2008 brought us many surprises and joys. With the successful conclusion of the Olympic Games and the perfect ascension of Shenzhou VII, the heroic astronauts successfully returned from the cabin, and we ushered in the birthday of the great motherland-National Day. National Day is the day when People's Republic of China (PRC) was founded. People of all ethnic groups get together to celebrate the birthday of the motherland. The streets of the festival are crowded and bustling, showing the festive atmosphere. Merchants use this long holiday, people's prime time for leisure shopping, to play a variety of promotional means. National Day is not only the birthday of the motherland, but also the rest day for adults, and it is also the crystallization of primary school students' happiness. Parents who used to be always busy can now move from busyness to a leisure world and accompany their children to enjoy family happiness. Looking at the happy smiling faces of adults and children in the street, people's life is full of richness and happiness everywhere. On this happy day, flowers, trees and animals are also greeting us and saying. National Day is a wonderful time for our motherland/KLOC-0.3 billion people to celebrate and wish together. Don't forget the old man who has worked hard all his life. What they need is not money, but the warmth and affection of their grandchildren. Share it with them! Time always passes by minute by minute. It took away the happiness of this year's National Day, but it couldn't take away the laughter we left on the National Day. May we have such a happy National Day every year! Happy 59th birthday to the motherland! ! ! Teacher's comment: "With the successful conclusion of the Olympic Games, the perfect ascension of Shenzhou VII, the heroic astronauts successfully returned from the cabin, and we ushered in the birthday of the great motherland-National Day". The first paragraph of the article is particularly wonderful. You summed up the happy events in China these days with concise and general statements, and there is a proud and festive atmosphere between the lines. The author felt "the richness and happiness of people's lives" from the streets of festivals, and realized in the essence of festivals that people "need not money, but the warmth and affection of their children and grandchildren". These feelings are obtained through what I saw and heard on National Day. The article is true and sincere. Finally, the author expressed his blessing to the motherland.