Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 1. Dad, you have a high position in my mind. However, I still want to give you some advice. Do you mind?
Dad, in recent years, you often go out to eat and drink at night and come home very late. But you know what? This not only affects your sleep, but also many cars run red lights at night! Seeing this, you must be thinking: the police just detained those drivers who ran red lights! But, you know, people who run red lights happen without the police!
Also, once I cut the sofa at home, I know you like that sofa very much, but you must understand your daughter's mood! I know, dad. Next time, it won't scratch the sofa at home or damage other furniture. Here is another view. Dad, since I learned calligraphy, you have often read my handwriting. When I come back, you write some examples and draw some legends. I have no problem with which words should be written properly. But, dad, I want to tell you that now that I'm writing, can you write examples instead of legends on my working paper?
Ok, dad, now that I'm grown up, such as drawing a sofa, I won't do it anymore, and my pen writing has made great progress. When I win the prize, you can teach me to write Chinese calligraphy. Can you make a deal? Dad, I hope you can do as I say. When you correct my opinion, I have grown up!
Mom's comment: This is a composition that the child learned Chinese test questions a few days ago. First of all, thank the teacher for giving the child a chance to express his love to his father. After reading this article, my father was deeply touched and wanted to "repent". I didn't expect the child to talk and laugh with him all day, and there are so many opinions, all of which are very pertinent and worth thinking about and correcting.
Dad, I want to say excellent composition 2 to you. Mom and Dad, first of all, I want to thank you for bringing my sister and me into this beautiful world. You gave us life and let us grow up healthily.
Mom and Dad, you always let my sister and I eat better and sleep better than you. Once, you came home from work and bought eight baked wheat cakes to eat with us. Our sisters each ate two biscuits, while you each ate only one. I asked you to eat another one, but you said sadly, "Yin Yin, Yiyi, each of you has one of the remaining two baked cakes!" " We're not hungry, let's eat while it's hot! "Also, the bed you sleep in is always so hard, and our sister's bed is always as soft as cotton. How comfortable we sleep, how uncomfortable you sleep.
Mom and dad, you are so cute. Every Friday, when we come home from school, you always put delicious snacks in front of us so that we can eat enough. At this time, you always stand quietly, staring at my sister and me. That look is undoubtedly saying: as long as the daughter eats well, mom and dad are the greatest comfort.
Mom and Dad, although you usually nag, I know that every nagging is a kind of love.
Every day when I come home from school, I always ask us, "Is there much Chinese homework? Is there much math homework? " When I brought my schoolbag into the room, you said, "Go and do your homework!" " "I took out my exercise book and you said," Write neatly and hold your head high! " "In the middle of my writing, you said," Have you finished your homework? Hurry up! "
Mom and dad, at ordinary times, there will inevitably be some small frictions between us, but these will not affect our love. Mom and dad, I want to say to you: "I love mom and dad!" " "
Dad, I want to tell you about excellent composition 3. Dad, I want to tell you. I know you work late every day. Although you are very busy at work, you never relax your demands on me. I feel your love from my heart!
I remember one time, you came back from work. I'll sign your homework, but when you see a problem in my math assistant, you won't do it. You asked me to bring a piece of paper and start telling me the meaning of this question. During the whole process, you kept a straight face and looked at me seriously. Finally, I finally understood the problem. You gave a comfortable smile. I am very happy!
Dad, sometimes, when I tell you what's going on at school, I always say two or three words, and you just interrupt. Sometimes, I just can't stand it. I was so angry that I stopped talking. At this time, you will say me again. You adults always say, "Don't interrupt when adults are talking." Can adults interrupt when children are talking? I really hope you can get rid of this habit. I don't think it's good.
Dad, I want to tell you. If you come back early every day, I can learn more knowledge; If I tell you something interesting that happened at school, I will be happier and happier if you don't interrupt casually; If you can get rid of some of your bad habits, then our family will have more laughter!
Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 4. Dear Dad:
I have always been dissatisfied with you, thinking that you are either playing mahjong or smoking hard, so my feelings with you have always been relatively weak.
I remember once, my grandparents went to a wedding reception, and my mother and I were the only ones at home. Just as we were about to eat, you called: "How many people are coming to play mahjong today, get ready!" Then he hung up with a bang. Well, even if mom has superhuman powers, it's too late. There is no water, only a few dishes. My mother had to boil water to cook in a hurry. With my help, my mother finally finished all the work. But just as the exhausted mother was sitting in a chair to rest, you called again: "Oh, I changed temporarily, so I won't play mahjong. You two can eat!" " "Hey, mom's work is unpaid, isn't it obvious? You know, mom has been busy for three hours! Dad, don't come back to eat. Why are you playing such a "joke" with us? I suddenly flew into a rage and really wanted to give you a scolding in your face.
But my mother didn't even say a word, and she worked hard. Every time something goes wrong with you, it's her fault. Every time you have any questions, it's her advice.
Have you ever thought, if you don't have a mother, can you have today? Of course, without you and mom, let alone me, so the fate of the three of us is linked. If you are human, there will always be mistakes. If you can get rid of those small problems, you are still my closest father, my mother's most intimate husband and the most amazing pillar of this family!
I wish you success in your career.
May all your wishes come true
Daughter: Ding
20xx June 1 1
Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition. I remember my mother once said that your blood sugar should not fluctuate too much, especially not to make you angry. However, today, I made you angry again, and I am very sad.
That time, we went to the Happy World in Panyu, Guangzhou, and we played a project called "Coffee Cup" together. During the game, I found that your face was getting paler and paler. I really hoped that the game would end soon. The game is finally over. Before you walked out of the game with my help, you looked pale and sweaty. You have had a long rest, but your face is getting paler and paler. I am afraid, because I seem to see death coming to you with a sickle in his hand. Just then, my mother said, "Dad may have done this because his blood sugar suddenly dropped very low. Please give dad some sugar. " I'll get you sugar right away, and you'll be fine. From then on, I secretly made a decision in my heart: I will never make you angry.
Last night, the last thing I wanted happened. You pick me up after school, and I'll carry my school uniform on my shoulder. After you met me, you told me several times before I reluctantly took my school uniform from my shoulder. But when I got home, you flew into a rage and scolded me. I was not convinced, so I kicked the chair to my feet. This action really adds fuel to the fire in your opinion. You kicked the chair back and scolded me even louder for not listening to you. The end result is that you cried, I cried, and my mother cried. Dad, all this is not what I want to see. You let me get my school uniform, and I'll get it right away. If I hadn't kicked the chair, none of this might have happened; if ...
Dad, believe me, I'm growing up. I will lose my temper and try not to make you angry. But you also try to control yourself not to get angry. I hope our family can live a happy life.
Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition. Recently, mom and dad got off work very late because of their busy work. Every time I open the door at home, I see a tired face. Mom and dad come back so late and so tired, it is inevitable that they will have some temper.
Once, as soon as my father came back, he lay on the sofa and fell asleep soon. My mother also hurried back to cook. After a while, my mother came out of the kitchen with delicious food and said, "son, wake up my father for dinner." After I woke my father, he wolfed down his meal at once. After a while, mom and dad were full, and dad was lying on the sofa watching TV, which was a mess. Then I thought, "If I pour my father a glass of water, will my father feel better?" Will you feel less tired? "So I immediately poured a glass of water for my father, but I accidentally fell on my father. Unexpectedly, my father flew into a rage and scolded me. I immediately ran back to my room and lay in bed, thinking, "I just kindly poured him a glass of water." Besides, how can people not make mistakes? " !" In this way, I spent a difficult night with a lot of grievances.
When I got up the next morning, I heard my father say to me as soon as I opened the door: "Son, my father was too tired last night, so I was a little excited. I shouldn't lose my temper with you. I apologize. " "Dad, let bygones be bygones. I know your hard work, you don't have to take it to heart. " Hearing this, my father nodded to me with a smile.
Dad, I really want to tell you that I know you are working hard for our family. I hope you are not too tired and pay more attention to your health. You can't finish your work. You seldom have time to take me out to play. If possible, I hope you can spend more time with my mother and me, so that our family can have more beautiful memories.
Dad, I want to say "sorry" to you!
You ask me to practice my handwriting, but I often can't concentrate. Play with toys for a while, and make many bubbles in the inkstone for a while. At this time, you will scold me: "If you don't concentrate on writing and ask you to write more, you will scribble!" ! Huh? ""write so fast? You can't play if you don't write well! "
You ask me to play the piano, but I always find excuses to be lazy. I go to the toilet for a while and drink water for a while. At this time, you will scold me loudly: "Have you been drinking water for so long?" Play each song five times again. "I can only give in, like a beast trapped in a cage, locked firmly on the piano stool. You scold me like this, and even make me wonder: will you stop loving me?
Until this summer vacation, by chance, I heard instructor Huang tell us in the summer camp: "Strictness is love, and looseness is harm." I really understand your good intentions.
Dad, I also want to say "thank you" to you!
So you have always loved me. You beat me and scold me to calm me down. You didn't agree with me to give up playing the piano, let me learn to persist and cultivate my perseverance and perseverance. I used to talk back to you, but now I feel really wrong. I remember once, my grandfather said that the paper I was practicing calligraphy in my room was too high, so why not sell it? You refused to say anything, but you found a box and put it in, saying it could be a souvenir.
Just, dad, I still want to say to you softly, "Can you praise me occasionally, when I am doing particularly well and when I am particularly depressed?" Your encouragement will be my motivation! "
Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition. Dear dad, I appreciate that you have always cared about me, but you have a bad habit of wronging me without knowing what happened, which makes me feel wronged and sad.
I remember it very clearly. The math teacher assigned little homework that day, only three questions. However, every question is a problem for me. I thought about every question for a long time before I did it. Half an hour passed and an hour passed before I finished those three questions.
"Dad, I finished my homework!" I'm glad to report my achievements to you.
But there is not a smile on your face: "Isn't there only three questions in today's homework? You have been working on three questions for an hour, and the bad habit of muddling along will never be changed. "
"no, dad."
"Stop talking, you are always finding fault."
At that moment, I want to say to you: "Dad, I am very wronged."
Sometimes, I want to do some housework as much as possible. Go home from school, no one at home. Looking at the messy home, I quickly mopped the floor, washed dishes and washed clothes, thinking that I would be very happy if you came back to see it. However, when I got home, I said, "Why is the floor wet? What if someone slips? " ? The collar of this dress is still black. Why is it hanging? "At that moment, I want to say to you, Dad, I am very sad. "
Dear dad, did you hear my heart?
Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition. Dear dad, I have a lot to tell you from my heart, but when I saw your serious expression, I was too scared to tell you. I want to use this composition instead.
Dad, although you are strict with my daily life, you often don't let me go out to play. I am afraid that I don't know how to study, so I am very upset and sad. I know you do it for my own good, but I also want to go out to play! Because playing is our children's naive hobby! I hope you can understand me deeply.
Dear dad, you love me very much, I know. Usually when you are on a business trip, you always ask me, "My little baby, what do you want when I am on a business trip?" I'll buy it for you when I come back. ""I want a pencil box and a box of colored pens, and of course I won't eat less. Can you buy it for me? My good father! "No problem, but you should study hard and don't fall behind in every exam."
When you came back from a business trip, you didn't think of what I said to you, so you left your luggage and went to the distant new century supermarket to buy something for me.
My dear father, I love you very much. You love me so much and care about me so much, I know, so in this article, I want to say to you: "Dad, I love you! If we want to summarize it in time, it will take so long. In a word, "I love your father! " "
Your father loves you very much, and you love your father. Just use your words to realize it. May you love each other forever.
Grade 4, Dawu Binhe Primary School, Dawu County, Xiaogan City, Hubei Province: Li Zeyao
Dad, the excellent composition I want to say to you 10 "I looked at you for nothing, and I made a mistake in such a simple topic!" " How did you learn ... "This sentence by sentence reprimands my heart for a long time.
I only got 86 points in this math exam. The teacher asked the students to take the test papers home for their parents to sign. After receiving this "order", I am really scared, so scared, because this score is still four points short of my guaranteed score. What should I do? What should we do?
After school, I came home worried. I don't want to show it to my father. I want to imitate your handwriting and sign your name. I didn't expect to be stopped by you as soon as I entered the door: "Bring your test paper." "I ... I ... I ..." I don't know what happened, but I dare not take it out. It seems that a little man in my head said to me, "You can't take it, you can't take it, and you will be beaten if you take it out." "Take it out! How many points did you get? "
I faltered and said, "I got eight points ... ten points ... six points."
"Miss you, such a simple topic is wrong! How did you learn to ... "Dad, you immediately face down to scold.
My heart ached faintly, as if there were countless ants biting. Dad, I know you love me very much. You want me to remember this lesson so that I won't make this mistake again. But, dad, love is not like this. My grades are not ideal. You have to explain it to me slowly until I understand. Dad, can you encourage me more and be patient with me?
Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition: 1 1 Dad, you love our family, your mother, and you regard me as the apple of your eye. However, I think you love your mobile game more!
Dad, you like Tetris and playing cards. You regard these two games as your own, so love makes me envy and hate! However, once your two little babies "suffer", then I will be even more "bitter"!
I remember that time, you stared at the screen with your mobile phone, and I sat there watching TV with relish. We formed a happy scene. But this wonderful time didn't last long. Maybe it's your poor connections, or your bad luck. You lost several games in a row. As soon as you turned around and saw me watching TV happily, you got angry and scolded a sentence in classical Chinese.
"Why are you still watching TV? The bookshelves at home are covered with dust. I haven't seen you touch them. You can't teach a boy! Also, even if you watch TV, the sound is too heavy! ……"
After about five or six minutes of scolding, your anger gradually subsided, and I had a chance to sneak back to my room and read a book, secretly swearing that I would never watch TV while you were playing with your mobile phone again. A gust of wind brushed my cheek and soothed my broken heart!
Dad, although I shouldn't watch TV for a long time, you shouldn't let the game control your emotions. I hope you can get rid of this bad habit and give me and my mother the best care! Dad, I love you!
Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 12 dad, I want to tell your dad, I want to tell your dad, I want to tell you, please don't be angry when I accidentally write wrong.
It was noon last Tuesday, and it was very hot. I want to drink more soup at lunch. So, I hold the bowl in my right hand and the handle of the pressure cooker in my left hand. The soup in the pressure cooker almost overflowed because of the unbalanced force. Scared my heart. If this soup is knocked over, the consequences will be unimaginable. At this moment, your voice exploded from my side: "You are so careless about everything. Knock this pot of soup over and you will feel better. " After listening to these blunt words, I suddenly felt so pitiful and wronged. I didn't mean to. This is because the rice table is tall and I am short. You are not comforting me, but satirizing me. Thank you very much for caring about me in my life and study. But when I accidentally make a mistake, you should also take into account my feelings. I am willing to accept your criticism, but I don't want you to lose your temper. I remember another time, when I finished my homework, it was already late at night. When I asked you to sign, suddenly you found that the word "boat" was too scribbled, so let me write the correct word "boat" at once. Because I just finished my homework and was very tired, I said to you, "Can't you check it for me?" ? Who knows, you lost your temper again and shouted at me, "This is what you have to do. It is harmful for you to be replaced by others." I can't explain it, but it makes me sad that you left your exercise books on the sofa at will. Dad, can't you be gentle with me? No one is perfect, who can have no shortcomings?
Dad, how I hope you can understand me and tolerate me.
Comment: Tolerance will make each other play a harmonious movement! Always take your troubles out to bask in the sun, and don't let them precipitate into hard ice!
Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 13 Dear Dad:
Hello!
How time flies! In a blink of an eye, you are thirty-nine years old. In recent months, I have seen that you have aged a lot. What happened? Every morning, I see you go out after four o'clock. I don't know what you did. At about half past six, you go to the kitchen to make breakfast. There are all kinds of breakfasts every day, including egg noodles, rice cakes, fried eggs, longan egg soup ... delicious! At seven o'clock sharp, you woke me up. I got up lazily, washed, dressed and had a big breakfast. After dinner, you drive me to school, and when you come back, you bury yourself in selling money. At noon, you give the children in kindergarten a meal, and the children eat by themselves after eating. Come and take me home after a rest. You have to take the people who study here back. One batch, two batches, three batches ... I see you are exhausted and dozing off from time to time. I really sympathize with you! Unfortunately, I can't help you with these things. You can cook dinner for us as soon as you bring the children here. When we finish eating, you take some children home who have finished their homework. When they are all gone, you have to pull down the iron gate, lock the glass door, and then go upstairs and tell us to sleep. We are asleep, but you are still working downstairs ... Early in the morning, Dad, come and see if our quilt is covered, and then go back to sleep. Dad, I thank you for your love for me. Although I think you are usually fierce, now I know that you are actually very gentle. You are the most handsome in my mind!
Best wishes: happiness forever!
Love your daughter: xxx
20xx year x month x day
Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 14. Dad, I want to tell you, "Please quit smoking and drinking." I've wanted to talk to you about this topic for a long time, but I've been afraid to talk to you. Today, I take this opportunity to write a composition and tell everyone what I have been holding back for a long time.
Dad, you keep smoking when writing materials or chatting with friends, but do you know how harmful smoking is to human body? I read in the book that if a person smokes only one cigarette, his life expectancy will be reduced by two minutes. That's because smoke contains a harmful substance called nicotine. Nicotine in a cigarette can poison a mouse, and people will die on the spot as long as they smoke 60 cigarettes continuously. Smoke, like death, gradually shortens people's life span, and even quietly takes away people's life.
Dad, you have another bad habit: drinking. I remember once, some of your friends invited you to dinner. I was afraid that you would drink again, so I went with you. When I arrived, you two were talking and drinking. I'm worried that you'll be drunk again. So I quickly said, "Dad, stop drinking, you will get drunk." But you said to me, "mind your own business, son, and go and play." I walked away reluctantly. I came to you after playing for a long time, and you were still drinking and smoking there. You came home that night and vomited and vomited blood. Mom was frightened, so she quickly asked her uncle to take you to the hospital for an intravenous drip. You may have forgotten it completely, but I still remember it clearly.
Dad, for your health, for me and my mother, for our happy family, please don't drink too much wine and smoke too much. I hope our family is healthy and happy together, ok? My good dad!
Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition. Dad, there are two things I have been afraid to tell you. I want to use this time to write a composition to convince you.
I remember one night, my mother and I stayed at home until 1 1, but you still didn't come back. You said you would be back at 8 pm, but you broke your word. At 0: 30 the next morning, you were still drunk. You sit on the sofa and moan all the time, and your mouth stinks. You keep saying, "I'm not drunk, I'm not drunk." You were scolded by your mother and criticized by me. You also said, "Don't worry about the children of a big family." Your face is blue from drinking, and you have been vomiting and bleeding from your stomach. I see it in my eyes and feel sad in my heart.
I remember a few days ago, you were fine in your room, and suddenly a phone call came and asked you to have dinner in Xinbei Park. Luckily, you took me. As soon as I went, I saw what white wine and red wine were on the table. The room is sealed and the air conditioner is on. It was winter, and the room was so stuffy that I really wanted to vomit. You drank bottle after bottle, and everyone on the table was drunk. This moment reminds me of my mother's loneliness in the house alone. I asked the waiter for two lunch boxes, then packed some things, and you sent me away with my twenty dollars. It was 0: 00 the next morning when you came back, and you were drunk again.
Dad, why do you need it? What did you get? Sad or sad? Dad, I hope you don't drink any more, it will only bring sadness.