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Write a composition by analogy.
1. Write a composition with scenery by parallelism and metaphor.

Climbing the dam of Shanglin Lake, you can see rolling mountains and lush trees. The lake is pure, green and clear. When the wind passes, microwave waves rise on the lake. When you walk around the lake along the foot of the mountain, you will be pleasantly surprised to find that the flowers here are beautiful and fragrant. Happy birds are singing in the branches and colorful butterflies are flying around. You see, the wild mandarin ducks in the lake are playing for a while and dancing for a while. How pleasant it is!

If you go to Shanglin Lake on rainy days, it will be another scene! The surrounding mountains are swaying in the clouds, hazy, like a shy little girl veiled. Red azaleas all over the mountains, like a rosy cloud, fall in the mountains in the green. Walking in, I saw the glittering raindrops on the petals, like countless pearls falling on them. The most amazing thing is that wherever you go, it is spring. The air after the rain is particularly fresh, and the faint fragrance of flowers permeates the air, giving off a refreshing fragrance. If you listen to it, it's like entering a paradise.

Ah, the beautiful Shanglin Lake, you make people linger. ...

2. Write a composition with metaphor, personification and parallelism. The title is "Spring". Spring is a season full of imagination. It's not as hot as summer, but the temperature is suitable. Unlike autumn, everything is green and full of vitality, full of green. Unlike the heavy snow in winter, the breeze bursts. I like the reverie of spring, and I prefer the story of spring. Grass has such a touching story. Spring has come. After many painful struggles, it broke through the ground, ushered in the first day of sunshine and rain, and took the first breath of fresh air. It smiles and swings freely in the breeze. It is free and easy, and the green leaves are dotted with the earth. Rain or wind. It does its best to send the most beautiful wishes and laughter to spring. The strength of the grass is touching, and its spirit of not being afraid of difficulties is inspiring. Throughout the ages, how many poets, poets and writers have praised the grass. Although its life is short, it is devoted to spring without hesitation. Well done! There is such a touching story on the hillside: with the ringing of the spring bell, everything on the hillside has revived as if it had been touched, and the original lifelessness has become vibrant. They all stretched themselves, washed the dust off their faces, coated them with smooth oil, and all of them were radiant. They also occupied every corner of the hillside like grabbing land, and the grass and flowers complemented each other; Butterfly bees work together; Tall trees and low trees are pitching, and these beautiful scenes are unique in harmony with other scenery.

3. Writing |50 Writing uses metaphor, personification and parallelism: 1. Raindrops are like thousands of paratroopers, jumping from the air and landing safely on the ground.

Raindrops are connected together like a big net and hung in front of my eyes.

3. The breeze blows, and the rain curtain is oblique, running towards the vegetation and walls like filaments.

Parallelism:

1. The meaning of life lies in dedication:

If you are a big tree, cast a shadow; If you are a clear spring, you will nourish one side of the land; If you are a grass, add a little green. If you are a flower, decorate a corner of the night sky.

If you are a white cloud, dress up as a clear sky. If you are a bee, brew a sweetness.

If you are a ray of sunshine, it will light up all the darkness. If you are a breeze, it will blow away the dust in the world.

If you are a spring breeze person, blow the crops in the green fields.

2. Happiness:

Happiness is the concern that "she sewed carefully and repaired thoroughly, fearing that it would delay his time to go home";

Happiness is the harvest of "planting a millet in spring and harvesting a thousand seeds in autumn".

Happiness is the leisure of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely";

Happiness is the pleasure of "appreciating anecdotes and analyzing doubts".

Happiness is the dedication of "sneaking into the night with the wind, moistening things silently";

Happiness is quiet, but now I remember that night, that storm, and I wonder how many flowers were broken.

Happiness is the holiness of "falling into the mud and grinding into dust, only fragrance remains"

Happiness is the magnificence of "Hungry pork thirsts for Hun blood".

Happiness is the mentality of "worrying about the world first, and enjoying the world later".

Happiness is the integrity of "no one has died in life since ancient times, leaving a heart to shine on history".

3. The language of nature is rich and colorful:

From the fall of autumn leaves, we understand the changes of seasons;

From the ranks of returning geese, I read the collective strength;

4. Write a campus composition with metaphor, parallelism and exaggeration. My school has ten beautiful scenic spots. There are peach and plum fragrance scenic spots where peach blossoms are in full bloom, there are scenic spots where knowledge is boundless, there are fairy tale paradise scenic spots full of joy, and there are incomparably broad scenic spots that are heading for the future ... but I think Binjiang Long Beach scenic spot is the most beautiful!

Standing on the poetry path, you can see rows of green willows on the long embankment from a distance. Willow leaves are green, like pieces of flawless jade; Willow branches are slender, like braids of spring girls; Willow trunks are straight, like a row of soldiers on guard, guarding our campus day and night.

There is a sculpture of the zodiac in front of the willow tree. Three little mice are playing happily on the rockery, an old cow stands on the rockery with her head held high, and a big snake stands majestically on a long stone ... My favorite is the tiger. I saw a tiger standing on the rockery, with its big mouth open, as if proudly shouting, "I am the king of the forest, and you all have to listen to me!" "

There are more than thirty small flower beds on the right side of the long dike. Although it is a flower bed, it is actually "a little green in the red flower!" There is a little green leaf between the red and purple flowers.

Looking down from the railing on the left side of the long dike, there is a dark green mother river that accompanies the long dike day and night, and the long dike also accompanies the mother river day and night.

During the break, you can often see some students taking a walk on the long embankment in groups of three or five. Some students relaxed their eyes after a hard class on the long bank. Some chat and walk with friends on the long beach; Some people sit on benches and communicate their gains and troubles with good friends ... I often walk and chat with a few friends and enjoy the willows and small animals on the long beach. When we are happy, we always like to run to Long Beach and share our happiness with Long Beach. When we are upset, we still like to run to the long beach and let the long beach help us solve the problem. Riverside causeway accompanied me through every day of campus life.

I love the beautiful riverbank, and I love this beautiful campus even more.

5. Write a classmate's composition with 200 words of metaphor and parallelism. My classmate Li Xiang is versatile, but he is proficient in piano, chess, painting and calligraphy. Many people call her "a talented girl". She is beautiful, with big black eyes and a ponytail. She looks very foreign and has a small mouth like a cherry.

Li Xiang has two advantages. First of all, her composition is good. On one occasion, Li Xiang's composition was published in the City Business Daily, entitled "Campus Wisteria". When she was reading, I was fascinated, as if I were under a wisteria tree, dancing, smelling a faint fragrance, turning around, so free, this feeling is really like being in a fairyland. After reading it, the students all praised her beautiful composition, which made people feel very comfortable. I asked her why her composition was so good. She smiled and said, "Because I often read books, I will read them no matter how late it is. Only by reading repeatedly can we remember many good words and sentences. For example, Youth Digest. " I nodded and thought: She is really diligent. Look at me again, alas.

The second advantage is the word. Today, I happened to see her practicing calligraphy. He has been practicing pen by pen, pen by pen, and his writing is not good. He wrote it again until it was finished. Li wants to tell me that writing should have six hearts: carefulness, patience, self-confidence, concentration, meditation and perseverance. After listening to his words, it suddenly occurred to me that I want to be her pen. I am very happy to be with her every day. How nice it is to have such a master!

I envy her, her calligraphy and her composition. This is what my classmate Li thinks. I must study hard with her!

6. Write a composition with parallelism, repetition, metaphor and short sentences. The thick autumn rain is the foggy color on the riverside, and the campus is clear in the clear autumn rain.

Autumn wind is my favorite in clear autumn. It is soft and gentle, brushing my cheeks and eyebrows, which makes me cry. And if this breeze is accompanied by drizzle, it feels particularly wonderful.

Oblique wind, drizzle, autumn wind accompanied by autumn rain, happily danced foxtrot. Pat on the face, there is a little coolness, and the unique cool smell of rain flowing with the flying skirt is intoxicating.

Occasionally, there are flowers, faint and sweet, which go straight into the depths of the soul, and the indescribable sense of drunkenness and happiness lingers. And the campus in the autumn rain is breathtaking, with a little more details and tenderness.

European architecture full of exotic customs has added a little lightness to the simplicity on weekdays, but what about those beautiful curved pavilions? Covered with a delicate veil by the rain, it is so mysterious that people have the impulse to find out.

7. Use parallelism, metaphor, personification, quotation and other methods to write a short essay about spring in about 400 words. When spring comes, everything wakes up from winter. Birds are singing in the air, as if to say, "Spring is coming! Spring is coming! " The sky is as clear as a sapphire washed with clear water. In the distance, there are layers of rolling mountains. One mountain is light and one mountain is thick. It really looks like a beautiful landscape painting. The trees in the forest are very lush, and big trees rise from the earth like green clouds. There are several nests in several big trees, and many birds are chirping happily in the nests, as if to say, "Welcome Sister Chun! Welcome Sister Chun! " On the grass, the flowers have put on spring clothes and are competing to open. White as snow, red as fire, yellow as gold, pink as chardonnay, as if waiting for the viewer. But the charm of flowers is still given by grass, which is green. It is also a paradise for small animals. Look, the kitten is lying on the green carpet in the sun. The rabbit followed his mother to pick mushrooms. It secretly picked a few small flowers from time to time. Grandpa elephant saw it. The rabbit's face was covered with flowers, and he dared not pick them on his back. The little squirrel came out of the hole. He saw this scene and jumped with the little animals. Small fish in the river learn swimming skills from their mothers. Several small fish looked up at it, as if to show their newly learned skills. "Spring River Plumbing Duck Prophet" is really good. Look, a flock of ducks are playing in the water, flapping their wings. Ah! Spring in the forest is really beautiful.