Second, apply famous sentences. The "famous sentence" here is a broad concept, which can come from classical famous articles, film titles, lyrics, advertising words and so on. The composition topic of the senior high school entrance examination in a province is "Life _ _ _ _", and the candidates wrote the following good topics by using methods: "Life doesn't believe in tears" and "Life, it's not easy to say I love you" (it's not easy to say I love you by using song titles); "I say" no "to this life (applying the title" China can say "no"); Life, what's your surname? " And so on.
These headlines are much more attractive than Happy Life and Extraordinary Life. We can also find similar good topics from other examination room compositions, such as It's all the fault of the exam, Carry the personality through to the end, a winding path leads to a secluded place and so on.
Third, reverse.
2. What is a pun? In a certain language environment, using the conditions of polysemy and homophony of words, the sentence is intended to have double meanings, meaning that words are different from words. This rhetorical device is called pun.
Puns can make language express implicit humor, deepen meaning and impress people.
Puns are divided into two types:
1, meaning pun
For example, in A Dream of Red Mansions, "He who sees through the three spring seasons, how about peach blossoms and willow greens?" ? Beat this youth out and find that bright sky. On the surface, "three spring" refers to late spring, including Yuan Chun, Yingchun and Tan Chun.
2. Homophonic pun
For example, the word "sunny" in "Tao is sunny and sunny" is sunny on the surface and contains emotional "feelings".
3. If you write a composition on the topic of "Examination", can you think of its pun? There will be a monthly exam tomorrow. Although we can't decide our fate, it's enough for us to rank our grades, classes, teachers' comments and parents' indiscriminate bombing.
We either sum up the lessons with conviction, or admit our shortcomings with duplicity, or we are indifferent at all. Anyway, sharpen your knife at the last minute! You can't leave the night train quickly! The next day, I walked into the examination room mechanically and sat upright in my seat waiting for the invigilator.
At this point, my mind went blank. After receiving the paper, my heart pounded, my scalp swelled, and the words on the paper jumped in front of my eyes.
I closed my eyes and shook my head, thinking that the teacher had said to be calm and look at the simple questions first. So I opened my eyes, looked at the topic with rapt attention, and made a few small questions.
At this point, the mind is stable and the answering speed is fast. After you finish the questions you can do, pick some questions that seem to be inaccurate.
At the same time, mobilize all your energy to recall how the teacher talked about similar problems and how the textbooks explained them. Write as much as possible. Then carefully "face reading" the problem, find a breakthrough, and try to solve it.
At this time, patience is needed, and at this time, the heart beats faster and the mind is not flexible. There's nothing I can do.
However, I was not willing to fail, so I pulled myself together again, reviewed the topic again, really answered a question, and suddenly felt very relaxed. It's really beautiful.
Besides, things can't always be perfect, and I have racked my brains for some problems to no avail. I'm really annoyed and depressed.
80 minutes have passed. Looking at the "bean sprouts" flying like dragonflies, I tried to find out the mistakes, even a little.
It's like having a pepper in my throat at this time, which makes me feel terrible. Walking out of the examination room, we discussed the answers and scores fiercely, and our mood of understanding the successful experience and the lessons of failure increased day by day.
My heart hung up. After listening to all kinds of comments, I was upset again.
Until the results were announced, it was sad and happy for a time. Exam, exam, that smell, is it sweet? Is it acid? Is it bitter? Is it spicy? Alas! -
However, the test of life is not all about entering a higher school, seeking a job or being promoted, nor is it all about sitting in the examination room and writing down your answers on paper with a pen. It won't give us enough time to prepare, and it will give us an examination paper at any time.
If you choose properly, you may pass and meet the new test; Once you make a mistake, you may miss the opportunity. Being criticized is an exam. Know yourself through mistakes. As long as I try not to repeat, I will pass the exam. If you lose confidence and stop trying, you can only fail. If it is not corrected in time, it will be eliminated by society sooner or later.
If you are frustrated, it is life that gives you a paper. In the face of setbacks, cheer up and start over? Or are you frustrated, depressed and depressed from now on? Choose for yourself, and no one will interfere.
The former can help you get rid of the shadow of setbacks and move towards a successful future, while the latter will make you gradually forgotten. If you don't help yourself, who will? If you succeed, you will get another test paper. In the face of honor, do you continue to work hard for the next success, or do you stop holding high the honor and lie on the hotbed of success to relive the moment of success? The former can let you take this success as the basic point and move towards the next success; The latter will make you fall violently from the hotbed and get bruised.
Whether you succeed or "go to the hospital" depends on yourself. However, the creator will always make every effort to save a person, even if you are "in the hospital", he will not give up on you.
You will get another test paper. Among the few opportunities you have, do you seize the opportunity to catch up, or choose to give up and watch success get farther and farther away from you? Choose the former and you will soon return to your own track, while the latter will make you farther and farther away from the track. In fact, there are more than these examination rooms in life.
From birth to death, there are more than two billion minutes. Which moment is not an exam? It's just that this exam is so frequent that many people ignore it, but ignoring it doesn't mean it doesn't exist. On the contrary, this kind of exam is the most important. Only by drawing a real stroke in the scale of every second can your life be regarded as a clear conscience. Of course, to err is human, and it is not unforgivable to write a few wrong answers on the test paper occasionally.
But if you only write a few correct answers occasionally, then your life is wasted-you do nothing but waste food. -the examination of the thinking behind the test results has existed since ancient times. From Sui and Tang Dynasties to Ming and Qing Dynasties, China has been using imperial examinations to select and build national talents.
In new China, which has entered the stage of socialist legal system, senior high school entrance examination and college entrance examination are also important ways to select talents for further study. Examination results are related to the future of each student and the development progress of national construction.
Grade three and grade three can be said to be the two most bitter and tiring periods in life. Countless students study hard day and night for their dreams. When the test results were announced, how many students were glad to see the fruits watered by their hard sweat, and how many students wondered why they didn't join the former. Among them, there should be many students who are "abnormal" or "special reasons", but some of them have already been identified as failing the exam by teachers, parents and even classmates. Why? Because their grades are really not so good, they can't knock on the door of colleges and universities with their transcripts, so they can only study in ordinary schools and then move from ordinary schools to jobs.
"High IQ" students in colleges and universities meet with students in ordinary schools by chance. However, there is an example. Tian, a student in the Mathematics Department of Shanghai Normal University, is considered an unqualified college student because he failed in CET-4 and an advanced mathematics course. However, during his six-month internship in Shanghai No.12 Middle School, he was highly praised by the school, devoted to his work, willing to use his brain and strong ability, giving students a sense of intimacy and strong appeal, and was hired as a teacher by No.12 Middle School.
A big house with two broken doors.
4. How to dig deep into the connotation of the composition? We have all heard of Du Fu's Autumn Wind Breaking the Cottage. I was deeply touched when I saw a video of a famous teacher teaching in the thatched cottage on the school website that day.
Students have a good grasp of the article, but the teacher never teaches by explaining it from beginning to end, but organizes and guides it. This coincides with the concept of our project.
However, how can students dig deeper into the article without a lot of explanations from teachers? Let's take a look at such a teaching record of "The Cottage is Blown by Autumn Wind": Teacher: The language of words is concise and implicit. Therefore, every word in the article may have profound connotation or contain rich emotions.
Next, let's read the text again and dig deep into the text to see how much more things can be dug up outside the text. This kind of digging takes the form of each student fighting alone to see who digs faster and deeper.
In order to prevent tasting, each student only needs to dig out a wonderful place. Teacher: Let's try to dig one first.
For example, the word "Juan" in the first section "Juan San Mao comes to my house" was not used well at first, and I wanted to change it to "Cui", but I felt that "Cui" could not describe the strength of the wind; Changing it to "lifting" does not seem to show the dynamics of thatched roofs. If you want to write a word that is both rapid and dynamic, I think it is the word "volume".
Health: My teacher and I dug the same sentence and used a different word, that is, the word "three" in "My Sanmao". The word "three" is an imaginary number, which means "several". Sometimes you describe more, sometimes you describe less. I think there should be less description here, which means that the hut is very thin and can't stand the wind. Teacher: this word is well dug. It really should have less meaning in the sentence. Then can we try to "dig deep" through this word? Health: I think the word "three" can be implicitly explained. At that time, the people's life was extremely poor, because the crops were so poor that they didn't even have much thatch, so they had to piece together these thin thatch, not to mention the food for the people to feed their families. Health: It also implicitly reproduces the endless disasters brought by the war to the people. At that time, people lived in poverty. Imagine how people can live and work in peace and contentment when their own safety cannot be guaranteed.
Teacher: Through these excavations, it is not difficult to see that this imaginary number is really "wonderful"! Health: What I dug up was the word "sigh" in the second quarter, "come back and sigh". I feel that Sigh should contain a lot of content. It can be understood as lamenting the helplessness of God's ruthless destruction of houses, lamenting the suffering of innocent and naughty children who don't know the author, and lamenting how to repair the thatched cottage tomorrow.
Teacher: Good analysis. However, Du Fu lived a miserable life in Chang 'an for ten years, and then experienced the "Anshi Rebellion" for five or six years.
I think his inner "sigh" is more than these three points? Health: It also includes lamenting the hardships of the people at the bottom of society who have suffered from war in harsh environment! Teacher: Yes, although he is poor and ill at this time, he is always concerned about the fate of the country and the sufferings of the people. Such a poet deserves our respect and study.
Health: I found the word "iron" in the third section "Cloth is as cold as iron for many years". It can be seen from this word that the quilt should be-very cold and hard.
Health: You can also look at the cold weather at that time. Health: I would also like to add that from the color analysis of iron, the word "iron" also vividly indicates that the quilt is shabby and dirty, because there is only one quilt and nothing else to keep out the cold. Although it has been used for many years, it is very dirty, but it cannot be disassembled and washed.
Teacher: The analysis makes sense. What else can you see from there? There is only one quilt that can't be changed. Health: It can also be seen that the poet's family is very poor and penniless. Health: I dug the "long night" in the third section "How to get wet in the long night". I think the word "long night" is a pun, which refers to the rainy night that is out of reach, the long-term anxiety caused by the war and the poverty of the people.
Teacher: Yes, through the word "Long Night", we can understand the poet's broad mind of worrying about the country and the people. In this period of teaching, "reading aloud" leads to "thinking", "thinking" leads to "exploration", and "exploration" leads to "cooperation", step by step and interlocking.
Let students not only deepen their understanding and experience, but also feel and think in positive thinking and emotional activities, so as to be influenced by emotions, enlightened by thoughts and enjoy aesthetic pleasure. Whether students can grasp the connotation of the text in place and dig deep depends on their enthusiasm for learning, active thinking and sensitivity to literature.
However, all this comes from the teacher's careful teaching design, clever classroom guidance and real-time teaching motivation. In addition, the teacher's subtle choice is also the key to teaching.
In our project, there are often students' inquiry discussions. After the whole class exchanges, the teacher does not judge the students' answers, or just affirms the students' analysis blindly. This is a very serious phenomenon.
At that meeting, the teacher of Rensha Middle School presented the lesson "Uncle Lou Yunshu in Xie Tiao, Xuanzhou", which made every teacher present feel refreshed. In the classroom, students are completely independent, cooperative and inquiry-oriented, and their thinking is quite active, and they also have a deep excavation of the connotation of poetry, which even some local teachers can't imagine.
But unfortunately, the teacher only pays attention to the guidance and encouragement of students, and the analysis of students is only a blind affirmation. In some places, students argued with each other for a long time, and the teacher didn't tell them what it should be at last, so they were still confused. In fact, students in some places are not sure and need teachers to pull them out. This is the essence of students' harvest.
In a word, in student-centered autonomous, cooperative and inquiry-based learning, the leading role of teachers is very important, which enables students to dig deeper into the connotation of the article.
5. Chinese reading has a knack for exploring deep meaning and its expression. You should pay attention to the central sentence in the text and learn to answer questions with some "technical terms". Ha ha laugh
The following is my summary of the expression skills analysis terms in the question:
1) narrative mode
1. flashback: causing suspense and fascinating.
2. Interpolation: Make necessary preparations and supplementary explanations for the main plot or central event to make the plot more complete, the structure more rigorous and the content more substantial.
2) description
1. Portrait, action description and psychological description: better show the inner world and personality characteristics of the characters.
2. Description of scenery: Describe the natural scenery in detail, create an atmosphere, and set off the emotions and thoughts of the characters.
3. Description of the environment and scene: explain the background of the characters' activities, specify the time and place of the event, render the atmosphere, and better express the characters.
4. Characters' dialogue description, psychological description and detail description: portray characters' personalities, reflect their psychological activities and promote the development of stories. It can also describe the voice of the characters and receive special effects.
5. Positive description and profile description: the positive directly shows people and things; Highlight people and things from the side.
6. Concise sketches and detailed descriptions
3) Rhetoric
1. Metaphor: turn plain into vivid, abstruse into simple, abstract into concrete.
2. Metaphor: giving things an emotional form (personification), vivid description and rich expression.
Metonymy: replace complexity with simplicity, emptiness with truth, and everything with strangeness.
4. Exaggeration: contrast the atmosphere, enhance the appeal and enhance the association; Create an atmosphere, reveal the essence and inspire people.
5. Duality: easy to recite, easy to remember, so that words have a sense of music; Concise ideographic and lyrical.
6. Parallelism: the rhythm is distinct, the content is concentrated, and the momentum is enhanced; The narrative is thorough and detailed; Good at lyric.
7. Repetition: the lyrical writing of the scenery is strong; Connecting the preceding with the following, distinguishing levels; It has been emphasized many times, which is impressive.
8. Contrast: Make the characteristics of things expressed or the rational viewpoints expounded more distinct and prominent.
9. Question: Ask yourself and answer yourself, ask questions, and arouse readers' thinking.
10. rhetorical question: emphasize tone, strong tone and strengthen emotion.
4) Layout skills: come straight to the point, echo from beginning to end, show great plans, pave the way, deepen layer by layer, spread too much, and set clues; Compact structure and complete symmetry; Lift the ground and take care of it; Set suspense, create waves, connect and merge, and have twists and turns. Whether the relationship between materials and the center is properly handled and whether the primary and secondary details are appropriate; Whether the materials are typical, authentic, novel and powerful.
Finally, I hope you will achieve better results in the future.
With the passage of time, I climbed to the top of the mountain and looked back. It has also become a brilliant year, becoming ordinary and magical. Look, Nian stayed in Shenzhen with a smile.
When I heard the story of my parents moving three times, the spring breeze appeared in front of me.
I don't know, but I'm curious. So, I organized a little reporter to interview my mother.
"I asked my mother why she moved three times?" Mom said. When I first came to Shenzhen, the apartments and guest rooms were very small, but one person could move once more, because your father lived in a residential transaction, followed by yours, and the house was not enough, so I rushed over and asked, "Is there any reason to move 3?" Mom said, "Is it easy for you to go to school, so the school moved closer to you?" I asked, "Not much money.
Q: "Why?" "You haven't seen different cities in Shenzhen before. At that time, there were many big stadiums and subways. . "
My understanding:? Shenzhen is very good, our life is still good, we are very good, Shenzhen is more beautiful. Misfortune befalls the city and its people. Moved to Shenzhen at 20 and 30 to witness the glory.
That day was a beautiful spring day. On impulse, my mother took my field interview and took me back to Lianhua New Village. I don't know, but this is my first time to settle in Shenzhen. Walking among them, down-to-earth, the past days really evoked memories, but I am grateful to have left the mark of the years, which is enough to let me know that the past and the present are different.
Further west, you will soon reach the village of King Honey. I spent my childhood here, and everything here deeply touched my heart. Every time I come back, I feel that my mother will go home in the future. But today is a little different. It feels like a second home.
"? Ask mom, our family has many cultural characteristics, and it's nothing new. Besides the city of Shenzhen, what other distinctive culture does she have? "
My mother said, "The city of Shenzhen has a history of 1672, which has been in Xia and Shang dynasties for many years. Shenzhen is a branch of Baiyue Tribe-"Nanyue Tribe". I didn't expect it. "
I said, "seems to be true? I've read enough. Shenzhen is really superficial. Yes, I know the present, I know the past, and I don't forget my talent. I found a treasure today, and I found that brilliant Shenzhen is a historical necessity. " BR/>； ; Here, my mother had a whim and I changed my role. She said, "What do you think? I'm asking students to interview you in Shenzhen now. Do you know what are the characteristics compared with other cities? " I said without hesitation:
"Shenzhen is a commercial center because it is a famous DC. Businessmen from all over the world are willing to come here to do business streets. They often see whites and blacks from all over the world working and doing business in China. Streets, skyscrapers, above scale. Business center, so some people say: Shenzhen is a "world market"
Mom nodded and smiled, and I went on to say:
"。 Shenzhen is still a "gourmet paradise", where tourists can enjoy national and even global cuisine, first-class restaurants, snack bars and unique food shops. For example, little sheep, Bashu style, pastry king, tourists can feast their eyes on it. "
"Yes, yes, my mouth disease also made a libel. Don't worry, I'm not finished. Shenzhen is a tourist attraction. It is big and xiaomeisha, with windows to tell the world, folk culture villages, water parks, Happy Valley and so on. What impressed me the most was Happy Valley, a thrilling roller coaster and a creepy haunted house. Two people left. "
Mom went on to say, "I believe all the children in Shenzhen like these places very much." It's children living in Shenzhen. Fu, "Mom, I don't know. I'm not saying it's small. She is a city that never sleeps. Look at that. ?
Is it true that the ocean lighting street lamps and lights in Shenzhen reflect each other and form a sparkling river? "I suspect that the Milky Way has fallen for nine days." Yes, the arrow-like light of modern skyscrapers illuminates the surrounding area. Sleepless nights.
At this point, stay up all night, from the shiny and brilliant horizon in front of all the roads. Blowing in the wind, there is no chill, which is what people say, "blowing your face without chilling your willows." Yes, bathed in the spring breeze and savoring today's harvest, I met a brilliant Shenzhen all the way in the spring, and I had a wonderful time.
7. 1, personification is a rhetorical way to personify things. For example, flowers nod in the breeze.
2. Metaphor is a common rhetorical device, which describes or explains things A with things B similar to things A, such as high leaves, like slender skirts. 3. Parallelism is a rhetorical device that juxtaposes three or more phrases (subject-predicate/verb-object) or sentences with similar or similar meanings, the same structure and the same tone to achieve the effect of strengthening the language situation. 4. Exaggeration refers to the use of exaggerated words to describe things, so as to stimulate the imagination of listeners or readers and strengthen the power of what they say. For example, "His voice is like two bells, which can be heard ten miles away." 5. Questioning is a common rhetorical device, which is often used to emphasize the role. In order to emphasize a certain part of the content, he deliberately asked questions first, asking himself and answering himself. For example, what is the way? That is, from where there is no road, from where there are thorns. (Lu Xun's "The Road to Life") 6. Rhetorical question is a rhetorical device that expresses clear meaning in the form of question to emphasize mood. For example, a piano is as heavy as a coffin, and a violin costs several hundred yuan. Although exquisite, how many people in the world can appreciate it? 7. Citation refers to intentionally quoting existing idioms, poems, aphorisms and allusions. When writing an article, I can express my thoughts and feelings and explain my views on new issues and principles. This rhetorical device is called quotation. For example, "A wild trip without a boat crossing" is quoted from Wei's Xixi Chuzhou 8. In a certain language environment, using the condition of polysemy and homonymy, the sentence is intentionally made to have double meanings. Beat this youth out and find that bright sky. "Three spring" refers to late spring, including Yuan Chun, Yingchun and Tan Chun.