Cao Xiaoyu, Grade Three, Xiaping Central School
If I were a pen, I would never be unhappy from birth to death. I was bought by a child. She loves me very much. I saw many pens in her pencil box. I quickly became good friends with them. They are erasers, pencils and pens, and I am a fountain pen. My master has been with me for the longest time, and I feel very proud! Once, my master's teacher assigned a lot of homework, and she almost used me up. When she saw that I was running out, she asked her mother to buy a new pen, which I have never used. Finally, one day, my master's new pen ran out of ink. He picked me up again and kissed me. I started my service career again, just when my ink was used up and my master's words were finished. The young master was very happy and kissed me again.
Since then, my refill has been changed by the young master, and I am very happy to be used by the young master all the time, because I can help the young master learn.
This is my fountain pen for happiness.
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Composition 2: If I am a 400-word pen, if I am a 400-word pen, 500 words.
Pen, a common object of people. Things are rare, so pens are worthless, not rare, not rare. However, I just want to be such a worthless, ordinary pen that can serve people ~
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If I were a pencil, I would draw pictures for my little master with my little rubber brother, and draw his beautiful fantasy for cartoonists and designers to draw. If I were a water-based pen or pen, I would write for my master and write beautiful articles containing various emotions; If I were a watercolor pen or a colored pen, I would fill in the rhythmic colors for the painter to make the picture richer and fuller; If I were a marker, I would make people mark it with conspicuous handwriting so that people could see it at a glance; If I were a brush, I could provide people with the writing style of ancient China culture, such as regular script, running script, cursive script, official script and various forms of calligraphy fonts. No matter what kind of pen I am or what I am used for, there is always me behind the finished work.
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I want to become a pen and serve the people silently, so that they can write and draw stories in their hearts and write down what they want to write. I want to be a pen. Anyone who buys me will be useful, but the owner who buys me will not care about my credit at all, but I have no complaints. At least when I am exhausted, I still make a contribution, because even without me, the master can choose other pens as assistants and still finish the masterpiece. I should be happy. The master chose me, not any other pen.
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That's what I thought. Although I can't write a pen, I at least want to do something for others, instead of asking for a reward like a pen.
Composition 3: "I am a pen composition" 1200 words I am a pen composition.
Rule 1: I wrote 350 words with my favorite pen.
To say which pen I like best, I will tell you without hesitation: I like the golden mechanical pencil my sister gave me best. Do you know why I especially like to use that pen? Because my sister gave it to me. It wears a little golden hat on its head, and a rabbit pendant hangs beside it, which seems to be long hair hanging down from a well-off person. The little white rabbit painted on the pen, with two long white ears and blinking eyes, is smiling at me ~ The little white rabbit looks naughty and cute, how cute it is ~ This pen is comfortable to hold, but there will inevitably be some tinkling sounds when writing. I like listening to this tinkling sound very much, as if my sister were talking to me kindly. I have always cherished this pen. I haven't dropped it since my sister gave it to me. This pen is not only a pen, but also contains my sister's deep affection for me. I will definitely cherish it more. Level 5: Dragon Soul Out-of-Body Experience.
Chapter Two: A Pen
a pen
In my pencil box, I cherish a delicate pen. Every time I see this treasured pen, I can't help remembering it.
I remember it was a summer day, and my mother gave me five yuan to buy a pen. I took the money to the stationery store, chose a favorite pen and walked home.
On the way. I want to go home quickly, so I changed from walking slowly to running quickly. Because I ran too fast, suddenly, I met an aunt. I fell heavily to the ground. Although I was not hurt, my pen was broken. I began to cry sadly. Aunt saw it, quickly helped me up and said with concern, "Where did you fall, little friend?" I said hesitantly, "I didn't fall ~ Coco was broken by my new pen ~" My aunt comforted me and said, "Little friend, don't cry!" With that, she quickly opened her backpack and took out a pen from it. She handed it to me and said, "Don't cry, little friend.
~ this pen is for you ~ "I thought: there is no such good person in the world. She must have lied to me. Aunt saw that I didn't answer, so she put the pen in my pocket and left. I took out my pen and looked at it. Ah, this is a very exquisite brand-new pen. I watched my aunt's distant figure from a distance. I think she is tall and beautiful. I think the world is full of love. As long as you observe and experience with your heart, you will certainly find the warmth between people.
Article 3: If I have a magic composition.
If I had a magic pen, Tan Lili and Ma Liang of Class 4, Xiaolan Town Central Primary School, Zhongshan City, Guangdong Province did many things for the poor with their magic pens, and I admired him very much. If I had a magic pen, I would also help.
People do something meaningful.
First of all, I went to a remote poor mountain village and drew several large modern schools, houses, hospitals and so on.
Those children who are out of school, like us, sit in the bright classroom and study.
Let those homeless people move in
New home, you can also go to the hospital for treatment for free. I also want to draw a medicine that can bring the dead back to life, so that those dead martyrs can do it.
The dead SARS patients returned to the world because their relatives missed them very much. If they are resurrected, their relatives will.
People don't have to live that sad life. I also want to draw a vaccine that can eliminate SARS. No one suffers from SARS.
This vaccine will prevent and treat SARS, and people with SARS will be cured by injecting this vaccine. Jeanso
Some people live happily, without sorrow and trouble.
How I wish I had a magic pen ~ so I can realize my wish.
Composition 4: "I am a pen" 900 words I am a writing brush.
Peiying School 7 (3) Banguo
I am a writing brush. One day, the worker's uncle sent a bamboo and many fine hairs to the machine. I turned around countless times and fell asleep unconsciously. When I woke up from my sleep, I found myself beautiful and put on beautiful yellow clothes. He is wearing a white hat and white hair, lying in the warehouse. I have many brothers and sisters around me, and we are getting to know each other more and more. Everybody, hold each other, and I'll start talking one by one.
I don't know how many days and nights passed, and finally one day the warehouse door opened. My brothers and sisters and I were loaded on the transport vehicle, which drove and drove and finally stopped at the gate of a supermarket. I was sent to this supermarket and put on the counter. Wow ~ There are so many friends here ~ There are rubber sister, ruler brother, paper uncle, crayon aunt and pencil brother. We greeted each other and soon everyone got to know each other.
One day, an aunt passed by me, saw me and held me in her hand. She really couldn't put it down and decided to give me to her daughter as a gift. I jumped into menstruation's handbag happily and followed her to their home. My master is a little girl. When she first met me, she was so happy that she made me go round and round. The little girl bought another bottle of ink and put me in it for a turn, as if washing my hair. Then, the little girl held me tightly with her hand and drew on her uncle's paper. I don't know what she is doing. Finally, she drew a beautiful picture on her uncle's paper. Later, I went to school with my young master and played games together. It was fun.
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A month later, the little girl's mother bought her a new brush, which looked much better than me, so the little master threw me into a small pen container and ignored me again. There are many old brushes that have been discarded like me. Everyone said they liked the new and hated the old, especially Uncle Paper, who was flushed with anger.
I must help her get rid of the habit of wasting things. Thinking of this, I jumped out of the pen container and wrote a few lines on my uncle's paper: "Each of our brushes is made by the worker's uncle through labor. If it is wasted, it is a disrespect for the workers' uncles. " When the little girl came home from school. After reading these words, she felt extremely ashamed
From then on, I was used by that little girl and we became good friends again.
[Comment] The article is based on "a brush", with concise and fluent language and clear and accurate views. The story is clear and structured, which left a deep impression on the readers.
(Instructor: Hu Guangbin)
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Composition 5: If I had a brush by Ma Liang, I would draw some mountains, rivers and plants on the earth to make the world colorful. Trees drawn with magic strokes will not wither, making the earth green forever, purifying the air and making the world no longer polluted by black smoke. Painted Mountain will enable people to exercise and climb to the top of the mountain every morning to exercise. Old people can also shoot Tai Ji Chuan on the mountain and watch the sunrise, sunset, morning glow and sunset glow on the high mountain top&if I had a brush from Ma Liang, I would draw some birds, animals, insects and fish on the earth to make the world colorful and not boring, with birds chirping and fish swimming happily in the stream. Rabbits, squirrels, elephants, they play in the forest, and the world will become very lively. I will draw a skill for each of these animals to improve the walking speed of rabbits by ten times, so that humans will not catch rabbits. Only in this way can birds fly higher and faster, hunters can only see their passing figures, and more importantly, they can catch birds in a haystack & if I have a magic pen from Ma Liang, I will draw a magical machine called Disability Happiness, which can make disabled people no different from ordinary people, and can use it to make up for their injured hands and their feet. Moreover, I want to sell this machine to the disabled free of charge, so that the disabled will not be regarded with special respect, light up the darkness of their inner difficulties and hardships, and let the disabled live happily on the earth without being discriminated by some people & if I have a magic pen of Ma Liang, I will draw a school and a library, so that poor children in mountainous areas can read aloud in bright classrooms, do aerobics that they must do every day on the spacious playground, and let them go to school. Reading all kinds of well-known comic books and fairy tales with all kinds of knowledge in the library, when I grow up, I will make great contributions to the motherland with my rich knowledge and become a giant pillar of the new era&if I have a magic pen of Ma Liang, I will also draw the spiritual qualities of all kinds of people, cross out the words greedy by thieves, and draw a picture of helping others and being indomitable for people all over the world. There will be no more quarrels, robberies and car accidents in the world &&if I have a magic pen of Ma Liang, I will use it to benefit the people and let them live a happy life! Grade 6 of Houpu Primary School: Zhang Yuyuan
Composition 6: "If I had a magic pen" 400 words if I had a magic pen.
If I had a magic pen.
Key words of this article:
If I have a magic pen, Liang, a pen that can make things come true. If I have a magic pen, I want to draw a leafy tree, which is full of all kinds of fruits that can cure all diseases, to help the poor who have no money to treat diseases and relieve the pain of diseases. If I had a magic pen, I would draw a lot of gold coins to help the poor with difficulties and live a good life. If I had a magic pen, I would draw a lot of school supplies and various books and give them to children in poor mountainous areas, bringing them knowledge and happiness. If I had a magic pen, I would draw some strong big houses for the homeless to live in. If I had a magic pen, I would draw green trees and beautiful flowers and plants to protect our environment and beautify our earth. If I had a magic pen, I would draw a magic wand for my teacher. As long as I wave my wand, students who don't listen carefully in class can concentrate on listening carefully, and the teacher doesn't have to work too hard. If I have a magic pen, I will draw myself a pair of wings, not only to visit the great rivers and mountains of the motherland, but also to fly around the world with my magic pen to help more people in need.
Composition 7: "If I were a pen" 900 words if I were a pen.
Grade One of Shenzhen Railway Middle School 1 Class Xie Xiaolin
Everything in the world has its own merits. I wish I were a pen and let it exert extraordinary power.
I wish I were a piece of chalk, held tightly in the teacher's hand, leaving my mark on the blackboard and a square Chinese character in China. The teacher taught the students what he knew, while I lay on the blackboard and listened to the teacher quietly. In the mountain village, I no longer call it chalk, but chalk head, because I only have a short body. At school, I was cherished by my classmates because they knew it was a tool for teachers to impart knowledge. Without me, they will lose their knowledge. In fact, I know that I will face death after birth, but I am not afraid, because when I see a pair of eyes eager for knowledge and students who want to see the knowledge of the whole world, there is no need to be afraid of death. As Sima Qian said, it is a great pleasure to die more than Mount Tai or less than a feather, and to make a difference in the world with great courage.
I wish I were a paintbrush, held by a painter, and followed him to Shan Ye, fields and rivers to collect scenery every day. I followed him all the time. Help him present the most beautiful and authentic side of the world to everyone. Every day, he holds me and waves on white paper. I show the most beautiful and gorgeous colors under my twisted body, and let amazing works flow out from under me. If you compare him to an excellent conductor, I am a dancer with him.
I wish I were a pencil, held by a gentle little hand. He just learned to hold a pen, hold me tightly and keep playing. Holding me tightly and doodling on white paper, he cried excitedly when he saw lines appearing. And then again,
In order to start his masterpiece, my mother came in to teach him to write. He hugged me and slowly wrote his name on the paper, which was ugly and crooked. But I am extremely excited, because my appearance has taught another human literacy and knowledge. My appearance will accompany him all his life. Knowledge is like a vast ocean, and my pen is a boat in the ocean, leading him to soar in the ocean of knowledge.
Whether I am a chalk, a brush or a pencil, I am willing to lead you to explore the world. Although my life is short, I am willing to spend my youth and life to help you become talents ~ Please join me in the treasure house of knowledge ~ Knowledge is as endless as the ocean, please join me in exploring, learning and possessing knowledge.
Comments: This is an exam composition. Although it is not perfect, it is still a good article. The advantages of the article in choosing words and sentences are as follows: paragraphs begin with parallelism and quote some famous sayings; The advantages of the article in conception and conception: the little author chose the most common object-pen to express her selfless dedication, and the article has a high conception.
Instructor: Lin Mindong
Recommended teacher: Lin Mindong
Composition 8: If I were a pen, write 800 words: //. xwdoc ./ If I were a pen.
If I were a pen.
Xuwen Haishihua Writing School Class 3 (6) Huang Bin
One day, I was walking in the street. Suddenly, the old man appeared in front of me, stuffed the elixir into my mouth and disappeared. I feel that there is a divine power in my body, and I feel as if I am going to be 72 years old. Whatever it is, have some fun first.
Let's talk about fun.
I turned into an expensive pen and lay in a stationery store. I just wanted to say hello to the pen next to me when a clear cry came from my side: "This pen is really beautiful" ~ Dad, I want it. Then, a strong voice came from my ear: "OK, I'll buy it for you, but you should take good care of it." I wanted to chat with my pen, but I didn't expect to buy it so soon.
In this way, I was taken home by my little master, who often used me to write homework assigned by the school teacher. Sometimes too much "blood" is lost, and the little master's exercise book is dirty. The young master scolded me, and I endured it. I changed my pen. Once, the young master quarreled with his friends because of a trivial matter. The young master is eloquent, and the other party is speechless. In a rage, he picked me up and threw it at the window to vent his anger Young master gently picked me up and cried. Later, the little master's father repaired me, and the little master stopped crying.
One day, the young master picked me up and watched it over and over again when he was idle, trying to satisfy his hunger. Young master's mother said to take him out to play, and young master quickly threw me into the ink bottle and went out to play. The smell in the ink bottle is really unpleasant. I'm almost an ancient ape. Who will change me back? Then the old man appeared in front of me and told me that I could restore my human form by turning three times. I struggled in the ink bottle for more than an hour and didn't move half a circle. At this time, the young master came back. He was playing with the Transformers on the table, the trophy of this trip, and accidentally knocked down the ink bottle. I just fell to the ground and turned three times and hit the door. I screamed and my father woke me up: "What's your name?" ,
I opened my eyes and suddenly realized that I was dreaming. Looking at dad, I smiled foolishly.
Comments:
This article is so interesting. Very interesting, (the idea is strange, showing the rich and bold imagination of the young author). "I" accidentally got the old man's elixir and experienced a pen-to-pen world. The experience of "pen" takes place in real life, and the author skillfully applies these experiences to imaginary composition, which is really good.
Instructor: Chen Chunliu
Composition 9: "If I were a candle" 500 words If I had a pair of wings, I would spread my wings and fly in the blue sky; If I were a bright moon, I would always shine on the person I love; If I were a smart doctor, I would free mankind from the troubles of diseases; If ... I don't have that big wish, I just want to be an obscure candle.
With the development of science and technology, I have almost withdrawn from the world stage. Humans have long had electric lights and forgotten me. I am covered with thick dust. I can't remember the last time my master lit me up, but I'm not depressed. I believe that one day I will contribute to my master.
One night, there was a power outage at home, and the owner was very depressed. He rummaged through the flashlight in the drawer and unexpectedly found me. I was very surprised, but I didn't expect the host to throw me into the trash can and say to himself, "This thing is too dark and takes up too much space." I am so wronged, thinking: I used to be your baby! After a while, the host didn't find a flashlight. He remembered me, held me in his hand and rubbed me gently. At this time, he lit up me. My tears excited for you danced beautifully with the gentle breeze. The host looked at the fire dance and smiled happily.
After a while, the electricity came and I finished my life. Yes, I shed tears, but this is not a sad and painful tear, but a happy and regretless tear that runs through my life.
I think everyone has his own strengths, and we should try our best to contribute to others. No matter how big or small our contribution is, we will never regret it.
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Tears flow from songs to emotions. Songs, like flowing springs, wash your heart; Songs, like a ray of soft sunshine, illuminate your vision; Songs, like gentle spring breeze, sweep away your sadness ... If I were a song, I would ring gently by candlelight at night. There are no words, only light and rippling melodies. I would like to turn into a song that rings quietly in my mother's ear, turning words into jumping notes, driving away my mother's fatigue and smoothing her frowning brows. My mother is the embodiment of the sea, and she accepted my dribs and drabs with a broad mind. Mother is the embodiment of the flower sea, decorating my dream with clusters of flowers. Mother is the embodiment of sunshine, weaving my life with light hands, and building a brilliant layer for the blue sky powder I grew up in. If I were a song, I would ring it gently in the quiet morning. I want to spin my happy notes for those children who have lost their parents, so that they can feel the touch of life in sweet songs, let them burn their dreams in a beautiful morning, let them stop crying and feeling inferior, let them pick up their wings again and fly in the blue sky, so that they can say with a happy smile every morning: "I am very happy ~" Poor child, God has given you such a bumpy fate that you can't live in love like other children. A child without a mother is like grass. No, life has not abandoned you. Look up at the sky, how bright the sun is ~ Far away, happiness is waving to you ~ If I were a song, I would ring it gently in the hot summer. I want to play all over the stadium and every corner. I want to use my cheerful dance to make farmers' uncles stop cursing the summer heat, let their sweat melt in the joy of a bumper harvest, let their mood fly after the sweat dries up, and let them stretch their frowning brows. A wisp of fragrant rice, a handful of ears of rice in Huang Chengcheng and a bag of glistening rice all contain a lot of hard sweat and pain. Let me gently ring it, bring happiness and happiness to their hearts, and let it settle quietly in their hearts forever. If I were a song, I would like to sing every corner, so that the planet we live in is full of smiles and happiness, loneliness and sadness will disappear forever, and happiness and happiness will last forever.
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