My sister's excellent composition 1 My sister is fat and lazy. Although she doesn't admit how fat she is, she is already 120 kg.
Speaking of my sister's laziness, everyone in the family knows. My sister is lazy and always asks me what I want. During the holiday, she finished her homework and lay on the sofa watching TV. When you are hungry, let me feed her below. Of course, she won't treat me badly. After cooking, she will generously give me 10 yuan as a reward. In her eyes, anything can be solved as long as she has money. I really want to replace the hard-won book "People Like Me" and give it to her: "How many lazy people have you met like me?"
There is a saying that you gain ten pounds on holidays. This sentence is a good description of my sister! For example, during the Chinese New Year, she eats potato chips and chicken legs and chicken chops every day, both of which are foods with high oil content. Give me money to buy it as soon as I finish eating. So, she gets half a catty or a catty every day, not to mention. Sometimes she will clamor for losing weight, but it's easier said than done, and it's impossible to cash in!
People say: take a walk after dinner and live to ninety-nine. My parents and I both followed this sentence. Every time after dinner, we will go downstairs for a walk. But my sister just wants to watch TV at home. She thinks eating and resting are the happiest things in the world.
Her legs are like "chicken thighs" and her stomach is like "big watermelon", and her mother often dislikes her figure. Also, she has a lot of acne on her face, her skin is as black as charcoal, she has a lot of meat on her body, and she is not tall. I can't imagine what she will look like when she grows up, but I still hope she looks good.
Ah! My dear sister, when can you manage your figure perfectly and get rid of all your shortcomings, then you will be a great girl when you grow up!
Of course, it's not too late for you to change. I hope you succeed!
My sister has an oval face, bright eyes embedded under her dark eyebrows, a high nose and a talkative cherry mouth. She likes to laugh. When she smiles, there are two dimples next to her cheeks, which gives people a very kind feeling. She is tall, thin and attractive.
She has a gentle personality and always convinces people by reasoning. Every time I make a mistake, she never hits me or scolds me. She always persuades me carefully and gives me reason, which always makes me convinced, speechless and ashamed.
She is not only beautiful in appearance, but also beautiful in language and heart.
Once, my neighbor's little sister accidentally hurt her leg while playing. Suddenly, her pants were dyed red with blood, and little sister burst into tears. When my sister saw it, she immediately ran over, bandaged her wound with a new white jacket without hesitation, then picked her up and ran to the hospital quickly. By the time she got to the hospital, her sister was sweating like a pig and sweat was dripping from her face. When the neighbor's uncle came to thank her, my sister had quietly left the hospital. Look, this is my helpful sister. There are countless such things. In a word, she is a "living Lei Feng".
In my eyes, my sister is a perfect recognition, and I like my sister. You must be dying to know her name! There's no harm in telling you. Her name is Huang. Maybe one day you will meet her on the road!
One day of the National Day, the sky was clear and the sun was shining in Wan Li. The sun rises from Ran Ran in the east, emitting thousands of rays of sunlight.
We go to my sister's house to play by bus. When we arrived at the bus stop, my sister was already standing at the station waiting for us. When she saw me, she quickly took my hand and said, "I've been waiting for you for a long time, like looking forward to the stars and the moon, and finally I'm looking forward to you." After that, we two sisters danced, sang and laughed, ran to my sister's door like rabbits and opened the door. We eat snacks for a while, jump on the bed for a while and watch TV for a while. What impressed me most was my sister's best Latin dance performance, which was really great. It looks like a dragonfly flying. Based on this performance, I thought, "I want to have hobbies and specialties like my sister." I saw another beautiful box of crayons on her desk. I quietly picked up the beautiful box of crayons by hand, read it over and over again, touched it once, picked it up for a while, put it down for a while, and couldn't put it down. I thought to myself, "if only I had such a beautiful box of crayons!" " "How can I tell my sister?" Will she see me off? "I rolled my eyes and thought," doesn't my sister like it best when I let her kiss? "I told her to be sweet, and she would definitely give it to me. So I said to my sister affectionately and sweetly, dear sister, can you give me this box of crayons? I also want to learn to draw. My sister hesitated and said generously, "Well, I hope the more you draw, the better. "
I think I should be so generous to my sister that I won't even lend an eraser to others. Learn to share, give someone a rose, and there is more fragrance in your hand.
My sister's excellent composition 4 My sister is a helpful person, and her words can convince me every time. My sister's big eyes are dripping with water, and there is a glib mouth under her straight nose. If you add another windbreaker, it will look good.
My sister is not only beautiful, but also helpful. I remember one day in the summer vacation, my mother took my sister and me to the mall to play. I was very happy, but I just went out and saw Grandpa Li's little grandson coming. Grandpa Li has to take care of his little grandson and buy food. He was in a whirl of anxiety. When my sister saw it, she went up and asked, "Grandpa Li, why are you so sad?" Grandpa Li spoke quickly because he was in a hurry: "I have to take care of my grandson, but I have to buy food." What can I do? " Sister said, "Never mind, I'll help you buy food!" " ! You take good care of your little grandson! Grandpa Li listened, his eyebrows gradually loosened and said, "Thank you, thank you! "Hearing this, I quickly pulled my sister's skirt and said softly," Mind your own business, or you can't go out to play. " My sister gave me a white look, and I didn't dare to say anything. My sister went to help grandpa Li buy food. It was past ten when I came back. I said angrily, "Why do you want to help him and let him do it himself?" Hearing this, my sister said meaningfully, "How can I say this? Grandpa Li didn't help my family at all, but he has been a neighbor for so long. Shouldn't neighbors take care of him? " Besides, grandpa Li has lived alone for so many years, and finally he is looking forward to a little grandson. Shouldn't they be together for a while? "My sister's words made me blush and bowed my head shyly.
My sister went to school, and since then, I have helped Grandpa Li do everything. Maybe it's inherited my sister's mission! My sister is such a helpful person, and her spirit is worth learning from each of us.
My sister has a beautiful face. Big round eyes, curved like a crescent moon when laughing, straight nose, rosy lips and neat white teeth when laughing. This person is my sister.
My mother is very busy at work, and my sister teaches her homework. She is a very patient person. When she encounters problems in her homework, she will carefully analyze them and explain them to me step by step. If she doesn't understand again, just say it twice. Anyway, she will teach until I can. After finishing my homework, she will give me some questions that I usually make, and she will carefully check my homework. My sister is also responsible for my rapid progress in grades!
My sister is also a humorous person. She sometimes makes faces and makes noises, which often makes me laugh. She often takes me out to play and always buys me delicious food. Once she goes out, she always gains a lot. My sister loves me very much. Once I went out to play, my sister went to the bathroom. I'll wait for her at the door. Two people came to install it for me. I'm sorry to leave without saying anything. My sister happened to see this scene and quickly helped me get justice: "Changzhou is now evaluating civilized cities. It's uncivilized of you to do so! " The man quickly apologized to me. After this, I found that my sister loves me very much.
Therefore, I want to repay her with good grades and make her proud of me!
My sister's excellent composition 6 I have a beautiful sister. Although she is not my own sister, she is closer to me than her own sister. She comes from Sichuan, 2 1 year old. She has enviable watery eyes, snow-white skin, beautiful face and depressed figure. Besides being beautiful, she is also very kind to me.
One day, I was watching a wonderful TV series with relish and suddenly felt dizzy. After dizziness, everything returned to its original state, and I didn't care much. After a few minutes, I felt a little uncomfortable, top-heavy and sleepy, as if I would fall down with a light touch. In order to make myself feel better, I lie flat on the sofa. At this time, my sister just came to pick up the clothes she left at my house. When she saw me lying on the sofa, she quickly came to touch my forehead. She is pleasant and just wants to call my parents. Then on second thought, my parents are not at home today. They have gone on a business trip and will be back for several days. So he picked me up and ran to the hospital. The doctor said that I had a high fever, which was quite serious. I may have to observe in the hospital for a few days. In these days, my sister didn't go to work, but stayed in the hospital to take care of me, cook for me and wash my clothes. ............., I found that she not only lost a lot of weight these days, but also had a lot of heavy dark circles. I think this should be caused by malnutrition and often staying up late. A week passed, and my illness finally recovered. Mom and dad also came back from a business trip. My parents and I are very grateful to my sister for taking care of me for so many days, but my sister said; This is what I should do. ' '
I learned what self-sacrifice means from my sister. I should learn from her and become a person that everyone respects. This is my sister. I love my sister.
My sister has long hair, black eyebrows, pink face and big watery eyes-the only fly in the ointment is that she is a little fat.
"I want to lose weight, I want to lose weight!" As soon as I heard the roar, I knew my sister was looking in the mirror again! I secretly smiled in my heart. How can I lose weight like her and not get fatter?
Once, my uncle and aunt were not at home. After lunch, my sister came back from shopping and couldn't wait to start cooking dinner at four o'clock. Before six o'clock, my sister invited me to dinner. I looked at it. Wow, is this the diet meal she said? Delicious Sichuan-style pork, green fried vegetables, glittering and translucent wet fried Flammulina velutipes, clear soup pickles, soft big steamed bread! So I asked my sister, "Just the two of us, can we finish so many dishes?" My sister stared at the food on the table without looking back and said, "Don't you see there is a powerful faction here?" Hurry up and start chopsticks! "I haven't picked up chopsticks, and the steamed bread in my sister's hand is half! I watched helplessly as she poured almost the whole dish into the bowl, divided by three times five and swallowed it. Hey, there is a leaf of Chinese cabbage. My sister picked up the steamed bread and wiped it on the plate, just like washing dishes. The dish was polished and polished, and then she put it in her mouth and chewed it contentedly. After eating, she wiped the oil from her mouth, with a regretful expression on her face, and said, "Oh, how come I ate so much again! Hurry and exercise for a while ... "
You say, if you eat like this, can my sister lose weight successfully?
My sister is the most beautiful and best sister in the world.
She has long, flowing black hair, beautiful eyes inlaid with black gems under the arch eyebrows, a pair of dimples on her lovely face, a straight nose sitting in the middle of her face, and a smooth tongue, which constitutes my beautiful sister. She likes to wear all kinds of clothes, including black, blue, purple and pink ... Look, today her pink coat is paired with black leggings and white sandals. She is sometimes naughty and cute, but she is also very sensible.
My sister lives in Fuzhou and will not return to Jianyang until the summer vacation. She likes Jianyang's breakfast-rice rolls very much. Once, I accompanied my sister to the street for breakfast, and my mother told me that I had put the money in my bag. After ordering breakfast, I opened my bag and looked, ah, there is no money in the bag! I looked up at my sister helplessly and said, "Sister, that … I have no money in my bag." My sister smiled and said, "It doesn't matter. I have money. Let me treat you to dinner. " I thought the breakfast that day was particularly delicious.
Another time, I took my sister to my house to play games. To show my familiarity with the road, I rushed to the front. "Ah-"I fell heavily on the ground, and bright red blood ran down my knees, which were all bruised. My sister ran from behind, squatted on the ground, took out a paper towel to help me wipe the blood stains, and asked me, "Does it hurt?" Dare to run so fast next time? "I dare not," I said. At this point, I think my sister is like my mother. My sister helped me home, helped me sit on the sofa and asked me, "Is there no mercuric chloride at home?" "I said," No, my sister asked me to sit on the sofa and go downstairs to the drugstore to buy me mercurochrome. After I bought it, my sister gently painted it for me, blowing the wound gently while painting it. It wasn't long before I felt less pain. At that time, I thought to myself: it's good to have a sister!
This is my good sister, a beautiful and sensible good sister-Wu Ruofei.
I have a sister who loves me. She is 20 years old and very tall.
Her mouth is like a cherry, and her eyes are watery, like black grapes. Wearing a pair of glasses on the bridge of nose. Black hair, white teeth, especially beautiful. The face is round, and when you smile, you will reveal dimples. Let me tell you a story that happened to her!
Once, my mother took my sister and me to fly kites in the park. When I went to the park, I picked up my kite and ran hard. After a while, the kite flew higher and higher. I only looked up at the kite. I accidentally stepped on a stumbling block and suddenly slipped. I cried immediately. My sister ran to help me up and kept rubbing my feet gently. I feel very comfortable. This is my sister who loves me.
Another time, I doodled with my sister's paper. My mother found out and scolded me. My sister came over and said, "My sister didn't mean to. I just want to buy some more. " When my sister said this, I was extremely happy and full of happiness. My mother didn't say anything about me when she went to cook. When my mother was cooking, I said to my sister, "I'm sorry." My sister said, "It doesn't matter. I hope I won't do this in the future. " I said, "Well, thank you for forgiving me."
The last thing is a very interesting thing. It happened when I was young. Once my sister and I went to an amusement park to play. My sister said, "What shall we play?" I was thinking when my sister said, "Let's play pirate ship!" When I sat on it and started, I screamed "Ah" because I was scared. My sister said, "No, it's fun." I opened my eyes and found it really interesting! My sister always gives me a sense of security.
This is my sister. I feel very happy when she is with me.
My sister's excellent composition 10 I have a sister who was born only 1 year, earlier than me 1 day. Probably because we are only one year apart, I never call her "sister" and she never pays attention to it.
She has curly brown hair. Because of this curly hair, she has been teased by many people many times. Her face is authentic yellow skin. Compared with the "black" skin that I like to cross from Africa, it is simply heaven and hell. Under her two thick and curved eyebrows, there are a pair of watery brown eyes, a delicate nose and a small mouth, which are evenly arranged on her chubby face.
Although she looks like a lady, she is often confused when doing things. Her name is Xue Hongjuan, but her classmates call her Xue. Why? Listen to me slowly: once, someone didn't hand in their math homework. When the math team leader checked one by one, he found a book with the name "Xue" on it. This is confusing. There was only one Xue in their class, and now there is another Xue. The math group leader is puzzled. After checking, he found that there was no Xue Hongjuan's book, so the math team leader named this famous book "Xue Honghong". Xue Hongjuan looked at it: "This is my notebook. What's wrong? " The team leader pointed to the name, "Oh, how did I write my name wrong? A clerical error is purely a clerical error. " Xue Hongjuan defended herself. From then on, students began to call her "Xue".
I remember another time, she said she would cook black rice porridge for us. As soon as I heard this, I was so happy that I said to her, "Xue Hongjuan, a little more sugar will make it sweet." She nodded and said, don't worry. As a result, she used salt as sugar and put it in the pot. He also smiled and said to me, "Oh, sorry, wrong."
Alas, my sister is such an idiot!
My sister's excellent composition 1 1 My sister is 14 years old, with a standard oval face, slender eyebrows, watery eyes, delicate nose and fair and smooth skin, just like a "doll". She is not only unusual in appearance, but also in other places!
She likes to be quiet. Whenever others talk in a noisy circle, she likes to hide and listen to music or read quietly. If someone bothers her, whether intentionally teasing her or unintentionally offending her, she always looks at the other person with a strange look, then lowers her head and goes on doing her own thing like an innocent person. That time, when I saw her reading for a long time, I asked her if she wanted to eat some fruit, but she looked up and gave me a light look, as if to say, "Don't bother me, can't you see I'm reading?" Then I looked down and continued reading her book. I had to leave awkwardly. After that, I won't bother her casually, because her eyes are really unbearable.
She likes reading. Every time I see her, she always has one or two books in her hand. Because she loves reading, her room has almost become a library. What famous books, fairy tales, novels, essays ... everything. You know, when I first went to her house, I was shocked by the books in her bookcase! According to my uncle, my sister spends several times as much time studying as we do. Almost all her entertainment time is spent on reading, and even her Chinese teacher often praises her.
She also likes math. Mathematics is a complicated maze, but my sister can move freely in it-girls rarely have such strange "skills". She is really crazy about math, isn't she? -What formulas and theorems are often recited by mouth? Sometimes a math problem can make her think for an hour or two; In the textbook, the math problems in the workbook are still not satisfied, and I often go to the bookstore to buy Olympic math problems; Sometimes even when I walk on the road, I will run to the side of the road, draw a geometric figure on the ground with branches, and squat down on the ground to think for a long time. ...
This is my sister, a little special but worthy of my admiration.
Sister's excellent composition 12 My sister has black hair, a pair of small eyes under her faint eyebrows, a pair of glasses on her shiny nose and a few "spikes" in her mouth! 65438+ is 0.62 meters tall and just graduated from primary school. He is particularly concerned about me.
I remember it was a weekend morning, my grandmother was on a business trip, my parents were not at home, only my sister and I were at home. Suddenly my stomach hurts, and my sister will go to the weekend class to make up lessons. As soon as she heard that I had a stomachache, she didn't know what to do. I said to my sister, "Sister, go and make up lessons. Just take a break. " My sister immediately retorted, "That won't do. I'd better take you to see a doctor! " "I know I can't beat her, so I can only follow. We came to a small clinic downstairs, and the doctor asked me to have a rest and drink a cup of Huoxiang Zhengqi liquid. I drank one, which was much better, so I asked my sister to make up lessons quickly, and she didn't make up lessons either. This incident moved me for a long time.
My sister not only cares about me, but also is a little book fan.
I remember it was when I was in the third grade. One day, my sister and I came to play hide-and-seek games. When my sister caught me, I hid in the closet and let my sister catch me.
After a few minutes, I thought: my sister still can't find me, so I won. A few minutes later, I opened the closet door and shouted, "Sister." Shouting for a long time, no one answered. I went out of the closet and saw my sister in the living room. It turned out that when I was hiding, my sister saw a book in the living room, read it with relish and left me behind.
This is my sister, a good sister who loves reading and cares about me.
Everyone says we look alike, but I don't think we look alike at all, because I am a man and she is a woman. I am black and she is white. I am noisy and she is quiet. But there is no way, we must stay together every day, because she is my sister.
Every time my family goes out to eat, the food I order is the best, and my parents like it very much, but my sister just wants to play the devil's advocate with me and say that I have no taste. I ordered steak and she insisted on chicken wings.
My sister is a mobile phone controller. Once, I asked my sister to give me her mobile phone to play with, but she refused to live or die. Finally, my mother came and gave me a death order. She only gave me her mobile phone, but she still couldn't bear it.
In fact, she is a very contradictory person. On one occasion, during the Chinese New Year, our family went back to their hometown to play together. Every time I go to pick tea, I always pick the most, because every time my sister gives me her tea, but whenever we eat, she always tries to grab chicken wings from me, as if she were a different person. Let me choose tea, but argue with me for food at dinner. What do you mean? I really don't understand.
Although my sister puzzled me, she was willing to share her little secret with me, which made me very happy.
On one occasion, my sister went to pick tea herself. She only told me, not my parents. Of course, I won't tell on her. My sister trusts me so much, how can I betray her!
This is my sister. Although we will quarrel, more often, we are happy.
My sister's excellent composition 14 My sister likes playing computer very much. As long as she has time, she will definitely go upstairs to play computer in the study. It takes eight or nine hours to play, especially at night, and he is even crazier. It was not until two or three o'clock that his mother called her, and his sister slowly turned off the computer and went to sleep.
Once, when it was time for dinner, my mother asked me to call my sister for dinner. I shouted at the top of my lungs downstairs, "Eat, or the food will get cold." I shouted and shouted, and shouted for the last time: "Hurry up and eat!" " "She just replied," I see. Don't be so loud and leave me alone. "I have to eat it myself. After a while, we all finished eating. She finally came down. She saw that the food was cold, so she ate a little and went upstairs again. What is she doing? Needless to say, I went to play computer again.
Another time, at night, we were all asleep, and only my sister was still playing online. She is playing games and listening to pop music. As soon as the game was over, she won. My sister smiled and woke me up from my dream. When I fell asleep again, I couldn't sleep and had to toss and turn in bed. Mom and dad couldn't sleep, and they were noisy enough by their sister's harsh voice. They went to her room to "teach her a lesson". It took her a long time to fall asleep.
In fact, my sister goes online just to see the number of hits on her blog. By the way, I send some blog posts, chat with friends, or go to Taobao to buy some items, all of which are paid by my father, but I really don't understand how these things can make my sister "unable to extricate herself".
Look! This is my sister, a complete computer geek.
My sister's excellent composition 15 My good sister is very kind to me. I went to her house and she gave me delicious food. Give me what I like, and she will teach me words I don't know. She also took out her little clothes, pants and shoes for me to wear. She also took me there to play. She also took out all the unwanted pencil boxes, rulers, pencils, hair wipes and story books for me. My sister is really nice. She is really my best big sister, and I really like her.
Teacher's comment: The little author closely followed the word "good" to write about her sister, told her all kinds of love for herself, and created an image of caring and sharing her. But after reading the whole article, I found that the little author always called her sister "she", without introducing her specific identity, such as which relative's family or neighbor's sister she is. Moreover, the little author did not introduce personal information such as her sister's appearance, which made the reader's impression of her sister very vague. As a writer's article, we should not only introduce the appearance of the characters, but also show the character characteristics of the characters, and portray the characters in depth so that readers can remember them firmly! "I went to her house and she brought me delicious food. Give me what I like "is changed to" I go to her house, she will give me delicious food and give me what I like ". "She also took me to play in the park" was changed to "She also took me to play in the park". The pause numbers in the article are all wrong. For example, "She also took out her little clothes, pants and shoes for me to wear" was changed to "She also took out her little clothes, pants and shoes for me to wear". Ask the author to correct other similar mistakes.