Sunrise is a miracle of nature. If the sun sets like a little girl, then the rising sun is a fairy.
In order to watch the sunrise, I got up at five o'clock in the morning, rubbed my hazy eyes and followed my father to the river.
After a while, a fish-belly grey appeared in the east, and countless pairs of eyes began to stare at it. In the blink of an eye, the fish-belly white turned pink, and the clouds in the sky gradually dispersed. Suddenly, a red line appeared on the top of the mountain and slowly stretched. I don't know who said, "The sun is coming out soon." Soon, half the face of the sun appeared in the mountains. Red is very red, but there is no dazzling light, so people can see it with the naked eye. Mother Earth couldn't bear to let the sun leave her. She pulled it down hard, and the sun could only rise slowly. About twenty minutes later, the sun finally broke free from the embrace of Mother Earth and rose between Lingjunchong Mountain in Ran Ran. It is really like a big red ball, and it blushes with anger. The clouds in the sky were immediately inlaid with sparkling edges, and the vast sea of clouds sparkled in the sun. The sun reflected on the river is not so red at this time, and its light awakens everything on the earth, making the earth full of vitality and brand-new. I sighed and admired this picturesque fairyland on earth.
Sunrise represents the beginning of a new day; Sunrise, full of light; Sunrise, full of hope
2. Write a composition about scenery from top to bottom. My hometown is a garden full of flowers. My hometown is a forest with the coolness of green trees; My hometown is a field with the hope of harvest; My hometown is a snow scene, shining with the light of ice crystals.
Looking back, everyone wanted to eat, and the small yard was full of fruits and vegetables. All year round, as long as something can be planted, the yard will be full. Look, all kinds of colors are mixed together. It's a mess. What a crowded and messy yard. Now, every family doesn't grow vegetables very much, but flowers. Flowers keep coming all the year round. In spring, Chinese rose and roses are in full bloom. Flowers are more prosperous and colorful in summer. In autumn, flowers should wither, but chrysanthemums are in full bloom. In winter, it snows heavily, but plum blossoms are in full bloom in the branches. Throughout the year, the fragrance is constant. Sweet and beautiful hometown is like a garden.
In the past, the village was bare and there were few trees outside. In summer, adults chatting outside sit along the wall, and most children hide in the house and fan their fans. The room is like a steamer and the outside is like a hot pot. Now, green trees are planted in front of the house, on both sides of the street and outside the village. Although it is not as dense as a forest, it is also sheltered by trees. In summer, adults enjoy the cool under the tree and children play under it. Dense leaves bring coolness. Cool, as cool as a forest home.
Looking back, the fields are full of crops, including corn, rice and peanuts. At that time, people's planting technology was not very high. Although they worked hard, the harvest was not very satisfactory. The crops watered with a drop of sweat seem to be deliberately against people. Now with the popularization of science and technology, green and pollution-free crops are everywhere, realizing mechanized production, saving time and effort, farmers' pockets are getting more and more bulging, and their spare time is also enriched. In spring, rice is like a green ocean, with rough waves; In autumn, the rice droops its head and the earth is golden. It can be said that "spring seeds are all green, and autumn harvest is all gold". Happy, a hometown full of harvest like a field.
Looking back, garbage has a paradise-streets, which stay in every corner at will, sometimes dancing against the wind and even swimming in the water, making people want to hide. It's really dirty Now, garbage has its own home-dump, and the streets are clean and tidy, paved with cement roads, which has become a dazzling bright spot. Clean, my hometown shines like ice crystals.
3. Composition written in the order of tour: 400 words to see the sea, travel notes]
The front is a vast and desolate mountain, with cars crawling on the foothills and lush trees on both sides, and a 10-meter-wide uphill road is strictly protected in the middle. Maybe it's the first time to walk this mountain road. Unfamiliar roads always make people feel particularly tortuous and long. However, there will be unexpected surprises. Those twists and turns often give us a false alarm. From time to time, one or two houses with red bricks and tiles pass by us, and there must be some green bamboo bushes next to them. The car passed like the wind, and those bamboo leaves crackled on the window, and they were not lonely all the way.
Yucangshan is located at the junction of Zhejiang and Fujian, more than 900 meters above sea level. You can see the sunrise, the sea of clouds and the strange stones, and it is known as the world's "Jade Cang San Jue". The car traveled between the mountains and valleys for more than two hours. As we approached, it began to rain. The top of the mountain is shrouded in clouds, and the beautiful scenery of Yucang Mountain is tightly covered. Turning the last corner, we can vaguely see the red glazed tile roof of Yuhua Villa where we are staying. The villa is surrounded by mountains and waters. European villas are exquisite and elegant, scattered on the rugged hillside, and the scale seems to be quite large. When we got off the bus, fresh air came to our faces. The air is moist and abundant, just like countless transparent water drops. We open our mouths and suck greedily, and then feel that every pore of our bodies can be filled with sweetness. It didn't rain much, but it was foggy. Fog, vision is only 50 meters. The fog surged around and hung on the surrounding pine trees. The treetops were foggy and the pine needles were green. Walking on the flat path in the pine forest makes people feel like floating in the clouds.
One of the wonders of Yucang Mountain is that there are many lakes on it. It is said that there are as many as 18 lakes. These lakes are scattered among the mountains, crystal clear all year round and not dry in midsummer. Even more amazing, there are fish activities in the lake. But in this weather, we can't explore in seclusion. We can only listen to this as a legend, hoping to quench our thirst. Fortunately, there is an artificial lake below the villa, and a dam is built at an altitude of 800 meters to store water, which can be said to be a veritable "high gorge out of Pinghu". The lake is wide, and the villas embrace each other gently along the mountain. Looking around, the lake is misty and I don't know where the shore is. A small pier was built by the lake and extended into the lake. A boat was tied to the dock, and a man at the end of the dock vaguely watched Ling Bo fishing. Touching the wet railing on the shore, I envy the fisherman's happiness a little. At this time, melodious bells floated on the mountain, probably the night shift of Fayun Temple, a thousand-year-old temple in Yucang Mountain. The bell was dull and quivered in the echo of the valley. Let's think about it, the Tianhu Lake in Yun Shenchu should be so beautiful now, with uninhabited canyons and picturesque scenery reflected at the bottom of the lake. How gorgeous and lonely it will be.
Unexpectedly, the fisherman was a young man. With a carefree look on his face, he simply put down his fishing rod and chatted with me when he approached. I claim to be a family in the mountains and drive a taxi. Today, I took my guests to Yuhua Mountain Villa, borrowed a set of fishing tackle to catch some fish, and went back to eat rare teeth at night. "The fish in this mountain is delicious." The young man's salivating face made me laugh. Seeing that I was in high spirits, he offered to take me for a walk in the mountains, as long as I paid a little gas money. Seeing his sly face, he quickly packed his fishing tackle and spared no business. I seem to see the unique shrewdness of the mountain people.
After the car turned a sign that said "Yucangshan National Forest Park", no one was seen. The car is driving very slowly, so roll down the window and let the mountain wind pour in. It's especially cool, and sometimes there are the chirping of forest birds. After several turns, a relatively wide canyon appeared in front, and a temple was exposed among the trees. The car stopped outside the temple gate, and the young man jumped out and said, Fayun Temple has arrived. The temple is small, but simple. The gate is a stone structure, and the standing stone is covered with moss. After the gate, it is the square. There is a very unique living pool in the center of the square. There are several stone pagodas in front of the pool, under which are plates of exquisite dahlias. There is a small rockery in the pool, and a drop of Guanyin stone smiles with a low eyebrow. It looks natural. I can see that the sculpture is fine and the water in the pool is there.
In the evening, the temple was quiet and empty, and there was no incense fireworks, only the Vatican incense was left in the air. Several old people sat around chatting and couldn't tell who the monk was. The young man sat among them with tea. Living in the mountains may often be such a scene, so monotonous, away from the noise of the world, who was born in where, who joined the WTO, can not say. In these slow years of hundreds of years, we should invite some naughty fox spirits in Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio to say a few words to them after dinner.
The weather on the mountain is really unpredictable. On the way back, it rained heavily. At night, one after another, with the thunder of lightning, the electricity stopped. In the dark, everyone gathered in the living room in horror. Under the flickering candlelight, listening to the noisy rain outside the window, lightning split down and lit up half the sky. Thunder is like a hammer, and the mountains shake. This is a mountain with an altitude of nearly 900 meters, which means it is 900 meters from the sky. We all fought involuntarily in the lightning like snakes. I suddenly think of the old people in the ancient temple, and I wonder if they will feel at ease as usual tonight. The next morning, I got up and opened the curtains, only to find that Yucang Mountain, which had experienced a night of wind and rain, was so beautiful: under the blue sky, the sun was shining and the jagged hills were covered with stones with different expressions. Last night's thunderstorm and yesterday's misty rain seemed like a dream that had already turned into dust.
Writing a composition in chronological order is a trivial matter.
In the morning, Deng handed in yesterday's homework. She said to me, "You must not show it to others." She made me swear. However, just after class, Peng Guiqi asked me, "Benson Liu, can you have a look at our group's composition draft?" I said, "No, I swore to someone else."
He said angrily, "Hum, cheapskate, if you don't look, you won't look." Say what? Ignore me. My face turned red at once, and I shouted, "You are the curious ghost. There are so many compositions in the composition book that you just want to read your classmates' compositions and don't want to read them. What a strange ghost! "When he heard these words, he deliberately touched me, and I ignored him.
I thought to myself, Peng Guiqi loves reading other people's compositions, so let him read them. As long as he doesn't read Deng's, it will hurt his spirit. After a while, I found him and made him a manuscript. After reading a few articles, he felt that it was not enough. I have to read Deng's, which puts me in a dilemma. Finally, he grabbed it and read Deng's composition. I had to tell Deng about it and was scolded by her.
I felt very wronged and told the class teacher about it. To my surprise, the teacher praised Peng Guiqi in Chinese class. The teacher said to the class, "As you all know, Peng Guiqi writes the best composition, but I don't know why he writes so well. That's because he usually likes to read his classmates' compositions. After each masterpiece, he will come to me to read the good composition in the class. Only by constantly reading other people's compositions, letting others read their own compositions and making suggestions will progress quickly. "
5. What are the compositions in the writing order? This is the embodiment of the comprehensive level of Chinese. But for many students (including me at the beginning), I always feel that the composition is very profound and difficult to write. Actually, it's not. I think it is not difficult to write a good composition as long as you pay attention to the following points and persevere, and often practice writing.
The first is the accumulation of words. Writing requires good words and sentences to be literary and attractive. An article, no matter how wonderful it is without good words and witty sentences, is also dull and tasteless. How can we attract people and make them appreciate it? You wrote this article for nothing. In the usual study, Teacher Li of our class pays great attention to this aspect of education and guidance. I also pay great attention to this when reading articles and books.
The second aspect is observation. Writing a composition is not confined in a room, but observed and experienced in real life. Because life is the source of writing! Some people, he went out to "observe", just glanced at it and ignored the details. Therefore, the composition written is just an outline, and there are no main points or details at all. Therefore, when observing, we should pay attention and be careful, so as to write a good composition that is different from others. I remember when I went out, my father often pointed and asked questions to get my attention and thinking.
Third, read more extracurricular books. This is an important channel for accumulating words and the key to writing a composition. Including books ordered at home and various books in bookstores. As long as I have time, I will go to the bookstore to read all kinds of extracurricular books. Of course, you can't write a perfect composition just by reading. The key is to accumulate, remember and use it well. Only in this way can we achieve the goal of "serving others and serving me", so that when writing a composition, we can do whatever we want and write freely.
6. What is the description order of the articles written in the composition? In Chinese textbooks and extracurricular reading, you can often see articles describing mountains and rivers, natural phenomena, places of interest and so on. These are what we call landscape articles; In the face of such articles, how should we determine their description order? Generally speaking, writers often write in the following order: 1. Spatial order.
For example, from top to bottom or from left to right, from far to near or from four weeks to the middle. Second, the order of observation.
There are usually two kinds: one is fixed-point observation, such as standing in a corner of the park and observing the park from far to near; Another example is that we climb to the top of the tower and observe the scenery under the tower in the order of southeast and northwest. The other is moving observation, that is, changing the position with the movement of footsteps, observing one place at a time.
For example, in the article "Visiting the Great Hall of the People", the author wrote five scenes in order of visiting. Write the national emblem and pillars at the main entrance of the Great Hall first, then the ceiling and floor of the central hall, then the auditorium, and then the banquet hall and conference hall.
In this way, the author systematically and emphatically wrote down the scenery that the author saw in turn in the Great Hall. Third, the time sequence.
With the passage of time, the scenery described will also change. For example, in the article "Watching the Tide", the author first wrote the scene that the river was calm before the tide came and people were anxiously looking forward to it; Then write the magnificent and thrilling scene at high tide; Finally, write the aftermath of tide.
When reading landscape articles, we must pay attention to the description order. Only by clarifying the description order can we better grasp the article and understand the author's feelings; It will be like being around it, hearing its voice and seeing its scenery.
The composition of 7.400 words should be written in order. Next to our home, there is a winding, crystal clear river that looks like a colorful ribbon from a distance.
In spring, the river is like a colorful painting. As long as the spring breeze blows, willows sprout, green grass grows around the river, and colorful wildflowers are in the middle.
In the hot summer, everyone came to the river, and some took fans to enjoy the cool under the willow trees; Some chat with neighbors; Others took off their coats and jumped into the river like little frogs to perform swimming competitions for the villagers.
When the cool autumn comes, the crops in the field are bumper, and the villagers are busy collecting food. There is also a big tree by the river, which is covered with red apples! Xiao Shu is also very happy.
The cold winter is coming, and there are goose feather-like snowflakes falling in the sky. The apple tree is wrapped in white, and the ground is covered with a white carpet. Of course, the most beautiful river is that one: the stones on both sides of the river are covered with snowflakes, like a scarf around the river. Don't mention how beautiful the scenery is!
I like the river in my hometown!
8. Write the composition of the landscape in order. On a sunny morning, it is refreshing to walk into the park and breathe fresh air.
Look up at the boundless sky, blue, as if washed with water, so clear. White clouds are like small white sails and white lilies. The green hills in the distance are undulating and shrouded in fog, hazy, like a veil. There is a small red pavilion on the top of the mountain, and the glass bricks are shining in the sun. Nearby, the first thing you see is peach blossoms, pink as rosy clouds. Really strive for beauty and openness, just like a proud little princess, competing for beauty with each other. The refreshing smell is intoxicating, attracting bees and butterflies to dance around them. There is a chair beside the birch. Visitors often sit in chairs reading and drawing. . There is a small playground in front of the flower bed. Some people are practicing Tai Ji Chuan, others are skipping rope, and there is laughter everywhere. People fully enjoy life. Through the small playground, an artificial lake is displayed in front of us. Under the sunshine, the clear lake is shining with a little silver. Fish swim leisurely in the water, and some are covered with colorful stripes; Some have a cluster of red tassels on their heads; Some are like fans inserted all over the body, waving when swimming; Some eyes are round, and their bodies are covered with thorns, which are round like a ball. Two children are rowing, very happy!
As the saying goes, a day's plan lies in the morning. I like the morning, but I prefer the beautiful scenery in the spring park.