This is a beautiful article that not only praises nature, but also expresses emotions through things. The text is relatively short, but the modality of rain is just right in the article, with strong picturesque and lyrical beauty and great intonation, which is an ideal reflection? Amazing nature? Articles. Its beautiful language is fresh and touching, and it is a model for students to learn languages.

Teaching objectives:

1. Analyze the different characteristics of rain in four seasons, and understand the author's thoughts and feelings about rain.

2. Let students feel the beauty of language and pictures in the article, and learn to master the description method of scenery characteristics.

3. Learn appreciation methods to improve students' appreciation ability.

Teaching focus:

Guide students to apply the scenery description methods they have learned to practice.

Teaching difficulties:

Appreciate the beauty of the picture of the article, appreciate the exquisiteness of the author's pen, and cultivate students' ability to grasp the description of scenery characteristics.

teaching method

1. Self-reading method: teachers' guidance and students' self-reading are combined to understand the author's thoughts and feelings.

2. Reading method: With music reading, combine the teacher's demonstration reading with the students' reading, pay attention to the tone and rhythm of reading, and deepen understanding by reading.

3. Inquiry method: arouse students' enthusiasm, guide students to develop their own association and imagination, ask questions and explore problems.

Class arrangement:

1 class hour

Teaching steps:

First, introduce the new course:

There is a music without notes. Only those who listen carefully can understand its lyrics and play a cheerful and harmonious melody bit by bit. It doesn't need notes on the staff. This is rain. It's like a song, a poem and a painting. Spring rain is gentle, summer rain is fierce, autumn rain is cool and winter rain is calm. All kinds of rain moisten everything and infiltrate the soul. Four Seasons Rain, a beautiful poem by Liu Zhanqiu, a contemporary poet who is known as the king of lyric poetry in China, is such a song of four seasons rain.

Today, let's walk into his picturesque articles and appreciate the beauty of language and artistic conception.

Second, the basic knowledge:

1, by Liu Zhannian? Contemporary poet Qiu. Born in June, 1935. People from Wuhu City, Anhui Province. He is the author of a collection of poems, written on the stationery in early spring. His warm feelings and happy life were once praised as? The king of contemporary lyric poetry? .

2. Word accumulation:

Quiet and lofty, now.

Aggressive and rough swimming pool

Love is full of emotion.

Clear: m? mǐao l？ Dugu' ang q? m？ I am?

Third, the overall perception and appreciation analysis:

1, students read the text by themselves, talk about their feelings and have a preliminary understanding of the text according to the content of preview before class.

Health 1: After reading this article, I was completely infected by her beauty. Is this rain? More like a beautiful girl coming, gentle, warm, unrestrained, subtle, I love rain, like the author, deeply!

Student 2: The author used rain as raw material and emotion as yeast to brew an altar of wine in the wine cellar of his heart. As soon as we opened it, the fragrance came to our face, drunk our pale and dry life and precipitated a mellow and attractive taste of life. This kind of beauty can't be expressed in words, and we need to feel it with our heart.

Teacher: In this hurried world, who else can abandon worldly distractions? We don't have to wait for the reincarnation of the four seasons. Even if the cold wind blows outside the window, we can take a ride to Xinhai to watch the rain. We don't need a plane ticket to go there, but we need you to bring a sincere and optimistic backpack and a pair of pure glasses. The rain in Xinhai is beautiful: there are the fluttering of spring rain, the drizzle of summer rain, the gurgling of autumn rain and a lot of winter rain. That is the extreme of rain, and of course it is also the extreme of life.

2. The music teacher demonstrated reading paragraph 1, 2. Please read the rest paragraphs. Think and find the words that reflect the different characteristics of the four seasons' rain.

3. What are the characteristics of rain in four seasons? Reference answers (not necessarily consistent):

Clear: spring rain: gentle, moist and sweet.

Xia Yu: Warm, rough and unrestrained.

Autumn rain: quiet, dignified and mature

Winter rain: natural, calm and pure.

Which of these four beautiful pictures do you like best? Please talk about your opinion. Tip: You can speak freely from the aspects of emotional artistic conception, language expression and rhetorical application.

For example, in the spring rain picture, the drops of water on the flower buds are compared with the tears of girls, saying that they are more charming than the tears of girls, which makes the natural phenomena that were originally unremarkable have human expressions and emotions. A drop of water is still so charming. What about that flower? What about spring soaked by spring rain? It must be more beautiful and moving!

Teachers should give students enough time to think and communicate, so that everyone can really walk into the beautiful scenery and feel the beauty of the language and pictures of the article. At the same time, they should teach students appreciation methods and improve their appreciation ability. )

Clear:

One? The tree opens its particularly bright eyes? Write the tree alive and personify it. ? Especially bright? Vividly write that the trees have just woken up from the cold winter, and the trunk radiates the fresh vitality of yellow and green leaves when they sprout, which is used for novelty.

In the second picture of winter rain, the author compares the snow scene to? Clean woodcut? What's in the picture? Harvested fields? ,? Branches without leaves, haystacks in the rain It seems that there is no bright color and vitality, but it is pregnant with all colors and all vitality. Therefore, the author laments that snow is? Rain spirit? . What he brings to people is introversion, implication and tolerance, which shows the nature and calmness of snow.

He compared the autumn rain to? It seems to be a' mother' who got married and gave birth to a child, right? It fully depicts the charming and dignified unique charm of autumn rain, and depicts the calm and steady autumn rain.

Please read the first paragraph and the last two paragraphs together to understand the author's thoughts and feelings.

Clarity: The author wrote the kindness and loveliness of rain through visual description, which actually entrusted the author's praise and love for rain and showed the author's love for life and nature.

Teacher: What kind of writing technique is this?

Health: Echo from beginning to end. Finally, it is always a beautiful and loving rain! ? Re-emphasized the rain? Beautiful? And their love for rain, to express their desire for rain and love.

Teacher: What is the emotional tone and an emotional clue that runs through the whole text?

Health:? I like rain? The opening is clean and neat, and come straight to the point.

6. With his natural and wonderful style, affectionate pen and ink and profound and unique observation, Mr. Liu Zhanqiu painted different pictures of the four seasons' rain for us. Imagine what kind of mind the author should have as a person who can understand the character of the rain around him so delicately. Which writer do you think is like you know?

(Note: The answers here are flexible and changeable, emphasizing divergent thinking. Students can answer questions such as Li Lewei and Xi Murong, as long as they tell the common ground and truth. )

Fourth, the United States read articles to taste emotions:

The author provided us with a touching, intimate and lovely spiritual rain with words. Like the author, our love for rain is deep and sincere! Express your feelings by reading the text beautifully.

Reading guide:

Magnificent, strong, generous, powerful and vigorous.

Sad, lingering, euphemistic, slender, weak and slow.

Vast, empty, slow and long.

Short, excited, narrow, short.

Beautiful, cheerful, lively, relaxed, delicate, clear, round and full.

Music 1 Start, read freely and feel the taste;

2. I am eager to study and sublimate my feelings.

Five, writing exercises:

The author described various scenery features with delicate brushstrokes. Let's learn the writing skills in the article and write a familiar scenery, whether it's a paragraph or a sentence. As long as the language is beautiful and the image is described, it is our greatest gain!

(Students write and read 3-5 words with brief comments)

Summary of intransitive verbs:

What beautiful words! In the author's works, lifeless trees are full of vitality, emotionless flowers are shy, voices are rustling, and fragrance overflows in the tasteless air. This beauty comes from nature, and the author tells us about the rainy season of the four seasons with exquisite brushwork and beautiful words. They are emotional and personified by the author, who is full of warmth and even enthusiasm. A genius touched the four seasons, and a rising flower brought vitality to all things. As long as we feel life with our heart, we will find it? Beautiful? Right next to us!

Seven, homework:

1, the context of the text is very clear, please imitate the structure of the text? Four seasons? Write an outline of the composition for the topic (fill in the appropriate words on the lines).

2. Collect ancient poems and words describing rain. It is best to write idioms in a notebook, understand the meaning and use them properly.

3. Accumulate a similar essay in the weekly diary, appreciate its writing skills and language expression, and improve the ability of language expression, appreciation and writing.

[Attachment: Print and distribute the accumulated materials to students]

Approaching the rainy world

I. Poems and famous sentences about rain:

1 Good rain knows the season, and it happens in spring. Sneak into the night with the wind, moisten things silently. The wild path is dark, and the river is bright. Look at the red and wet place, the flowers in Jinguancheng are heavy. Don? Du Fu's Delighting in Rain on a Spring Night

Thousands of miles of Ti Ying are green and red, and the water town is full of wine flags. More than 480 ancient temples were left in the Southern Dynasties, and countless pagodas were shrouded in wind and rain.

Don? Du Fu's "Jiang Nanchun Jueju"

A drizzling rain falls like tears on the Mourning Day; The mourner's heart is going to break on his way. Ask local people where to buy wine? The shepherd boy just laughed and didn't answer Xingshan Village.

Don? Du Mu's Tomb-Sweeping Day

It rains at home in Huangmei season, and frogs are everywhere in the grass pond.

It's past midnight, and the invited guests haven't come yet. I tapped the chess pieces bored and shook the wick of an oil lamp. Song? Zhao Shixiu's "appointment"

5 Weicheng is rainy and dusty, and the guest house is green and willow.

Sincerely advise friends to drink a glass of wine, and it is difficult to meet their relatives when they go out to the sun. Don? Wang Wei's "Send Yuan and Twenty Shores to Xi"

On the sixth day, the street was drizzling, the autumn was crisp, but the grass color was far and near. This is the most beautiful season of the year, far better than the late spring of the green willow.

Don? Han Yu's Early Spring was presented to 18 members of Zhang Shui Department.

This spring morning, I woke up easily, and birds were singing everywhere, but now I remember that night, that storm, and I don't know how many flowers were broken.

Don? Meng Haoran's Spring Dawn

Second, modern poetry about rain.

one

Fate is the first cloud in the lonely sky.

After many vicissitudes.

Gather into a trickle of rain.

a fine drizzle

Moisten the memory a little

I forgot to bring my rain gear in case I get wet.

two

rains cats and dogs

It is the catharsis of lightning love.

With the roar of tripterygium wilfordii Dian Mu.

Dayu line

Being pushed and wronged, he jumped down.

Crystal growing like a root, clear and transparent.

three

A rain heralds a new beginning in the past.

All cowardice is forced under the eaves.

Flying diarrhea overthrows your resentment.

Open the umbrella of my soul

Keep a low profile and let it wash.

Open all my memories of happiness and pain.

four

The wind says rain is a tear in the sky.

Hit the ball with a soft streamline.

Hit the end of the glass and find the destination.

Looking for a wet heart in the cracks

Suddenly want to evaporate from memory.

So I opened my heart and looked forward to the sunrise.

five

The rain was interrupted by frogs.

The stream kissed its toes.

Lick it carefully, and it won't leak.

I like the smell of soil after rain.

Petals fly down, arousing the drunkenness of the roots.

Rain gives the world a cool freehand brushwork.

Third, the description of the rain:

Low raindrops hung in front of my eyes like a big net.

When the breeze blows, the rain curtain is inclined, running like a line towards vegetation and walls.

When it rains, the leaves of all kinds of flowers and plants are condensed with glittering and translucent water drops.

● Rain falls from the sky like a thousand silver lines, and a drop of water falls from the eaves like a beautiful bead curtain.

It's raining in Mao Mao, and the raindrops seem to be accompanied by a small dance music. I can't help being tempted by the world outside the window.

The rain beads rolled down the grass stem, one drop into the soil, the other drop into the grass mouth, and it was gone.

● Raindrops fall on my head and body. I lay on my back with my eyes closed and my mouth open. Suddenly I feel as if I have grown up a lot under the drizzle.

As soon as the thunder rang, the heavy rain kept falling like a broken bead.

It kept raining cats and dogs, and the rain under the eaves gathered into a stream in the street.

● Heavy rain falls from the sky, and the dark sky seems to collapse.

● Wind chases rain, and rain drives wind. Wind and rain unite to chase the dark clouds in the sky, and the whole world is raining.

● Rain is like thousands of silver wires floating down from the sky.

Low drizzle, falling quietly, like countless silkworms spit out silver silk. Thousands of filaments, rippling in mid-air, are fascinated by long veils, covering black fields.

● Dark clouds rolled on the horizon, and it rained cats and dogs in an instant, falling from the sky.

● Silky light rain fell from the sky, the raindrops were so small and the rain curtain was so dense that the mountains were covered with cicada-like white gauze.

● The rain is fine and cotton, like catkins floating in time and space in spring.

● Rain is the most common, lasting for three or two days. Don't be upset. You see, like cow hair, like a flower needle, like a filament, densely woven diagonally, and there is a thin layer of smoke on the roof. The leaves are bright green, and the grass is green enough to stare at your eyes. At night, the lights turned on, and a little dim light set off a quiet and peaceful night. Going to the countryside, on the path, by the stone bridge, people are walking slowly with umbrellas; There are also farmers working in the fields, wearing hemp fiber and hats. Their thatched cottage is sparse and silent in the rain.

Fourth, beautiful articles about rain:

Listening to rain brings residual load.

Rainy and rainy, autumn wind slowly, the noise of the past has long disappeared in the lotus pond behind the yard, insects have stopped singing, and there are fewer birds. Occasionally, fish can be seen jumping on the water. Lotus has long withered, withered lotus branches, if the bony old man is still standing in the water. There are no green leaves on the willows on the shore, and one or two dead leaves fall from time to time. I don't know who blew off the dead leaves. The autumn wind in October is like scissors. In the rainy and cold wind, there were more or less colorful and prosperous dreams, blowing in the wind. Looking back suddenly, like a smoke cloud. I don't know when the midsummer left me, and the elegant fragrance of flowers and the banging of heavy rain hitting lotus leaves have all disappeared. The rain is getting heavier and heavier, like fog, thick or light. The rain in autumn is not as heavy as that in summer. She is as light as gauze, covering your eyes. She is as light as smoke, which makes you smell tasteless. I can't see the road ahead clearly, so I can only walk slowly along the pond. The lush grassland in the past lost its light under trampling, covered with rain, and it was a little slippery to walk. The drizzle gently blows on the lotus leaf, just like a silkworm eating mulberry leaves, rustling, sometimes tight, sometimes soothing, and like a beautiful music, lamenting that nature has created such wonderful music. The drizzle is still falling, just like life is always haggard, from lush lotus leaves to bony dead branches, from stormy summer to autumn with withered leaves. I want to experience the snowy winter, my beating heart still exists, and the rain will still ring when the lotus is in full bloom. Can withstand storms and cold winters. ? Out of the mud without staining, clear without demon, straight without creeping outside, fragrant and clear, graceful and quiet, but far from being ridiculous. ? When we look back on the past, we will be more or less disappointed, depressed and unforgettable. Life is a play, which shows all the joys and sorrows, ups and downs. When we often think of the past, we often imagine the future, and we will be old many years later. When all hopes are gone with the exhaustion of life, will there be regrets? The journey of life is not smooth sailing, there are successes and joys, failures and sorrows. If we have a beating heart that still exists, then we can finally walk through the autumn with withered branches and fallen leaves, and walk through the snowy winter, and we can still see the lotus in full bloom.

Rain in South

The misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River is a rendering in ink painting, which permeates layer by layer and does not deposit. Watching the rain in the south of the Yangtze River is to appreciate the ink paintings of Badashan people with high artistic conception, bathing in the misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River, and people are in the water of Huangshan Mountain.

The misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River is a magic marker. In the chilly spring season, it will light up the golden willows beside the green water and make them brides in the sunset. The misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River reminds the confined people that it is green, fat, red and thin, which is a waste of time and space.

The misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River is poetic and picturesque. She is sometimes as fine as a faint cow hair, and sometimes as fine as a mist rising from the lake in autumn and winter, but the apricot rain that soaked the clothes is so moist, moist as Hetian jade, moist as egg white, and so intoxicating in the willow wind blowing on the surface. Look at the misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River, in the branches of red apricots in spring, in the hemp fibers under farmers' hats, and on the tips of green wheat straw.

The misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River is full of affection, care and tenderness. Only in the misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River will Liang Zhu's Eighteen Farewells be staged. Only in Jiang Nanyu will there be a sighing farewell song "Hairpin Phoenix". Only in the rain in the south of the Yangtze River will there be a Peach Blossom Pool in deep thousands of feet, a flag of apricot wine swaying in misty rain, and a piccolo for herding sheep babies in misty rain.

How many talented people and beautiful women have you bred? You are so sad. The bamboo in Junshan is your little tear. E Huang and Nv Ying are the embodiment of your spirit. The balcony in the misty rain is the red silk thread you hold for the person you love.

Looking for your trace in the Qinghe River, pursuing your footprint in the secluded path of bamboo forest, and listening to your voice in Yazhai, which contains the true feelings of the world.

The misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River is the fairy dew sprinkled on the earth by heaven. There is no intrigue in the mall, no intrigue in the officialdom, no vulgarity and stupidity in the streets, no arrogance of the nouveau riche, and no sorrow of not having food. Wandering in the misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River, there will be no fatigue of life, and you will feel the idyllic paradise of slanting water!

Misty rain in the south of the Yangtze River, my beauty! How can I lock this misty rain?