Dishuiyan Scenic Area is located in the south of White County, Sichuan Province, and is located in Zhapan Village, Jianshe Township, about 5 kilometers away from the county seat. It attracts tourists from inside and outside the county with its strange scenery, and it is a famous tourist attraction. Walk along the foot of Baizhang Mountain, along the even-numbered bend (river), about 1 hour, that is, to the bottom of Dishuiyan. Looking up, I saw Lingyun on the cliff, a waterfall hanging from the hanging rock, just like a white dragon shaking all over the water and flying into the pool; It is also like a silver thread hanging in a bead, hanging straight in the sky, which naturally reminds people of Li Bai's famous sentence, "Flying to thousands of feet, it is suspected that the Milky Way has set for nine days."
On the left side of the waterfall, there is a winding mountain road that can reach the "dragon head". It turns out that this is an ordinary spring water, which gushes out from the cracks in the stone. It seems to escape the weight of its body, jumping happily, eager to fly, eager to join the chorus of the waterfall! Maybe it was a long journey, and it was tired again, and it slowly entered the pool along the stream. The blue sky, reflected on it, is so clean; White water vapor transpires from the pool, and under the refraction of the sun's light, it looks like colorful auspicious clouds, such as sunrise at sea and rainbow after rain, which makes people seem to enter a mythical realm. A circular halo surrounds you, and the seven colors set each other off, brilliant and incomparable! No, this is not a myth, but an amazing sight here-arc light.
There are lush pine trees at the top of the "faucet", which are lush and stand proudly; On the hillside are impenetrable peach forests and apricot trees, and mountain cherries are mixed in them; In the middle is a green lawn, which is dyed red by wild flowers in the east and red by wild flowers in the west. As charming as a girl's red face. A gust of wind blew, and red peach blossoms, white apricot flowers, yellow pine flowers and colorful grass flowers were playing in the green sea like a group of naughty children wearing different clothes. At this time, what you hear is the singing of the bird bowl and the praise of the tourists clapping, just as comfortable as enjoying a beautiful violin solo; At the moment, what you see are girls jumping on the carpet and boys laughing on the fruit trees, just like a group of colorful butterflies dancing among the red flowers and green trees. My friend, at this moment, you will be full of interest, and you can't wait to put all the music in your heart and have a panoramic view. Where is the shadow of fatigue with you?
Now, don't forget to eat some biscuits to fill your stomach. Thirst? It doesn't matter, if you go further north, it will be Lion Mountain in less than 10 minutes. A boulder is like a lion's mouth, and a clear spring flows out of it. Pine trees and wild flowers on the rocks are scrambling to dress up in front of this big round mirror, and even the leaves and petals are clearly reflected. On the right side of the lion's mouth, there is a hole that is bottomless. According to legend, it is a place where immortals make an alchemy. Put it into the lion's mouth after alchemy, so the spring water is especially delicious. Don't think this is a myth. If you taste the milk on the chest of Qingshan, it will be so sweet and refreshing, and you will feel refreshed! At this time, as long as you pay a little attention, you will see that when you reach out for the water, the blue waves jump, and the rock shadows, tree shadows, flower shadows and figures shake together, as if nature is holding a grand dance, bending down together, chasing each other and hugging each other. Enjoy enough, everything is calm, and the clear spring presents a quiet beauty with blue as the keynote. Being in this blue spring, it seems that the whole world is blue and life is blue. Yes, the dew of this clear spring makes the blue sky drunk, the tourists drunk and everything drunk.
Dishuiyan, it is really beautiful. When night falls quietly, reminding people to come back, a bright moon rises from the mountains with a smile, intending to see you off, making you feel like the tide on your way home, giving people a feeling of "climbing the mountain at the beginning of beauty, there is an unknown world".
From the time we came to this world, we can clearly feel that it was our mother who gave us the most.
In spring, maternal love is like the germ of the earth, sprouting hope in her arms; In summer, maternal love is the rain that moistens everything, and the jointing sound of life creaks; In autumn, my mother lit up the world with the color of love, and the golden harvest set off the face of the fruit; In winter, the mother purified her soul with the whiteness of love, and the fragile seedlings got rich nutrition. Mom, she has done a lot for us without asking for anything in return. Even if she pays a great price, she only wants us to grow up healthily. ...
One winter, it snowed heavily. My father was on a business trip and my mother was still at work. I am alone in a warm room, drinking hot milk and watching TV, and I feel extremely happy. Looking out of the window, there are many children playing with snow downstairs. I opened the window and wanted to talk to them. Suddenly a cold wind blew in and I shuddered. I remembered my mother running around outside. I had a brainwave, opened the tea cupboard and found my mother's favorite way of keeping in good health-tartary buckwheat tea and teacups. I carefully took them out one by one, made tea and waited for my mother to get off work.
After a while, there was the sound of the key unlocking outside the door-it must be mom's back! I took the cotton slippers that my warm mother had put on the radiator to my mother and helped her take off her shoes and put them on. Looking up, I saw my mother's face and hands, red with cold. I was so distressed that I quickly served the hot tea that I had already prepared. My mother understood my intention and left tears of emotion. ...
Suddenly I felt that my mother had paid so much for me, and I just put on her shoes and made a cup of hot tea. My mother was so excited that she burst into tears. This shows how important my return is in my mother's heart.
I think, maternal love is a towering tree, which protects me from wind and rain between tall and straight, gives me fresh oxygen in warmth and nurtures my growth; Motherly love is a flower that never fades. It spits out a fragrance, smells Wan Li, and lets the fragrance surround me. In the face of such a strong maternal love, how can you not think of gratitude? "Sheep have the grace of kneeling on milk, and crows have the meaning of feeding back." Fallen leaves hover in the air, composing a movement of gratitude, which is the gratitude of the tree to the earth that nourishes it; Baiyun floats in the blue sky, drawing pictures of people, which is Baiyun's gratitude to the blue sky that nurtured it. As the saying goes, "the grace of dripping water is rewarded by the spring." What's more, what Mom has paid for you is not just a drop of water, but a piece of Wang Yang sea. Gratitude is meaningful. It is because of love that the world keeps spinning!
The third part of 8th grade's second volume composition teaching objectives
1. On the basis of students' original writing, constantly improve and exercise their basic writing ability to meet the basic writing requirements.
2. Be able to write about people and things you are familiar with, so as to be clear and coherent; Write your true feelings. Write something with personality in your composition. The composition should be original and have distinctive personality characteristics.
3. Focus on training narrative writing, use lyricism and discussion, write more feelings, and stimulate understanding.
4. Use a variety of writing forms freely and flexibly.
Specific measures
1. In the proposition, try to guide students to find composition materials from their own practical activities, and extract expressive topics that can arouse true feelings through discussion and dialogue. The design of the topic should be from shallow to deep, and the action should be in the heart.
2. Pay attention to guide students to feel life, think about life, strengthen the exchange experience between students, learn from each other through the best language expression, so as to understand the true meaning of writing, urge students to write "I speak my mind", and let students pour out their hearts with composition as the carrier.
3. In the revision of the composition, students can read their first draft repeatedly, and more importantly, they can judge and revise the composition with the help of the strength between students. On the basis of the original work, we should modify and polish the text, delete those branches that do not conform to the emotion and theme of the article, and add some sentences or related words that are excessively concerned where necessary, so as to make the sentences of the article more beautiful, clear in thinking and smooth in context, and finally achieve the effect of both quality and beauty.
4. When commenting, students are the main body, and examples are presented in contrast, so that students can feel whether the article meets the requirements of the topic, and then summarize the advantages of a good composition and the modification scheme of a poor composition through discussion and research. This has a stronger guiding significance for students' composition. In this way, teachers will no longer sing the leading role alone, and students' writing ability will also be improved.
Unit 1 Narrative clues
First, the training objectives:
1, continue to learn to write narratives. Carefully observe the people and things around you, while observing, while recording, while thinking, and then select the most representative things or life fragments to show a person's characteristics in one aspect or several aspects. Show one side of this person's life through everything or everything in life. This is to break through the detailed writing mode of primary school composition. ) 2. Students should pay attention to the language characteristics of narrative when writing. 3, to train in narrative and description interspersed with appropriate lyrical and argumentative writing methods, and pay attention to the language transition between writing paragraphs.
Second, the training theme:
Junior year: There must have been such a thing in life. Things make you excited and excited. Someone must have cared about you and helped you. These people or events have left you with beautiful memories and treasured them in your heart. Recalling these past events, you will be excited and encouraged again, thus gaining the strength of life. Now, please pick up a pen and write down your cherished memories with the theme of "Missing". Advanced: 1. The sunshine in my life
Writing Description: Sunshine in my life is a figurative topic, and sunshine is the title, which means warmth and light. That person should give me sunshine-like warmth, give me the most precious enlightenment, illuminate my way forward, and guide students to recall the sunshine-like person in their lives, and how he helped and warmed themselves.
2. Save your life (life is the theme of this unit)
Lyric by borrowing things
First, the training objectives:
1. Let students learn to melt their emotions into the narrative and express their emotions through things.
2. Learn to use a variety of expressions, eat some food specifically, write its characteristics, and integrate into your own feelings.
3. Clever use of association and imagination to find the appropriate point of the "emotion" to be expressed by the selected "thing".
Second, the training theme:
Elementary: (in a word)
1. The poplars planted on the Youth Road in our school * * *, what kind of feelings did the poplars place on the members of * * *? Ginkgo trees are also planted on campus. What does this mean?
2. Write about 200 words about the school playground (using various expressions).
Advanced:
1. Read the following materials and write as required.
The twenty-four solar terms in China not only correspond to phenology and seasons accurately, but also have rich names. Let's take a look at several solar terms in spring: "beginning of spring" still carries the residual cold of winter, but the warmer weather brings the breath of spring, which is a turning point and a sign of the alternation of the old and the new; "Stunned" is like a story. A spring thunder awakens Qian Qian's sleeping life, just like a father's booze, and makes stubborn children know how to forge ahead. On the day of "vernal equinox", the sun is just above the equator, meticulously distributing its light to the north and south of the earth, showing a kind of justice. Please write an article with no less than 600 words on the topic of beginning of spring, Jing Ke and Equinox.
In this unusual spring.
Unit 3 Reasonable arrangement of explanation order
(If the writing content of this unit appeared in Unit 3 last semester, it is feasible to respond to the text, but this unit is a unit to reflect on the living environment and let students establish environmental awareness. So the writing in the textbook is not applicable, so let's continue to deepen the writing content of the first two units)
First, the training objectives:
1. Clarify and learn to use narrative writing ideas. (Time sequence, place change, plot change, emotional change ...)
2. Learn to use reasonable structural layout to achieve the purpose of having substance in words and substance in words. (Parallel, progressive, total score, subtitle, diary ...)
Second, the training theme
Primary: 1. disappear
Advanced: Expand the ancient poetry describing the scenery into prose, and pay attention to the use of descriptive techniques.
A number of small landscape essays are interlocking, which are composed of fragments, juxtaposition, progression and subtitle structure to express the theme of loving nature and protecting the environment.
Unit 4 Description and Lyrics in Narration
First, the training objectives:
1. When writing a narrative, the characters should be vivid and vivid, and the description methods such as appearance, manner, movement and language should be used properly. 2. When writing the narrative of scenery and events, we should present the scenery, things, events and feelings to the readers on the basis of careful observation and comprehensive use of various descriptive techniques and lyric means.
3. Lyricism strives to be natural and let nature take its course, so that love comes from things and affection comes from affection.
4. Personalized material selection, delicate description and sincere emotion.
Second, the training theme:
Elementary: 1. Philosophers often say that see the sea in a drop of water and the world in a grain of sand. Indeed, even some trivial things in our daily life, such as the custom of festivals, the habit of eating and dressing, and the architectural diet in their respective hometowns, are closely explored, and almost everything contains profound cultural connotations and valuable resources of Chinese studies. There will be many surprises when we go to the folk to "collect folk customs", pay attention to the folk customs that we usually don't follow, and explore the "knowledge" behind our daily life! Write an article on "Folk Custom".
2. Hometown festivals or "things" in China
Advanced: 1. Stranger people or things around you.
Writing guidance: before writing, students can collect materials, first select the characters described, and then focus on the selection of characters. For example, there are many people with special skills in TV programs: for example, CCTV 3' s "Avenue of Stars" and Oriental TV's talent show have many folk artists, and everyone has a skill.
If you carefully observe the streets, there are also many folk artists: like the grandfather who painted animals with maltose, the aunt who turned your name into a picture, and so on. The cry of selling medicine and sugar ... (Guwen Street)
2. True friends P 160
Unit 5 Learning to write letters
First, the training objectives:
1. Understand the stylistic features of "epistolary composition"
Letters are the most widely used practical writing in life, study and work, and they are also a common communication tool. However, if you want to use it to write a composition, you should not only regard it as a communication tool, but also regard it as an "article".
(1), sincere, easy to express true feelings, infectious. (often used in the second person)
(2) Flexible expression. Narrative, descriptive, lyrical and argumentative essays can be used.
(3), the content is informal, the structure is free, and there is no need for complicated transition.
(4), the object is very wide.
(5) Low language requirements. This is not to say that language can be boring without personality characteristics. )
2. Learn the format of the letter and pay attention to the requirements of the letter
The format of the letter mainly includes five parts: title, body, ending, signature and date.
3. Pay attention to all communication etiquette in speech.
Second, the training theme
Elementary: 1. In the process of growing up, there must be many puzzles that you can't answer, and there must be many troubles that you can't talk about. If you don't want to talk to your relatives and friends face to face, try to open your heart to them and talk to them by letter.
Advanced: 1. If you write a composition on the topic of "cherish" and express it in letters, what can you think?
Please write an epistolary composition on the topic of "choice" or "growth".
3. I face to face (pretend to be an ancient man)
Unit 6 Writing Learn to Write Travel Notes
First, the training objectives:
1. Learn the writing method with wandering as the clue, and be able to change scenery with moving steps and observe at fixed points.
2. Pay due attention to details and learn to choose materials.
3. Highlight the distinctive features of the scenery and skillfully use rhetoric.
4. Explain the knowledge about scenery appropriately.
5. blend in with the scenery.
Second, the training theme:
Mainly:
Everyone should have had the experience of traveling. During the trip, we not only observed the natural scenery, learned about the folk customs, but also had novel feelings, resulting in a lot of thinking and daydreaming. Do your own topics and write travel notes.
Advanced:
Introduce your travel history to your foreign pen pal in the form of letters, introduce him to the beautiful scenery of China, and also introduce the relevant knowledge of your tourist destination: myths and legends, historical stories, etc. , thus enhancing the culture and interest of the article.
My mother is the sun in my heart, the sun forever!
I can't forget, when the afterglow of the setting sun spread over the barren land, wisps of light green sunshine dyed the mother and the earth into a golden light wheel, and the mother's thin cheeks turned red quietly, and the wrinkles on her face vividly portrayed the sun in the child's heart.
I always describe my mother vividly in sweet dreams! How many ups and downs, cold wind and frost and snow. Mother, at the fork in the road of life, always pulls me onto the muddy and prickly path-although I stumble, I still move on. I once fell on the uneven dirt road, mom, never used those bony big hands to help me get up, always let me get up by myself! My mother is always happy when I climb by myself. "Be brave, son, fall down, get up, walk, and then …" So my mother shaped my ring for more than ten years into a flower.
From then on, mother is no longer imminent-because we all deserve the bright sun in our hearts!
Now, my mother is old, but she still shows her remaining afterglow to the fullest and bathes that love in us heartily. An old mother hides her sadness, just like a seed that doesn't germinate after a bumper harvest. Accompanied by a series of footsteps, my mother sent us up the winding mountain road again. He blessed us and deeply planted hope in our footprints.
Love, a brilliant prosperity, a warm and bright lamp.
I love my mother and I remember everything she gave me.
I love my mother, and I try to decorate her only season with my own brilliance.
I love my mother deeply. Thank my mother for raising the sail for my bumpy life!
I love my mother deeply! In this life, my mother is the eternal sun in my heart! Thank mother, forever ... forever. ...
Composition 5 in the second volume of the eighth grade is overcast and the sky is gloomy. There is no wind at all, which is suffocating.
I sat by the window and stared at the distant sky in a daze. At this moment, the gloomy weather outside is like my melancholy heart. ...
Mom, you know what? I don't know when it started. I feel as if there is a thick wall between you and me, so I can't get close to you. I tried to knock it down, but it was too strong and my strength was too small. I need your help! Now the wall seems to be getting thicker every day.
Mom, when I was very young, you said to me, "You should communicate with your mother often. If you have anything to do, just say it and your mother will solve it for you. " I believe and never hide it from you. But now, not only are you impatient to listen to me, but you also blame me for being distracted and not studying hard. What can I tell you in the future? Now, before I talk to you, what should I say and what should I not say? It takes me a long time to say it in my heart. After a long time, the silk that wanted to vomit but didn't vomit was cocooned in my heart and tightly wrapped around my heart. I started to get scared, and I became smooth.
Mom, another time, the teacher arranged for me to run a tabloid, but the newspaper was botched because of my limited ability. Later, a male student in my class who also runs a newspaper happened to pass by my house and sent my report back. I thought you could understand, but I didn't expect you to let me spend less time with boys and study hard. Those eyes are terrible, which makes me feel a sense of oppression. Mom, I am friends with everyone in my class. In my opinion, I should associate with students of the opposite sex more, because they have many advantages that I don't have. I know you do it for my own good, so as not to distract me. But no matter what I say, you don't believe me, and let a classmate supervise my actions. Dear mom, you are an educator. It is too difficult to educate your daughter.
Mom, if you let go of your doubts, if you don't have that worried expression, we will become friends, right?
It's raining, and it's raining harder and harder, and the world is vast. However, I believe it will be sunny tomorrow.