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It is required to write an 800-word composition on the topic of "going abroad", preferably by yourself.
In July 2002, Gu Jiajun, a 23-year-old girl from Shenyang, returned to Shenyang after graduating from China University of Science and Technology. Different from ordinary graduates, she has an admission notice from Harvard University and a full scholarship approval letter in her pocket. Soon, she will fly to Boston, USA, to study for a doctorate at Harvard University, a world-famous university. Since 1980s, a large number of outstanding China college students have gone abroad to study, with a total number of hundreds of thousands, most of whom are gone forever. Please write an article on the topic of "going abroad". The topic is self-made, and the style is not limited, not less than 800 words.

"Going abroad" is the life experience of many famous politicians and scientists: Deng Xiaoping studied in France in his early years, Zhou Enlai studied in Britain to work and study, and Yang Zhenning, winner of the Nobel Prize in Physics, was born in Anhui ... Now, people have various views on studying abroad. Some people think that teacher China worked so hard and parents worked so hard to send our most creative children to foreign capitalist countries. So many excellent college students in China have become foreigners and are always unhappy. Others think that "globalization" is narrowing the distance between people, and the appearance of the Internet makes the close contact between people no longer technically difficult. The earth has become a "global village". Due to the deterioration of ecology and environment, "common interests" are emerging on the earth when human beings are facing life and death. China's outstanding international students are also very good at serving the world.

We can "focus on the big picture and put pen to paper on the small ones", that is, choose a typical thing or person to reflect all kinds of human feelings in the "going abroad fever" and reflect our own thinking, views and positions on this issue. When conceiving, it is easy to integrate abstract emotions into specific people, things or images, which can stimulate our association and imagination.

It is also easy to innovate in style and form. For example, you can choose mini-novels, letters, speeches, fairy tales, new stories and other styles.

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"After reading this passage, we know that Premier Zhou is studying for the rise of China. And Liu Xiang, what about you? " The teacher asked. "study for the construction of the motherland." Liu Xiang said loudly, eyes firm, let a person see something. He is seven years old this year.

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"We asked a classmate to talk about the relationship between the interests of the motherland, collective interests and personal interests. Liu Xiang. " The teacher said. "The teacher taught us from an early age to put the interests of the motherland and the collective interests above personal interests. But some people disregard the big interests for their own self-interest. This is really shameful! " He said impassioned and frowning. I didn't want to, but the students burst into laughter. He knows what they are laughing at. But he told himself: I am right. I have a strange feeling in my heart. He didn't know what it meant, but he found that it was like the night, spreading his black wings gradually. He is fifteen years old this year.

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"Liu Xiang, congratulations! Here, notice from Harvard! You are the pride of our school! " The teacher sent him the notice excitedly. At that moment, tears flowed out of his eyes for a long time, shining with relief through the 600-degree lens. He is 27 years old this year.

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"Liu, I have good news for you. Your thesis passed and the college agreed to let you stay and teach. " "I ..." "By the way, the annual salary is $200,000, and there is a teacher's apartment. What were you going to say just now? " Teacher Smith said happily. "Oh, nothing, just happy."

At two o'clock in the morning, after seeing off relatives and friends who came to celebrate, Liu Xiang has been sitting at his desk. The light was off and it was dark around. He can't tell what happiness is entangled in, but he knows it comes from the deep heart. The long-forgotten adage "study for the construction of the motherland" suddenly appeared. He gave a casual sneer, but was immediately shocked by something. Why should I laugh? What does this smile represent? In fact, he knows the answer, but for so long, he has been reluctant to expose the last cover-up. Anyway, he finally smiled knowingly, for himself. He is thirty-two years old this year.

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"Liu, after the active efforts of the school, the Immigration Bureau has agreed to issue you a green card!" The good news made him smile at once and picked up his mobile phone to tell his parents on the other side. At this moment, even the last cover-up is gone.

Three years later, Liu Xiang became a full-fledged American citizen.

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"Liu, the school has recommended you and two other doctors to participate in the government's new missile defense system plan. For America, for our school, work hard! " Liu Xiang nodded, his eyes shining, just like when he was seven years old.

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The other side of the Pacific Ocean. It once nurtured Liu Xiang's growth, nurtured him to become a man, and gave him a pair of strong wings, which could fight against the sky and wind and rain, and finally let his motherland fly unarmed. At this time, he is anxious about the announcement just issued by the United States on the establishment of a missile defense system.

Comment: The center is clear and the intention is positive, criticizing the "treachery" behavior of international students. The content is rich and clear, and the hero's experience and transformation process are natural and focused; The language is concise and fluent. Novel style and angle.

Nowadays, studying abroad has become a trend. One student in our class has gone abroad to study, and two others are going to study in Britain after graduating from high school. Our school has set up an international department to build a bridge for students who want to study abroad. Faced with all kinds of enthusiasm for going abroad, we can't help thinking: Is studying abroad the best choice?

Zhou Enlai and Deng Xiaoping, the early revolutionary leaders of our country, have both been abroad. With the ideal of saving the country and the people, they went abroad to study advanced science and culture. They brought the seeds of revolution back to China and made China what it is today. Similarly, many scientists who made great contributions to the development of "two bombs and one satellite" in the early days of the founding of the People's Republic of China also studied abroad. Scientists such as Qian Xuesen gave up the generous treatment given to the motherland by the American government, and they brought what they learned back to the motherland, which made the scientific and technological undertakings of the motherland flourish and constantly improved their international status. It can be seen that studying abroad is to bring foreign advanced technology back to China, so it is very meaningful for such international students. However, the current statistics show that there are 450,000 undergraduates studying in the United States, and they have created trillions of dollars of wealth for the United States. At first glance, I was shocked by this set of data: these 450 thousand people have created so much wealth, but unfortunately it is in the United States. If it were in China, what an important asset it would be! Why don't these international students return to China? I think the main reason is that most people want to show their value and enjoy a superior life. It is understandable for a person to pursue a high-quality life, but I think personal interests should be placed second before national interests. We should put the belief of "serving the motherland" in the heart of every international student. Only in this way can we be worthy of the motherland's nurturing grace. Moreover, our country is in a stage of vigorous development, and all walks of life need a large number of talents, which also provides a broad stage for all kinds of talents. So if you stay in China, you can also get good opportunities and development space.

Finally, I want to say to the overseas students: Come back, my hometown needs you, and my motherland needs you!

Comments: The center of this article is clear, and the examples under discussion are typical. The article sticks to the theme.

"Our value is in China!" This is the answer of Tan, a famous violinist in China, when relatives and friends asked him to stay in the United States for his old age during his self-funded visit to the United States. He devoted himself to Professor Tan's sincere feelings for the motherland and his determination to devote his life to the music cause of the motherland without reservation.

If a person loses national pride and national pride, then he also loses the minimum morality and dignity of being a man. Curse the motherland for being backward? As children, why don't we have the ability to revitalize the country! Complaining about the ills of society? As children, why don't we have the courage to eradicate bad habits! Abandon the motherland-give birth to our mother? That is simply a loss of childlike innocence and a loss to the motherland. It is precisely because of poverty that the motherland needs the efforts of our generation more. Doing nothing can only increase the burden on the motherland; Complaining about others can only distract people's fighting spirit Only the blood, sweat and wisdom of our young people can warm our mother's heart and change the face of our motherland.

"Every man is responsible for the rise and fall of the world" was once the heroic words of our ancestors. Facing the devastated motherland, our beloved Premier Zhou and other proletarian revolutionaries of the older generation traveled across the ocean to seek revolutionary truth and explore the revolutionary road. Mr. Lu Xun set foot on a foreign land with the ambition of "saving the country through medicine". When he realized that medicine couldn't save China, he resolutely "abandoned medicine and went to literature". After returning home, he used his whole life's shouting and fighting to awaken the sleeping China. Li Siguang, a scientist, abandoned the rich living conditions, property and status abroad just after the liberation of the motherland and returned to the embrace of the motherland through hardships. He thinks about the prosperity of the motherland, not personal enjoyment. They can be called the "backbone" of our Chinese nation.

Today, in order to realize the four modernizations of the motherland at an early date, we must introduce advanced technology from abroad and never close the door. But some people regard going abroad as a ladder to fame and fortune, and think that only there can they display their talents. Please turn to the 5,000-year history of Chinese civilization. Our ancestors made great contributions to mankind. After ten years of catastrophe, many outstanding talents broke through the ice. Chen Jingrun, a famous mathematician, didn't go abroad to study before he made achievements. Under the difficult domestic conditions, with the spirit of hard study, we have made amazing achievements and won honor for our motherland. He is a world-famous outstanding scientist who grew up under the nurturing of New China after liberation. Today, the party and the state try their best to provide all excellent learning conditions for young people and encourage the development of individual talents. What reason do we have to lose confidence and give up on ourselves? Science belongs to all mankind, and we belong to China. Our contribution to the motherland is our contribution to mankind. We have built our motherland into a prosperous, strong, democratic and civilized modern socialist country, which has raised the world level and promoted the development of human civilization. The motherland is the source of our life, that is, the source of our wisdom and strength. It is commendable to dedicate the intelligence and wisdom endowed by the motherland to the motherland without reservation. We want our motherland to truly stand in the east of the world as a brand-new giant, show its incomparable brilliance and charm, and at the same time show the spirit and strength of her one billion sons and daughters, and show the value of each and every one of us, the youth of China. Let each of us proudly say: "We all belong to China, and our value is in China!"