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Urgent! Help improve poetry!
1, crazy thinking is not good, love is warm. That's great. Soft and deep. It is impetuous to use crazy words, and it is suspected of ruining the mood.

2. Since ancient times, there has been no dragon dumpling to describe love, and dumpling seems to have the meaning of dragon, which is inappropriate.

3, nine deep, nine days, 29 words repeat, taboo in confrontation.

4, Teng, dance two forms are not suitable for courtship, too ostentatious, lack of implicature, generally based on dragons and harmony.

5. It seems a little inappropriate to stroll in heart to heart.

May words be moral, but I am stupid. What do you mean? Please don't hesitate to give me your advice.

Don't be rude, please forgive me if there is anything wrong!