At the intersection of Central Street, a brick truck, an inclined motorcycle and a pool of blood on the ground, what do you think-"car accident"? Or "shocking"? Over the years, car accidents have long been commonplace, and I have encountered them many times, but when I see this scene again, I still feel heartache. Colleague sighed: "This person must be' dead'!" Hey! You really shouldn't. If you pay a little attention, you will find that there are several big signs hanging at this intersection, including a slow-moving sign and a no-vehicle sign. This tragedy shouldn't have happened at this intersection at all ... Just when I thought it didn't exist in my memory, it came out again, holding a long sword and stabbing me with lightning speed, even stabbing my good friend: the deceased was her father! It was Father's Day. In the morning, we were still discussing what to give my father this Father's Day. In the afternoon, we heard bad news. What a great irony this is! Don't they realize what a dangerous and irresponsible thing they are doing when her father is running on the road and the driver of the brick car ignores the road sign? Then I thought, my friend's father is absolutely irresponsible, because he broke his daughter's heart, which is heavy and can never be recovered. In fact, these two shots often happen in society, which may be nothing in the eyes of ordinary people, but they have already been deeply engraved in my memory. It is inevitable that there will be tears when there is laughter in life, I know. But can't you cry less? The observation ability of the author of the upgraded opinion is still very good. This paper selects two common phenomena in life and presents them in the form of close-ups, which is shocking, thought-provoking and alarming. But if carefully scrutinized, the author's selection of materials is not perfect. First, the material selection is untrue, exaggerated and general, which affects the theme expression. Second, shot one and shot two are not closely related in content, giving people a sense of suddenness. Third, it has nothing to do with your own life. In addition, the article does not dig deep enough into the theme, and only stays in people's lives, giving people a feeling of listing phenomena at a shallow level. The Soviet writer Fuchik said: There is no life without singing, just as there is no life without the sun. -the ups and downs of signing for more than ten years. I feel the life in this world with my heart and feel the traces they left in my growth. We want life to be full of smiles. It's difficult, but we are trying to sum up and reflect ... there is a piece of land on our way to school, which is very small and barren. We passed by here after school countless times, and felt that we should do something for it countless times, but in the end, we were passers-by here countless times. Finally, one day, we made up our minds to put it into action. One weekend, we came here together and took out shovels, buckets and many seeds prepared by ourselves. Nature is a scene in full swing, although only a few people, although only a small piece of land. However, after we went to school, the road to school changed. We no longer pass through that land. The next spring, when we happened to pass by a long-lost land, we suddenly found that the deserted land had already changed into a suit of clothes. Green grass has been drilled here and some flowers have come out. Perhaps this dress is not gorgeous, but the vitality of life has infected us. We seem to hear a burst of laughter. I don't know if it comes from this exploding life or our hearts ... shot 2.
At the intersection of Central Street, a brick truck, an inclined motorcycle and a pool of blood on the ground, what do you think-"car accident"? Or "shocking"? Over the years, car accidents have long been commonplace, and I have encountered them many times, but when I see this scene again, I still feel heartache. Colleague sighed: "This person must be' dead'!" Hey! You really shouldn't. If you pay a little attention, you will find that there are several big signs hanging at this intersection, including a slow-moving sign and a no-vehicle sign. This tragedy should not have happened at this intersection. Just when I was about to forget it, it came out again and stabbed me with a long sword, even my good friend: the deceased was her father! It was Father's Day. In the morning, we were still discussing what to give my father this Father's Day. In the afternoon, we heard bad news. What a great irony this is! Don't they realize what a dangerous and irresponsible thing they are doing when her father is running on the road and the driver of the brick car ignores the road sign? In fact, these two shots often happen in society, which may be nothing in the eyes of ordinary people, but they have already been deeply engraved in my memory. It is inevitable that there will be tears when there is laughter in life, I know. But can't you cry less? Both vegetation and human beings are different life forms in nature. I think, maybe, they can be equally beautiful, as long as we take care of them together, we will! Let's sing the beauty of life together! My mother Lao She's mother's maiden is in a small village outside Deshengmen, Tucheng, Beiping, on the way to Dazhong Temple. Mother was born in a farmhouse, so she is hardworking and honest, and she is in good health. This fact is extremely important, because if I don't have such a mother, I think I will have to make a big discount. When I was one and a half years old, I killed my father "Dick". My younger brother is less than ten years old, my third sister is twelve or thirteen, and I am only one and a half years old. I was raised by my mother alone. My father's widowed sister lives with us. She smokes opium, likes playing cards and has a bad temper. For our food and clothing, mother will wash clothes, mend or sew clothes for others. In my memory, her hands are red and slightly swollen all year round. During the day, she washes clothes and one or two big green clay pots. She never does anything perfunctory, even the black cloth socks sent by the butcher are washed white. In the evening, she and her third sister lit oil lamps to mend clothes until midnight. She has no rest all year round, but in her busy schedule, she keeps the yard tidy. The tables and chairs are old, and the copper parts of the cupboard door have long been incomplete, but her hands always keep the broken desktop from dust, and the broken copper parts shine. In the yard, the pots of pomegranate and oleander left by my father will always be watered and cared for, and many flowers will bloom every summer. My aunt often loses her temper. She searched for bones in the eggs alone. She is the king of hell in my family. She died when I entered middle school, but I never saw my mother resist. "I'm not angry with my mother-in-law. Am I not influenced by my sister-in-law? Life is like this! " Mother only says this when she has to explain that this is not enough to convince others. Yes, this is fate. A mother is never too old, nor too poor, nor too difficult. This is all fate. She will suffer the most. She always runs ahead to help her relatives and neighbors. Everything she can do is responsive. But quarreling and fighting will never have her. However, mother is not weak. My father died the year Boxer punched. Allied forces entered the city and searched from house to house for property, chickens and ducks. We were searched twice. Mother sat on the wall with her brother and third sister, waiting for the "devil" to enter the door. The door facing the street was open. As soon as the "devil" entered the door, he stabbed the old yellow dog to death with a bayonet and then searched the room. After they left, my mother found me with a broken suitcase. If the box was not empty, I would have been crushed to death. The emperor ran away, her husband died and the devil came. Lotus flames are everywhere in the city, but mother is not afraid. She wants to protect her children under the bayonet and in famine. There are many accidents in Beiping. Sometimes there is a mutiny, the whole market is on fire, and the fireball falls in our yard. Sometimes there will be civil war, the city gates are closed, the shops are closed, and the guns are fired day and night. This kind of panic, this kind of tension, plus the planning of the family's diet and the concern for the safety of the children, can a weak old widow bear it? However, at this time, my mother's heart is horizontal, and she doesn't panic or cry, so she has to make something out of nothing. Her tears will fall into her heart! This carrot-and-stick character was also passed on to me. I have a peaceful attitude towards all people and things and take loss for granted. However, in life, I have a certain purpose and basic rules, and I can do anything without exceeding my own boundaries. Afraid of meeting strangers, running errands and showing your face; But when I have to go, I have to go, just like my mother. From private schools to primary schools and middle schools, I have experienced at least 20 teachers, some of whom have a great influence on me, and some have no influence at all, but my real teacher, the teacher who inherits my personality, is my mother. My mother can't read What she gave me was the education of life.
Last year, I couldn't find anything about my mother's daily life in my home letter. I doubt and fear. I can imagine that if there is misfortune, I will be alone in exile at home, or I can't bear to tell you. Mom's birthday is in September. I wrote a birthday letter in August and half, expecting it to arrive before my birthday. The letter asked me to write down the details of my birthday, so that I no longer had doubts. 1On February 26th, I came back from the convention of the Cultural Labor Army and received a letter from home. I dare not open it. I opened the letter before going to bed. My mother has been dead for a year! My mother gave me life. I can grow up because of my mother's blood and sweat. I am not a very bad person because of my mother's influence. My personality and habits are inherited from my mother. She never enjoyed a day's happiness, and all she ate when she died was coarse grains. Alas! What are you talking about? Heartache! Heartache! The commentary mainly describes the responsibility of the mother to raise the child after the father's death. She sews clothes for people and earns a small income. Her hands are red and swollen all year round. For the sake of family harmony, in the face of the difficulties of the elder sister-in-law, it is also a concession and never resists. During the war, he protected many children with his weak body. Finally, the author concludes that mother is her "real teacher" because she gave herself "life education". Even such a great mother can't die for her old age. It's sad to read. The author follows the principle of seeking truth from facts in selecting materials and truly restores the characters. The selected examples are neither exaggerated nor narrow, and the evaluation given is also very pertinent, expressing a positive theme of "full of gratitude and respect". Writing training composition deskmate, what a kind name, a person who has been sitting next to you in the classroom since you started studying, must be one of your most familiar classmates. Although I have changed countless deskmates, I have never been vacant. He is an indispensable member of your school life. When you don't have a deskmate, you will feel lonely, lonely and bored. His enthusiasm, generosity, reserve, humor and cleverness must have left a deep impression on you. Get a pen and write a biography for him! Please write a narrative of about 600 words on the topic of "Biography at the Same Table". The role object chosen by thinking development can be the current deskmate or the previous deskmate. Be sure to collect detailed materials before writing, which can be listed in the form of an outline. Then strictly select materials, and choose typical, unique and novel materials according to the character characteristics, such as materials that can highlight his interests, hobbies, personality characteristics and ideological understanding. When you start writing, you should also organize the materials properly, generally taking time as a clue, using chronological methods, giving priority to narration and sometimes inserting arguments. At the beginning of the article, we should introduce the basic situation of the characters, and at the end, we should make a concise evaluation of the characters. Use lively language as much as possible to avoid boring reading. Remember to portray your deskmate in the spirit of seeking truth from facts, and don't beautify it just because you like it; You can't write bad things casually because you are dissatisfied. The portrayal of characters should be as objective, accurate and comprehensive as possible, and can't be written at will according to one's own preferences. Material tips ● aphorisms have true meaning, whitewash peace, be less artificial, and don't show off. -Lu Xun If there is no truth in a short essay: You don't write about things in life; What is not in life, you make up; Even for personal gain, spreading rumors and confusing people will inevitably lead to short life. -Sun Li ● Story Fan Chengda changed his poem to Fan Chengda, a famous poet in the Southern Song Dynasty, a wise man, named Shihu lay man, Wu Jun (now Suzhou City, Jiangsu Province). One of the four great masters in the Southern Song Dynasty. His poems are famous for reflecting people's sufferings and full of patriotic enthusiasm. One day, Fan Dacheng wrote a seven-character poem named "Kuizhou Zhi Zhu Song", which he recited repeatedly and was very satisfied. This poem says: "The old man with white head wears colorful flowers, and the woman with black head wears a double bun." . Leave your hooves and go up the hill. Mulberries have been picked. "