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I didn't know until I entered the mountain that the spring water was not this vein. There were cracks in the grass and stones, almost everywhere, everywhere. There are dense forests in the mountains, and springs are hidden in them. Sometimes, the spring water flashes a bright color in the sparse forest, and then look forward, it is gone. That half-exposed charming attitude reminds me that my beloved daughter often walks around my knees at home. Every time I reach out, she will run away and raise her smiling face to tease me; When I pretended not to care, she sneaked in and snuggled up to my waist. What a naughty boy! & ltbr & gt
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The mountain spring is a charming child, and the sound of the spring water is a child's silvery laughter. Influenced by the sound of spring, Dinghushan is much younger. The winding path and the verdant bamboo and wood exude a childlike vitality, which makes people who enter the mountain seem to be in a clear and transparent state, with dust-free body and mind and preciseness. Halfway up the mountain, there is a mountain pavilion. The pavilion is dilapidated and has nowhere to stay, but there is a couplet in the pavilion: "There is no dust here, it is more beautiful up here", which won the spirit and made people nod and understand. & ltbr & gt
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Standing in front of the pavilion, my eyes are really full of blue. The distance is high and low, the branches are wrapped with vines, the trees are dense, and the heavy wet green is like the waves of the sea, layer by layer, pushing straight to the top of the mountain. Even the winding stone road at the foot is covered with traces of moss and a little bright green. Step on the wet and smooth stone steps and climb the stairs carefully. The higher you go, the denser and greener the trees are, the harder it is to find the shadow of spring, and the more pleasant the sound of spring is. In my depression, I suddenly heard the bell on the cloud. Suddenly, the mountains sounded and the valleys echoed, echoing each other in the quiet twilight after the rain, like an old man standing in front of the door on crutches, calling for a child who never forgets to return. & ltbr & gt
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The bell came from Qingyun Temple halfway up the mountain. The temple is built on a hill and embedded in green peaks. Climb more than 400 steps from Bushan Pavilion. Qingyun Temple is the 17th blessed place of Lingnan Buddhism. It was founded in Chongzhen period of Ming Dynasty and has a history of more than 300 years. There is a "pot for thousands of people" in the temple, which is nearly 2 meters in diameter and can hold 1, 100 liters. This is one of the wonders of the ancient temple. & ltbr & gt
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After dinner, take a walk in the garden in front of the temple. The garden is full of flowers, bees and butterflies, and full of business, which is quite different from the musu atmosphere in the main hall. Among the flowers, there are two tall old trees, with luxuriant branches and leaves and covered with green shade. The roots of trees are protected by stone fences, which makes them look different. It turns out that these are two bodhi trees introduced from Ceylon (now Sri Lanka) more than 200 years ago. According to legend, Buddha Sakyamuni got his way under the bodhi tree. Therefore, Buddhists regard Bodhi as a sacred tree and naturally receive special courtesy. & ltbr & gt
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There are too many kinds of trees in Dinghushan. It is said that Dinghu Mountain is a point with the largest number of existing plant species on the same latitude line of the earth, which has been turned into a nature reserve and selected as an ecological observation station by UNESCO. Local comrades told me that although the forests of Dinghushan have undergone changes from generation to generation and have not been greatly damaged, they still depend on the protection of Qingyun Temple. Now, probably because of the failure of Buddhism, the same Qingyun Temple has attracted a large number of tourists and brought potential threats to nature reserves. & ltbr & gt
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At night, the mountains were silent. Sleeping in the guest room next to the temple is like sleeping in a pillow spring. Listen to the spring scenery late at night, don't have a taste. The sound of spring, soaked in moonlight, sounds particularly clear. During the day, there are spring songs, but at this time, there are many levels: gentle men are like violins, flowing through the grass stream; That crisp, like plucking, is a dripping spring leaking from the cracks in the stone; Thick as a double voice, it should be that thousands of streams converge in an empty valley; Those who are as majestic as copper pipes must be running down steep walls and waterfalls falling into deep pools. As for the spring water that bypasses the roots and the clear water that beats the pebbles, the priority is high or low, and each makes a different sound. This endless sound of spring is woven together by an invisible baton and merged into a wonderful symphony. In this spring symphony, you seem to be able to hear the passage of time, the change of history, the birth, growth, reproduction, death and metabolism of life, from weak to strong, gradually expanding and rising to become the main theme. I leaned down to listen and distinguish, and my thoughts seemed to melt into the water, swimming around Dinghu with the spring water flowing. Just like a clear spring seeping through my heart, it washed away the dirt and left a deep feeling for me to taste and daydream. Ah, I'm completely intoxicated by the songs in spring. I said "the mountain is not high, the fairy is famous", but I said "the mountain is not famous, the spring is in the spirit". It nourishes vitality and nourishes all trees. Spring is the soul of Dinghu Mountain. & ltbr & gt
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That night, I only felt the sound of spring in my ear. I wonder if this is a dream. Is it awake? & ltbr & gt
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2. The eighth natural section of Tingquan in Dinghushan imitates the morning, and the rain falls outside the window.
Sit in a chair beside a table, such as on the lawn of a forest. Listen to the rain in the morning, don't have a taste.
The sound of rain accompanied by frost and dew sounds particularly fresh. The usual rain can be divided into many grades: dragonflies are short as anger, and there is water on the surface; Those crisp as the morning light are refreshing crows in the mountains; Those that are as coherent as silkworms spinning silk should be the glow that penetrates the leaves; Those staggered like branches must be raindrops splashing in front of the windowsill and pools gathering in the grass.
As for the rain hitting the eaves, water droplets splash in the air, with different priorities, far and near, and each makes different sounds. These countless rain sounds were compiled by an invisible baton and merged into a wonderful symphony.
Listening to this music with rain as the main theme is like being in another fantasy world; This jumping rhythm gives me * * *; This crisp rhyme is full of softness, which purifies the dirt in the heart and fills the emptiness in the heart. This is a world moistened by everything. The sound of rain is a beautiful melody of nature. I like the freshness of the soil after rain, and I prefer the "magic" rain sound.
3. After seeing Dinghu Spring, the word 100 Dinghu Mountain is a desirable scenic spot, with trees and green grass. Occasionally I can smell the fragrance of flowers mixed in the wind, but I can't see the fragrance of flowers. The most attractive thing there is the crisp sound of spring water, which, together with the dense jungle, constitutes an elegant and quiet landscape painting.
Today, I read Xie Daguang's masterpiece Tingquan in Dinghushan, fascinated by the beautiful scenery there, and felt the perfect integration of dynamic beauty and static beauty in Dinghushan. The combination of clear springs and green trees is full of vitality. I left a beautiful scenery line in my mind: there are many criss-crossing streams flowing in the lush grass. When the stream flows to sparse trees, it shines in the sunlight; When the water drops reach the tip of the grass, they are like crystal clear pearls. Ah, a fragrance mixed with earth and flowers is floating in the wind, which is refreshing. Bamboo and wood are green and tall, and the branches are wrapped around vines, just like the rolling waves of the sea, with great momentum. Come to Qingyun Temple halfway up the mountain, all kinds of trees dazzle you and amaze you. It is also a sea of flowers, which is beautiful.
The most beautiful thing about Dinghushan, as the name implies, is the endless changes of beautiful spring sounds. The sound of spring is the soul of the mountain, which brings us into the green network. In the silent night, the sound of the spring is crisp and clear, and the melody is also different: the crisp pipa sound is played by the dripping spring leaking between the stones; The stream flowing through the grass plays the violin sound of Ruman; The heavy bass is played by thousands of streams gathered in the empty valley; When waterfalls and rapids fell into deep pools, magnificent brass music was played. There are also some discordant voices, one after another, as if playing a beautiful symphony. That kind of voice, like the sound of nature, echoed for a long time. Dinghushan spring gave birth to everything in the mountain, and vigorous vitality sprouted from here. Dinghushan is really beautiful. I wish I could experience it myself and listen to the beautiful sound of spring there.
4. Imitate the eighth paragraph (wind, rain and emotion) of Dinghushan's Listening to Spring. In the article, the author's writing focus is "spring", and the author's original intention is to praise and eulogize spring, while "listening" is only a means to understand "spring" in a specific time and scene.
There are three reasons why the author chose to listen to the spring instead of seeing it: ① When the author climbed the mountain, the rain was still lingering, and there was fog and water vapor in the mountain, so he could not see the stream clearly, so the author chose to listen. (2) Xiaoxiquan is not as spectacular as a waterfall, and it is difficult to create color through description.
Through "listening", let readers grasp the shape of spring in imagination and taste the beauty of spring with the help of the author's description. Space: Shore-Hancui Bridge-Mid-Levels-Bushan Pavilion-Qingyun Temple (Mid-Levels)-Main time: dusk (1-5)- after dinner (6-7)- at night (8- 10)- No spring.
There are many mountain springs (meaning Dinghushan has a good ecological environment). And the characteristics of the mountain spring (half-exposed, close, far away).
This finds the similarity between Shanquan and naughty daughter. Love her daughter emotionally and naturally love spring, so that the author will listen to the sound of spring between the lines and love spring. The bell and the spring sound are combined correspondingly, and the bell and the spring sound become the old man and the child respectively. The bell is as thick as an old man, and the spring is as clear as a child. The bell indicates the ancient and distant Dinghu Mountain, and the sound of spring indicates the youthful vitality of Dinghu Mountain.
The author's "Listening to Springs Late at Night" has a special flavor, which refers to: 1. Multi-level spring sounds: soft, crisp, heavy and vigorous, described in the order from weak to strong, from light to heavy, from small to large; Second, in the Symphony of Spring Water, the author realized the development law of life, society and universe. Thirdly, in the process of listening to spring, the author has finished purifying his own mind. This paper grasps the word "spring" and the key selection of "listening", which is described by rhetorical devices such as fine and coarse, direct description, indirect description and metaphor.
From the constant sublimation of the love for spring water, the view on life is revealed: history is endless and beauty is full of vitality. Jiang Lun took me to Zhaoqing, and it was drizzling.
I swam in Qixingyan in the rain, and I walked in a hurry and vaguely saw it. When I arrived at Dinghushan, it was near dusk.
The rain stopped and the fog opened. The mountain only shows a narrow green foot, waist-high, just like a veil covering your face, which is not true.
Out of sight is clear, but hearing is clear. After crossing the Han Cuiqiao, I haven't set foot on the stone road into the mountain, and the sound of the gurgling spring water comes to my face.
The sound of the spring is very clear, and the sound is like seeing the shadow of the spring jumping, which makes people feel excited and excited. I can't help but follow the sound, feeling higher and deeper, and I have entered the mountains. I didn't know until I entered the mountain that there was more than one spring, and there were cracks between grass and stones, almost everywhere, everywhere.
There are dense forests in the mountains, and springs are hidden in them. Sometimes, the spring water flashes a bright color in the sparse forest, and then look forward, it is gone. That half-exposed charming attitude reminds me that my beloved daughter often walks around my knees at home.
Every time I reach out, she will run away and raise her smiling face to tease me; When I pretended to be indifferent, she ran quietly close to my waist. What a naughty boy! The mountain spring is a charming child, and the sound of the spring water is a child's silvery laughter.
Influenced by the sound of spring, Dinghushan is much younger. The winding path and the verdant bamboo and wood exude a childlike vitality, which makes people who enter the mountain seem to be in a clear and transparent state, with dust-free body and mind and preciseness. Halfway up the mountain, there is a mountain pavilion.
The pavilion is dilapidated and has nowhere to stay, but a couplet in the pavilion, "There is no dust here, and it is more spiritual", won the spirit here, making people nod. Standing in front of the pavilion, my eyes are really full of blue.
The distance is high and low, the branches are wrapped with vines, the trees are dense, and the heavy wet green is like the waves of the sea, layer by layer, pushing straight to the top of the mountain. Even the winding stone road at the foot is covered with traces of moss and a little bright green.
Step on the wet and smooth stone steps and climb the stairs carefully. The higher you go, the denser and greener the trees are, the harder it is to find the shadow of spring, and the more pleasant the sound of spring is.
In my depression, I suddenly heard the bell on the cloud. Suddenly, the mountains sounded, the valleys echoed and fluttered. Quiet and heavy bells and cheerful and clear spring sounds echo each other in the quiet twilight after rain, like an old man standing in front of the door with crutches, calling for a child who never leaves home.
The bell came from Qingyun Temple halfway up the mountain. The temple is built on a hill and embedded in green peaks.
Climb more than 400 steps from Bushan Pavilion. Qingyun Temple is the 17th blessed place of Lingnan Buddhism. Built in the Chongzhen period of the Ming Dynasty, it has a history of more than 300 years.
There is a "pot for thousands of people" in the temple, which is nearly 2 meters in diameter and can hold 1 100 liters, which is quite eye-catching. The grand occasion of the ancient temple can be seen here.
After dinner, take a walk in the garden in front of the temple. Flowers are in full bloom in the garden, bees and butterflies are flying, and business is abundant, which is quite different from the solemn atmosphere in the hall.
Among the flowers, two tall and old trees stand out from the crowd with lush foliage and shade. It turns out that these are two bodhi trees introduced from Ceylon (now Sri Lanka) more than 200 years ago.
According to legend, Buddha Sakyamuni got his way under the bodhi tree. Therefore, Buddhists regard Bodhi as a sacred tree and naturally receive special courtesy. In fact, there is nothing noble about Bodhi itself. I'm afraid not many people can tell it from the trees in Dinghushan.
There are too many kinds of trees in Dinghushan. It is said that Dinghu Mountain is a point with the largest number of existing plant species on the same latitude line of the earth, which has been turned into a nature reserve and selected as an ecological observation station by UNESCO.
Local comrades told me that although the forests of Dinghushan have undergone changes from generation to generation and have not been greatly damaged, they still depend on the protection of Qingyun Temple. Now, probably because of the failure of Buddhism, the same Qingyun Temple has attracted a large number of tourists and brought potential threats to nature reserves.
At night, the mountains were silent. Sleeping in the guest room next to the temple is like sleeping in a pillow spring.
Listen to the spring scenery late at night, don't have a taste. The sound of spring, soaked in moonlight, sounds particularly clear.
During the day, there are spring songs, but at this time, there are many levels: gentle men are like violins, flowing through the grass stream; That crisp, like plucking, is a dripping spring leaking from the cracks in the stone; Thick as a double voice, it should be that thousands of streams converge in an empty valley; The man as majestic as a brass tube.
5. Imitate a beautiful place and write 500 words of spring. You see, everything in Nanhu Square is awakened by Miss Spring. She wrinkled the lake, licked the lake green, rocked several cruise ships on the lake, and the grass came out to visit. bloom came and the bud mountain grew.
In summer, as night falls, Nanhu Square is packed with people and full of excitement. In the center of Nanhu Square is a circular fountain, which will open in summer. Two rows of slender water columns are ejected from two opposite nozzles, one like a ballet princess and the other like a naughty child. Crystal clear water drops reflect colorful light in the air, shining like crystals falling from the sky. There are several rows of oblique water columns, which look like several "athletes" in the high jump competition from a distance. The "athlete" next to him is obviously spraying too low and jumping at a lower height than other "athletes", but he looks confident and must catch up with others. Now the colored lights at the bottom of the lake are flashing, and the surrounding neon lights reflect that the lake looks sparkling. Under the irradiation of light, the stone forest looks like a diamond, like a handicraft carved with crystal agate, which is strange and colorful.
The scenery in autumn and winter is even more beautiful!
6. Evaluation of Tingquan in Dinghushan The article "Tingquan in Dinghushan" should be read aloud, experienced and felt in the situation, so as to be emotional. This essay has the following writing characteristics:
(1) Move to change the scene, copy the sound, and draw the scene.
After reading the whole text carefully, we can easily understand the writing characteristics of the text: changing the scene to imitate the sound and painting the scene.
The difficulty in writing travel notes is the arrangement of tour routes and the layout of scenic spots. Taking the spatial change and time sequence of this travel note as a clue, the article is organized to describe the characteristics of spring sound in the change of time and space. The best part of the article is that the author appeals to the feeling of hearing the spring water. The author vividly shows the beauty of the sound of the spring, which makes readers feel immersive. Understand the language beauty of the article, feel the sound beauty of Dinghu Spring, and let readers appreciate the mountains and rivers of the motherland.
(2) the use of metaphor.
This article is quite attractive to read, thanks to the author's successful use of figurative rhetoric in the article, which vividly shows the characteristics of the scenery, naturally arouses readers' association and enters a wonderful realm. For example, "the higher the height, the denser the trees, the greener the trees, the harder it is to find the shadow of spring, and the more pleasant the sound of spring." In my depression, I suddenly heard the bell coming from the clouds. Suddenly, the mountains sounded, the valleys echoed, and the serene and heavy bells echoed with the cheerful and clear spring sounds in the quiet twilight after the rain, like an old man standing in front of the door with a cane, calling for a child who never leaves. " On the one hand, this passage describes the characteristics of spring bells, which are cheerful and clear, and the bells are heavy and serene. On the other hand, it depicts the scene that the sound of spring and the bell correspond harmoniously through metaphor. The author vividly compares this scene to an old man calling for a child who has not returned from playing, which is full of human feelings and reveals the author's love.
For another example, "Shanquan is a charming child, and the sound of spring water is a child's silvery laughter." This sentence gives life to spring, highlights the crisp and pleasant sound of spring, and also reveals vitality. Because of the embellishment of spring sound, the ancient Dinghu Mountain is full of vitality, and some people point out that mountain spring is the soul of Dinghu Mountain.
(3) the uniqueness of the idea
This paper is devoted to drawing materials. Dinghushan is a famous scenic tourist area with a wide range and much to write about. The author only chooses what he has seen, heard and felt since the beginning of the first day of junior high school, and focuses on writing mountain springs, showing them as the soul of mountains, while putting trees, temples and pavilions in a subordinate position. Praising the scenery comes down to understanding the philosophy of life.
7. Imitation composition of the scenery on the growing road 1. Rock scenic spot is a provincial first-class scenic spot with beautiful scenery. Today, my parents and I came to the rock scenic spot to see the scenery.
2. As soon as you enter the gate of the rock scenic spot, you will see the waterfall, which is called "water curtain cave Day". After a walk, we came to a cave called "Hanging Rainbow Cave". When we walk into this cave, we can see a stone engraved with "flying stone". When I walked out of this "hanging rainbow cave", I was already sweating and panting. Oh, stand on a stone, drink water on it and have a rest. After a while, we continued to climb the mountain, and I crawled with difficulty. But I climbed so fast that my parents couldn't climb any more. We just looked at the scenery there and found that the leaves there were very beautiful. Later, we took the cable car up the mountain. In mid-air, we saw the peach trees there were so beautiful that we reached the top of the mountain. Here comes the "floating pavilion" at the top. The "pavilion" is divided into two floors. There is a stone table in the center of the pavilion. Looking out from the pavilion, it is a beautiful scenery. The beautiful bay scenery and city scenery are right under our eyes. There are many high-rise buildings in urban areas and many Chinese flowers. Birds fly in the air, and sometimes all kinds of boats pass by. There is also a stone bridge on the stone sea next to the scenic spot, and the traffic on it is constant. From a distance, the vehicles are only as big as ants, as if there were many at once. The scenery here is really beautiful!
I love Shantou, but I love the rock scenic spot in my hometown more, because it gives me happiness and makes me linger.
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