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Baba's excellent composition
In daily life or work and study, everyone has written a composition, so you must be familiar with all kinds of compositions. Composition is the transition from internal speech to external speech, that is, from a compressed and concise language that you can understand to a developed and standardized grammatical structure that others can understand. So, how to write a composition? The following is my father's excellent composition collected for you. Welcome to reading. I hope you will like it.

Dad's excellent composition 1 "Haha, you little boy, do you still want to hit your father?" You are a little tender! Mom, oh, no, it's me. Yes, I eat more salt than you! Haha, forget it, pay quickly! Let me see, lend me my life, 2 yuan, and ... 20 yuan forever! Pay the money quickly! " Dad said contemptuously to me.

"Give, is it not 20 yuan! Piece of cake! (Note: Actually, for me, this is not a trivial matter, it is an astronomical figure! ) "I said to my father helplessly.

Hey, why, why can't I surpass my dad in anything? I asked myself, ok! I (I) must surpass my father in the future, even if it is a game! Hmm! Starting today, I will practice hard. My father is always boasting about himself in front of me. His arrogance has long disgusted me. I must beat him!

"angry! Oh, my God, Holy Mary! ! Please. Now, I have only two ways: either you kill me or you let me go through customs smoothly! Oh, my God, the earth! Virgin Mary. Help me! " Alas, I heard the cry that I had to die to survive, but why did my father "break the sky with one life" and I "couldn't break the customs with five lives"? I began to imitate The Thinker again, so I made up my mind to "travel all over the world" and "break into the world with one life".

Ah, how hard work pays off! I finally beat dad!

"Well, I'm unlucky today. I lost to you, a little boy! Hey! "

Ha ha! I made it! I finally beat dad!

In my memory, my father has done a lot for me, but there is one thing I can't forget. Do you remember, Dad?

I was only five years old that day. That night, I suddenly had a high fever, and my father took my temperature, 39.9 degrees, which scared my father. My father immediately asked my mother to take the medical record and run out of the house behind my back. At one in the morning, my home is located in a remote suburb. Where can I get a bus? Dad ran to the hospital behind my back without hesitation.

It's about one stop from the hospital. Suddenly, my father and I seemed to fly. It turns out that you tripped over a stone, and your face seems to be hurt, but I am safe and sound. Why is this? It turns out that when you fell, you held me tightly in your arms and protected me with your own body. Stand up, you didn't protect the pain, but you still insisted on carrying me to the hospital. At this time, listening to my father's increasingly rapid breathing, I really hate my usual gluttony and laziness, and my weight has soared. I put my chubby hands around my father's neck tighter, but my heart felt as uncomfortable as a cat's paw scratching. When I arrived at the hospital, you didn't rest, but you panted for me to register ... until I had an intravenous drip, you were a little relieved. Looking at the slowly dripping potion, you still seem uneasy. From time to time, you tuck me in the corner of the quilt and touch my forehead with your hand. May be lost fluid, not so uncomfortable, slowly fell asleep. When I woke up, I found that the infusion was over, and even the infusion stand was taken away, while my father fell asleep in the chair next to the hospital bed. Looking at your old and swollen cheeks, I can't help crying.

Dad, thank you! You gave me life, a wonderful childhood and a happy life. ...

My father is an urban management law enforcement officer. He is 36 years old, but he looks very young. He is tall and muscular, like a fitness instructor. He has long hair and is very handsome. Because he wears a pair of glasses on his face, he looks very gentle, but in fact he has a bad temper, like a powder keg.

One day in the summer vacation, I was doing "learning mathematics to gain wisdom". Suddenly, a difficult problem stopped me like a roadblock. I didn't think about it, so I asked my father with a book in my arms. At this time, he is lying in bed watching online movies leisurely.

"Dad, I can't do the problem. Please teach me! " I invited him. He said impatiently, "Give me the book, why are you so troublesome!" " "He paused the film and began to study this topic. After he taught me about once, I still can't. He got angry and slapped me on the head, making me see stars and crying. "How can you be so stupid! "He said angrily," I think everyone is smarter than you! " "Then, he threw the book on the bed and kicked me hard, kicking me to tears.

I sat motionless, with my head down, feeling sad, afraid and wronged, and even didn't have the courage to look up at him. Mom came to persuade dad, and dad pushed her away: "Go away and do what you should do!" " "After a while, he regretted it a little and began to teach me a lesson. This time, he didn't beat and scold, but taught me calmly. He touched my head and seemed a little guilty. He said, "Does it hurt?" My tears immediately fell down.

I hope that one day, my father can get rid of the bad temper of the powder keg and become a perfect father.

It was a Friday night, and my father promised me to climb the mountain in Shan Zhi Park the next day. I don't want to mention how happy I am! Tossing and turning while sleeping, I can't sleep. I can't wait for dawn. But time is against me, crawling like a snail. I don't know how long it took me to fall asleep. The next morning, before the alarm clock woke me up, I got up excitedly. Mom saw it and said with a smile, "Hey, the sun is rising in the west today, and our John gets up more than me ...! "I interrupted my mother before she finished." Is dad up? " ""well, I'm washing! " Mom pointed to the bathroom and said. So I went straight to the bathroom. Just about to step into the bathroom, my father's phone rang and I thought, "Hello!" " "I started talking on the other end of the phone, and my father said while listening," I know, I know. " My heart thumped. Can't dad climb the mountain with me anymore? I leaned against the wall, very depressed. Dad kept talking on the phone. "No, I promised my son last night that I would go climbing with him today. I'll take care of it when I come back this afternoon. " Dad hung up the phone, walked out of the bathroom, saw me leaning against the wall and said neatly, "son, let's go!" " "I can't tell you how happy I am!

During this half day, my father and I had a good time, and our clothes were soaked with sweat, but the mystery in our hearts always lingered in our hearts. I finally couldn't hide, so I chased my father and asked him, "Dad, do you have anything important today?" Dad turned around and smiled and said, "Yes!" "Then why do you want to play with me? We can do it another day! " Dad stopped and said, "son, please remember, if you promise, you must do it, even if it is a small thing, that is responsibility!" " "I don't understand, but I still answered loudly:" I know! " "

My father and I walked home side by side with solid steps. ...

My father has a pair of thick eyebrows, under which are those kind big eyes. Under the tall nose, there is a singing mouth. My father is a famous handsome boy. To tell the truth, my father is not only handsome, but also talented in sports.

One morning after breakfast, my father picked up the badminton and patted it on his hand and said, "It's a nice day today. Shall we go out for exercise? " I readily agreed. "Well, just you? Dear daughter, I can't go. " Mom smiled and said to me, and made a face like dad's. Mom says we won't go out, and I don't agree with 1 million, but what can I do? Hey! Mother's expression is clearly a dagger in her heart. Dad gave me a gesture, and I understood his intention. As soon as I found out, I thought of a good idea. I leaned against my mother's face and said, "Good mother, you are so beautiful today. You are the most beautiful mother in the world. " My mother looked at me with a happy smile and asked me, "What's the matter with you, ghost girl?" I took the opportunity to say, "My beautiful mother is really smart, beautiful mother, shall we go out to play for a while?" My mother touched my head and pretended to be angry and said, "Say yes, just for a little while." We must come back early. I have to cook. "We are ready to equipment, set out.

When I arrived at the square, my father couldn't wait to pick up the badminton racket and play with my mother. Calling and calling, finally in the third game, I stared at badminton intently, expecting the final outcome, but to our surprise, my father won all three games. Mother said unconvinced, "well ... I'm not good at playing badminton." Let's play table tennis. " They changed table tennis again, but dad won. I admired it and said, "Dad, you are really amazing. I admire you so much. But why didn't you say anything before? " Dad said proudly, "Who is your father? This is called hiding! "

Dad and mom, I like dad better. Sometimes I am attracted by his sense of humor; Sometimes I am moved by his persistent concern. Dad, I love you!

My father has a pair of little beards, one on the left and the other on the right. His eyes are bright. If I am doing something or doing something bad, my father knows that the most special thing about my father is his nose. His nose is very sensitive. For example, today mom is cooking in the kitchen and dad is sitting on the sofa reading the newspaper, so he can smell what mom is doing today.

My father and I are both sexually oriented. I often call my father Mr. Chen, and my father often calls me Xiao Chen. Why? Because, dad is an adult and I am a child. Originally, I wanted to call my father Chen, but my father said to me, "I am old, just call me Chen." But my father will never be old in my heart. He's like a good friend of mine. Every morning, my father and I go to work in the fields together. When we go home at noon every day, my father is sweating profusely. Dad is really a good man. I really admire my father!

My father is not only a good man, but also a good father. One day, it was raining heavily and there was a strong wind. After school, I waited for my father to pick me up at the school gate. After waiting for a long time, dad came. He just picked me up with a red umbrella. I ran over with an umbrella and accused my father: "why are you so slow?" People are waiting to die. " Dad didn't scold me or accuse him. He just said to me, "Be on time next time." On my way home, a gust of wind blew away my umbrella. My father and I went home in the rain. I was not caught in the rain, but my father caught a cold. After the umbrella was blown away, my father immediately took off his coat and sheltered me from the wind. He was caught in the rain all the way. Hey! I shouldn't blame my father for being so kind to me. In this way, my father and I reached an agreement. No matter what the other party has done to make you angry, you shouldn't blame others. If you break the agreement, you will be fined for one week.

My father is so nice. I love my good father.

My father is a soldier. Although he works hard and is excellent, he sometimes looks like a "careless" person in life.

Let's meet my father here. He is a burly man with a flat head, a pair of bright eyes embedded in a rectangular face, a fairly straight nose under his eyes and a nagging mouth under his nose. This mouth reminds me not to be a careless person all day. Whenever this happens, I will laugh, because he is a famous "careless" in our family. Let me talk about two things.

Once, my father was going on a business trip. He is neatly dressed and his coat and trousers have just been ironed. Then, he stood in front of the mirror and admired himself. He nodded, smiled with satisfaction, and then went downstairs with his handbag. I saw him go downstairs from the window, paused, and then ran back in a hurry. As soon as he got home, he quickly changed his shoes, and my doubts were slowly solved. It turned out that he went downstairs in slippers. When he put on shiny leather shoes, I laughed so hard that my stomach ached. At this time, my father knew what I was laughing at, and he smiled a little embarrassed himself. When will this carelessness be corrected? How careless!

On another occasion, when he came home from work, he felt too tired and wanted to take a hot bath to get comfortable. Before washing, he said to himself, "Don't be careless!" " "I smiled to myself. I specially checked the water heater when he came out humming a tune from the shower. "Why is the water heater still on? "I asked my father with a smile. He turned off the water heater helplessly. My mother and I both shook our heads and sighed, but my father smiled and said, "I won't forget it next time!" "

My "motor dad"! Get rid of this carelessness quickly!

My father, with curly hair, medium-sized eyes, khaki eyes and a pair of oversized black-rimmed glasses, is unusual! Besides, he has a foreign nose and a mouth that can't stop all day.

Dad has three characteristics:

Feature 1: Sloppy

He is careless in his work. In our family, I often hear my father ask for help-where are my glasses? He said that when I get up in the morning, when I do my homework, and even when I take a shower. Once, I remember it best. One Tuesday morning, I was lying in bed in a daze. I heard my father put his glasses on my bed and began to sleep again. Ten minutes later, he woke up, sat straight on the bed and cried, where are my glasses? Look for it! Come and help me find it! Hey! Dad, you really need to change this problem.

Feature 2: Too enthusiastic.

He was very enthusiastic when he met the children in our class. For example, I just finished my calligraphy class and came out with Chen Jiaxin. Father saw it and smiled and said, Oh, it's Chen Jiaxin! Your home is in the Central Plains, not far away. I will send it to you, too! She said yes. We got in the car. But dad is only one step away from the Central Plains, because he is too enthusiastic, but dad said, I will take you to buy some snacks! He took us to huangshan district for a long run. As a result, Chen Jiaxin came home late. It's already twelve noon, and her mother is very worried. Dad, your enthusiasm is very good. Although you have not gone too far, I still want to remind you not to go too far, or you will burn others (including yourself).

Feature 3: Love beauty

My father loves beauty very much. He spends ten minutes by the wardrobe every morning to find out the best clothes to wear, regardless of spring, summer, autumn and winter. Therefore, he always catches a cold. Dad, your temperature is ruined by your behavior. You wear a rash in summer, a cold in winter, and make friends with runny nose and tears. I want to tell you that everyone loves beauty, but we should also pay attention to our health!

This is my father. I like my father very much.

Dad's excellent composition 9 Dad has a low education and little knowledge, but I want to thank him.

My father is a careless man, a "two-faced man". He treats people kindly outside and quarrels with his mother at home. Even so, he still cares about my study.

Let's say today, I was copying words when my father suddenly came up to me and asked, "Where did you copy words?" I pointed casually and said, "well, so many, to the place where the wavy line is drawn." Dad added: "Do you want to write next? Copy it several times? " "Don't write below, copy it again," I said as I wrote. "This can be done in five minutes, Wang Congying. Please help me copy it twice!" Dad said, "Hey, do you think I'm writing a copy again?" So many words! "I heard my father's words and protested. Although I know in my heart that my father did this to me in the hope that I would be good. "Tell me, what's wrong with copying it twice? "Said along while, or from the father's imperial edict, wrote it again, the in the mind don't know what it is like, but not calm. My father started pointing at my writing posture, and later said, "My head is too oblique, too low." After a while, I said, "Why did you put your feet here? "I didn't stop until I finished copying. After that, dad will test me to review the knowledge in the classification. " Say a few weather proverbs! """The sunset is carmine, there is no rain and no wind-"In the process of reciting, I saw my father's bloodshot eyes and knew that he stayed up late. I seem to see my father running over to deliver food sweating; I saw my father holding a kitchen knife and chopping the ice hard; Seeing my father standing at the door, the moonlight stared at the blue sky-suddenly, my heart surged like a wave like never before.

Father's love is like a towering mountain, which can't be abandoned through ups and downs. Dad, I want to thank you!

My father's excellent composition 10 My father is a forest policeman. He has big eyes under his thick eyebrows. Wearing a police uniform, you look very powerful and energetic. He is meticulous about his work. I admire my father very much, but he has an ugly nickname at home-"lazy father", because my father works late every day and has no time to take care of himself.

Once my father just came back from the mountain not far from my home. I was convulsed with joy at the sight of my father. The father asked, "What's the matter? What happened? What are you happy about? " I said to my father, "Dad, take a snapshot and look in the mirror". Father looked at it and said, "Hey, let my little darling laugh!" " "My father went to shave, my mother said with a smile, see you lazy. ".

Another time, my father's hair grew, and my mother asked him to shave it, but he refused again and again. Then one day when my father came back, I saw him wearing a hat and quietly taking it off from behind. "Ha ha," I laughed, and my mother said, "The police are not allowed to cut all his hair!" Dad said, "then you don't have to cut your hair!" " "Mom said," you are really lazy. "

I admire my father too. In order to protect the forest and the small animals in the forest, he patrols the forest every day. When he came back, he was exhausted. I miss my poor father! I am busy drawing water for my father. This time, I realized that my father is a kind and strict father at home, but he is an excellent forest policeman outside. My father is a good father who makes me wonder whether he is humorous, dedicated or strict. I admire and like this veritable "lazy father" more and more.

This is my lazy father-an amiable and respectable forest policeman.

Dad's excellent composition 1 1 I have a lovely and respectable father, who is my most admired person. My father is a 37-year-old pig. Although he is the laziest of the 12 zodiac, he is very capable. My father runs a garage to support his family.

Dad likes to have a flat head, big eyes under heavy eyebrows, a glib tongue under a high nose and two rows of white and neat teeth. Dad is slightly fat, snores like thunder, and is as strong as an ox. He usually likes to wear red clothes and blue jeans, so he looks very energetic. My father is very generous. I remember once, my father saw that my roller skates were very old and said to me, son, your roller skates are very old. Let me buy you a new pair of skates! I thought to myself: it is not easy for dad to make money. I'd better save some money for my father! I said to my father: no, dad, I have enough roller skates, so I don't need to buy any more. Father's face suddenly showed a happy smile. Although my father agreed, he bought me a pair of roller skates in private. When I saw these brand-new roller skates, I had an impulse to cry.

My father is not only generous, but also very concerned about his children. I remember once, I accidentally cut my finger on the glass. Father rushed over, took out the band-aid and put it on my hand. Father asked me: Does it still hurt? If it still hurts, let's go to the hospital. I said, it doesn't hurt too much, thanks, dad. It was not until I felt no pain that my father put down his mind. My father works hard. On one occasion, a dozen cars came to my garage. My father repaired it from morning till night and didn't eat all day. I fell asleep after dinner because I was so tired at night.

This is my father, I love my father, and I am proud of having such a good father!

Dad's excellent composition 12 My family is incomplete. I only have a father, but I have no mother's love since I was a child. I only heard that my mother "flew away" when I was very young and never came back to see my daughter. I dare not ask my father, so I have to hide my desire for love without my mother in my heart. Although I lack maternal love, I am lucky to have a good father: "Being a good father and mother raised me, taught me how to be a man, cared for me, gave me warmth, and made me thank him from the bottom of my heart." So, dad, I want to say to you, ""I love you. "Because your love for me is like countless little stars in the sky, there are endless words, but I have been afraid to say. Let me say, "Thank you, Dad. "

Dad, I can't tell you your love for me one by one, but there is a love that will always be engraved in my mind.

I remember one Spring Festival, you and I went back to our hometown by car for the Spring Festival. The car was crowded with people. Several of us only have one seat, but you gave me your seat. You held my hand tightly while driving on the rough road, but you stood trembling for fear that I might stumble. I fell asleep unconsciously. A voice rang out from the obscurity: "Alas, poor bear the wind! Look, dad is afraid that his daughter will catch cold, so he takes off his big clothes and covers her. He was shivering with cold. " I was suddenly awakened by this sentence. I opened my sleepy eyes and saw that my father had put on my coat. He stood there trembling. When you see yourself awake, you say, "You will arrive when you wake up. Aren't you frozen? " I nodded hard, as if my throat was stuck by something. Tears unwillingly swirled in her eyes.

Dad, I will always remember your concern. Thank you for giving me the warmth of my home, a happy childhood and the courage to move forward. Now let me say to you: "thank you, you have worked hard!" " You will always be my greatest and most selfless father.

My father is a people's policeman, of medium height, with a high nose, short and neat black hair, and a pair of small and magical eyes always shining with wisdom. In my mind, my father is a very responsible person.

Dad is serious and enthusiastic about his work. I remember on the 29th of the twelfth lunar month, my father and I went back to my hometown to celebrate the New Year with my grandparents. It took us more than four hours to go home by car. Dad's phone rang before dinner. I asked, "Whose mobile phone is it?" Dad said, "Unit." After answering the phone, grandpa asked, "What can I do for you?" Dad said: "This year, the south of our country suffered a serious snow disaster, and the unit took me to Guizhou to support the disaster relief work." Grandpa asked again, "When are you going?" Dad said, "I'll go back to work now and leave tomorrow morning." "But you didn't come back for a year! Can't others go? " Grandpa said unhappily. "The Chinese New Year is coming soon. If someone else goes, he can't be reunited with his family. Let me go! " Grandpa said nothing more. In this way, my father turned to support Guizhou. My father didn't come back until a month after I started school. Looking at his thin body, my eyes were moist.

Dad not only loves his job, but also helps others. I remember one night, when I was about to go to bed, the phone at home rang and it was my father's again. After answering the phone, my father said, "A colleague at work suddenly fell ill at home and couldn't get up. I have to help. " Say that finish like a gust of wind. The next morning, when I went to school, my father came home exhausted. It turned out that dad rushed to his colleague's house that night and quickly helped him to the hospital, where he stayed until the situation was stable.

My father is such an ordinary person, but he is very tall in my mind. I love my father!

My father's excellent composition 14 I remember a few weeks ago on Friday, my father gave me a great education. I know he loves me and cares about me.

That day, I went to the farmer's market to see my father. As soon as I got there, I asked my father for 2 yuan money. I saw my father with a sullen face. I think something bad must have happened to him I said cautiously, "Can you give me 2 yuan to buy food?" Dad didn't make any noise, so he asked me to go to him and said to me with a straight face, "How much money do you have left?" I lied: "There are still 300 yuan." In fact, there is still about 100, which I played on the computer. "Do you have more than 100?" Dad's words brought me into a nightmare. My mood has become tense. I stammered, "Yes." "Where is it?" I tried to lie again, but my father saw it. He said, "Stop lying, I get it." I'm still wondering if he will try again. I really know. I said I bought something. He told me to go home and think about it. What did I buy? He came home from the stall and kindly said to me, "It doesn't matter if you make mistakes. It is important to have the courage to admit mistakes. " Only then did I confirm that he knew. I held back my tears and said honestly. I thought he would hit me, but he cried. Those are not crocodile tears, but tears I care about. I cried too. Dad said earnestly, "it doesn't matter if I make a mistake." I made a mistake and almost ruined our family. But I have corrected it now. Don't inherit the "father's business", it will make people look down on ... "I am full of thoughts, only looking down at the earth, thinking about who is" unforgivable "before and now. Tears kept pouring out. For me, he shed tears, and I silently vowed not to indulge in online games. Because his deep love touched me.

After that, I made up my mind to love my father more. I saved money to buy my father his favorite coffee. And study harder, I want to thank him with my grades.

Although my father and I are father and son, we are as close as brothers. Maternal love is great, but the fatherly love my father gave me is more respectable. I can't let him look down on me, I want to repay him with excellent results.

Dad's excellent composition 15 We always encounter many strange things in our daily life. Happy and sad, some make people laugh, some make people burst into tears, and some make people angry.

However, my family is full of fun and enjoys it. There are three people in our family, which can be divided into three classes. My father is a serious and solemn "chairman", my mother is an industrious "general manager" and I am a carefree "citizen".

Dad is really qualified as the "chairman". He seldom interferes with housework. Every day when he comes home from work, he sits on the sofa and reads the newspaper. Most people don't cook, just eat ready-made food. Usually, our orders to the chairman must be carried out.

Mom can't use the word "general manager" better. My mother is very hardworking and capable, and all the work at home is covered. Get up early in the morning to boil water and cook; At noon, in a hurry, come and go in a hurry; Cook it until it is neither soft nor hard at night. At the weekend, my mother, the "general manager", let alone have a rest. Dirty clothes are piled up in the washing machine one by one, and mother wants to wash them; Bowls are put in the basin one by one, and mother wants to brush them; Sometimes help me check my homework and solve my problems.

Although I am the most ordinary "citizen", I am regarded as a princess. Clothes to reach out, rice to mouth. It is also leisurely and carefree, not worrying about eating and wearing. However, my princess also has an arduous task, that is, I must read the book well, or my "princess" will suffer!

This is us, an interesting home. I grew up happily in this family!