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Special training for modifying sick sentences
Modifying a sick sentence means modifying words with obvious language defects without changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, so that the sentence is smooth, correct and more perfect. What are the specific training for modifying sick sentences? The following is my special training for sorting out and modifying sick sentences. Welcome to enjoy.

Special training on modifying sick sentences 1

1 ( )

A, Like every city, the sunshine in Helsinki is particularly brilliant because of the clean air layer. In this 500-year-old city, pedestrians and taxis flow evenly along the thick Shi Zhuan Road with the radio waves leading to the future.

B the human rights report of the United States is full of obfuscation, concealment and fabrication of facts, vicious slander and deep hatred for the people of China.

Nowadays, many young men and women no longer choose their partners according to their wealth and family status, but according to whether they can work and have scientific and cultural knowledge.

D In view of the above characteristics of animals, we can predict that with the continuous development of science and technology, there will be more and more "animal soldiers" on the future war stage.

2 ( )

It is reasonable to ban MLM as a form of commodity circulation, because it is not in line with China's national conditions.

B. The representative of the flood fighting hero was cordially received and praised by the central leadership, and took a group photo together as a souvenir.

C, two people sitting in the barracks is a message to visit relatives, is the father of the second row of soldiers Yan Weiguo Wang Xiaoli.

D if the competent leader agrees to occupy cultivated land for building, he shall be given necessary disciplinary action.

3 ( )

A. For ordinary people, drinking warm or cold boiled water every day can be quickly absorbed by the human body, replenish the water needed by the body, promote metabolism and enhance human immunity, which is a convenient and simple way of beauty and health preservation.

B. In order to make teachers prepare lessons and do scientific research more fully, school leaders have adjusted the time for teachers to teach, study and do scientific research.

C. Edible fungi developed in our province are made of cottonseed hull, corncob, sawdust, bagasse, wheat straw and rice straw with high quality and low price.

D, ideological and political lessons, we should combine political common sense with cultivating students' good moral character.

4 ( )

A, for a long time to come, due to China's large population base, the contradiction of labor supply exceeding demand in the labor market will exist for a long time.

B, not long ago, there was an article, which specifically described the crime of a rogue villain who ran amok in the village in 16 before being brought to justice. His behavior is really outrageous.

C. If your company fails to fulfill its obligations under this agreement, who can guarantee that the trade between us will not be reversed?

D. in the summer of the year before Mr. Li retired, the school specially arranged for him to rest in a nursing home for half a month.

5 ( )

A, global operation has become the development strategy of today's big companies, and enterprise merger and acquisition is an important means for them to adjust their economic structure and production layout.

B artemether injection is a killer of plasmodium intracellulare and a good antimalarial drug for rescuing falciparum malaria.

C. If the U.S. government fails to fulfill its obligations in the Sino-U.S. trade agreement, no one can guarantee that the trade between China and the United States will not be reversed.

D "Pacific Insurance Company" is mainly involved in dealing with social catastrophic accidents, defusing risks and stabilizing social life.

6 ( )

1. Jilin, Shanxi and Anhui held trade union congresses respectively, and elected the leading bodies of the Federation of Trade Unions in the three provinces.

Learn from mistakes. Every disaster has caused great losses to human beings, and at the same time, it has improved human understanding of disasters, learned lessons, and enhanced the ability of disaster prevention and mitigation.

C, he didn't tell the other party the date of the game according to the decision of the student union, which led to misunderstanding.

D, I remember when I met him, I was just a child of seven or eight years old, innocent and unrestrained.

7 ( )

A, for the old music style, he was very conservative all his life, rudely disrupted its use and injected fresh vitality and passion.

B. The starting point of the competition is in front of Jinshui Bridge in Tiananmen Square, along the prescribed routes such as Chang 'an Avenue and Second Ring Road, and the whole journey is 42. 195km.

C, the survey shows that nearly 90% of teenagers in China believe that "honesty and trustworthiness" and "helping others" are excellent traditional virtues.

D Fifteen years ago, at the Second National Youth Art Exhibition, Luo Zhongli's Father shocked the national art circle and deeply touched the hearts of young people, especially college students.

8 ( )

A, China's rural population accounts for five-sixths of the country's total population, with vast territory and vast resources, and it is a raw material base for industry and agriculture in China.

B, "paid news" should be severely criticized, which is extremely wrong.

As soon as Manager C Xu walked into Ruifang's office, he immediately pulled her to the small round table by the window.

D, watching Jordan play is like enjoying a rare work of art, which will keep people away from the world.

answer

The meaning of the last clause of 3 1, D(A) is unclear. The original sentence of b should be changed to "The human rights report of the United States reverses right and wrong, conceals and fabricates facts, and is full of vicious slander and profound hatred against the people of China".

C two sides don't correspond to one side. )

2.C(A) replace "this" with "that". B "Take a photo with ..." is ambiguous. The object of "punishment" is vague. )

3.C(A) subjects are inconsistent. B delete "have". D Add "lecture" before "political common sense". )

4. C(A) Because "put" comes before "China". B improper collocation of verb and object, changing "specific narration" into "detailed disclosure". D the meaning of "one year before retirement" is vague. )

5. (a) (b) Delete "save falciparum malaria". C Add "should" after "suo". D Subject-predicate mismatch, remove "responsibility" and add "responsibility is" before "participation". )

6.B(A) The meaning of "the leading body of the Federation of Trade Unions in the three provinces" is vague. C "the decision of the student union" is ambiguous.

D improper use of words, change "energy saving" to "electricity saving", or change "energy" to "electricity consumption". )

7.D(A) is "very conservative" and "impolite". B the subjects are inconsistent. C the contradiction between "near" and "left and right". )

8.D(A) subjects are inconsistent. Change "this" to "that". C "salary" is ambiguous. )

Special training for modifying sick sentences II

1 ( )

1. In the era when Ji Kang lived, with his background and irreconcilable personality, disaster was impossible to avoid.

B, the officer tied his wife's hands with a rope with tears in his eyes, and it took a whole day to drag her up the mountain from the snow.

Several debt collectors came to the mall management department, and manager Zhao sent a deputy manager and his assistant to receive them.

D The association intends to erect a giant bronze statue of the Yellow Emperor with a height of about 65,438+00 meters at the Mausoleum of the Yellow Emperor on the eve of the Double Ninth Festival this year.

2 ( )

A on February 18, the last batch of Cuban refugees stranded in Panama were repatriated to the Guantanamo base of the us military stationed in Cuba.

B, for a long time, the society has always regarded the enrollment rate as a hard indicator to evaluate schools and teachers, although the central government has always opposed it.

C, the ball game is about to start, and the audience is scrambling to file in.

D. We are all familiar with the story of "pushing" and "knocking" in Jia Dao's "Monk Pushing the Moon Down the Door" in the Tang Dynasty and the tempering of the word "green" in Wang Anshi's "Spring Breeze and Green Jiang Nanan" in the Song Dynasty.

3 ( )

A, my train of thought is interrupted from time to time by the cries of vendors outside the window.

B. With the increase of exchanges between countries in the world year by year, the number of workers and expatriates exported by countries is also increasing, which makes the remittance worldwide increase sharply.

On his way to the airport, the foreigner found three diamond rings missing in his hotel room.

D, we are brothers, how can we leave our disabled brother to watch a wonderful performance?

4 ( )

A, the difference between their "secondary diagnosis" results is so great that everyone finds it difficult to understand.

B. The deadline for the proposal of the current National People's Congress is before 6 pm on the closing day of the Congress.

C. The headmaster invited a famous astronomer to teach the students the difficult problems in their study.

D. Fax communication can quickly and accurately transmit words and charts to distant places through wired or wireless communication lines as they are.

5 ( )

A. In Shuidonggou, a site of primitive culture, people found slightly ground ostrich egg perforated ornaments and bone cones made of bone blocks, which are the seeds of grinding technology and are of great significance in the history of human production and development.

B, Rebecca went to Shenzhen after graduation. According to her, she just wants to earn a lot of money to prove her value.

C. With the increase of exchanges between countries in the world year by year, the number of workers and expatriates exported by countries is also increasing, which makes the remittance worldwide increase sharply.

D. Fenglong Mountain, also known as Longfei Mountain, is located 22km away from downtown Shijiazhuang. It was recorded as early as the Warring States Period in history, and it has been a famous mountain in Hebei since the Han and Tang Dynasties.

6 ( )

First, improve the national debt market, mainly in the issuance scale, duration, methods, interest rates, paperless degree and other aspects of reform, to achieve the national debt market network.

B. When creating Li Qingzhao, the author delicately rendered and expressed Li Qingzhao's thoughts and feelings in different environments, such as Yan Er's wedding, divorce and worrying about the country.

C, an important cause of environmental pollution, is due to the loss and waste of resources and energy.

D this way of defining the rights and obligations of all parties in the enterprise by means of contracts and articles of association is undoubtedly the basic guarantee for employees to exercise their democratic rights.

7 ( )

A, some writers' cultural essays have been trying to re-examine the history puzzled by various politics with the eyes of modern people.

B. The novel Wandering published by People's Literature Publishing House is written by a Mauritian Chinese writer who has lived abroad for more than 20 years.

C, counter-revolutionaries conspiracy activities should be exposed, and can expose him.

D, stop and regulate the behavior of power consumption has become an urgent issue in the anti-corruption struggle.

8( )

Party member Jiruizhi, the daughter of the famous patriotic general Ji Hongchang, gave us a vivid report.

B, father left, but earnest words echoed in in my heart forever.

After the thunderstorm, the dark clouds gradually dispersed, the air was fresh and moist, and the setting sun was slanting. A curved rainbow appeared in the western sky, decorating the world like a fairy mirror.

D. you don't need a special phone to use the 300 phone. If you can remember your card number and password, you don't need to carry a 300 card with you, so it's more convenient than a magnetic card.

9 ( )

A, science and engineering universities learn basic courses first, then specialized basic courses, and then specialized courses, and acquire more systematic basic theoretical knowledge through step-by-step learning.

B, the girls' clothes on the grassland are as bright and moving as white clouds.

Researchers at the Institute of Science and Technology are developing biosensors to detect microorganisms that cause food poisoning.

D, we don't deny that the novel "Medicine" does not reveal hope, but this hope is very slim.

10( )

A, knowledge economics, mainly studies the relationship between knowledge and economic development, and explores how to realize the law of economic development and wealth increase by relying on the progress of knowledge.

B, this ending, subtle and natural, makes readers feel sudden, calm and lingering.

C. The good news that the British model reported that the team had arrived in Shanghai for self-defense counterattack brought everyone's thoughts back to the fiery border post and recalled the scene of condolences there at that time.

D. The number of participating institutions and entries in this "Challenge Cup" competition has been significantly improved.

answer

1, D(A) Replace "impossible" with "sure". B Add "with a rope" after "tears". "His assistant" is ambiguous. )

2.A(B) was changed from "take" to "put". C "filing" means "one after another", which is contradictory to "striving for the first place". D remove the front "right". )

3.B(A) "From time to time" is put before "Bei". C is irrational. D is ambiguous. )

4, D (a repetition of "disparity" and "big". B Delete "before". C "teaching" is improper. )

5.B(A) "ornament" and "bone cone" are "budding", and the subject and object do not match. C "exporting expatriates" does not match verbs and objects. D "Location" was changed to "distance" and "location" was deleted. )

6.A(B) The "delicate rendering" is not properly decorated, and the author cannot express Li Qingzhao's feelings. C delete "due to". D Add "practice" after "clear". )

7.A(B) Delete "the author's hand". The subjects of the first sentence and the second sentence of C are not uniform. It is inappropriate to use "specification" here. )

8.D(A) The object of "excellent party member" is ambiguous. B "voice, face and smile" can't be compared with "echo". C when the sun sets, there is no rainbow in the western sky. )

9. What I learned after C (a) is inconsistent with what I learned before. B "Baiyun" is improperly decorated. D negates too much and says irony. )

10, A(B) "Come suddenly, die calmly" is ambiguous. C "memory" lacks a subject. D "work" and "improvement" do not match. )