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Ask a friend to help modify the couplet: the first couplet is elegant and elegant, and the scholar hides in Five Blessingg.
First of all, the upper part should be flat, and the lower part should be reversed.

Secondly, the number of words in this couplet is different. I think you play less, but I think the seven-character couplet has more charm and rhyme than the eight-character, so I changed it to seven-character.

Finally, the problem of irregular antithesis is also relatively large.

Now try to modify it to:

The first part: Zisha friends celebrate their seventh birthday.

Bottom line: Muyu is willing to hide in Five Blessingg.

Among them, "Zisha" and "Muyu" are excellent tea sets, "Quiet" and "Sweet and Thick" are the elegant names of tea, and the words "Quiet" and "Thick" can be used to describe tea as a hospitable person and convey the hospitality of the owner of the teahouse. Finally, "Welcome" to "Hide", "Seventh Birthday" to "Five Blessingg" are all good wishes.

The whole league closely follows the word "tea", and the antithesis is also neat.

Sincerely welcome Yajian.