1. Thinking of this, I gradually recalled the past. I remember when I was a child, my mother opened a beauty salon in Lishui, and for the sake of family, she let me stay at the nanny's house. I only have time to visit me every two months. I live with the nanny all the year round. I call the nanny "mom". Everyone laughed at me for it. When I was about 3 years old, my mother gave up her job for formal education and came all the way to look after my growth with my aunt. Although my mother came back, I didn't have much time to spend with her. I call her big mother, I call her my own mother, my little mother. But my mother is not discouraged, reminding and teaching to correct again and again. I'm getting used to it, and now my mother is with me every day, because she only cares about my growth. She once told me: as long as I am happy, she will be satisfied! Whenever I see my mother's face, tears will swirl in my eyes, and sometimes I can't help falling.

Comments: In this passage, the little author wrote his feelings for his mother in fluent language, which is more infectious.

2. The village at noon is really a "green village" with different leaves, lined with sunshine and holding up crystal dew.

During the shuttle, the branches and leaves of Metasequoia glyptostroboides are extremely eye-catching. It is oval, and its leaves are dyed a light green, new green and soft green. Some are slim and graceful, like small round trays, and some have curly leaves, like thumbs. Very interesting!

The hardest thing is cypress! The long needle-like leaves are extremely sharp. Green is deep, and green is black. Although the long leaves are so petite, they are also "extremely powerful". Cluster after cluster, one after another, one after another, form a pile. Like a big thorn ball.

Comments: The little author has a strong grasp of the text, writing the appearance of green leaves, which is very expressive, using many rhetorical devices, and his writing is very infectious.

A group of shrimp soldiers are patrolling, and it dawned on me that this is the Dragon Palace in the East China Sea. I crept through it, and finally they found me. Tied up, I was carried into the Dragon Palace by them and locked in a prison. It was dark and I couldn't see anything. Suddenly, a faint light came into view, and I gradually approached. This man claimed to be the third prince of the Dragon Palace, and was placed under house arrest for violating the dogma. I slowly told my story and explained my purpose. The third prince told me that the treasure of the Dragon Palace in the East China Sea is hidden in the crystal ball of the Dragon Palace. As long as the treasure is contained in the mouth, it is expected to be like a god, but the crystal ball will always emit golden light, and everyone who touches the golden light will be smashed to pieces except the members of the heaven. I racked my brains and finally came up with a wonderful plan. Dispel the ecstasy shrimp soldiers with ecstasy, lift the pointed hook to get the key, and escape with the third prince. The third prince sneaked into the palace while the Dragon King was away, took out the real treasure, loaded it with fake treasure and gave it to me. I went back to real life with him.

Comments: This is an imaginative article. The little author conceived a plot, that is, he shuttled to the Dragon Palace, which was very interesting and could attract readers to read. The ups and downs of the plot setting are very infectious.

Along the way, we sang loudly and the birds kept singing, as if welcoming our arrival. The willows on the roadside also sprouted. A gust of wind blew, and the willow twisted and danced there. The car drove slowly on the road and finally reached its destination. Ah, the scenery here is really beautiful! You see, the shore by the clear stream is covered with slippery pebbles. On the shore, a dense bamboo forest surrounds it. Sunlight gently sifts through the golden light, and the wind is sometimes soft; Sometimes fierce; Sometimes very slow; Sometimes in a hurry.

I looked at my watch. It's past ten. Two uncles immediately moved a few big stones to build a stove, which was responsible for making a fire. Aunt, then spread a tablecloth and newspaper beside it. Aunt Zhu Kai and Xinxin and I are packing barbecue utensils. We flew to the stream together and cleaned it hard. The stream sparkled in the sun. After a while, my uncle taught us to cut ham, insert ham, dip it in seasoning and bake it. After repeated efforts, we can finally master it well. I couldn't help glancing at Zhu Kai quietly. There were bright beads of sweat on my forehead, staring at the dripping of oil and turning over from time to time. I stupidly froze and looked at him straight. Bang, my ham is burnt! It took me a long time to recover, and I looked blank and made everyone laugh. I also followed the uninformed giggle.

Comments: After reading this article, I noticed that the young author's language was very expressive, and he wrote something about taking part in a picnic, which was very interesting and could make readers laugh.