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Writing Guidance of "Sunshine" Proposition Composition

Propositional statement

The word "sunshine" in Modern Chinese Dictionary has the following meanings: ① sunshine; 2 positive, cheerful and full of youthful vitality; (3) (things, phenomena, etc. ) open and transparent.

Please write an article with the theme of "Sunshine" of not less than 800 words. The theme is self-determined, and the style is not limited except poetry.

Writing instruction

In sunny days, people envy the sun, while in the dark, people long for the sun. Brilliant sunshine has great artistic charm, and there are countless "dawn" and "sunset photos" in poems and paintings throughout the ages. Everything grows on the sun, bringing great vitality to nature and human society. Sunshine also enriches the spiritual world of human beings, which makes us have rich associations and imaginations and inspires us to pursue beautiful things ... Different people have different feelings about sunshine.

The meaning of "sunshine" includes: ① sunshine; 2 positive, cheerful and full of youthful vitality; (3) (things, phenomena, etc. ) open and transparent. We can expand our thinking within the meaning of "sunshine". Sunlight is not only a natural resource, but also a symbol of civilization. It symbolizes care, warmth, dedication, positive and cheerful, full of youthful vitality. Open and transparent (things, phenomena, etc.) ) can remind us of the relevant reality of life. What "sunshine" related materials are stored and accumulated in our minds every day, so we should select them from the warehouse of our minds at this time, such as life news reports, anecdotes, poems and songs related to sunshine, and so on. Appropriate citation of these materials in writing can increase the thickness of the article.

Related material

1, the captain of the arctic expedition, Bede, asked each member to keep a diary, mainly to record the scenery in the sun. Later, due to the date delay, the expedition team could not return on time, and they would stay in the dark and cold polar night for a while. They feel very lonely. At this time, Bede asked everyone to read the diary. As a result, the story in the sun makes people seem to see the snowy fields shining with silver light and the clumsy polar bears ... In this way, the irritability and anxiety are swept away, and the heart is completely occupied by happy memories and beautiful expectations. The long night finally passed, and the expedition ushered in the long-lost sunshine. In fact, as long as you can leave the fingerprints of sunshine in your heart, even if it is boundless darkness and cold around you, your world will be bright and warm.

2. Miracle of Sunshine City: 1972, the Singapore Tourism Board made a report to Prime Minister Lee Kuan Yew to the effect that there is no Mount Fuji like Japan in Singapore, and there are no waves more than ten meters high in Hawaii. We don't have any places of interest except direct sunshine all year round. A clever woman can't cook without rice, and it's really difficult to develop tourism. Lee Kuan Yew was very angry when he read this report. It is said that he approved this line in his report: How much do you want God to give us? Sunshine, sunshine is enough! "Later, Singapore used direct sunlight all year round to grow flowers and grass. In a short time, it has developed into a world-famous "garden city" and ranked third in tourism revenue in Asia for many years.

3. Omit the sunshine: It is reported that bracken is mainly exported to Japan in the trade with Lai. The market used to be very good. How much did you charge? However, in recent years, due to bad luck, foreign businessmen gave it up. The best time to pick ferns is only about ten days. During this period, bracken is fresh and delicious, not early, but old when it is late. After picking it, spread it in the ground to dry for one day, turn it over the next day, dry it for another day, evaporate the water, and then tie it up and box it. Just soak it in water when you eat it. However, in order to collect more and sell more, local farmers picked ferns home, and put them on a hot kang to keep warm before drying them on the ground, so it only took two hours to dry them. The bracken processed in this way looks the same everywhere, but when eaten, no matter how soaked in water, it is as old and hard as an old tree root and can't be bitten at all. After the merchant found out, he warned this, twice at a time, and it was still like this. As a result, people simply banned them from importing from China! Those farmers who are bent on processing ready-to-eat bracken omit two days of sunshine, but in the end they dry themselves!

4. The smell of the sun: A Taiwan Province woman writer wrote this sentence in her prose: "In early summer, the sun changed the smell of the air." A mainland critic commented: "This writing style is very good, using American writing style, making good use of synaesthesia, paying attention to refining words and deliberately managing." A mother couldn't help laughing because her daughter had "synaesthesia" when she was 4 years old. In winter, she often goes to bask in the quilt. Going to bed at night, my daughter said, "Mom, I like sleeping in bask in the quilt, which smells like the sun." She felt that, to be fair, her daughter's writing was more vivid than the essayist's. I remember a great painter said, "Every child is an artist."

Sample suggestions and comments

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I am a dandelion. I have become a mother. My child has just been born, but it is about to leave me. I can't bear to let them fly around the world, but it's a fact and fate. I can only expect them to thrive in the days when they leave me.

So, I prayed that the sun would shine on the earth, wake up my sleeping children and tell them to find their own future and hope.

I stayed up all night just to wait for the sun to appear, but the night was really long and I waited anxiously. Gradually, the small forehead of the sun appeared on the opposite hillside. After a while, the sun's charitable eyes turned to us and every corner. However, at this time, my mood is complicated. I hope they can grow up independently and strongly under the touch of sunshine, but I can't let them go.

Fate has not changed. They, my children, left me in tears. I can only tell them that where there is sunshine, there is a mother. Mom is the sun. I don't know when, a few drops of crystal water appeared on my green leaves. They were my tears, accompanied by sunshine, hoping to bring a mother's blessing.

I am dandelion, a newborn baby. Just sticking out a little brain from my mother's arms, I realized the beauty of the world. How beautiful! I was ecstatic and jumped for a while. My mother told me not to shake, and I calmed down, but my excitement didn't stop.

I don't know why, but my mother seems very sad. I asked my mother what was going on. My mother said, son, you will leave me tomorrow! why ...

You should live and grow independently and become a beautiful dandelion. But don't worry, there is the sun around you, and where there is sunshine, there is a mother. Mom is the sun.

I didn't sleep all night, and neither did my mother. She has been praying for the sun to take good care of us. I also pray that solar energy can bless my mother and me and never separate.

Unfortunately, my wish didn't come true, so I left my mother. But I always remember my mother's words: where there is sunshine, there is a mother. Mom is the sun.

Comments: The little author spoke out the beauty of sunshine through the mouths of Bo Gongying and his mother, and said what he wanted to say. It's really original and refreshing. This first caught the eye of the marking teacher in form. Looking closely at the full text, the structure is novel, the thinking is clear, the writing is closely related to the topic, and the language is concise, fresh and accurate. It is amazing that a middle school student can write such a beautiful fairy tale in the examination room. I can't help clapping!

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Similarly, in the face of the sunset, Li Shangyin sighed, "to see the sun, for all his glory was buried in the coming night", Liu Yuxi sighed, "But you have to see the sun, although there is glory, why should you be disappointed near dusk?" General Ye Jianying was full of pride, "The old man loves to sing twilight songs, and the green hills shine everywhere." Why is this? .

In the face of the Yangtze River, Su Shi has the grandiloquence of "the river never returns, the waves are exhausted, and the romantic figures of the ages"; Li Yu has a sad saying, "How much sorrow can there be, just like a river flowing eastward". Why is this?

It's also spring and fun. Meng Jiao is happy. "Spring breeze is proud of horseshoe disease, and you can see all Chang 'an flowers in one day"; Li Qingzhao is miserable. "I'm afraid the ship can't carry much worry. "A sunny day, windy and rainy; But the other one is still dark with sunshine. The brighter it is, the more boring it is. Why?

Just because after graduation, Meng Jiao's mind is full of joy and his heart is full of sunny memories; Just because she was filled with sadness after her husband died, the sunshine in her heart was blocked by sad memories.

So the difference between sunshine and darkness in life is very clear. Unfortunately, there are too many sad and lonely people since ancient times, and too few people say that autumn is better than spring. So I saw "A Crane in a Clear Sky", and Liu Yuxi "quoted poetry and blue sky", smiling at life alone, which was particularly commendable. Imagine how many people can bring "sadness" to Bixiao.

In fact, too many people in life are full of sad memories, and too many people fall into darkness. They are always eager for the sky to "give some sunshine", but they don't know that the real sunshine is only in their hearts. As Wang Guozhen said in his poem: When the heart is clear, the rain is clear; When the heart is raining, sunny is also rain. And I want to say: as long as the heart is bright, life has day and night.

In fact, everyone should have a sunshine express in their hearts. Excuse me, life is long, is there really no good memory? Is there really only pain and sadness? Never, the most unfortunate people are happy. As long as you keep these beautiful memories in your heart and look far away, the Sunshine Express will naturally take you to the terminal. Therefore, when you see that "there is no way to recover from doubts, and there is another village with a bright future", you will think of "another village with a bright future" because your heart is full of sunshine.

The same is drinking, Li Bai once raised a glass to dispel his worries, and later sang "I was born to be useful". This tells me that the darkness of the soul is short-lived, not absolute, so let's sweep away the unhappiness in our hearts together, let us always have sunshine, face life with a smile and go to sunshine avenue!

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Objective: To explore the influence of sunlight on different emotions.

Experimental equipment: three large test tubes, test tube clamps, sunshine reagent, happy solution, sad solution and angry particles.

(Note: The latter two experimental drugs are toxic. Please operate carefully under the guidance and supervision of the teacher. )

Experimental steps:

1. Add a little "sunshine" reagent to each of the three large test tubes. (about 1mL)

2. Add "happy" solution, "sad" solution and "angry" particles into three large test tubes respectively. The more drugs, the more obvious the experimental phenomenon. )

Experimental phenomena:

1. After adding "sunshine" reagent to "Happy" solution, the reaction is fierce. The solution changed from colorless to golden yellow and produced an aromatic gas at the same time.

2. After adding sunshine reagent into sad solution, the reaction speed is fast and the solution turns from gray to white.

3. After adding sunlight reagent, the reaction is faster. The pungent smell of the original "angry" particles disappeared and the particles quickly became smaller. After 5 minutes, the particles disappeared and the solution changed from black to colorless, and the properties of the solution were very similar to those of the "Happy" solution.

Experimental equation:

1, happy solution+sunlight reagent = happy solid+active gas.

2, "sad" solution+"sunshine" reagent = "normal" solution

3. "Anger" particle+"sunshine" reagent = "happy" solution

Experimental conclusion: "Sunshine" reagent can optimize various substances.

Experimental time: February 2006 18.

Postscript:

In sunny days, people envy the sun, while in the dark, people long for the sun. Brilliant sunshine has great artistic charm, and there are countless "dawns" and "sunsets" in poetry and painting throughout the ages. Everything grows on the sun, enriching people's spiritual world. It makes us have rich associations and imaginations and inspires us to pursue beautiful things. So, absorb more sunshine every day and be a happy person!

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When the first ray of dawn was slightly sprinkled on the earth, how many young people in the darkness radiated dazzling light of life because of its appearance.

The morning glow has given a young man great literary charm. Once, Turgenev came across a wonderful article. After asking about it, he was just a nobody and had no good works. However, Turgenev never gave up. After finding the author's aunt, he said to her, "Your nephew is a wizard. I'm sure he can create some brilliance in the literary world. Please continue to create. " Young people didn't expect that when they were down and out, in desperation, he wrote graffiti and was praised by great writers. Since then, he has embarked on the road of creation, and he is the world-famous Lev? Tolstoy. ?

There is morning glow and bright sunshine in the viewer's heart. Without Turgenev's appreciation and adult beauty, there would be no famous thinkers, some meaningful books and many loyal readers in the world. Taiwan Province writer Lin Qingxuan also had such an experience. Once, when he lamented the human world, he casually wrote: "Thieves, their thinking is so cautious and their hands and feet are so flexible. People like this can achieve something in anything in the world. Why are they going to the point of no return? " It was this sentence that inspired a young thief's confused mind and changed his past bad habits. Now he has become the owner of several chain stores in Taiwan Province Province, and his business is booming. Talking about the experience of starting a business, he said excitedly: "everything I have is given to me by teacher Lin."

Bacon said: "The viewer has morning glow, dew and flowers that bloom all year round;" Those who ignore it are frozen in the heart of the city, the sea is exhausted and the mountains are barren. "Appreciation is a kind of dedication, a kind of fragrance, a kind of communication and understanding, a kind of trust and blessing.

People long for sunshine, but at the same time, it also gives many people the color and vitality of life. There is a sunrise in the viewer's heart, and the sunshine gives it vitality. Sunshine, the light of hope! Light of life! Let's create a blue sky of our own and play the strongest sound of life with sunshine.

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Lunar July 16 Sunny Monday

In half a month, people created the legendary Ghost Festival. The old ghost said that we can go out to scare people today and keep people in awe of us. Only today can people see us at night and we can see them during the day, but we can't go out during the day. The elves and ghosts went out in white. It is said that it was very exciting and fell several times. I slipped away when he said "ghost" happily, leaving only a bunch of laughter and the old ghost's reprimand: "Who scared you like this? One is enough! And at any time, don't go out during the day and see the sun! Is poison, fire ... "

In fact, last night, I sat under a big tree and watched the moon. I accidentally fell asleep. Woke up in the morning, warm, unspeakable warmth, nothing like that dark and humid underground home. A red fireball Ran Ran rises from the top of the mountain, and I can feel her warmth through the shade ... Not good! I retreated underground, but the bright red sunshine seemed to have flowed all over my body. God, what's that feeling? I'm going crazy!

It rains on Thursday, July 30th in lunar calendar.

I didn't tell the old ghost about it, otherwise they would punish me. The family rules say that if I go out during the day, I will cut off my feet. But I asked the old ghost if he went out during the day. The old ghost said he didn't know, except for what the ancestors said, the clan rules can't be broken! "The dark underground is suitable for our survival!" The old ghost said flatly.

Red sunshine is really poison and flame to me. When the old ghost said it, the warm sunshine burned in my heart again. "When we meet the sunshine, we will destroy ourselves like moths!" The old ghost's words rang again. "Put out the fire," I thought. "I want to burn."

I hate darkness and humidity. Although I have green eyes, full of mold and thick black skin, I still like the feeling of sunshine-warmth, blood boiling, fascination and madness!

It's cloudy on Sunday in August 15 of the lunar calendar.

I encourage the elves to go out and see the sun. As a result, he reported to the patriarch that I was in prison, but my thoughts were flying. I want sunshine, I want to burn, even if it is only 1 second!

"Forget it, moldy ghosts should stay in damp and moldy places," said the elf ghost. "This was decided by our ancestors!"

The first day of the first lunar month is a sunny Monday.

The Spring Festival is finally released. I found a chance to run out of the village and climbed the mountain without looking back. There is snow on the mountain, and the road is difficult to walk. I fell down several times, but I made up my mind to see the sun in the new year. A moldy ghost is not born in a moldy place. I want to see the sun, I want to embrace the sun, even if the flame burns, even if it disappears, even if it disappears!

There are thick black clouds in the east, and the wind blows my moldy face like a knife. I am ready, even if I die, I will die like a moth in the flame of the sun. Suddenly, a golden light came out from the edge of the cloud, and the cloud was immediately coated with a layer of Phnom Penh. In the blink of an eye, the fireball took off, emitting thousands of golden rays and tearing the dark clouds to pieces. My heart is surging, my blood is gushing, although my body is burning painfully, mold is withering, and old skin is peeling off layer by layer, but I am extremely calm: I am not afraid of death; I'm not sad when I die. But the strong sunshine still makes me dizzy, and my eyes are black.

When I woke up, the moon touched my face gently. God, I'm not dead! I want to tell them that we can see the sun! You don't have to live in darkness and underground all the time! I flew down the mountain and stopped at the pond next to the ghost village. Although the moonlight is very weak, I can see that my skin is as white as snow! No mold, no fangs, no old skin, no hairy claws! God, this is not a ghost, this is clearly a legendary person!

Unfortunately, I didn't find any ghosts. I forgot that people can't see ghosts at night, but I saw a line of "ghost" at the entrance of the village. I could hardly recognize these words: moldy ghosts go out during the day and die in the sun.

Looking up, another round of the sun rises, and the golden sunshine is sprinkled from the east, which makes people excited! From today, my name is not "Mold Ghost", but I have a new name, called "Sunshine".

Celebrity masterpiece

sunlight is a kind of language

Ray Yan Shu

In the morning, the sunshine talks with the leaves in the brightest and most thorough language. Green leaves, trembling with excitement, are bright and bright, like foil forged with gold, showing off on the branches. When the sun smiled and talked to the flowers on the grass, the flowers immediately raised their heads, and the melancholy petals curled together immediately spread out, like listening ears.

On a sunny day, walking in the street, you won't pay attention to the sunshine. The bright sunshine, sometimes like a mediocre speaker speaking to the public, makes people sleepy and full of excitement.

Sunrise after dark, spring after severe cold, and dusk before dark can be heard. At these moments, sunshine will tell you the joy of reunion, the warmth of friendship, and even the sadness caused by short separation in emotional language.

If it is the setting sun after the rain, the rainbow will fully display the talent and beauty of the sunshine language. Red, orange, yellow, green, cyan, blue and purple, rising from the distant mountain roots, instantly fly up a Hongqiao, so that your whole body and mind can fly from the ground to the sky immediately. The repression of reality will be dispelled by a romantic imagination. The language of sunshine is full of Zen at this moment, which makes you understand the rain and nod, and makes the narrowness of your ordinary life become endless openness; Let the monotony of your lonely days become colorful.

But all this is just a language. You can't treat that piece of Jin Yezi as gold; Above the river, those gold foils swaying in the waves are unreal; Don't climb the Rainbow Bridge, it is the elusive artistic conception that the words of sunshine show you. In an instant, everything will vanish. But none of these things are empty. They leave a real picture in your heart, add fuel to the flames in your blood vessels, and make you believe in the power of sunlight and its real existence.

Talk to the sun and feel the light, warmth, progress and strength. Even if you don't use brass trumpets and drums, even if you whisper, there is no inferiority and darkness in that voice, and there is no sadness of wet and timid people.

You should, like an industrious gold digger, grasp the sound rhythm of sunshine from the flashing light spots on the overturned leaves of poplar trees; Like a simple farmer, you should stick your fingers in the soft soil and feel the warmth of the sun. If you are a friend of sunshine, you will have a red and healthy face and a bright and cheerful mood.

Sunshine is a language, an understandable language.