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The heartbroken man sat alone by the river in the middle of the night, looking up at the sky, the stars were thin and the moon was dark, sighing at the shadow! When the wind blows, you can't stand the
The heartbroken man sat alone by the river in the middle of the night, looking up at the sky, the stars were thin and the moon was dark, sighing at the shadow! When the wind blows, you can't stand the cold alone at night. Today last year, me and Hello!

It's a little crooked and poetic, but the sentences need to be refined. For example, "midnight" is a modern saying, and the ancients all said it was midnight; The sentence "hold your head high" is not as refined as "look up to the sky"; "the stars are thin and the moon is black, sighing" is good! It is better to change "where the wind blows" to "where the wind blows"; The sentence "single coat ..." was changed to "single form is too cold". "Last year ..." This sentence has artistic conception until the last sentence. Sadness, attachment, regret, feeling that human feelings are warm and cold, and life is short, which can be described as mixed feelings.

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