When I was analyzing Good Sir, I said at the end of the article that if the article was popular, I would write an analysis. Now I have dug a hole for myself, and I can fill in anything I say.

The content of the following article is mainly divided into two aspects. On the one hand, it focuses on answering the questions of netizens about Bian Xiao, and on the other hand, it moderately analyzes the problems in the script of Good Sir.

Let's go back to the question of the netizen baby:

User's question 1, Bian Xiao is mentally retarded/graduated from primary school, and Jiqi 100 praised and sent to Bian Xiao crematorium.

It is said that netizens who graduated from Bian Xiao brain-damaged primary school can learn from each other. How can a brain-dead graduate from primary school? The baby is a person with a primary school diploma, and the seal given to me by the principal is enough to prove that the baby is probably not brain-damaged.

Even if you send me to the crematorium, so what? I'm afraid you're in the wrong room. We're all together ... so I advise you to forget it. Of course, there are still favorable comments.

User question 2: Call me like an elephant and let me eat shit and scold me.

The baby has cleanliness, and the fragrance has no nutrition. It is true that the boy's excrement can be regarded as Chinese herbal medicine, but it cannot be a reason for the baby to eat it.

The baby didn't scold the netizen back. Although everyone has a bad side, I am a scholar who doesn't want to scold the rest of my life. The key is to scold netizens back. I'm afraid the headlines won't make me positive. I'm still a novice, and I didn't make the headlines until June 30 this year.

Question 3: In the article, Bian Xiao boasted that he was so awesome that you actually wrote a script for everyone to see.

I didn't screw up. I haven't analyzed the script in depth, because I'm afraid there won't be any hits. After all, screenwriters are boring from a professional point of view, and the audience of my article is ordinary users. I'm afraid everyone will get bored, so I won't go into it. Well, there is no mild analysis.

I'm writing a script, all the time. We have a long time, and the square is not a name. Welcome to Japan.

User Question 4: Bian Xiao calls himself a baby, which is disgusting.

I have no answer to this question. Not only netizens, but also some friends in my circle of friends are uncomfortable. In my life, I also call myself Shuai Shuai, and my narcissism is outrageous. There is no way. There is no love in life, I can only love myself.

User question 5, the article has no logic. Who cares if you say it sucks? It sucks, but you can explain why it sucks.

Thank you for your criticism. I will change this and try to make progress.

The level of the article, the baby will definitely improve, and the baby's writing level is not very bad. This is still confident.

Today I'm going to talk about whether Mr. Good is rotten or not. See the analysis at the end of the article for details.

Question 6: Many netizens said that at first I thought I was the only one who didn't look good and thought I was too stupid to keep up with the times.

You are not alone, as I said, I like the sexy psychologist Xu Li in Good Sir. Many babies like it, and there is nothing wrong with it. The only girl I've ever chased in my life is short hair, which is, er, sexier than Xu Li.

There is also an unexpected fact that posting an article on today's headlines actually played a role in diverting users to the official WeChat account. The baby has never publicized his official "Zheng is very sultry" WeChat account in the circle of friends, which is too annoying. It seems right to focus on the content.

User question 7, Bian Xiao, are you sick? Living can't solve environmental problems.

The baby has a regular life and goes swimming in Dongdan Swimming Pool every week. There should be no problem. Besides, I don't attract bees and butterflies. A few days ago, I spent more than 200 yuan on physical examination in Tie Ying Hospital. The medical certificate says that I am in good health. Thank you for your concern and love.

Besides, if I'm gone and the EPA is dissolved, will anyone lose their jobs? I'm under pressure, too It is not easy.

User question 8, what qualifications do you have to point to "good sir"

What I do from the media is to point fingers, say the content professionally, and refer to what is good, what I approve, what is low, and what I don't like.

Of course, the script of "Good Sir" may be well written, but due to the censorship system and the needs of producers and the market, the screenwriter may also compromise on the script. If my content causes the workload of producers, I am really honored. I gave the water army a chance to make money. Without my article, who hired you to write comments to eliminate the influence? We are all good friends. Let's love each other and kill each other. The baby is very strong. I won't compromise if you scold me.

Ok, let's talk about the analysis of "Good Sir", which is more moderate. Babies who don't like boring technology stickers can stop here.

Second, moderately analyze Mr. Good Drama-Why Mr. Good is not pleasing;

Continue yesterday's article, or start with the characters.

What are the characters in the play?

In the creation of film and television dramas, two points are very important, one is the characters, and the other is the story. If you want to tell a good story, you must first create a good character. We can even say that it is the responsibility and obligation of the screenwriter to create a successful role.

Who is this role?

The male host of Good Sir is Lu Yuan. Who is Lu Yuan? Lu Yuan's setting is the male host in Good Sir. What are the main qualifications for a man to be a man/woman?

In "Bright Sword", Li Yunlong, who dares to show his sword and is full of domineering, lofty sentiments and anger, is the male master.

In Cinderella, the girl who is not valued but kind-hearted, lovely and brave is the hostess.

Among the remaining sins, the one that is a little spicy but kind-hearted and just is the man.

Wait, there are many more examples.

In Good Sir, is Lu Yuan a man? Count! He is kind, willing to give everything for his beloved, responsible for the elderly and children, and responsible for others. Cows, yes. Then why don't most of the audience particularly like him? This includes the following:

Whose role?

Why don't audiences particularly like Lu Yuan?

Or a simple example.

In "Bright Sword", after Li Yunlong's wife was arrested by the Japanese army, she dared to violate discipline and commanded troops to prepare to liberate the county town and rescue her. In the face of Li Yunlong's counterattack, Yamamoto was silly. He wanted to make a fuss about Xiuqin, but he didn't expect to meet Li Yunlong's stubborn resistance. But in the end, in order to reduce casualties, Li Yunlong chose to sacrifice Xiuqin and shot his own woman on the wall.

Standing on the dimension of the audience, such a figure not only achieves empathy, but also makes the audience pay tribute. So who is a character like Li Yunlong? Li Yunlong was recognized by the audience! It's the audience It is a figure recognized by the audience!

Then a friend will ask, what's the matter, can't you follow the characters in other TV dramas? Of course, this problem will involve the following points:

If we don't take other drama routines, John Du, an anti-social personality murderer, won in the life of seven deaths, which is not in line with the correct values of M country, but the reputation of seven deaths is still very high.

Even if it is a romantic urban drama, take naked marriage as an example.

Whether Liu Yiyang is a good person should be considered. The degree of kindness to people will not be worse than that of Lu Yuan, right? Why is Liu Yiyang cute? The reason is that there are many bright spots, which makes it easy to get extra points: I like Tong, and even if his parents object, even if he has strong competitors, he will not give in. Is this brave love more than Lu Yuanjiang who doesn't know what he is doing under the guise of perfect love in Good Sir?

Ah, writing here, I just found out that Xu Li, a particularly sexy psychologist that Benbao especially likes in Good Sir, turned out to be the cousin of the child in Naked Marriage. Time is really a meat cleaver, which makes people beautiful and old.

Let's get back to the topic, what is a good character?

Everyone says that Lu Yuanhao is infatuated with women, filial and dedicated to his best friend, mother and daughter, crazy about love, a contemporary good man and a living Lei Feng.

But this is good. Is it really good? Aside from drama, a man Xiaoming loves Xiaohua at the same table. Xiaoming is willing to give everything for Xiaohua, including peaches and Xinger planted in front of his house. Xiaoming is willing to protect it with his life. What Xiaohua wants is a pencil sharpener in Xiao Ming's hand. Does Xiaoming love Xiaohua? Love. And Xiaohua, the love she is waiting for is very simple, just a pencil sharpener worth two yuan. In drama, the thankless role like Xiao Ming is generally set by men and women, not men!

Of course, men make mistakes. I don't know what the woman wants, but making mistakes is also a kind of love. Only in this way can people like it, not be good to people. The dog in the street is the owner. What's the difference between the character setting in Luyuan and the king in the street?

The baby/water army who is distressed by "Mr. Good" say it again. It's just a TV series. Let's watch and play. Why so serious? I didn't have time to be serious, but I was disappointed. Everyone will be disappointed, especially me as a screenwriter.

The producers have invested so much money in Good Sir, why don't they think the story comes first? If you can't tell the story well, what can you do to save your lost reputation when the water army quits? And those big coffee actors are not short of money, and I like them very much. Why are they doing this? Watching boring TV plays wastes everyone's feelings and time.

So much for the characters, let's talk about the plot.

Uh, the plot ... I'm sick again, and I don't want to talk about it. I would ask:

1, Lu Yuan, chef of Michelin restaurant, worked hard to become a local tyrant on his own. Ok, let you through. What about smuggling passports after local tyrants go bankrupt? How much can you earn by smuggling passports? I didn't smuggle my passport. No, you have to have a foreshadowing, in the plot. I really couldn't make money at first, but later I had to smuggle my passport. Otherwise, just like the real estate tycoon Wang Shi was kicked out, after he was kicked out, he went to smuggle passports and sell cats and dogs? It doesn't make sense logically!

2. Did Luyuan get lost in America? Is Lu Yuan from China? China people lost in the United States, you go to the embassy to check, six months have not found it?

3, the above two points are not dog blood, just bugs, everyone forgives. What's the situation in Jiang Lai? If I don't agree with a word, I'll find Lu Yuan. What makes me feel strange is that I can find Lu Yuan without a word, no matter whether Lu Yuan is at Grandma Peng Jiahe's house, in a restaurant or on the side of the road. It's like Jiang Lai installed a positioning system on Lu Yuan. However, Baidu map is biased, but Jiang Lai's bullet is not empty. Did Jiang Lai invest in a black technology company specializing in human body positioning?

4, there are flashbacks that have been vomited by thousands of people. If you are unhappy, flash back. What is flashback? Flashback in general plays is to express the inner activities of the characters, unfold the plot that has never been seen in the story, and pave the way for the feelings and plots of the characters. Flashback can be used in the play, but it is especially forbidden for writers to write plays in flashback. It doesn't matter if you flash back because you don't agree with a word, and it doesn't matter if you have unexpected plots and feelings. Otherwise, just like "Good Sir", it's all flashbacks. Except for the plot stretched by flashbacks, I don't say anything. I'm really drunk. Screenwriters are also self-aware. In the play, Da Peng's illusion magically communicates with Lu Yuan, which also doomed Lu Yuan to be an abnormal existence.

Just like the Love Letter between Beijing and Seattle, a puzzling Tang Wei in Macau and Wu Xiubo, a real estate agent in the United States, also have visions to express their stories. Even if the Love Letter between Beijing and Seattle sucks again, people are at least movies, which can be used as a high-energy expression. What did you do with this in Good Sir? Everyone says it's not good!

Lu Yuanyuan applied for a job as a chef, and then cooked a dish by herself. The restaurant drove the chef away and hired him instead. It happened that the restaurant was run by two people. Ha ha ha, this kind of thing is usually done by the man, but let the man do it?

6, a lot, Tucao has been powerless.

In the analysis of the script, there are also the analysis of the relationship between characters, main lines, sub-lines, themes, types and so on. I think this analysis (2) is over here. There are too many words written now, which will affect the viewing quality and visual fatigue of the audience. Secondly, "Good Sir" really has no merit in drama.