● Writing instruction
"Familiar places also have scenery" fully conforms to this orientation: the college entrance examination composition should write about your own life and the scenery around you!
The restriction of "familiar places" brings students back to long-lost familiar places and scenes, perhaps the village where they grew up, the river they walk every day, and even the campus that is a little disgusting. Guide students to pay attention to life, people and things around them, and their spiritual world.
The meaning of "scenery" should have two levels. One is the scenery of nature, such as pastoral scenery, beautiful campus scenery, four seasons scenery and so on. One is the spiritual landscape, which is a good fashion, a spirit, quality and so on. You can choose one or both when you write.
"Yes" means that there are "landscapes" in strange places, places that everyone pays attention to and expects, such as scenic spots, but there are also landscapes in ordinary and ordinary places around you, but you may be in a hurry, may not pay attention, and often ignore them. At the same time, it also reminds people that it is related to the present and pay attention to their feet: life is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of eyes to find beauty.
Low representative examples 1 (argumentative)
Familiar places also have scenery.
Some people say that there is no scenery in familiar places. I told you, familiar places also have scenery.
It is said that there is no scenery in familiar places because the understanding of the word "scenery" is one-sided. Some people always regard unfamiliar scenery as scenery, but the common scenery is not scenery, so the familiar solitary pine leaning on the cliff, willow tips brushing the shore, dragonflies and geese sweeping the air are not scenery in his eyes. People born in mountainous areas always yearn for the grandeur of the sea and the vastness of the plains, thinking that there are scenery there, because it is a strange place. There is no scenery in a familiar place, which is a question of our understanding of the scenery, not a question of no scenery.
It is said that there is no scenery in familiar places because the understanding of scenery is too superficial, and only natural scenery is regarded as scenery, while the people who make up the scenery are ignored. The old mother knitted a sweater for her son in the dim light at midnight; The white-haired old father stood at the entrance of the village, looking forward to the return of distant children; Aren't the young wife who takes care of the children at home and leans against the door to miss her husband who works in a foreign land beautiful and moving?
It is said that there is no scenery in familiar places because the beauty of familiar places cannot be found. Russell said that there is no beauty in life, but there is a lack of eyes to find beauty. You see what Tao Yuanming wrote: "Picking chrysanthemums under the east fence, you can see Nanshan leisurely, and the mountains are getting better and better, and the birds are returning." Is this scenery beautiful? Of course it's beautiful. However, for rural people, chrysanthemum, who hasn't seen it? Fence, who is not familiar with it? There is no Nanshan in your hometown, but there should be Dongshan or Xishan; Birds are more common, but why do many of us always complain that there is no scenery in familiar places? Tao Yuanming, a poet in the Eastern Jin Dynasty, discovered beauty from a familiar place because of his eyes for discovering beauty, leaving us with extremely beautiful poems.
It is said that there is no scenery in familiar places because there is not enough love for life. Tao Yuanming is tired of officialdom and loves rural life. So in his eyes, more than ten acres of square houses and eight or nine straw houses. The elm tree is behind Liu Yin and in front of Luotang in Li Tao. The neighboring village of the neighboring village is faintly visible, and there is smoke in the village. In the deep alley where dogs bark, chickens call mulberry trees jump. "Such a beautiful scenery. If we love life, care about others and be grateful to society, we will find that farmers plow fields, workers make steel, teachers attend classes and police stand guard, all of which are beautiful scenery.
Familiar places also have scenery.
short review
This paper has a clever idea, and demonstrates the central argument layer by layer by refuting the saying that "there is no scenery in familiar places" The beginning is concise and silent, and the end is round. I had a good idea because of my deep understanding of the scenery. The use of parallelism and the quotation of poetry make the language look beautiful, without the common boring feeling in argumentative writing. (Instructor Tao Yongbiao)
● Masterpiece Example 2 (Narrative)
Familiar places also have scenery.
Last spring, the school had a month off, and I went back to my hometown. It's cloudy and my heart is heavy. If nothing else, I went home because of the nth monthly exam. I didn't expect my grades to linger in the same place. I felt a huge stone weighing heavily on my mind. I dare not see my childhood friends, my grandfather who cares about me, or the eyes of the villagers. In order to get rid of the depression in my heart and release the pressure in my heart, I walked into the familiar bamboo forest behind my house.
There are birds in the bamboo forest that I don't know, so crisp and sweet. It is a singer in the forest, calling for the awakening of flowers and trees. I carefully observed the tall green bamboo and the silvery songs of birds. Suddenly, I tripped over a stone and almost fell down. I looked down and saw a sharp bamboo shoot sticking out from under the big stone, just like a sharp knife piercing the solid ground and tenaciously jacking up the big stone. I looked around carefully to find their figures, and was surprised to find that some emerged from the grass, some squeezed out of the tree pocket, and some struggled out of the cracks. I was stunned by this scene: so tenacious, so persistent, so confident. Suddenly there was a strong smell.
Yes, when the spring breeze gently awakens the bamboo forest and the spring rain gently moistens the bamboo forest, the whole bamboo forest seems to be enchanted. Countless bamboo shoots drill through the heavy soil and stubbornly drill out of the surface one by one, so full of vitality! There are water drops on their tips, full of rain, and they chase each other and rush up. Listen, bamboo shoots are pulled up or unsheathed intermittently in the bamboo forest. That is the cry of new bamboo: I'm going to grow up, I'm going to grow up!
Standing in the bamboo forest, I seem to see bamboo shoots that have not broken ground underground, gathering the last strength, trying to break through the weight of the earth and darkness. At this point, the heavy stone in my heart slowly disappeared.
Back to school, I no longer worry about my temporary achievements, and I no longer worry that I won't pass the exam because of the concern of my relatives. I regard my classmates' eyes, teachers' eyes and others' eyes, whether sincere concern or ridicule, as an encouragement to me. I will follow my own path, whether it is sunny or stormy, I will survive it. Because, I have the most beautiful scenery in the world in my heart, the scenery where bamboo shoots grow tenaciously.
That bamboo forest is really my familiar place. I dug a bird's nest there when I was a child, and I also picked up firewood there when I was a teenager. But I found the moving scenery in the bamboo forest last spring, only to know that there are scenery in the familiar places!
short review
The topic of "There are (no) scenery in familiar places" is not easy to write, whether it is an argumentative essay or a narrative, but the author of this paper closely follows the topic and vividly writes about his psychological change process under the pressure of studying in senior three, which can give people education and encouragement and enrich the content without being empty. The article takes emotional changes as a clue. Although the plot is not tortuous, there are waves, which shows the author's strong ability to conceive. (Instructor Tao Yongbiao)
Neglected beauty
Ordinary daily life contains the beauty of life.
The Alps valley is beautiful, and there is a expressway crossing it. There is a placard on the road: "Go slow, please enjoy it!" Unfortunately, many pedestrians pass by in a hurry and have no time to stay in the charming scenery. Fast-paced and efficient modern urbanites have lost this luxury, so this rich and gorgeous world seems to have become a lifeless prison.
When Su Dongpo lived in Xiyou Temple, he once went to Song Feng Pavilion. He was very tired all the way and his destination was still far away. What time does it arrive? Suddenly, Dongpo thought for a moment: "What is there to rest here?" Just nine words is like a blow to the head, and it is difficult to go backwards. Where can I not rest?
Everything is between thoughts, and life without direction is confused; However, life confined to planning is bound to be boring. Our freedom is often limited by our mentality. The destination is the refreshing pavilion, and we are bent on getting there before resting our legs and feet. However, it is natural to rest here when you are tired, but you are all confused by that strong utilitarian purpose.
There is a water bearer who goes to a far stream to fetch water every day. One of his two buckets is cracked and the other is intact. A good bucket can always bring full water home, but when a broken bucket arrives home, there is always only half a bucket left in it. In this way, after two years, the intact bucket can't help but feel proud of its achievements, while the cracked bucket feels ashamed. One day, it said to the water bearer by the stream, "I want to apologize to you." The master asked, "Why?" "In the past two years, on your way home, water seeped from my cracks, and I could only carry half a bucket of water. You did your best, but you didn't get the reward you deserved. " The broken barrel answered. The bearer said, "On our way home, I hope you can pay attention to those beautiful flowers on the roadside."
When they went up the mountain, the broken bucket was a little happy to see the sun shining on the flowers on the roadside. But at the end of the path, he still felt sad because he missed half of the water. So he apologized to the bearer again. But the bearer said, "Didn't you notice?" Those beautiful flowers grow right beside you. That's because I knew you had cracks, so I used them. I planted flowers on your side. When we came back from the stream, you watered the flowers every day. For two years, I often picked these beautiful flowers and put them in vases. Without you, how can we enjoy beautiful flowers every day? "
Without the sun, you can enjoy the stars all over the sky; Lost green, got rich autumn; Without youth, we have entered a mature life ... In life, we need to enjoy the joy of harvest, but the joy of life is also at this moment.
There must be something that can be taken.
A business friend of mine moved to America at the age of 45.
Anyone who goes to America wants to get a green card early. Three months after arriving in the United States, he went to the immigration office to apply for a green card. A friend who arrived in America before him kindly reminded him, "You should be patient. The application has been going on for almost a year and has not been approved yet. "
He smiled and said, "It won't take that long, just three months." His friend looked at him doubtfully, thinking that he was joking.
Three months later, he went to the immigration office, and he was approved to fill out the form and seal it. Soon, the postman brought him a green card.
After his friend knew it, he was very puzzled: "You are older than me, have less money than me, and apply later than me. Why did you get the green card before me? " He smiled and said, "Because of the money." "How much money did you bring to America?" "65438+ million dollars. But I brought $654.38+00,000. Why didn't you approve it, but I approved it? " During my three months in the United States, my $654.38 million+has been used and flowing, some for consumption and some for investment. Well, it's already shown on the tax bill I gave to the immigration office. And your $6,543.8+0,000 has been kept in the bank, and the consumption has not changed, so they will not approve your application. "I see.
This friend also told me something he witnessed with his own eyes at the US Immigration Service.
When he applied for a green card at the US Immigration Service, he met a middle-aged woman. She came from the northern rural area of China and applied to come to the United States because her daughter is in the United States. She only finished primary school and can't express Chinese well.
But it is such a rural woman in China who can only say "hello" and "goodbye" in English who is also applying for a green card. The reason for her statement is that she has "technical expertise".
The immigration officer looked at her application form and asked her, "What can you do?" She replied, "I can cut paper and draw." With that, she took out a pair of scissors from her bag and danced lightly on a piece of colorful bright paper. In less than three minutes, she cut out vivid animal patterns.
American immigration officers opened their eyes wide, raised their fingers and praised them again and again. At this time, she took out a newspaper from her bag and said, "This is a paper-cut painting that I published in China Farmer's Daily."
The US immigration official nodded and said, "OK."
This is America. You don't know management, finance, computers or even English. But you can't do nothing! You have to do the same. You have to do your best. In this way, you will be all right forever.