My father's kind face is covered with wrinkles carved by a meat cleaver. The wind messed up his sparse hair and his temples turned gray, which made me feel even more distressed. Looking at my father's resolute eyes, I seem to remember the high spirits of that year. Gradually, his nose turned red and his eyes shone with tears. He was thinking that his mother, who was over 500 years old, had been worried all her life and had not enjoyed enough blessings from her children and grandchildren, so she passed away in a hurry. "Tree! ! "
2. Composition (portrait of relatives) (emoticon description) My family loves me very much, so there are my parents in my painting. ...
Love mom
My mother has a pair of big watery eyes, and some yellow faces have a nose that is not high or low in the middle, and her mouth hangs under the nose, reminding me from time to time: "You should sweep the floor!" ""you go and clean the table! " ……
Computer dad
Dad has a pair of bright eyes, a nose that can smell delicious food, a mouth that can eat a handful of melon seeds, and makes a funny expression. He sits at the computer all day. This is my father who likes computers.
Grandpa cook
My grandfather has black hair with a few silver hairs in it, and he is a good cook, such as braised fish, fried meat with bean sprouts, Sichuan-style pork … these are my grandfather's specialties!
Grandma is in charge.
I have a grandmother who likes to take care of things. At home, she either washes clothes or chooses vegetables or sweeps the floor. My mother and sister have told her to rest, but my grandmother still can't remember! Alas!
This is my family! Interesting, funny, humorous and happy family!
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2011-1-15 06: 51Satisfied with a boastful mother.
My mom, she's fine there, but she likes to brag too much. Now please listen to me and tell everyone.
Event 1
Keywords: lose weight
Early in the morning, I was awakened by my mother in a beautiful dream and said that she would go running with me. Alas! People are not allowed to sleep well during holidays. Helpless, I had to reluctantly get up from the warm bed and follow my mother to the big playground. After only two laps, I was almost exhausted, but my mother still called me "Jingjing, run!" ! Today's goal is four laps! "Oh my god, it's like hearing a thunderbolt from the sky, and I collapsed on the plastic runway. I have no choice but to stick to it, or my mother will tell me the "situation" for a long time-that I want to lose weight from an early age. Who let me stand such a fitness-loving mother!
Event 2
Keywords: beauty
One of my mother's favorite things to do is to do beauty. Once I went to my classmate's house to play, and it was very late when I came back. When I opened the door, I saw a big "monster" standing at home-his face and neck were black, and only his eyes were turning, which scared me to let out a cry and almost spit out blood. It turns out that my mother put a sea bath mask on her face! Her face is often coated with cucumbers, pineapples, eggs, honey, masks and other things, and the color changes accordingly. It's really red, orange, yellow, green, blue and purple, with everything!
Alas! It's not easy to be a daughter who loves to praise her mother!
The portrait of the old man describes a shabby hut in the workers' village. The hut has walls and mud piles. There are all kinds of flowers and plants on the wall.
The owner of the hut is an old man. His wrinkled face, gray and slack, recalled his weather-beaten years. He is all skin and bones, and his waist is bent badly. His clothes always make people think he is an old beggar.
At present, the only "job" of the old people is to collect and sell junk, and sometimes they sit at the gate of the yard and take a nap or bask in the sun.
Bottles, broken cans and scrap iron filled the yard, leaving only a narrow passage where you can put your feet down. These rags almost flooded the hut.
Nobody cares about the history of old people now. He is a coal miner. It is said that when he was young, he had an object in his hometown, because it was a "coal spot" and he blew it. Later, he didn't think much: he didn't go back to his hometown after retirement and built this hut.
In this way, the old man lives with the rags in the yard and the flowers on the wall, day after day, year after year.
One day, the old man sat at the gate of the yard and died in a deep sleep. It was a cloudy evening, flowers were in full bloom, and the afterglow of the sunset locked him in a cage.
A few days later, the city radio and TV station reported an explosive news. Someone donated 10,000 yuan to the Municipal Education Foundation. The donor was him, the owner of the hut and the old man who picked up junk.
[Brief Comment]: The author is a middle school student in Hebi Mining Bureau of Henan Province. This article is about real people.
The success of this paper lies in the use of environmental description, portrait description, profile description and other techniques, which makes people feel that the elderly are extremely ordinary, extremely pitiful and unfortunate, thus causing people's sympathy and even pity. Finally, the feat of donating 10 thousand yuan to the "Municipal Education Foundation" was reported. The huge contrast greatly enhances the touching power.
The environmental description in this paper plays a role in displaying the characters' thoughts and personalities.
For example, although the hut is broken, there are all kinds of flowers and plants on the wall, which reflects the owner's love for beauty and pursuit of life.
The description of the environment full of rags in the house shows the poor living conditions of the old people.
"One day, the old man sat at the gate of the yard and died in a deep sleep. It was a cloudy evening, flowers were in full bloom, and the afterglow of the sun kept him in a cage. " This description of the environment sets off the beautiful hearts of the elderly.
Look at the introduction of the article again:
"Almost no one cares about the old man ..." A profile describes him as an ordinary old man. No status, no influence, no respect.
"It is said that ..." A profile description, through the mouth of others, confessed the old man's misfortune.
5. Portrait composition for grandpa 600] Portrait composition for dad 500 words] Portrait My dad is a very distinctive person. Look: Curly dad has natural curly hair that many girls envy. 500 words for my father's portrait composition. Black hair in small circles really smells like foreigners. Strange eyes dad's eyes are not good-looking, mom said, they are triangular eyes. Dad's eyes are strange, too. He looked very kind when he wore glasses, but when he took them off, his eyes were a little more serious, which made me feel cold at first sight. There is a "hidden mouth" in the composition "500 words depicting my father" in the fifth grade of primary school. Dad's mouth is really "hidden" Why do you say that? You don't feel anything strange when you look at his mouth at ordinary times, but if he talks, you must be prepared and don't be scared! Full of black teeth, I didn't know I thought it was chocolate! But this "hidden" mouth is really unambiguous when eating! He can eat a large plate of vegetables at one sitting. Big Nose Dad's nose is very big. It's an authentic aquiline nose, but this beautiful aquiline nose caught a cold and is as red as a carrot. Under the carrot, several "green bugs" crawled out from time to time. Dad's skin is very good, which makes his mother envy him. In summer, the whitest thing is his stomach. Make some appropriate changes and hope to adopt them. Thank you.
6. Write a composition of people around you, such as family, classmates, friends and relatives, and describe it with portraits. My mother is not simple. She is both a university teacher and a doctoral student.
My mother is thin. She is very diligent. When I get up every morning, she has already made breakfast. My mother always rides me to school when I finish breakfast.
Once, when I came back from school at noon, I saw my mother lying in bed. I asked, "Mom, what's wrong with you?" My mother said, "I'm not feeling well today. Remember to go to school after dinner. " After dinner, I turned on the TV and watched it with relish, but forgot my mother's words and watched TV wholeheartedly. Suddenly, I heard my mother shout, "son, why haven't you gone to school yet?" It's past school time! " I shouted, "Mom, what should I do?" Mother said, "Let me see you off!" I saw the sweat on my mother's forehead and my breathing accelerated. I said to my mother, "Mom, I'll go by myself!" " "Mom said," it doesn't matter, we will arrive soon. "When I got to school, I saw my mother's face was ugly, but she still smiled at me. As we all know, portrait description refers to the description of its voice, appearance, dress and posture. A character's emotion, life experience, social status and personality characteristics are often revealed from portraits. The portrait was done just right.
The following are some effective methods that I have summarized from my experience for your reference.
First of all, we should choose the portrait characteristics that can best highlight the personality of the characters to describe.
Portrait writing is to express the character, reveal the spiritual world of the character and enhance the artistic charm of the character. A good portrait description lies not in richness, but in "precision", and in expressing the distinctive personality characteristics of the characters through the most concise words. In retrospect, friends who want to read My Teacher by the famous writer Wei Wei will still leave a deep impression on my teacher, Mr. Cai. She ...
Mr Cai's beauty left a deep and beautiful impression on us.
If you want to take multiple portraits of the same person, you should not only highlight the personality you want to show each time, but also follow the * * * relationship between them. For example, Kong Yiji written by Lu Xun is probably familiar to everyone. In "Kong Yiji" (the fifth volume of Chinese in Soviet Education Edition), it is written that "only Kong Yiji wears a gown when standing and drinking." Kong Yiji's unique identity and social status are summarized in one sentence. It can be seen that he is down and out, malnourished and often beaten. "Although he wore a gown, it was dirty and torn, as if it had not been mended or washed for more than ten years." I can see that he is lazy, but he insists on putting on a poor shelf and wearing a shabby gown. Lu Xun's portrait description of Kong Yiji is superb, which not only highlights Kong Yiji's personality, but also shows Kong Yiji's * * * nature.
It is necessary to pay attention to a certain order when describing the same person many times. On the one hand, Lu Xun's portrait description is an excellent example. This paper describes Lu Xun's portrait three times, not only vividly, but also in a reasonable order, from far and near, from coarse to fine, from fine to fine, from whole to part, so that the characters are gradually enriched with my observation and feelings. In the three descriptions,
Second, use exact metaphors and appropriate exaggeration to describe portraits.
Writing portraits in this way will be more vivid and vivid. For example, Wei Wei wrote Ma Yuxiang in "Who is the cutest person" (the third volume of the Soviet Education Edition) that "he has a black and red face and stands there high, as simple and lovely as a red sorghum in an autumn field", and compared Ma Yuxiang to "a red sorghum in an autumn field" with an exact metaphor.
Another example is that Lu Xun wrote in "Gao Old Master Q" that the walking posture with high old bars and high shoulders is "like a drill brought by a carpenter"; In Hometown, the beauty of tofu is written as "a 50-year-old woman standing in front of me, with prominent cheekbones and thin lips, her hands stretched between her moustaches and her feet spread out, just like a thin-footed compass in a drawing instrument." Zhao Shuli wrote three fairies in Marriage of Little Black Boys. It's a pity that the official powder didn't smooth the wrinkles on the face, and it looked like frost on donkey dung eggs. "The metaphor used in the above example is very accurate, so this portrait description can clearly show the character's character, but it is not easy to work by using this technique. It requires the author to have a deep understanding of the character, a careful observation of life, and a clear understanding of the relationship between the vehicle and the ontology, and then the exact metaphor and appropriate exaggeration can be used to make the portrait vivid. "
7. Portraits depict loved ones 1. My father was hunched over and panting. He tried to squat down to the ground to have a rest and drink his own water.
It's not too hot, but his forehead, cheeks and nose are all sweaty. He just rolled up his sleeves and wiped them, and it didn't take long for him to ooze a lot from somewhere. Suddenly, my father seemed to think of something. He took out the money in his pocket, counted it carefully and frowned helplessly. The wrinkles on my forehead are clearly visible, as if they had been deeply engraved by countless knives.
Two minutes before the break, two more people came: "Master, go to Renmin Road Cinema". Without saying a word, he got on the bus and took the passengers on the road again.
My father's kind face is covered with wrinkles carved by a meat cleaver. The wind messed up his sparse hair and his temples turned gray, which made me feel even more distressed. Looking at my father's resolute eyes, I seem to remember the high spirits of that year. Gradually, his nose turned red and his eyes shone with tears. He was thinking that his mother, who was over 500 years old, had been worried all her life and had not enjoyed enough blessings from her children and grandchildren, so she passed away in a hurry. "Tree! ! "。
I have a loving grandmother who is very kind to me.
My grandmother is 65 years old, with gray hair, three deep wrinkles on her forehead and a pair of kind eyes, which makes people feel amiable. Grandma is very concerned about my life.
I remember once, it was already 12 in the afternoon, and I suddenly felt terribly hot, but my body was very cold. I keep turning around in bed, which is very uncomfortable! Grandma woke up and asked kindly, "What's the matter with you?" I said uncomfortably, "I seem to have a fever." Hearing this, grandma reached out and touched my forehead, and her eyes immediately showed anxious eyes.
Grandma picked me up and went straight to the hospital. As soon as she arrived at the hospital, the doctor said, "Blood transfusion at once." I slept in a hospital bed and fell asleep before I knew it.
When I got up the next day, I saw my grandmother sitting next to me, her eyes bloodshot. I whispered, why don't you get some sleep? Grandma said kindly, "I just got up." I know what grandma said is false, my eyes are wet and I jump into grandma's arms.
At noon, grandma gave me the hot water bottle she had already prepared and covered me with a quilt. I fell asleep again. I am proud to have such a grandmother.
9. Portraits depict loved ones 1. My father was hunched over and panting. He tried to squat down to the ground to have a rest and drink his own water.
It's not too hot, but his forehead, cheeks and nose are all sweaty. He just rolled up his sleeves and wiped them, and it didn't take long for him to ooze a lot from somewhere. Suddenly, my father seemed to think of something. He took out the money in his pocket, counted it carefully and frowned helplessly. The wrinkles on my forehead are clearly visible, as if they had been deeply engraved by countless knives.
Two minutes before the break, two more people came: "Master, go to Renmin Road Cinema". Without saying a word, he got on the bus and took the passengers on the road again.
My father's kind face is covered with wrinkles carved by a meat cleaver. The wind messed up his sparse hair and his temples turned gray, which made me feel even more distressed. Looking at my father's resolute eyes, I seem to remember the high spirits of that year. Gradually, his nose turned red and his eyes shone with tears. He was thinking that his mother, who was over 500 years old, had been worried all her life and had not enjoyed enough blessings from her children and grandchildren, so she passed away in a hurry. "Tree! ! "。