narrow-minded", so the accumulation of materials for the senior high school entrance examination composition can focus on the big picture and start from small things. Starting from the reality of our own life, we should choose a small starting point and express a positive, vivid and healthy theme with the writing method of "seeing the big from the small", so as to show our life, think deeply in life and realize the depth of the theme of growth. For example, writing the composition "Keep that innocence" can start from the big aspect of "praising simple and beautiful people, scenery, things and feelings", and then narrow it down to the small scope of "pure feelings" and "pure thoughts", and then select specific materials as "pure friendship", "pure pursuit" and "pure mind". In this way, you can call out the content of tolerance, sincerity, mutual assistance, simplicity and honesty in your material library and provide choices.
(C) the accumulation of materials "new" avoid "old"
In the process of preparing the composition materials for the senior high school entrance examination, students should always adjust the accumulated materials by "pushing the new for the old". The closer the time is, the more vivid the composition material will be, the clearer and deeper the memory will be, and there will naturally be a lot to say when writing; On the contrary, materials that have been "long" not only lack a sense of the times, but also tend to start from vague impressions. How to make them familiar, friendly and vivid when they are described?
To accumulate novel materials, we can also start with "changing the angle of conception", so that the "old" materials can be put on a "new" coat again, and new themes can be expressed from a new angle, thus achieving a refreshing writing effect. For example, in the article "The First Attempt", one student chose the material "The First Attempt to Learn to Stew Rice", which belongs to the type of learning to "do housework". The student's theme is "The first time I tried stewing rice, after my success, my mother praised me for learning to do housework, which can help her solve the problem." Students apply the principle of selecting new clothes from "old" materials, and modify the composition materials to "three stews, the first time with more meters and less water, the second time with more meters and less water, and the third time with appropriate ratio of rice and water." The theme has also been changed to the truth of life that "only practice can produce true knowledge".
In the process of accumulating composition materials, students should pay attention to the life around them. For those materials that can arouse your feelings, you must dig carefully. Over time, they will have fresh material "treasure" in the senior high school entrance examination, which will be fantastic.
Material accumulation composition 2 Learn more in the fields you are interested in and take more notes. Even if it's just a shallow reading of relevant magazines and newspapers. Because if you read a book in order to accumulate material, I'm afraid it's extremely difficult even to copy it by hand. If you deliberately sort it out in different categories, I'm afraid you are always worried and hesitant about how to use this material. And through my personal experience, what you remember most after reading the book is the part you are most interested in and the part you can easily get in the examination room. And don't just look at the good words and sentences! The accumulation of materials is mainly people+examples+meaning, and the exam-oriented composition does not need many gorgeous words!
Personally, I like reading economic magazines or magazines like Vista and People Weekly, which are convenient to buy and concise in content. They are interesting and the materials are fresh. If you are a liberal arts student, you can also recommend Physical Geography of China, but it may be difficult to read because of its thickness. If you are a science student, you can also pay attention to science magazines. Why mainly recommend magazines? Because it saves time to read and the content is more concentrated. Don't underestimate the reading of famous books when you have time in the future!
Give another example of my cousin. His Chinese is not good, but his composition is ok. He never worries about materials. Why? Because he loves basketball! Stars and their growth stories are memorable and handy! He told me that he could use these materials every day. Visible power of interests!
In addition, my teacher often publishes some philosophical articles or hot comments on current politics, and also lets us subscribe to Chinese loose-leaf selections. To be honest, I really didn't like the latter magazine at first, but now I think it's quite interesting and has a lot of good material.
Material accumulation composition 3 1, tolerance
Beginning: Tolerance is the supreme virtue in human life. Because tolerance contains people's mind, because tolerance can transcend everything, because tolerance needs a broad heart. Because tolerance is the most important part of human emotions, which can melt the frost in my heart. The lack of tolerance will make personality degenerate from greatness to even ordinary.
End: Life is often complicated and often dull. It is precisely because tolerance is like water that complicated things become pure after filtering; It is because tolerance is like fire that insipid becomes more and more distinct through calcination; It is precisely because of this poetic tolerance that life is endowed with art and eternity.
Step 2 understand
Beginning: understanding is like a cup of tea, which dilutes the misunderstanding between each other; Understanding is like spring breeze, which blows away the hard ice that separates the world; Understanding is like a cold plum, which indicates that the warmth of the soul will come to spring; Forgiveness is a rainbow, which makes emotions that have never met shine.
The end: The deceased is like this, and the waves of history have washed away the feud of the dynasty. Today, there are neither overlords nor majestic kings; We pursue unity, enterprising, harmony and equality. We should also keep that quiet and empty, show people understanding with every sentence and expressionless way, and cooperate and communicate with people with understanding.
Only by grasping understanding can society progress;
Only by grasping understanding can human beings have wealth.
Step 3 understand
Beginning: Understanding is the crystallization of friendship; Understanding is the flower of trust; Understanding is the aura of mutual concern between people. It can turn misunderstanding into a small flaw that embellishes beauty. In society, mutual understanding between people can make this family more prosperous and stable.
Conclusion: I believe that misunderstanding can become a beautiful flower one day, because it is watered by understanding!
Step 4 share
Beginning: who will listen to the clear voice in your heart in a lonely life? Looking ahead, who will appreciate the beauty in your eyes? The mountain is green, the water is Ying Ying, and a song "Mountain Flowing Water" is played, shaking the mountain and stirring the waves. Therefore, Yu Boya and Zhong Ziqi are very grateful for this meeting and mutual understanding. It is enough to have a bosom friend in life!
Conclusion: Sharing is a kind of fraternity. If you learn to share, you will learn to live.
Sharing is a kind of ideological depth. While thinking deeply, you share the pain of your friends.
Sharing is a belief in life. When I understand sharing, I understand the meaning of existence.
Happy sharing, painful commitment. When you share with others, you shoulder a heavy responsibility. Make him happier, let all the pain slip away, and let the sunshine fill your heart.
5. Collective interests
Beginning: collective, what concept? The collective is a team. The so-called unity means caring for, loving and returning to the collective. Let me talk about it below.
Conclusion: Because of this, we must unite, because we are a collective,,,
Step 6 return
Beginning: (1) The grass is lush and rejuvenated; Flowers are colorful, that is, they are spent in return for sunshine; Snow is thousands of miles away, is that snow or the north wind? Life is a beautiful reward.
(2) The green leaves release themselves freely, set off the lotus and squeeze out the shade. Although no one appreciates them, they eventually wither and wither, but they believe that next summer will still be full of green. Snow, enduring deep loneliness, protects crops with its own body. Although it finally melts into water, it does not regret, because farmers will smile. May, facing the snow, alone. Although it can't change the silence of the surrounding environment, it firmly believes that the first news of spring and all the colorful love are its best rewards.
I heard a voice, an angel's voice, in the bustling crowd and the hurried footsteps. Good people always have good dreams, and paying always pays off.
The end: The world always hopes that the world will give itself much in return, but ignores how much it has paid for the world. The invisible scale between heaven and earth is fair to everyone, and only pay will be rewarded. Just like a song: there is justice in the world, and there is always a reward for paying; Saying is not as good as doing, and doing what you want to do is to be the best ... Only by letting yourself pay and be the best can our life be better.
Step 7 thank you
The beginning: the fallen leaves hover in the air, forming a grateful movement, which is the gratitude of the tree to the earth that nourishes it; Baiyun floats in the blue sky, drawing pictures of people, which is Baiyun's gratitude to the blue sky that raised it. Because of gratitude, there will be this colorful society, and because of gratitude, there will be sincere friendship. It is gratitude that makes us understand the true meaning of life.
End: Look at society, parents and relatives with a grateful heart, and you will find how happy you are. Let go of your mind and let the drizzle wash away the pollution in your heart. Learn to be grateful, because it will make the world better and life more fulfilling.
8. Collective warmth
Beginning: Uncle Lei Feng once said: A drop of water will never dry up unless it is put into the sea. Only by integrating itself into the collective cause can a person be most powerful.
At the end: "Young trees are hard to weather; A hundred miles of forest can withstand the howling wind. "Let's take the initiative to care about the collective, be enthusiastic about doing things for the collective, and sincerely serve the collective!
9. Teacher-student relationship
The beginning: there is one kind of occupation that is the most beautiful, and that is teachers; There is a landscape that is the most meaningful, and that is the soul of the teacher; There is one emotion that is most touching, and that is the relationship between teachers and students. We have the same scorching sun, we have the same vast sky, and under the same sky, we spread hope with love. ...
At the end: the teacher is selfless and does not ask students to return; The teacher has a "good face" and he wants his students to become talents. As a student, shouldn't we sincerely offer full enthusiasm, infinite warmth and a sincere heart?
10, dedication
Beginning: Dedication is the Baiyun River in autumn dotted with blue sky and poetic self; Dedication is a drop of water in the sea, which not only magnifies the sea, but also enhances self.
Ending: "Falling in love is not."
The children turned the globe and said their answers one by one. After two or three speeches, a child in a gray jacket raised his hand and said a somewhat vague sentence: "I think dawn comes first everywhere." Every time (the earth) turns to one side, the other side is not (towards) the sun, and the other side turns and becomes towards the sun. Became the first again. After another turn, the other party ushered in again. It was the first time at first, and this is also the first time. Everyone is the first person to greet the dawn. "
The child speaks quickly, like a tongue twister. His tongue twister didn't get any response from the teacher. Hardly had he finished when the teacher called another student to answer. Of course, most of the students' answers are unanimous and correct: Beijing welcomes the dawn first.
What moved me happened in the teacher's evaluation activity. After colleagues' praise and suggestions, the teacher in class commented that the students basically understood, but some students were still confused, such as the classmate who "everyone greets the dawn first".
At this time, the headmaster answered the phone.
"This child has surpassed the teaching goal of this class. It can be said that his speech is the most wonderful speech in this class. His speech can just explain the content after this class-who is the first to greet the dawn in Beijing or new york? He had a hunch at the beginning of the discussion. He has recognized this cycle and realized that it goes round and round. It's day here, it's night there, it's day here, it's night here, it's day here, it's night there. Why do you say who comes first? He has stood in space to see the problem. "
If I were that female teacher, I would also try to cultivate a pair of ears like the headmaster, and I should remember to carefully screen those valuable "noises" in any class, so as not to spoil the "true understanding" signal that students have exceeded the subject goal of this class. I seem to see David, the leader of my tutor, a thin Jewish professor with glasses and a heavyweight in American science education, sticking up a finger and smiling and repeating his favorite famous saying for the10000th time-"The goal of teaching is to understand the essence of students' thoughts! "
It's my father's fault that the material accumulated in the composition is 5 1. The key words of this sentence are "Guo" and "Jiao". "Excessive" means not only a fault, but also a violation. What does change mean? It is called "normal law". "Teaching" refers to a process, which means practice, setting an example and being effective. Up to now, the meaning of "teaching" should add elements of culture and education, but it mainly refers to the exemplary role of fathers to their children, including morality, etiquette, skills and inspiration. So the meaning of this sentence should be that in the process of raising children, a father should set an example and teach his children. If father doesn't do this, he will violate the normal law.
2. In the new era, it should be given a new meaning: "It is the responsibility of parents to have children. If they only provide their children with material life such as food and clothing, they have not been properly educated, so that they have not received a good school education and family education." If the child has problems, then parents should take responsibility. As long as parents' educational ideas are consistent and Qi Xin works together to guide their children on the road of life, they can get a better education and develop better in the future.
3, lax teaching, lazy teachers. In the final analysis, punishment only plays a deterrent and warning role for students. Being a teacher doesn't even have the right to discipline, and the rest can only be accommodating and forbearing students' ignorance. In the growing period when students should understand the importance of rules, given an environment without rules, it is difficult to ensure that this student will become a useful, filial, honest and disciplined person in the future. The teacher who is passive to Nuo Nuo in Xiong Haizi is by no means a competent teacher.
Education is a serious undertaking. If children don't obey and don't finish their homework, teachers should of course teach and take care of them. Repentance can only be a punishment ... behind this seriousness is a responsibility, which we should support. Because this responsibility is to shape the soul and inherit the culture ... no matter what the teacher does, the children can't learn well; The teacher is too gentle for the children to learn well. The relationship between teachers, parents and children: Parents are nutrients, cultivating the growth of roots, the strength of roots and the lush leaves. Teachers are gardeners, who constantly mend branches and leaves to make them useful ... Teachers, parents and students are a harmonious social relationship that shapes life and soul.
It's parents' fault to provide food and clothing for children, but it's parents' fault not to educate children well. Only education, not strict requirements, is laziness as a teacher. Jade will not become a beautiful object unless it is polished and carved; If people don't know how to learn and realize their value with their own knowledge and skills, they won't be polite and can't become talents.
If you don't punish children who violate discipline and don't like learning, you just talk to them verbally. Over time, children may turn a deaf ear to what teachers and parents say. Let the children meet a good teacher with love in his heart, feet in his hands, light in his eyes and moderation in his chest. This is the expectation of all parents. As parents, we should also support the work of teachers, and we also need to keep learning and growing. Educational punishment is to educate students as the fundamental purpose, and to criticize and punish students who make mistakes or violate rules and regulations with a caring attitude to warn students.
7. As a way of educating and managing students, educational punishment has a long history in China's educational history, such as "no godfather, no teacher's laziness", "a dutiful son is born under a stick" and "no fighting makes a man useful". At present, on the one hand, appreciation education and caring education are quite popular in the field of education, and the voice of curbing corporal punishment and prohibiting corporal punishment in disguised form has been very high in society; On the other hand, teachers who want to manage but dare not or don't know how to manage are becoming more and more difficult problems for front-line teachers.
Material Accumulation Composition Part VI Material Interpretation
"Dedicated to serving the country and conscientious" is a portrayal of Shi Changxu's life. He dedicated the last light and heat to his motherland. To the letter, he achieved his only goal. Although he didn't wait for the couplet to say, "A hundred years old dies and his merits are complete," his life is pure and he has no regrets.
Applicable theme
Patriotism, dedication, childlike innocence and the value of life
There is no time to sharpen the axe.
A lumberjack found a suitable job in a lumber mill. Because of the good salary and working environment, loggers cherish it and are determined to work hard. On the first day, the boss gave him a sharp axe and marked a logging range for him to cut. The very diligent lumberjack cut down 18 trees that day, and the boss was quite satisfied. He said to the lumberjack, "Good, you should keep this level!" " "The woodcutter was very happy to hear the boss's praise, and he worked harder the next day. But, for some reason, he only cut down 15 trees that day. On the third day, in order to make up for yesterday's vacancy, he cut harder, but this day he cut less, only 10 trees. The lumberjack felt very ashamed. He ran to the boss and apologized: "Boss, I'm really sorry. I don't know why, but my strength seems to be getting weaker. The boss looked at him tenderly and then asked, "When was the last time you sharpened an axe?" "The woodcutter looked at the boss and replied in surprise," Grinding an axe? "I am busy cutting down trees every day, and I have no time to sharpen my axe!" Application direction: cognition; Wisdom; Strategy; Desire and reality; Phenomenon and essence
Do not be the biggest, do the best.
Statistics show that two-thirds of the inventions in the global tire industry come from Michelin. In Michelin's eyes, "the car is just an accessory of the tire". Now, Michelin Group spends more than 4% of its total investment on product research and development every year. In fact, among the products of various brands, Michelin tires are often the most expensive in the market, but Michelin people never worry: "Our task is to let customers know that the cost per kilometer of Michelin tires is actually the lowest." Han Sike said: "Michelin's goal is not to become the biggest company, but to become the company with the best product quality, price and service." In addition to tires, Michelin is also famous for its Michelin Guide, which is regarded as a "red book" by countless gluttons. In the first year of the 20th century, Michelin Company published a brochure with information about gas stations, repair shops, accommodations and other places in France, which was distributed to drivers in France free of charge through Michelin dealers. Andre, then the head of Michelin, wrote in the preface of the booklet: This book will be published in the new century, and it will surely coexist with the century. Later, this guide, which was updated and published on the first Wednesday of March every year, was regarded as a treasure by food lovers, even as the "gourmet bible" in Europe, especially after it began to evaluate the star rating of French restaurants every year. Even with such high popularity, food guides are still only a "sideline" in the eyes of Michelin people. So dedicated, Michelin has been leading the world tire industry. Application direction: target; Strategy; Awake; Confidence; know
Big boss and small details
Henry Ford is the founder of Ford Motor Company and the first person in the world to mass-produce cars with assembly lines. He is known as "the man who brought America into the assembly line". It is such a big boss, and his requirements for details are surprisingly high. 1965438+In July 2003, Ford ordered a batch of auto parts worth 20xx million dollars from a German auto parts manufacturer. When signing the purchase agreement, he asked the other party to pack these parts in wooden cases, and the size, thickness, combination of boards, size and combination position of screws should be designed according to his requirements, and there should be no different nails on the wooden cases. After the contract was signed, all his subordinates felt that the boss was too harsh. Isn't it just a box? Why is it so strict? After the car parts arrived, Henry Ford personally led the workers to unload. He also specifically told everyone to be careful not to damage the board when unpacking. The workers felt the harshness of the boss again. With so much demolition, when Ford came up with the design scheme of the office floor, everyone suddenly realized that they admired Ford. It turns out that Ford's private office has just been completed, but the floor has not been paved yet. Ford only uses these boards to lay the floor, and the size and thickness of each board and the position of the screws are completely consistent with the design drawings. The bigger the boss, the more meticulous he will be when dealing with every detail in the operation of the enterprise. It is this meticulous spirit that makes them stand out in the fierce market competition. When people envy their huge wealth, they don't know that their success is accumulated by small details. Application direction: attitude; Details; Success; Wisdom; rationality
Zheng Yonghui: The word "letter" takes the lead.
Mr. Zheng Yonghui, a famous French literary translator, professor and writer, died on September 9, 20xx at the age of 94. In the impression of many readers, Zheng Yonghui is a translator who loves French realistic literature in the19th century. He translated 409 works of Hugo, Balzac, Flaubert, Merimee, Dumas, Zola, Gide, George Sha, Mo Bosang and others, with more than 6 million words. Mr. Zheng's translation first emphasizes the word "faithfulness", and on this basis, the better the better. Whether it is elegant or not depends on the elegance and vulgarity of the original text, so as to achieve "faithfulness and elegance" or "faithfulness and vulgarity". This is the basic principle he has adhered to for decades. After 1949, Fu Lei was the most influential translator of French literature, but Zheng Yonghui once picked out many mistakes in Fu Lei's translation because of translation problems. On one occasion, when he talked about his translation, he consciously corrected the old version of Fu Lei, and found dozens of mistakes in "arbitrarily deleting" Mr. Fu's books because of misunderstanding and making self-righteous comments. "I wrote an article called' Faithfulness in Translation', which was published in the third issue of 1990 World Literature. From the three principles of literary translation' faithfulness, expressiveness and elegance', this paper talks about Fu's translation of Gao, gives some examples and criticizes Fu's translation. " At the end of the article, Zheng Yonghui said: "This shows how difficult it is to be absolutely faithful in translation. Fu Lei is still like this, not to mention our generation! There is never a shortcut to translation. Only by being more modest and prudent can we make fewer mistakes. " Regarding Mr. Zheng Yonghui's half-century translation work, Yu Zhongxian commented: "I have translated the works of Merimee and Rob Geyer, but Mr. Zheng has translated all these things before, so I have carefully studied his translations, and his greatest feature is that he is very faithful to the original." Application direction: awake; Sense of mission; Adhere to principles; Believe in yourself; Challenge authority
Yu and his "Peach Blossom Dream"
"He started a new professional direction. Design has created many different moments for the landscape. " In the list of 20xx annual landscape design professional awards in the United States, the American Association of Landscape Architects awarded the only highest award-comprehensive design Excellence Award to Professor Yu of Peking University Institute of Architecture and Landscape Design. Harbin Liqun National Urban Wetland Park, which he presided over, stood out among more than 620 entries. It has been 25 years since he 17 left his hometown Jinhua, Zhejiang Province to study in Beijing, then went to the United States to study and returned to Beijing. Accompanied by Yu, it has always been a bag of hometown that his mother gave him before he left. This bag of soil was put together with Yu's doctor's clothes and was treasured. The depth of love is the cutting of responsibility. As the dean of the Graduate School of Landscape Architecture, Yu's sharp criticism of the current urban construction in China has never stopped. After returning to China, Yu visited more than 65,438+000 cities in China, and saw that cities and cultures were destroyed again and again. Yu said bluntly: We are making the mistakes made by Americans and Europeans 100 years ago, but we are proud of it. "My ideal city is a city built on nature, cultural heritage and people's leisure network. This network is the ecological infrastructure on which the sustainable and healthy development of the city depends. This is the' Peach Blossom Garden' of the new era. " For this "Peach Blossom Garden Dream", I began to oppose the "Urban Makeup Movement" on 1997. In 20xx, under his auspices, the Graduate School of Landscape Architecture was formally established. Now, more than 200 like-minded colleagues are fighting for a harmonious "native idea" in the name of land. Application direction: dream; Pursuit; Harmony; Home; urbanization
pumice stone
Zhang Ruimin, CEO of Haier Group, raised such a question at a meeting of middle-level cadres: "How can stones float on the water?" The answers to the feedback are varied: someone said "empty the stone" and Mr. Zhang shook his head; Some people say that it is put on the board, and Mr. Zhang says "there is no board"; Some people say that "the stone is fake", and Mr. Zhang emphasizes that "the stone is real" ... Finally someone stands up and answers: "Speed!" Zhang Ruimin showed a satisfied smile on his face: "Correct!" "The Art of War" says that "the disease of stirring water, as for those who drift stones, the situation is also". Speed determines whether the stone can float. "Life is the same, no one is waiting for you, and there is no chance to stay for you. Only by racing against time can you win. The early bird catches the worm. Get ahead of others and don't stop. This is the state of competitors and winners. Yes, if there is a shortcut to success, it is flying, always ready to fly. Application direction: success; Shortcut; Cognition; The state of life; The Speed of Life