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There are always a lot of casual actions that people will never forget.
Put out a wisp of smoke.
Dad lit a cigarette, and a trace of white smoke curled up and slowly dispersed in the air like a cloud. The smell of smoke soon filled the whole living room. I raised my head buried in the newspaper and coughed a few times. That sound is very subtle. But dad seems to be very sensitive about this. I immediately put out my cigarette, fanned my hand in the air and gave me a sorry smile. In my heart, the moment of stubbing out cigarettes has long been eternal. There is a feeling that I am jumping in my heart. I don't know where the father's love is now, it's all in a wisp of smoke.
Turn around. Turn around.
"Study hard and listen carefully in class." This is the last thing my father said to me before he came home. In my eyes, my father will always be like this. He loves me so little. A friend said, "Parents always look back when they leave their children." But I never believed it. Looking at my father's drifting back, every step he takes adds a little disappointment to my heart. Suddenly, he stopped, steadied his bike, turned around and kissed my eyes in the air. He waved to me. Turned and rode away. When he got on the bike, I saw his white hair fluttering in the wind. Looking at his father's no longer young figure, tears crept into his eyes and flowed out quietly. Dad turned around and soaked my heart in warm water, which was warm. Where is Father's Love today? It's all in the moment of looking back.
Pass a white umbrella.
I was running in the rain and suddenly there was no rain overhead. I looked up and saw a white umbrella blooming like white flowers in the rain. Dad reached out and hit my umbrella on his head, holding me in the rain. Take me around the puddle and avoid the traffic all the way. At the end of the school gate, he handed me the white umbrella with his gentle big hand and turned and walked into the rain. Where is Father's Love today? Everything is in gentle hands.
I still remember a sentence my father gave me when I was six years old: If I love you, I will hold you in my palm.
The actions of love, dribs and drabs, ordinary but great, are full of love, and I will never forget them.
2. Keep a diary according to spatial order. Hello! ! ! I have several methods: 1, keep a diary before going to bed every day, not too much, just 50-80 words.
Just write down the strange and interesting things that happened one day. Don't repeat, don't write too much, be true. No reading, no comments, no notes.
Learn the advantages of others. (Suggest reading children's literature) 3. Try not to visit and write, but write about your true feelings.
Some of our classmates visited and wrote, and the teacher punished them for rewriting. The idea of the article is the center of the article. It should be new and strange. Don't blindly imitate others, have your own things. If you have a well-written article, this material can be used up to five times, otherwise it will appear childish with the growth of grade.
(even if it has been modified! 6. When writing an article, the materials should be specific, and the characters should have rich language, movements, expressions and psychological outlook. 7. When you really can't write it, write your own thoughts. If so, you must use the simplest words.
(I've tried, and the effect is OK.) I'll give you a trick: write a draft before writing a composition, so as not to mess up the composition paper. Hey, hey, okay? I'm still a fifth-grade pupil! First, the composition should learn to accumulate "reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice". These ancient summaries illustrate the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects. "Usually rely on accumulation, the examination room depends on play", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room.
(A) language to establish a "vocabulary". Vocabulary is the cell of an article.
Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups. There are two ways to establish "vocabulary": the first is reading.
Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, take reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs from a specific notebook, or make reading cards. The second is life.
At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the spoken language of the public and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us. Over time, we can say it chapter by chapter and write it beautifully. (2) Strengthen the accumulation of materials.
Materials are the flesh and blood of the article. Because many students usually don't pay attention to accumulating materials, they are worried every time they write a composition, or edit or copy it.
The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials. Usually, you can take a video camera and tape recorder with you, observe life deeply, actively participate in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life and social life in time in the form of sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes.
When recording, we should grasp the details and the characteristics of people, things, things and scenery. The article written in this way is flesh and blood.
(3) We should strengthen ideological accumulation. Opinion is the soul of an article.
The center of the article is not clear, or the thought is not profound, which often shows that the author's thought is superficial. Therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank".
There are two ways: first, be thoughtful. "One more miss, one more gain."
Think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when something happens. So you can see the essence through the phenomenon.
It is also necessary to record the "sparks" of thinking and the conclusions of thinking at any time. The second is compilation, that is, extracting famous sayings and aphorisms.
In short, the composition should be accumulated, and the three writing warehouses of vocabulary, material and thought should be regularly counted, sorted and classified to continuously enrich and expand. Second, to write a good composition, first learn to observe that Mr. Lu Xun emphasized two points when answering the question of "how to write a good article" for literary youth: one is to read more books, and the other is to practice more.
Here, "seeing more" means observing more. This shows that in order to write a good article and master skillful writing skills, it is necessary to observe more and learn to observe, and observation is the necessary premise and foundation of writing.
Russian novelist Chekhov earnestly warned beginners: "A writer must train himself to be a keen observer and never give up! -It is a habit to exercise your own observation, as if it were second nature. " It takes time to hone observation into habit and second nature, which is very useful and remarkable.
Pay attention to the people, events, sights and things around you, and hunt for the materials needed in the composition: be interested in some seemingly insignificant but meaningful things, and pay attention to the cause, process and result of things; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, and learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out, enter the society, get in touch with people, observe their words and deeds, think about some things, and integrate into your thoughts at any time. This is the process of observation. In the process of observation, we should pay attention to the following points: (1) Observation should never be limited to "seeing with eyes".
Broadly speaking, more practical observation refers to mobilizing all the five senses of people: listening with ears, feeling with the body and, more importantly, thinking with the mind, so that the observation will be more delicate and profound. (2) Pay attention to the use of "bad writing" in the observation process.
As the saying goes, a good memory is better than bad writing. Many students see a lot and think a lot every day, but they are not good at writing it down at any time, which will waste the observed materials and a lot of valuable things.
(3) Pay special attention to perseverance in observation. Don't make "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not conducive to writing a good composition. You should observe life and think about every day in your life, so that you can write wonderful articles.
Learning to observe plays a great role in laying the foundation and promoting a good composition. Without observation, you often find it difficult to write. May you learn to observe, constantly cultivate and improve your ability to observe, and make great progress in your writing practice.
Third, if the meaning is high, the meaning will be better, that is, to establish the center and intention of the article. So what problems should the article pay attention to when expounding ideas? (1) Correct conception is the first meaning of the article. The so-called correctness is to ensure that the feelings and thoughts of the article are correct, in line with the nature and laws of objective things, in line with China's basic political principles, in line with people's basic moral requirements, and can give people positive inspiration.
(2) Intention is single-minded. "Writing is single-minded and focused.
3. Beautiful park composition 400-word landscape writing "Lianhu Park" in Qiaotou Town, Dongguan City is a famous park in terms of spatial orientation and elegant environment. This is a good place for people to play and walk.
Standing at the gate of the park, an ancient archway appeared, which is the main entrance of Lianhu Park. Looking up, I saw four gold-plated characters of "Lianhu Park" shining in the sun. What a magnificent gate!
Through the gate, up the steps, and walked for about ten minutes, we came to the mountainside. Looking around, the trees are lush and shaded from the sun; Dewdrops on nearby flowers are crystal clear, like flawless pearls. People who go to visit are jostling with each other, and people who do morning exercises are in an endless stream. What a lively scene.
From halfway up the mountain, I walked through a winding corridor. The promenade is tightly covered by some vines, providing a cool world for tourists. There are rows of stone benches beside the promenade for tourists to rest. The pillars and walls of the promenade are painted with colorful pictures, including historical allusions such as "Three Visits Mausoleum", "the Goddess Chang'e flying to the moon" and "Making a scene in Heaven". They are lifelike and antique. Some of the wonderful calligraphy and paintings are vigorous and some are neat and orderly, which makes people seem to have entered a historical world.
Go straight up the stairs in the corridor, and you will reach the Songshan Tower, the height of Lianhu Park. The tower is divided into seven layers, much like the Leifeng Tower in Hangzhou, but the color is redder and brighter. Climb to the top of the tower, the breeze blows gently, and the gentle sunshine shines on the earth. Looking around, you can see all the beautiful scenery. At the bridgehead, a newly industrialized town is rising. Roads are like silk strips drifting into the distance, and cars are carrying the hope of the bridgehead. After the rain, bamboo shoots rose from the ground, resplendent and magnificent ... Listen to my father, Lianhu Park is more beautiful and charming at night.
Lianhu Park is not only a good place for our fitness and sightseeing, but also a good place for leisure.
In early summer, the endless lotus pond is sparkling, just like the scene of Qian Fan. In midsummer, lotus leaves are like a big green straw hat. One by one, they are covered with the dark green of water. Pink and white lotus flowers, some of which have sprouted, are like a shy little girl hiding behind a lotus leaf and refusing to come out. Some are like curious boys, sticking out half their heads slightly from under the lotus leaves; Some are like happy little fairies dancing involuntarily on lotus leaves! Swarms of butterflies, dragonflies and bees shuttle between the lotus leaves, adding a bit of excitement to the quiet lake.
There are rows of exquisite stone benches beside the lotus pond for tourists to rest. When they are tired from walking, they sit down to have a rest. At this time, their minds are full of jasper-like lotus leaves, or lotus flowers in bud or in full bloom, and soft music is playing in their ears. Take a deep breath, the fragrance of lotus is refreshing. Really not intoxicating, but intoxicating!
"This scene should only be in the sky, and the world can smell it several times!" If you want to find a good place to relax and cool off, don't forget Lianhu Park at the bridgehead!
4. Writing a 400-word composition "My Room" requires writing a 400-word composition. Everyone has his own world, and my little world is my room, which is a world full of literature and art and ink. Sitting facing south, the area is about 15 square meters. The snow-white wall is surrounded by green walls, clean and elegant. When you enter the door, put it on the right. It's for my handwriting practice. There is a single bed next to it, a light green pillowcase and a neat quilt. I knew at a glance that the owner of this room must be a clean girl. There is a writing desk beside the bed, which my father bought for me specially since I was sensible in kindergarten. On the crimson desk, my favorite extracurricular books are neatly stacked. There is a novel small desk lamp in the right corner of the desk. It has brought convenience to my study and life. On the left side of the desk lamp is what I wrote in big letters: an inkstone my father bought from Anhui on a business trip, a pen my mother gave me for my birthday, and a brush my sister bought from Guanqian Street in Suzhou. On the wall above the desk, there is a Liu-style copybook with exquisite and vigorous fonts, which makes people full of praise. On the left of the copybook is my study schedule, telling me how to seize the time and study like gold after coming home from school on weekends. "An inch of time and an inch of gold can't buy an inch of time." We should cherish time and everything. One end of the desk leans against the window, and the sunlight shines into the room through the bright window, which makes my room more quiet and comfortable. I love my room. It is a good place for me to live and a good environment for me to study.
5. It is no exaggeration to write that Jiuzhaigou is a fairyland on earth and a fairy tale world in the order of spatial orientation.
Folding waterfalls, blue sea, colorful forests, snow peaks and white fog floating in the mountains really have the artistic conception of "people traveling in the pictorial world" It's summer vacation, and it's really a bad time for us to come. We can't appreciate the colorful forests in autumn and the majestic snow peaks in winter.
However, the "Cuihai" alone will not let us down. Although it is a "sea", it is actually a lake, which also expresses the beautiful yearning of the local people.
Jinghai, let's go all the way by tour bus first. Looking out of the window, I can see a little blue from the dense branches. Further up, beautiful Haizi appears in front of me: the lake is blue-green and calm as a mirror, even if the breeze rises, it will not ripple.
There are thin clouds floating in the sky, shooting a wisp of white shadow; The Woods on the mountain stand tall and cast a shadow. Even if it is only a mirage, it is intoxicating.
This is the uniqueness of Jinghu Lake. Wuhuahai Jiuzhaigou's most famous Haizi is Wuhuahai, which is named after the lakes in the same water area are five colors.
Deep blue, dark green, malachite green, the three colors of the lake are blended together to form an eye-catching landscape. The lake on the shore is light blue, which seems to outline a light blue lace for the five seas. The lake is crystal clear. Standing on the shore, you can see small fish swimming in the complicated shade.
Pearl Beach Waterfall Pearl Beach Waterfall is definitely a must in Jiuzhaigou. The Journey to the West once filmed here, making it famous.
This is the first time I have seen a waterfall. Looking up, a large stream of white water rushed down from the top of the mountain, drawing a shallow arc, which was divided into countless streams of different sizes by the protruding rocks, and then regrouped and merged into the pool, raising large areas of water mist.
The underwater sound is different from the stream spring water, and the thunder is deafening, making the waterfall more magnificent. Haizi, as blue as the silent night sky, as spectacular as the Milky Way in the sky, and Jiuzhaigou, as beautiful as poetry, will it become an indelible memory? .
6. Composition arranged by orientation My classroom
My classroom is in the easternmost part of the third floor of the school building. There are windows in the north, which are very bright. There is a blackboard hanging in the front, back and left of the classroom. The blackboard in front is used by teachers to give lectures and write books on the blackboard. The names of the whole class are written on the blackboard on the right. The better his performance, the more red flowers he has on his name. There are three sets of radiators hanging on the wall on the left side of the classroom. In the cold season of winter, they will send out warm currents. There are cleaning tools such as broom, mop and trash can in the southwest corner of the classroom. Every morning, at noon and after school, students on duty will use them to clean classrooms and health areas. There is a bookshelf in the northwest corner of the classroom. The top two floors are all kinds of books and magazines brought by classmates. There are students' exercise books on the lower floor. There are drinking fountains and cabinets on both sides of the podium. In the middle of the classroom, there are three rows of desks neatly, each row has five desks, which are our desks for class. Maybe the tables and chairs have been used for a long time, and some of them are covered with small holes and cracks, which shows its vicissitudes.
Right in front of the classroom is the most sacred position in our class-the podium. The teacher goes back and forth on the podium countless times every day, imparting knowledge and teaching us the truth of being a man. There is a rectangular lecture table with some teaching AIDS in the middle of the podium. A computer is installed on the wall above the podium. They are all teachers' right-hand men. Students especially like computers. Teachers often show us some latest science and education films or use PPT to teach. When there is not much homework, the teacher will also show us movies as a reward for our good performance! Jiangmingda 300
7. Describe the spatial orientation of the building. 1. Grasp the characteristics of things and the center of explanation. Everything has its own characteristics, which is a sign that distinguishes it from other things. When writing a description, only by grasping the characteristics of things can we accurately and clearly introduce the things explained to readers and make people have a definite understanding of things. Grasping the characteristics of things to write is to grasp the center of interpretation. Of course, things often have many characteristics. It is impossible to introduce all aspects in an explanatory paper, and only one or two characteristics can be discussed at a time as needed. For example, ducks and chickens are poultry, they can walk, they have wings, and they can make meat. But to write an expository article about ducks, we must grasp the characteristics that distinguish ducks from chickens and other poultry. Compared with chickens, ducks like to live on water, and their tails can secrete oil; There are a pair of palm webbed, which can paddle; The mouth is long and flat, and so on. By grasping these characteristics of ducks, people can have a clear understanding of their living habits and appearance. Of course, different things have different characteristics, and similar things often have differences. These differences are their characteristics, so we should firmly grasp these characteristics when writing explanations. For example, the article "China Stone Arch Bridge" is about Zhao Zhouqiao and Lugou Bridge, both of which are stone arch bridges with many similarities. But they also have their own characteristics. Mr. Mao Yisheng grasped their respective characteristics and made a comparative exposition, which made readers understand the different shapes, structures and artistic styles of the two bridges. Grasping the characteristics of things and grasping the center of explanation is the basic requirement for writing a good explanation. To do this, the key is to observe, analyze, compare and study things in depth, so as to be truly familiar with what is explained. And master the characteristics and laws of this thing itself. Only in this way can we explain things well. Second, according to the specific situation, choose a good interpretation angle to write articles, such as what kind of people to write to; Writing an article is also purposeful, such as what kind of problems to solve through the article. For example, if the reader is a farmer, the purpose is to teach farmers the technology of planting peanuts, then according to the growth law of peanuts, how to plant peanuts from the perspective of how to achieve high yield, with emphasis on how to select seeds, land, sowing, fertilization and management. If the object is a chef or a worker in a food processing factory, the purpose is to introduce how to process edible peanuts, then the nutritional value of peanuts and how to process ingredients to make them more delicious should be emphasized. When we middle school students write expository articles, we can imagine who to write them to first, so that we can explain them according to the specific situation, so as to avoid the disorder and unclear purpose of the articles. The organization of a well-organized article is the reflection of the characteristics and laws of objective things and events in the structure of the article. Explaining things and events should be arranged in order according to these relationships, so that the levels are clear and the priorities are clear. For example, there are a group of clay figurines in the rented house of the landlord manor exhibition hall in Dayi County, Sichuan Province ... These pictures are relatively independent and side by side. The landlord is Gu Jian, Feng Gu Guan, Dou Guan and Accounting Guan in turn. Every farmer who pays rent has to go through four levels. From the first level to the fourth level, there is a sequential relationship. These cases * * * reveal the evil of landlords' cruel exploitation and oppression of farmers, which is the overall overview of "renting houses". This general overview has a total score relationship with various examples. The article "Review of Renting Houses" was published. At the beginning, it briefly introduces the evil of landlord Liu's cruel exploitation and oppression of farmers, and then introduces them separately in the order of clay sculpture pictures, highlighting the basic idea that there must be revolutionary resistance when there is oppression and exploitation. We should also pay attention to the orientation order of parallel things, which can be from top to bottom, from front to back, from left to right, from outside to inside, from near to far and so on. Only by writing these orders can we make it clear. For example, the Palace Museum introduces an ancient architectural complex in full text, and the author introduces this magnificent architectural complex clearly and orderly according to the method of summarizing first and then dividing. When writing a part of the building, the level is also very clear. For example, a paragraph about the Hall of Supreme Harmony introduces the outside of the Hall from the outside to the inside, from top to bottom, from the sky to the top of the Hall to the pedestal. When introducing its interior, it is from the middle to both sides. Explanatory articles on plant growth should consider its growth order and explain it in turn. Of course, no matter what kind of expository text, we should pay attention to the distinction between primary and secondary. Fourth, we should pay attention to language art and improve the effect of explanation. The language characteristics of explanatory writing are simple and clear, and technical terms are often used, which easily gives people a boring feeling. In order to improve the interpretation effect, we must work hard on the language. The language of expository writing is not to pile up gorgeous words, but to use accurate, accurate, popular and interesting words. First of all, on the basis of careful observation and thorough understanding of the characteristics of things, choose the words that best reflect the objective things, especially pay attention to the proper choice of words that limit the scope and express the conditional relationship. For example, the Chinese Stone Arch Bridge said Lugou Bridge: "The bridge is about eight meters wide and the road surface is flat, almost parallel to the river." A word "about" means that the bridge deck is not exactly eight meters, and only a rough figure is taken here; A "almost" means that the road surface is basically parallel to the river surface, but not completely parallel. Those low and thick clouds are often a sign of rain and snow. "Here, the words describing the morphological characteristics of clouds and the words expressing timeliness are very accurate and accurate. Secondly, we should pay attention to mastering and using necessary technical terms to prevent "layman", such as "aerospace" and "aviation" are two different concepts. Aircraft flying in the atmosphere are called aviation; Satellites and spaceships flying outside the atmosphere are called space flight. They use different aircrafts to complete tasks in different spaces. We must pay attention to such differences when writing articles. Third, the proper use of metaphor, personification, imitation and other rhetorical devices. For example, the article "Stone Arch Bridge in China" begins with Cheng's stone arch bridge.
8. Write down the composition of the house in the order of orientation. I will show you around my little bedroom today. My little bedroom is so elegant. Everybody come with me!
Through my living room, I came to my little bedroom.
There is a map of the world and a map of China on the east wall of the small bedroom. Below the map is a small bed with beautiful green sheets. The pattern on the sheets was specially chosen by my mother and me. They look funny and interesting. Look: Donald and Mickey are playing basketball. Donald is wearing a blue hat. With his mouth wide open, he ran quickly to Mickey to stop him from throwing the ball into the basketball basket. Mickey Mouse's round ears are black and bright, his eyes are big and round, and he is wearing a very "cool" sportswear with an eye-catching number "8" written on his back. He jumped up and tried to throw the ball into the basket. The sheets are flat, in harmony with the square quilt, and look neat and lively.
South of the bedroom is the balcony. Open the curtains, and through the glass, you can clearly see the beautiful streets and lively markets outside. Draw the curtains at night, and every pattern on the curtains is an interesting fairy tale: there are wonderful kittens fishing, and there are lovely Smurfs living in a bulging mushroom house, busy cleaning up the house! There is also a clever mouse enjoying a shower under the elephant's nose. If you sleep here, you can have a good dream every day!
There is my bookcase and writing desk in the west of Happy Reading Network in the bedroom. Everything on the desk is arranged in an orderly way, so it can be said that it is spotless. There is a blue eye protection lamp on the left. On its base sits a lively puppy, wearing a big hat, a yellow coat, blue suspenders and a pink clock in his hand. It looks ridiculous! There is ink and a small globe beside the desk lamp. Next to the desk is a bookcase, which is divided into three layers: upper, middle and lower. The upper layer is mainly children's books, the middle layer is learning reference books, and the lower layer is newspapers and periodicals and commonly used materials. No matter what kind of book it is, I always take it out and read a few pages whenever I have time, which is quite convenient.
In the middle of the middle wall of the bedroom, there is an animated image: Mickey, holding a red "vise" in his hand, seems to wish me a happy growth. There is a computer below. I take time out to play computer every day, sometimes typing, sometimes drawing, sometimes watching cartoons, which is very comfortable.
Although my small bedroom is not big, it is warm and comfortable. I like it and cherish it.