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The second lesson of the classroom record of "picking Wei"
Before class, the whole class recited "Picking Wei" and asked five students to recite five verses of "Picking Wei" on the blackboard and simply correct them.

Teacher: The ancients said? The national wind is lewd but not lewd, while Xiaoya complains but not disorderly? . In our nation which takes poetry as a classic, "Xiaoya? Abstract EU expresses the hard life and homesickness of soldiers, the enemies who fought against foreign aggression together and the passionate and affectionate memories of military life.

Teacher: Last class, we made clear the meaning of the text and made a solid reading and recitation. In this class, students will express the search information and thinking results of several questions, and we will enjoy the results of learning.

Health: Cai Wei has two similarities, which are very meaningful. One place is? Clean up the EU? Overlap and repeat three times, once? What flowers are in full bloom? Wei Changzhi Hua? . Wei, this is a wild pea seedling. The flower of the paddock is the flower of Tang Di.

Teacher: Do the flowers in Tang Di have any metaphorical significance?

Student: The flowers in Tang Di are brotherly love and friendship. Teacher, I looked it up in the dictionary. Two or three flowers in Tang Di are a decoration, with long stems and drooping flowers? The poet compared Tang Di's flowers to his brother. What's here? Wear a robe with your son The determination to fight.

Teacher: The Book of Songs? Xiaoya? There is a poem "Tang Di" in the library, and Guo Moruo also has a historical drama "Flowers of Tang Di", which can be read after class to deepen understanding.

Health: It is the hardships of the soldiers guarding the border that breed Wei, and it is the soldiers who sincerely resist foreign aggression that breed Tang Di.

Student: Teacher, when you enjoyed Mang, you said its metaphor was vivid. ? Qishui soup? It's sound. Mulberry has not fallen, Ye Mao? When the mulberry fell, it was yellow. Did it fall? Its color, green and gold make a contrast. The two similarities and differences in Picking Wei are also dealt with in color. ? Clean up the EU? The mountains are all green. What else? What flowers are in full bloom? Wei Changzhi Hua? But it is endless glory. There are ups and downs in expressing feelings in this way.

Teacher: It's a good discovery to infer that the unknown is wisdom from the known! Who is the next speaker in this group?

Health: There is a contrast between the two places. One is solid and one is empty, one is static and one is near and far, one is grass and one is flower, one is low and one is high, and the beauty is uneven and polymorphic.

Health: Besides? Clean up the EU? Three times, there is a feeling of time passing. By who? Wei also stopped? Picking Wei's newly sprouted Wei buds, have you arrived? Wei is also a soft egg? The stems and leaves of Osmunda japonica are very soft. In Wei, Osmunda japonica is tall and hard. This is a complicated metaphor, and? What flowers are in full bloom? Wei Changzhi Hua? This is just a simple competition.

Teacher: There seem to be two points to add. A complex one and a simple one? . I want to ask, why do you imply the passage of time in picking EU?

Health: The passage of time is to show the deepening of the homesickness of the lyric hero.

Teacher: Simple emotions are always lost in simplicity. Only by portraying the emotions of the characters as complex, subtle, painful and anxious will they have a profound impact on people's hearts. We will discuss this topic again in another group of students, and we also say Bixing.

Health: Helpful? Wei? The growth process shows the passage of time very cleverly, much like the focal plane, reflecting the cycle of the four seasons. If I were a director, it would be cruel for me to show the innocence, youth and vicissitudes of the lyric hero in the superposition of shots, without showing his twilight years. Didn't the teacher say that? The national wind is lewd but not lewd, while Xiaoya complains but not disorderly? Really?

Teacher: Very imaginative, Du Fu said in>,? When they set out, the mayor put a headscarf on them. Now their headscarfs are all white. Are they still at the border? A soldier fought all his life. ? At the age of 18, Jinhe, Yutong Fu, year after year, Ma Ce, right to quit? (Liu) It's so sad. Are you right?> has a good grasp of the emotional tone.

Health: Both? Cai Wei? , the king of our junior high school & gt in? Long song is pregnant with Cai Wei? The performance of seclusion shows that any comparison can not be taken out of context.

Teacher: The second group of students will talk about & gt narrative elements. Good lyric has narrative elements. Narration is like the earth, and lyricism is a flower that grows on the fertile soil of the earth.

Health: The reason why you are in the war-the reason why you don't want to live and don't want to live.

The passage of time-manufacturing-softness-hardness

Yang Mo

War and life are hard-how dare you settle down?

Armed to the teeth-four wings, like a fish suit

Teacher: Generally speaking, the clues are clear, but> the narrative structure is flashback. The whole poem is divided into three parts: first, the main basis of the first to third sections of the poem? Clean up the EU? The rise of Wei vividly shows the process of Wei's growth from bud and seedling to maturity, and shows the hardships of frontier fortress soldiers who borrowed wild vegetables to satisfy their hunger. Second, the fourth and fifth verses of the poem mainly show specific descriptions of the war. Third, the sixth chapter ended the memories of the whole military life and turned to worry about returning to China. This classmate confused the first part with the second part. It would be better if he sorted out the time. This is more detailed. The narrative mainly focuses on the second part. Let's talk about it By the way, who can write the nickname1February on the blackboard?

Students: (written on the blackboard) Duanyue, Apricot Moon, Taoyue, Huaiyue, Liu Yue, He Yue, Qiao Yue, Gui Yue, Juyue, YueYang, Jia Yue and Twelfth Moon (three of them were not written by students).

Teacher: We are a romantic and passionate nation. 12 months are all named after flowers, grass, clouds and sunshine except the beginning and end. October is a sunny spring, so October is called the sunny month.

Teacher: Let's continue to discuss narrative elements.

Health: The intense military life is beautifully written. The first four sentences are all self-questioning and self-answering. ? What flowers are in full bloom? It's Tang Dihua. What kind of car is it? General among generals, of course. ?

Health: It is a good choice to write a typical image of war, which is guided by chariots, and it is a tall chariot, strong and cool.

Health: The personnel carriers and four tall and burly horses set off a vast lineup and high morale.

Health:? Three victories in one day? This is a comparison of figures, which shows that the good news of war is frequently spread.

Health: Like a fish suit, the detailed description shows the sophistication of the weapon.

Teacher: A garrison soldier, with profound contradictions and extreme pain, recalled the war that was so closely related to his life and youth. The lofty aspirations of defending the country and defending the country were expressed through narration and a little sketch. Carve it bit by bit. So the days of border crossing are over, where is the border crossing, where is home, and how difficult it is for the enemy to be present and in all directions. How about another one? Say goodbye to weapons? Let's go

Health: The names of gentlemen and villains are also very special. Gentleman? , the general also; ? Little people? , foot soldiers also. Is there one here? Proud? And then what? Inferiority? There is an expression of ambivalence.

Health: I like it? Rong drove the car? There is a sense of being capable, resolute and chic, which reminds me? Drunk in the sand and not laughing? .

Health: Some people say that & gt is the first frontier fortress poem. This poem is indeed full of feelings of making contributions, with a military power and a heroic spirit of winning the battle.

Health:? Like a squid suit? This sophisticated weapon is enough to laugh at the arrogance of the west. I'm afraid the northern emperors of these nomadic tribes and the Huns in Qin and Han dynasties only have simple bows. Do we have them? Bows inlaid with ivory and quiver made of shark skin? This is the pride of farming civilization and the national pride that arises spontaneously.

Teacher: The students speak very well. In fact, what is the focus of the war scene description in Picking Wei? Go out? Not in a fierce battle scene. This is the usual way of writing many war-related works in The Book of Songs. Qin Feng? Nothing to say? Wang Yuxing, fix my spear and be an enemy of Zi? , "Xiaoya? Car attack "only in words? My car is attacking, so is my horse? . This technique influenced Zuo Zhuan and The Romance of the Three Kingdoms. Battle of Red Cliffs? Description. Qu Yuan's "National Mourning" depicts a heroic and harsh war scene. Where does the poem come from? Unarmed? The most intense part of the battle was written. Interested students can do comparative reading after class.

Teacher: What is the relationship in The Book of Songs? Horses have more than 50 characters. This group of students can talk about this topic.

Health: What words are used to describe horses in "Picking Wei"? Four horses? Industry? Hey? Wing wing?

Health:? Mu? Is it the male horse industry? Is he tall? Hey? Is it strong? Wing wing? Very neat.

Teacher:? Mu? It's a male horse, so which word is used to represent a female horse (the student shakes his head and the teacher writes a book on the blackboard? Hey? Word), there is an idiom? Chen Si? There is also an idiom called? Yellow? (explain while writing on the blackboard).

Teacher: In the era of The Book of Songs, horses were closely related to the life of the Chinese nation. The colorful life makes the horse's name colorful. Who in this group can write the nickname 10 stallion on the blackboard?

Health: blackboard writing (raccoon, raccoon, raccoon, raccoon, raccoon, anchovies, anchovies, fish, dragons) and so on.

Teacher: Who can list the famous ancient horses in China that you know?

Health: Guan Yu's red rabbit

Health: Xiang Yu's Wu Zhui

Health: Xiao He chased Han Xin's horse under the moon? (Laughter)

Teacher: I really don't know the name. We can check it after class.

Health: Taizong Zhao Jun. ..

Health: And Eight Kings from Zhou Wenwang.

Teacher: horses are loved in prosperous times, and donkeys are loved in last days. The horse really embodies a certain national spirit.

Teacher: The description of the war horse in "Picking the Wei" embodies a belief in winning and patriotic feelings. I asked a classmate to recite the fourth and fifth sections again.

Student: Recite (omitted)

Teacher:? Yesterday, I left, and the willows were reluctant; Today I think, is it raining? These four poems have always been praised by people. Please enjoy them in the fourth group.

Health: A garrison soldier fought against the invading army in the northwest frontier. After decades, he finally bid farewell to the war horse and returned to his hometown that he missed day and night. This feeling is too heavy. I think these four poems are too wonderful to say a word.

Teacher: The lyric hero is about to return to his hometown. What kind of mood should he be in?

Health: It is neither simple happiness nor simple sadness. It should be very contradictory and can't be expressed in thousands of words.

Health: What kind of feelings does Li Qingzhao express? Things are people, not everything, and tears flow first. ?

Health: Song said in Crossing the Han River? The closer I get to my hometown, the more timid I am, afraid to inquire about people from home. ? A timid sentence describes thousands of feelings and emotions when returning to China.

Teacher: This comparison and association of students is very good, which can greatly broaden our horizons. ? Nineteen ancient poems? Is it written in the movie "The Tenth Five-Year Conscription"? He joined the army at the age of fifteen and began to return to the team at the age of eighty. Who is at home in every village? Decades of war, things have changed, decades of war, decades of war, relatives are still there, and lovers are still there? The fifteenth conscription is a good interpretation of picking Wei, but it is too white. Is there another "Dongshan" in The Book of Songs? I'm in Dongshan and I'm not coming back. I'm from the east. It rains when it rains. The degree of this pain is too deep.

Only "Cai Wei" has reached it? Sad but not hurt? Complain without complaining? Field. The students went on talking.

Health: replacing spring with willow and winter with snow, which is reserved and weighty. Willow in spring, snow in winter, one is graceful and restrained, the other is flying cold.

Teacher: Like a poem.

Health:? I'm leaving? Let me think. Today? Along the way, it highly summarizes the shortness of life and the impermanence of life changes. From youth to white hair, from joy to pain, time has accumulated the tragedy and helplessness of life on the way.

Health: By contrast, in "Yi Yi Liu Shu", it is not our same life that withers in the rain and snow, with strong tension and equally strong singing.

Health:? I'm leaving? Let me think. Today? This is a happy scene, a sad scene and a sad feeling, and it is even sadder to write a sad story with happiness.

Health: These four poems are very story-telling, full of elasticity and tension as the teacher said. ? I'm leaving, Willo Yiyi? When I left my hometown, Liu Yang said goodbye, and the beautiful girl waited for his return, just like Cui Cui waited for promise. ? Today I think, is it raining? Now I'm back in my hometown, there is only snow all over the sky, no youth, no years, no love, no affection, no home, no willows, only snow all over the sky.

Health: The most beautiful poems are all natural, lightly expressed and without false embellishment? But it's cool for a good autumn? so this is it? Past? ,? Think about it? .

Health: Language is spoken, but its taste is meaningful, and the answer is not unique. It is rich in all directions.

Health:? My heart is very sad, don't you know that I am very sad? , is a sad person's sorrow for life. This kind of sadness is deeper, which can make every reader cry and reflect on his own sadness and life. I think it's better than the one in the book of songs "Millet parting"? People who know me worry me; If you don't know me, what do you want? The image is more shocking.

Health: Because this is an ordinary person's perspective, this is an ordinary soldier, and the lament for his life will definitely be much deeper than the rise and fall of the Zhou Dynasty.

Health: the same me, the same road, but so different, from the plain road? In the past, I was gone, and Liu Shu was Yi Yi. Now, I'm thinking about it. Is it raining? There is a strong emotional impact.

Teacher: The students had a wonderful talk. The Book of Songs is the first affectionate song of our ancestors. Since its birth, just like the sun, the moon, the sky and rivers, literati of all ages have been illuminated and nourished by it. Is there the first poem in The Book of Songs about a newly-married bride? Peach flies away and burns its glory? Is there the first love poem that expresses the eternal life of husband and wife? My heart is not a stone, so I can't turn it around; My heart is not a seat, so I can't roll? . Have a saddest poem? Hold your hand and grow old with your son? . There is the first "Dongshan" about beauty as the moon, the first "Jing Nv" about dating, and the first "Jia Jian" about pure love. Interested students can have a look and recommend two other books, one is Yi Ru's Thinking Innocent, and the other is Bao Pengshan's Reading the Book of Songs with the Third Eye.