Songs are different from poems and essays. There is music and words. Music pays attention to unity, the unity of style, melody, rhythm, emotion, fragment and structure. Contrast is also included in unity.
I wrote a program on the computer and sang endlessly for three hours, not music. There is no unification. After listening to it, I have no impression at all. I can't leave a word in my mind. There is no concrete, vivid and distinct musical image (music is the opposite of these). There used to be a group of western musicians doing "wallpaper music".
The composer doesn't want everyone to concentrate on his music, and he doesn't remember to coax everyone to walk and chat. Their main purpose is to use music as a tool to create an atmosphere. This kind of music also has its rules and structure. China's rap music can be seen everywhere. I have heard storytelling in northern Shaanxi, and most of them are blind. Holding the big three strings, hanging two or six sons (playing the board), talking and singing for two hours. It's good. I haven't studied it. And his music and brand.
But friends write songs, not this form of music. So writing sentence by sentence, two or three articles in a row, feels wrong. More like free verse than lyrics.
I read a lot of lyrics, some are long and some are short, and the paragraphs are not necessarily scattered. There is no slightly unified text and format, and it is done at one go. After reading it for a long time, I can't break it or solve it. According to the original paragraph, it won't work either. Cannot be deconstructed. I think when writing lyrics and songs, we should learn the form. With the concept of musical form, it is smooth.
When a composer looks at the lyrics and good words, there are always a few incisive words.
Read the whole article and read it several times. To deconstruct. Let's see what form, two stages and three stages do you want to introduce separately? The last few sentences are not in the paragraph. Let's arrange the ending. Many times, the first paragraph of music has been written, but the words in the second paragraph can't be put in. People who write lyrics should have their own design at first, which may be called modern poetry according to temperament. His modern poems are so well written that others read them just like Hu's. In fact, there is a theory behind it. It's not random, it's a purposeful statement, so I won't say much here. If you write a stream of consciousness, it is difficult to compose music.