Summer is a special season, full of energy and passion. Walking in summer, we see many beautiful scenery in life, which always touches our feelings inadvertently.
0 1. Selection of new materials
The writer Haoran once said: "What others don't see is what you see is novel;" What others see is unexpected, but what you think is novel; People will stop writing when they see it. If written, it is a novel. "When we choose what to write, the composition has been completed by more than half. Only by choosing novel materials and special forms to express the theme can we express better results.
Fragment 1. "On a sultry morning, the sun was like fire, the earth was boiling hot, and the hot sun was flying on the ground, and my heart crossed a trace of irritability. The trees stopped shaking, the grass stopped moving and the insects stopped barking. A storm is coming. " -Chen Mingjia
Put pen to paper and began to describe the tranquility before the storm, highlighting the rainstorm below, with tranquility as the background. What a wonderful start!
Segment 2. "There is no stain on the blue sky, and Miss Yun's skirt is particularly white against the blue sky. Look, they dance in the sky, sometimes blocking the dazzling light of the sun, sometimes playing games with birds flying in the air, and sometimes hand in hand to spell out beautiful patterns: docile rabbits, fierce lions ... "-Zhou Jingyu
The bright and transparent sky, clean and colorful clouds are all described by the little author, and the whole article is full of innocence.
Segment 3. "Now I seem to be in another world. Under the touch of the breeze, the pool in front of me seems to have spirituality, making beautiful ripples one after another, and it seems very quiet outside. In full of green by the pool, lotus leaves wear green, with vigorous steps and various postures. A few lotus leaves are surrounded by a beautiful master-Lotus, which is blooming with a delicate smile and dancing with a delicate posture in the breeze and ripples, just like a beautiful girl. At this time, time has solidified and there is a beautiful scenery in front of us. " —— Qiu Chuyu
Indulge in the beautiful scenery, fascinated by the picture scroll. The picture is displayed in front of you, and this description gives you a panoramic view of the beautiful scenery. There is no need to say anything at this moment, just enjoy it!
02. ingenious idea
Clever ideas will make the scenery we write vivid and full of life. It avoids the stability of the article, which is the key to the innovation and novelty of the article. An excellent composition is inseparable from ingenious ideas. Creativity is like drawing architectural blueprints, hierarchical framework, rhythm classification and poetic description, which will definitely make our articles unique, novel and unique.
Segment 4. "Summer rain is cool ... summer rain is nice ... summer rain is selfless"-Chang Xunwei
This description not only has a clear structure, but also captures the characteristics of Yu Xia, and expresses his love for Xia from the sense of touch, hearing and inner feelings.
The fifth part. "Summer in the swimming pool ... summer on the beach ... in the summer resort"-Zhang Haiyang
Scenery in summer can be seen everywhere. Summer in the eyes of the little author is full of joy. Everywhere I go, there are unexpected moving scenery and happy programs.
Segment 6. "The frog prince is a bass .......................................................
In the vibrant summer, small animals also appear one after another, adding color to the summer scenery. The little author skillfully brought everyone into a different summer with his voice.
03. Use comparison
When describing scenery, we put two or more kinds of scenery together to form contrast, which can enrich our content, fully express the situation of scenery and highlight the characteristics of scenery. Achieve the purpose of expressing feelings and expressing the main idea.
Segment 7. "Summer is an enthusiastic young man, different from the gentle spring girl. Summer sprinkles all its enthusiasm on the earth. Summer is the season when everything grows vigorously, which is different from the spring when everything recovers. Summer is full of flowers and lush. " —— Zhou
Compare the prosperity of everything in summer with the revival of everything in spring, and compare summer to a passionate young man, with vivid images and prominent characteristics of summer.
The eighth part. "In spring, there are colorful peach blossoms; Autumn, ten miles of osmanthus; In winter, plum blossoms stand proudly; In summer, there are my favorite slender lotus flowers. " -Zhang Zhibo
Segment 9. "I like vibrant spring, fruitful autumn and snowy winter, but I prefer sunny summer." -Xiao Jiahui
Fragment 10. "Some people like the spring of flowers, some people like the fruitful autumn, and some people like the winter wrapped in silver. And I like passionate summer best. " -Chang Xunwei
The scenery of the four seasons has its own characteristics, and I like the scenery in summer alone. By using this contrast, the author's love for summer scenery is more truly expressed, and the charm and elegance of the scenery are highlighted.
The fragment 1 1. "I have seen the beautiful blooming of epiphyllum, I have seen colorful fireworks, and I have even seen plum blossoms proudly open in the snow, but what I can't forget most is a unique scenery in summer-snowstorm." -Wu Kunxin
Looking back, what they saw, whether they were beautiful, charming and arrogant, could not compare with a special scenery. This contrast shows that the storm is unique and fascinating.
Fragment 12. "Summer rain, come to come, go to, say change. The rain in summer is still "grumpy", which comes fiercely and goes quickly. Although not as gentle as spring rain; Nor is it as hazy as autumn rain; Not as cold as winter rain; But it has its own unique charm. " Xu Jiayi
In contrast, Yu Xia's "violent temper" is more prominent, pointing out the theme, initially showing the unique charm of Yu Xia.
Capture details
The writer Chi Li once said: "I prefer the details in life, because most stories and scenery are similar, only the details are brand-new. Different time and space, different people, watching the same thing, you will definitely see different details. " So be good at capturing the most touching details.
Sub-paragraph 13. "There is no cloud in Wan Li at noon, and the sun is burning. Passers-by, holding handfuls of colorful sun umbrellas in their hands, are like a fluttering sea of flowers; Old people, sitting in the shade, enjoying the cool, fanning their fans, telling stories and talking about their parents' shortcomings; The children ran around the old man with bare arms, catching cicadas and dragonflies. No matter how hot the weather is, they are not afraid, but still have fun, carefree and unrestrained. Girls, wearing colorful floral skirts, add a beautiful scenery to summer. " -Wei Jingyi
Describing the heat at noon in summer, the little author flexibly and carefully grasped the crowd he saw to write. This dynamic description is lively, which makes the whole article come alive!
Sub-paragraph 14. "You see, the lotus leaves in the pond are green and dark green, with different colors, smooth and shiny. Some float on the water, some surface, and some roll. Lotus leaves are squeezed by Egypt, like a group of brothers and sisters, heart to heart and intimate. It's like holding a squeezing competition in a pond. Every green lotus leaf looks like a Hercules. You squeeze me, I squeeze you. Some Hercules couldn't hold on and were cornered by other Hercules. Lotus leaves floating on the water are like jasper plates. After a shower, the water drops rolled around in the jade plate, which was very clever. " —— Pan Qinyu
The little author described the lotus leaf vividly, and the lotus leaves were full of vitality under his meticulous observation and meticulous description.
Fragment 15. "In summer, it is early. At first, the east gradually showed a little white light. At seven o'clock, Dayang couldn't wait to climb the hill, revealing his red cheeks and putting on the golden "holy clothes" for the earth. In the grass and fields, flowers also got up early. Looking around, they were all in full bloom, and even the dew left in a hurry. The grass gradually changed from light green to green, piece by piece, like a green sweater woven for nature. The sun is getting brighter and brighter, and the sun shines on the green trees, casting an irregular picture. The summer morning is like a colorful oil painting, which seems to make people full of energy and ready to meet the hot test. " -Fang Hui Ze
A beautiful picture of a summer morning is vividly written on paper. As time goes by, the scenery changes carefully and vividly.
Fragment 16. "After the heavy rain, the air smells of earth. There was the sound of vendors selling in the distance, and people could not bear to come out to enjoy the cool. The old people went back to the shade and continued their calligraphy and chess. The children continued to play happily beside the fitness equipment. The air has also become moist, the cool breeze is blowing slowly, and the flowers and trees on the mountain have also changed their appearance and become refreshed. There are also several dewdrops on the leaves of flowers and plants on the roadside, which are crystal clear. Like jade, the soil exudes a unique atmosphere, making the originally lifeless flowers and plants more colorful. " Ainan Li
After the heavy rain, from the crowd activities to the changes of the surrounding scenery, the little author observed carefully and described vividly, so that the beautiful scenery after the rain appeared in front of him.
05. imagine association
Imagination and association can rejuvenate the withered face and revive the withered mind. We have read Ode to Snow in Shi Shuo Xin Yu: What is snow like? Xie An's answer is that "the air difference of salting can be simulated." Appear inconspicuous; And Xie Lang's answer is "If catkins are not due to the wind." It has become an eternal story. It can be seen that opening the wings of imagination and association can make our literary talent soar and express our unique subjective feelings about the scenery.
Fragments 17. "Suddenly, a dark cloud came at us from a distance, bringing wind, rain, thunder and electricity. The wind roared by, the trees blew askew and the grass fell down. Lightning guides Grandpa Lei to ring the thunder bell, and the door of rain opens! " -sea
The little author has a rich imagination, giving everything a vivid image by means of metaphor and personification, and bringing readers into the situation.
Fragment 18. "Sifang Mountain Square is surrounded by mountains on three sides, with lush flowers and trees. In the Woods, there are climbing steps paved with boards. There are some gaps and sizes between the boards, which creak when you step on them. The steps are high and dangerous, so I must slow down and be careful. This let me see the different scenery of each step, let me appreciate the flowers blooming on both sides of the steps dancing in the breeze, and let me hear many birds singing tirelessly. Ah! Isn't life like this? There will always be difficulties, big and small, waiting for you, and you need to dare to challenge and keep moving forward. However, this process of hard work also requires you to slow down occasionally and enjoy the different scenery on the road. " -Chen
From the scenery enjoyed along the way, it is associated with the hardships of life and the beautiful scenery encountered on the way. Deep expression, fresh and natural.
Fragment 19. "Xia Yu is an impatient person. Suddenly the sky was overcast, and it began to rain. Big drops of rain fell from the air, just like thousands of airborne troops jumped happily from the air and landed safely on the ground. The wind whizzed by, the rain flew away obliquely like grass, and crystal water droplets condensed on the leaves of various flowers and plants. The heavy rain is falling from the sky, and the dark sky seems to be falling. Wind chases rain, rain drives wind, and it rains. After a while, the rain gradually stopped and a rainbow appeared in the sky. After the rain, the air is particularly fresh, the summer heat disappears without a trace, and the water drops on the leaves keep falling, "tick, tick." -Xiao Jiahui
The young author vividly described the rapidity of summer rain with his own imagination. From the storm raid to the tranquility after the rain, the imaginative language makes the article extremely vivid.
Part 20. "There seems to be a big hole in the sky, which is very dark and covered with dark clouds. Slowly, slowly, bit by bit swallowed up by the darkness. Suddenly a gust of wind, the tree began to shake violently, the grass bent down with it, and the bugs were scared to hide. Suddenly, a pale flash of lightning flashed across the sky, and Father Lei played his deep drum. In a short time, the rain babies fell from their parachutes, getting fiercer and denser, and the rainstorm came. " -Chen Mingjia
The author's language rhymes and is symmetrical. Lightning and thunder before the storm filled his imagination with interest. This expression is charming.
06. Be good at quoting
Quoting ancient poems and epigrams can enhance the sense of rhythm, strengthen the persuasiveness and enrich the content of the article. Moreover, the quoted famous sentences are concise, implicit and elegant, and can achieve endless expression effects.
Segment 2 1. "The earth in the moonlight is a little hazy, but you can still see the rolling mountains and dense forests. Night in the country is very different from day. Although it is a hot summer, it is not so hot at night, and it is much cooler by comparison. A breeze is blowing, which makes people feel refreshed. After dinner, people also sat in the yard one after another, chatting in the moonlight for fun. That's not' Mao Yan is low and small, the grass on the stream is green, and the eyebrows are good when drunk. Who has white hair?' Is it comfortable? "-Zhao
The comfort of summer nights in rural areas is summed up by the little author's phrase "Qingpingle village residence", which is memorable.
Fragment 22. "There is no water in the pond, and the green lotus leaves are endless. From a distance, they look like a big round tray, as if they can hold the slowly setting sun. Breeze in Xu Lai, blue waves rippling on the pond, lotus leaves dancing with the wind, and the gorgeous lotus flowers hiding in it face the afterglow, slowly sticking their heads out and looking at the world. It is a response to the poem "the lotus leaf in the sky is infinitely blue, and the lotus flowers in the sun are of different colors." -Shao
The beautiful scenery in front of us is picturesque, and Yang Wanli's poems are quoted appropriately. Let the beautiful scenery be engraved in the reader's mind.
Fragment 23. "Ten frogs in the world get together and whisper to each other as if discussing something. Everything was ready, and the frogs began to sing together. At this time, several dragonflies flew in and stood on the lotus leaf, being their loyal listeners. Look! A dragonfly stands quietly on a budding lotus flower. This picture is so beautiful! Xiao Hegang showed a sharp corner and stood a dragonfly on his head', what a beautiful picture! " -Zhang Zhibo
The beautiful scenery in front of us is fixed into a painting, and the quotation of poetry makes the picture more aesthetic.
Debris 24. "I love the lotus, love the beauty of the lotus, love the practicality of the lotus, and love the lofty virtue of the lotus' out of the mud but not stained, lingering'!" -Pan Qinyu
At the end, quote Ailian to sublimate feelings. This summary of the full text will express the little author's love for lotus more deeply.
The midsummer has passed, but the scenery of summer is blooming in our pen. The summer we wrote left precious memories for our childhood. Let's remember the six wonderful tricks, describe the summer scenery well and move in a better direction!