In the middle of the yard, there is a tall and straight pine tree, like a green pagoda. As high as our classroom on the fourth floor! The bark feels uneven and full of vicissitudes.
Its feet are covered with a layer of dark green furry "carpet", and the grass surrounds it, looking up at it, as if snuggling in dad's arms. On the left of the pine tree is the most exciting drip pool.
The drip pond is built next to the East Teaching Building. The wall next to it is a stone wall made of special decorative materials. The colors are green and gray, and it is concave and convex. A few bright flowers on the opposite corner make it vivid at once! There is a hole under the stone wall, and on the other side of the hole is the corridor of the East Teaching Building.
Many first-grade children put their heads in curiously from time to time and then shrank back. Below the hole is a swimming pool.
The pool is surrounded by pebbles and cement of various colors. There are aquatic plants in the pool! There are all kinds of goldfish: red hydrangea, pink pearls, colorful dzi beads ... Look, the fastest and most naughty one is my beloved "Little Butterfly", and she is playing hide-and-seek with her friends again! There are some stone tables and chairs on the right side of the pine tree.
Always clean! Why? Because we all like sitting there reading and playing games! Class is over, it's boiling here. At the beginning of class, Xiaoyu must be listening to Lang Lang reading ... A corner of the campus. Why didn't your beauty make me love my campus more? .
2. Write a fragment of 100 by combining dots and faces. As night falls, colorful lanterns are lit on Wuyi Square. Some middle-aged and elderly people danced a beautiful and gentle dance in Wuyi Square, which made people gather here!
There are men and women, old people and young people who come here to watch the dance.
Look, the way they dance is really beautiful. Hey! Someone is dancing in pairs, holding hands. When their hands closed in the middle, they pulled away. Hands to both sides, belly to belly, two people jump very neatly. At this time, the female companion accidentally stepped on the foot of the male companion. I was about to laugh when they jumped up happily again.
The children who came to watch also waved their arms to the beat. Although they can't keep up with the beat, they still clap their hands, tap their feet and grin with the festival!
3. The 50-word diary combining dots and faces is in our campus. Every time you turn around or change your perspective, you will see different scenery: quiet and lively teaching building, lush fir forest, colorful flower beds, pleasing plastic track playground ... and I like her corner best-the place surrounded by teaching building and affectionately called "quadrangle" by our teachers and students.
In the middle of the yard, there is a tall and straight pine tree, like a green pagoda. As high as our classroom on the fourth floor! The bark feels uneven and full of vicissitudes.
Its feet are covered with a layer of dark green furry "carpet", and the grass surrounds it, looking up at it, as if snuggling in dad's arms. On the left of the pine tree is the most exciting drip pool.
The drip pond is built next to the East Teaching Building. The wall next to it is a stone wall made of special decorative materials. The colors are green and gray, and it is concave and convex. A few bright flowers on the opposite corner make it vivid at once! There is a hole under the stone wall, and on the other side of the hole is the corridor of the East Teaching Building.
Many first-grade children put their heads in curiously from time to time and then shrank back. Below the hole is a swimming pool.
The pool is surrounded by pebbles and cement of various colors. There are aquatic plants in the pool! There are all kinds of goldfish: red hydrangea, pink pearls, colorful dzi beads ... Look, the fastest and most naughty one is my beloved "Little Butterfly", and she is playing hide-and-seek with her friends again! There are some stone tables and chairs on the right side of the pine tree.
Always clean! Why? Because we all like sitting there reading and playing games! Class is over, it's boiling here. After class, Xiaoyu must be listening to the reading sound of the crazy and paralyzed Langhai ... A corner of the campus, why didn't your beauty make me love my campus more? .
4. Point-surface combination composition 100 Point-surface combination
Point-to-surface combination method means that there should be both a surface description and a little description in the article, so that the two complement each other, and everything in the world has a dialectical relationship between the whole and the part, the general and the individual. Therefore, the combination of face and point or point and face in writing material selection is the embodiment of this relationship. In writing, a little comprehensive description can not only make the writing object have the overall style and specific posture; Moreover, this description can also show the essential laws of objective things and strengthen the expressive ability of the article. At the same time, the combination of point and surface is the key content under the overall observation, so the expression is full of changes, which makes the article avoid dullness and monotony. Moreover, the combination of point and surface can also form a contrast between the two. Point can embody the characteristics of face concretely and vividly, and face can clearly and profoundly express the connotation of point, which makes point and face more full in comparison and enhances the appeal of the article from the face. In a word, this expression skill can not only make people have a concrete feeling about the whole face, but also make people deeply impressed with the key things. The faithful mirror written by Yang Mei is a good article combining point with surface.
This is a reflection after reading A Brief History of Mirrors. In this paper, the "history" of mirrors is briefly introduced, and the main contents and application scope of a brief history of mirrors are generally described, from taking water as a mirror to silver-plated glass mirrors. This is a simple description. Then, the author pointed out in particular: "What impressed me the most was this passage:' The mirror is always so faithful that it tells you whether there are stains on your face or not'".
This paper focuses on the metaphorical meaning and extended meaning of the mirror, which constitutes the focus of the article. This is the feeling after reading. After reading it, you must make some induction and introduction to the object you are reading, so it is extremely necessary for young authors to explain the ins and outs of the mirror. But the author is not satisfied with this, but discusses the depth of "emotion" from the perspective of ideological education. Starting with the word "faithfulness", the author promoted the role of mirrors in life to a new height, pointed out that mirrors can be divided into "faithfulness" and "unfaithfulness", and finally expressed the view of "making friends with faithful mirrors". This not only conforms to the physical characteristics of the mirror, but also accurately expresses the author's novel and lonely feelings, so that the points and surfaces are organically integrated, which is particularly profound. Using the method of combining points and surfaces, we should pay attention to the dialectical relationship between points and surfaces. It is necessary not only to write points under the overall control of the surface, but also to write the surface in the profound sense of the prominent point, so that the two can grow and blend, and the point must not be a point, and the surface is a surface, which is irrelevant or even contradictory. If so, the content of the article will be rambling and messy, and the center is unknown.
5. Write a labor scene of about 100 words with the method of "combining points with surfaces". At the opening ceremony, President Sun announced the official opening of the sports meeting after the representatives of referees and athletes took the oath respectively. The campus, which has always been quiet, suddenly became lively: in the spirit of "friendship first, competition second", athletes showed their level and grace on the field and strived to be civilized athletes. They work hard, keep forging ahead and surpass themselves. They not only exercised and demonstrated their physical fitness, physical fitness, but also exercised their will to overcome difficulties and enhanced their ideological personality. Students from different places have learned a lot from them. What is even more touching is that every student has a strong sense of class honor. The sound of refueling outside the stadium inspires athletes from all walks of life. The school radio broadcast the progress of the competition and the enthusiastic manuscripts of the correspondents of each class over and over again.
The residual temperature of the Athens Olympic Games has not disappeared, and the 23rd Sports Meeting of our school has been staged again.
When the winners are flying over the stadium, when the students in the stands are shouting for the students in the 100 meters and 100 meters hurdles, when the certificate winners face others with a winning smile. We have never forgotten that the long jump and basketball shooting competitions are silently held in the corner of the gymnasium. The last few students of 3000m are still struggling to catch up, and those who are not in the queue may still be calm.
Since ancient times, the winner is king and the loser is the enemy. However, as far as sportsmanship is concerned, everyone is equal. Perhaps, the winners will remind people of their bright smiles and pay more attention to the stories behind them after the game. However, the spirit of those who didn't get the ranking is still good. They tried their best, not afraid of strong hands and unconvinced. Although no champion witnessed all this, there is a spirit running through it. That is the spirit of sports: tenacious struggle and never give up.
There is always a force that keeps me going, a spirit that moves me, and a belief that makes me burst into tears. When I saw the athletes who didn't play their true level shaking their heads after the game, when I saw the last athlete who was about to fall in the 3000m, and when I saw the bloody hand of the last athlete who fell in the 100m column, I had the impulse to cry and the desire to shout. These players, with their brave and skillful movements, held their heads high in the blue sky and set foot on the green space, creating legends on the court.
Tagore, a famous writer, once wrote: "There are no traces of wings left in the sky, but I have flown." Their names were not in the final score, but they shed their sweat and tears on the court. A few years later, they can proudly say that they took part in the school sports meeting. As time goes by, we grow up slowly, and we will find that we are far from the previous * * * and vitality. Especially now, faced with the pressure of future work and postgraduate entrance examination, there are few opportunities to participate in activities. Why not leave some eternal memories for yourself while you are young? So as long as you participate, the contestants are the cutest and best!
The mission is often given by others. You must do what you like or dislike in your life and study. But some of them are attached to themselves, especially in today's fierce social competition. Give yourself some exercise opportunities, but also give yourself more chances to succeed. The performance on the court is not only the embodiment of a person's personality charm, but also the display of a person's ability. Whether cheering for victory or smiling for failure, it is the successful completion of the glorious mission.
Friends who have sweated on the court, it is because of your active participation that all talents are so energetic. Today, with the national fitness in full swing, it is everyone's high morale that has won back the trust of the International Olympic Committee in Beijing. The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games will shine brilliantly because of your contribution and tenacious struggle. It is the joy of plum blossom fragrance coming from bitter cold that comes from bitter sweet.
It suddenly occurred to me that cctv-5 often played a song during the Sydney Olympic Games: "... flying beyond dreams, so that you and I need to face it sincerely and let time remember this moment ..." This song was given to every athlete who went to Sydney at that time. Now I want to give it to all the athletes who take part in this sports meeting. Petrochemical is proud of you.
6. Face-to-face composition, more than 60 words of intense "tug-of-war"
In "Tintin" class, the teacher said that we would hold a tug-of-war competition today, and the students cheered. Suddenly a classmate asked the teacher, how to play in such a small place? I saw the teacher mysteriously took out some pens and said, "We are going to have a special tug-of-war today. We pull them out with a pencil. "
The teacher briefly explained the rules of the game. First of all, we play in pairs, and Xie Yang and I are a team. The game is about to start. One by one, the students are preparing.
With the teacher's command, the game began. I tried my best to nurse, only to see Xie Yang flushed, her mouth closed, and she held her breath and pulled back desperately. Ah, the pencil slipped from my hand like a loach. Unfortunately, I lost the first game.
After fierce competition, it entered the final. Xie Yang and Li Wenhao are at war. "Go!" They all held one end of the pencil tightly, and no one was to be outdone. In this way, they have been deadlocked. The cheerleaders nearby are in a hurry. Some are on the table, others are sitting in their seats and shouting loudly for them. Some people are standing on stools. Everyone's eyes are fixed on the mark on the pencil. The game remains deadlocked. Xie Yang is looking for opportunities. Look, here comes the opportunity. Li Wenhao's palms were sweating, and Xie Yang was sure. Sure enough, he won as easy as blowing off dust, and all the students cheered and became a beautiful tug-of-war symphony.
The game ended slowly with the laughter of the students.
7. Write an active scene by combining points and surfaces. The atmosphere in the classroom e799be5baa6e997aee7ad944b893E5b19E31333431373163 became heavy and depressing. As soon as the bell rang, the classroom suddenly fell into a noise, and the students were in groups of three or five.
Some are laughing and beating, hiding unhappiness in their hearts, or leaving the last happiness at the time of separation as before. Some are holding hands and whispering some parting words, reluctant to leave their friends and separate classes. As they talked, they couldn't help crying.
My colleague was writing, and I saw her trembling slightly and mumbling. Her handwriting is fast, not neat as before, but with feelings and parting. I patted her on the shoulder and smiled at her. She turned around and smiled at me. I found that there was no sadness in that smile, but a tacit understanding and encouragement. Suddenly the light went out and a song sounded.
The noisy classroom was quiet and became silent. We all looked up at the podium. It's the monitor that plays songs with multimedia, not friends! We are all moved by this familiar song. In the song, the monitor told us affectionately: This song spent the first New Year with us and won the first prize in the singing competition.
This poem.
The monitor couldn't go on, and there was a sigh in the classroom. Everything in the past came to mind in tears. In the dark, the students quietly looked at the big screen and sang softly. "Friends have been together all their lives, but those days are gone ..." At this moment, there was a loud noise, and Qin Yiming, who was sitting next to me, burst into tears. I don't know how long the tears have accumulated. I couldn't help it at the moment when the song started, and big drops of tears dripped down.
Still sobbing the melody of Friends. The classroom is an ocean of tears.
8. Point composition, about 100 words on the way to school 3 1 1 words.
In the morning, my mother and I were walking on the way to school, and the breeze gently blew on my face, which was cool and comfortable. DuDu! Cars pass by from time to time on the side road. Pedestrians in twos and threes are walking in a hurry on the road, listening: there are voices of chatting, memorizing words and singing. Grandfather Sun just appeared on the horizon in the distance, and it seems that it is sunny again today!
Along the way, the grass on the roadside swayed with the wind, the branches and leaves on the tree waved to me, and the beautiful flowers smiled at me. Not far away, a few birds were twittering and dancing, as if welcoming me. I waved my hand and said to the bird, "Good morning!" " "Ha ha! The bird flew away shyly. How time flies! Unconsciously came to the school gate. Thinking of meeting lively classmates and beloved teachers soon, I quickly said goodbye to my mother! I ran to the classroom happily. Looking back, my mother smiled at me not far away.
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Comments by famous teachers
Although this article is about scenery, it is very artistic, because it combines scenes and sets off the mood of the characters through the description of the environment. The description of the scenery is concise and accurate, supplemented by anthropomorphic rhetoric, lifelike, as if bringing readers into a happy paradise, which is refreshing.