It's a little crooked and poetic, but the sentences need to be refined. For example, "midnight" is a modern saying, and the ancients all said it was midnight; The sentence "hold your head high" is not as refined as "look up to the sky"; "the stars are thin and the moon is black, sighing" is good! It is better to change "where the wind blows" to "where the wind blows"; The sentence "single coat ..." was changed to "single form is too cold". "Last year ..." This sentence has artistic conception until the last sentence. Sadness, attachment, regret, feeling that human feelings are warm and cold, and life is short, which can be described as mixed feelings.
Only on behalf of personal views, don't spray if you don't like it, thank you.