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How to modify the manuscript?
How to modify the manuscript?

First, set the theme.

What the article wants to express is summarized in one sentence, if it is really unclear. You can ask yourself two questions. Who always reads this article? What is my goal?

Second, the longitudinal structure.

Is it a total score structure or another structure? Ask yourself two questions, is the structure of the article the best? Is it possible to optimize the article by using other structures?

Third, the theoretical point of view

Are other viewpoints in the article fully expressed? Do you need to add other stealing points?

Fourth, adjust the paragraphs.

Whether the sequence of paragraphs is appropriate, whether the paragraphs are too long or too short, and whether the paragraphs read more smoothly.

Fifth, follow the sentences.

Follow a principle: long sentences become short sentences, whether repeated sentences become simple sentences, and whether the order between sentences is adjusted.

Sixth, change words.

Delete adjectives and use verbs, correct typos, whether the pronoun "he, she, it" is used correctly, and the use of "de, de, de".

Seven, reduce fat

Remove a lot of coordinate words, make the article slim, and remove colloquial usage. Ask yourself a question, how to express it with the least number of words without affecting the article?